Poor Thing-Ashfur & Hollyleaf MAP||COMPLETE
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- Опубліковано 1 жов 2024
- After almost a year, this MAP is done!! thanks to everyone for making this project posible.
I'm not very good with descriptions, but I'm gonna say I'm so grateful to everyone that worked hard on this, all those hours, sweat an tears put into each part. Thanks a ton!
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Participants:
DreamArt, Savagewolf19_, Gingerwish, Icefelis Otsukimi, vordella, RavenEcho, LulabieByi, Featherflight55 OwO, Lily-chan, Hollyleevs, Brightpelt, Peachybee, Cylynix, Eugiius, CelestialTabris, iNsErT name? :3, Wolfsword87, GallytheRetriever, SparksHumbleAbode, Wolfhowler 9880
Music:
-Poor Thing-Sweenie Todd the musical
-Piano concerto No.23,2 Adagio-Mozart
Thumbnail contest winner: www.deviantart...
[ASHFUR]
You’ve a room over this shop, haven’t you?
Times are so hard, why don’t you rent it out?
[HOLLYLEAF]
People think it’s haunted
[ASHFUR]
Haunted?
[HOLLYLEAF]
Yeah, and who’s to say they’re wrong?
They say years ago
Something happened up there
Something not very nice
There was a barber and his wife,
And he was beautiful...
A proper artist with a knife,
But they transported him for life.
And he was beautiful...
Barker his name was
Benjamin Barker
[ASHFUR]
What was his crime?
[HOLLYLEAF]
Foolishness
He had his wife, you see,
Pretty little thing, silly little nut
Had her chance for the moon on a string.
Poor thing, Poor thing
There was this judge you see,
Wanted her like mad,
Every day he'd send her a flower.
But did she come down from her tower?
Sat up there and sobbed by the hour...
Poor fool...
Ah! but there was worse yet to come, poor thing!
The beedle calls on her all polite,
Poor thing, poor thing!
The judge, he tells her, is all contrite,
He blames himself for her dreadful plight
She must come straight to his house tonight,
Poor thing, poor thing!
Of course when she goes there,
Poor thing, poor thing!
They're having this ball all in masks,
There's no one she knows there,
Poor dear, poor thing!
She wanders tormented and drinks,
Poor thing!
The judge has repented, she thinks,
Poor thing!
Oh where is Judge Turpin, she asks?
He was there alright, only not so contrite!
She wasn't no match for such craft, you see,
And everyone thought it's so droll.
They figured she had to be daft, you see,
So all of them stood there and laughed, you see.
Poor soul!
Poor thing!
[ASHFUR]
No!
Would no one have mercy on her?
[HOLLYLEAF]
So it is you, Benjamin Barker
[ASHFUR]
No, not Barker, that man is dead
It’s Todd now, Sweeney Todd
And he will have his revenge
Bless
Now I won't have to answer the people asking what are they saying
Thank you so much! I have a hard time processing words when I hear them so this really helps!
ah of course haha. this is something I do when i’m bored lmao
Owh mah gawd sweeny tod 😂😂
I love the idea of Hollyleaf and Ashfur talking in starclan and working out their past with each other and how they were both filled with anger towards the person they once held on such high standards
Same I was about to
YES- honestly i feel like it's an underrated idea....
Why does ashfur
*Not have blonde flowing hair?!*
NO BLONDE EMO IN MY CHRISTIAN MINECRAFT SERVER
lol😂😂😂
Ummm... why would he...?
@@courtneydavis2208 Moonkitti, Moonkitti is why she took it and made it popular.
My exact question
Okay idk if anyone’s mentioned this yet but like at 3:05 when he says “he will have his revenge” (obviously we know he’s referring to himself), with everything happening currently in the new arc in warriors, if Ashfur is the one possessing bramblestar, this fits even MORE PERFECTLY
My money is on Ashfur no one can change my mind
It is ashfur
@@modifiedconsequences It’s confirmed to be him !!!
Could you please not blatantly post spoilers like that?
@Skywalker Kitty On the warriors website they gave a preview of the new book coming out in November and in the preview they figure out it’s him
You know,,, I love how at the end Ashfur declares he will have his revenge, his eye glistening. And now,, with how the broken code is playing out,,, he just might.
( SPOILERS )
And, you were right.
@@Nikolaisbirdie oh . I forgot I commented on here with my alt. Hi alt
Yo same here
Excessive use of commas, interesting.
This is so well paced! I actually got chills during the gathering scene! I love how it has sort of a “slow burn” quality to the storytelling. It stays fairly held back for as long as needed, and then during the scenes where the story starts to turn, it becomes much faster and frantic! It’s really hard to have something like that in a collaborative project, so props to you! Can’t wait to see what you do next!!
