Support the fighting men and women of the Battleship Argent! 📚 Grab the Getabook Title of the Day: shane.lochlann.black 🛰 Become a Shane Lochlann Black Sci-Fi Channel Member! ua-cam.com/channels/tCG3q7Tl2o6ZbbzIxEUaRA.htmljoin What happens when you discover a structure made of anti-matter just sitting on the surface of a planet? Captain Jason Hunter has encountered his share of inexplicable phenomena since the launch of the battleship Argent, but this one might end up taking top prize. Get ready for a battle you have to read to believe, because things in the Core Seven system are definitely not what they seem.
Brilliant; organized thinking and the ability to look at more than cause and effect is the type of brain exercise that is amazing. Thank you for this story.
This military space opera has surpassed every single series I have either read or listened to to date. Bravura, Shane! Bravura! Who so I need to talk to at Netflix or Amazon Prime?!?
I appricate the like but i could use an answer to my question this video all the rest in playlist put together or are they all separate from each other?
The only issue with space battles with large ship is that most fighting would be at distances that would render visual detection not possible, although there would be times close range fighting is necessary. Also it would be better to make a ship that is cylindrical in shape that is rather long(300-400 ft in length) with a tip of solid metal and weapons stationed 360° around the hull, you could also have a version with embedded weapons whose purpose is to ram an enemy ship before opening the hatches covering the weapons so you can fire them inside the enemy ship
@codycambell6655 you are actually not wrong, history repeats itself its like the trimarines on the mediterraan sea in time of the greek and romans untill we find someting better
Cool story.Very well thought out technology. And the bit about turning the enemy's guns against them is one I've also considered for one of my story ideas. (as of now I write for my own amusement) I do have one question, wouldn't they already have some fighter assets in space as CAP or is there a technical reason that's not possible? Conclusion good story and not a bad read. Constructive criticism: I was honestly having trouble at points keeping the timeline straight. Especially in the flashbacks. I do like the technical detail. However I was having trouble at some points keeping track of the technical details and the action at the same time. I had to back up and re listen to some sections to get a full picture of what was going on. Don't take this as a condemnation and you're a better writer than I am and I'll freely admit it. Just trying to help. Hopefully.
Then I heard a loud voice from the temple saying to the seven angels, “Go, pour out the seven bowls of God's wrath upon the earth.” - Revelations Chapter 16 That will teach those damned humans a lesson.
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What happens when you discover a structure made of anti-matter just sitting on the surface of a planet? Captain Jason Hunter has encountered his share of inexplicable phenomena since the launch of the battleship Argent, but this one might end up taking top prize. Get ready for a battle you have to read to believe, because things in the Core Seven system are definitely not what they seem.
Awesome story, sir! Thanks for sharing with us.
You're welcome! Glad you're enjoying the series!
Alright alright, subscribing! Thanks for the sci fi audio books :)
Brilliant; organized thinking and the ability to look at more than cause and effect is the type of brain exercise that is amazing. Thank you for this story.
8:01
As I'm not even 10 minutes into listening to this audiobook, I'm already getting pretty engrossed in the storytelling
This military space opera has surpassed every single series I have either read or listened to to date. Bravura, Shane! Bravura!
Who so I need to talk to at Netflix or Amazon Prime?!?
1:25 Is there an odd angle one can hang at in space? The answer, I suppose, is only from within ones own narrow perspective.
I appricate the like but i could use an answer to my question this video all the rest in playlist put together or are they all separate from each other?
Yes. They are released in chapters 1 or 2 a week until finished.
Is this video parts 1-11 put together, and if so will there be more i lv enjoyed it so far.
The only issue with space battles with large ship is that most fighting would be at distances that would render visual detection not possible, although there would be times close range fighting is necessary. Also it would be better to make a ship that is cylindrical in shape that is rather long(300-400 ft in length) with a tip of solid metal and weapons stationed 360° around the hull, you could also have a version with embedded weapons whose purpose is to ram an enemy ship before opening the hatches covering the weapons so you can fire them inside the enemy ship
I see... A space war expert!
Where did you serve?
@codycambell6655 you are actually not wrong, history repeats itself its like the trimarines on the mediterraan sea in time of the greek and romans untill we find someting better
Cool story.Very well thought out technology. And the bit about turning the enemy's guns against them is one I've also considered for one of my story ideas. (as of now I write for my own amusement) I do have one question, wouldn't they already have some fighter assets in space as CAP or is there a technical reason that's not possible?
Conclusion good story and not a bad read.
Constructive criticism: I was honestly having trouble at points keeping the timeline straight. Especially in the flashbacks. I do like the technical detail. However I was having trouble at some points keeping track of the technical details and the action at the same time. I had to back up and re listen to some sections to get a full picture of what was going on.
Don't take this as a condemnation and you're a better writer than I am and I'll freely admit it. Just trying to help. Hopefully.
Then I heard a loud voice from the temple saying to the seven angels, “Go, pour out the seven bowls of God's wrath upon the earth.” - Revelations Chapter 16
That will teach those damned humans a lesson.
I had to pause this I needed to watch some paint dry
Hump day
18min 45sec
You know you can time stamp like this 18:45
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Borrrring !
Meh, it's not for everyone. 6/10 entertaining enough while I'm driving across country
Lol no taste