Slow BURN Lmao
Yes I love it
chills, LITERAL CHILLS, this map turned out so good!!!! everyone did so well and it all flows together so well!!! thank you for letting me participate!
Ahhh! That reference! XD
*The Backstreet Boys would like to know your location*
Number 5. Number 5 killed my brother.
Now Number 5!
@@silvauric
*Oh my God I forgot about that part*
AUH IVE BEEN LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS!!!! everyone did so well, it turned out gorgeous!
SMFKDN THANKS A LOT
I'm forever grateful to all those who worked hard for this
''And he will have his revenge...''
BROKEN CODE ASHFUR THEORY CONFIRMED??
No
@@SkyPangolin Jokes on you, Ashfur was the impostor.
@Piper Villeneuve Now that we know who the imposter is, I’m proud of this comment.
@@vinxtry wait, why did I say that because I know
@@SkyPangolin Lol Idk.
This map aged so well!
Why is it that Sweeny Todd songs fit so well with Warriors??
Anyway, great job on the MAP everybody! It was amazing! As I said above, it fits so well! I'd like to imagine Hollyleaf and Ashfur in Starclan, her trying to help him realize he was in the wrong, and him being all "nah lmao she friend-zoned me, therefore begone thot."
I had never heard of Sweeny Todd prior to maps like this. It's amazing how you can get from something you like, to discovering other new and interesting things like this.
@@Sparkle8205 Same! When I first watched the Johanna map, I didn't really care about it too much until I found myself humming the song. Since then I've really liked Sweeny Todd songs!
IKR the movie was sad though just like this map
We absolutely NEED more Sweeny Todd songs in Warriors MAPs (yes, I'm rewatching this MAP even though it's 2019)
I think I love this map more then breathing! We really need more Sweeney Todd warriors maps.
I agree wholeheartedly! Makes me wish I knew anything about animating or editing, then I'd be able to help there be more things like this.
AMEN
We have this and Johanna. We can have more.
yes! I feel like this map is one of many great musical mapsss (also there is draikinator's no place like thunderclan
Moonkitten77 draikinator didn't host that map, it was SurdiOscen
"...and he [Ashfur] shall have his revenge."
Damn. This actually aged really well with The Broken Code Arc, lol.
right?
Someone should make an au where Jayfeather is Squirrelflight and Ashfur’s son.
Just an idea that popped in my head, anyone have any ideas on how the story could change from there? I think it would be interesting because Jayfeather neither resembles Crowfeather or Leafpool, unlike his brother and sister.
EDIT: Okay so I've flushed this au out a little more. (It does contain a few plot holes)
Leafpool and Crowfeather "got together" around the same time as Squirrelflight and Ashfur. When Leafpool told her about the kits she was going to have, Squirrelflight easily agreed to the plan of taking them in, for two reasons. She already looked pregnant, due to her kit, and so it would be easy to pass of the birth of the rest of them. She was also afraid if she gave birth to Jayfeather, and Brambleclaw figured out he was Ashfur's, Brambleclaw would push her away. So if she took in her sisters kits, if the time arose where the secret was revealed of Leafpool's affair with Crowfeather, she could say Jayfeather was also Leafpool’s kit. She told Leafpool her reasoning behind accepting the plan, not wanting to manipulate her sister. Leafpool agreed to take the responsibility of Jayfeather's mother should the secret be revealed in turn for her sister’s service. (Then again SF so could probably just lie to BC that JF was theirs, so uhhhhh)
They then gave birth the same day and Squirrelflight took both kits, raising them to be her and Brambleclaw’s.
It would mess with the fact Yellowfang told her she was infertile, but other then that I think it could align with the plot pretty well.
Of course, would Jayfeather ever find out who his real parents were? Would Brambleclaw? I dunno.
(Also @McKenna Johnston's idea of Ashfur wanting revenge is a great addition)
That's a cool idea
Whoa! That's...... ..... .... Kinda awesome and weird but I like it!
i had a thought maybe they look like that cause of criwfeathers mates
hollyleaf: crowfeather x nightcloud
lionblaze: crowfeather x leafpool
jayfeather: crowfeather x feathertail
but that's just a theory a warriors theory and out
Yaasss I'd love to see that
YAS
The "He will have his revenge" hits different with him possessing Bramblestar and all thatfbfkfjrjdjt
(Edit because I wrote hits as guys lol)
top ten things that aged like fine wine: this MAP
Spoiler
He has his revenge
Ahsfur: AND HE WILL HAVE HIS REVENGE
*.+ Broken Code is created+.*
Hollyleaf: welp-
0:55 **Crazy little thing, silly little nit** Congrats, you just described Squirrelflight perfectly
Hollyleaf Gaming)) That’s...not what she said.
it says newt, doesn't it?
Caseu lol no that makes no sense
Aayden Noob o sorry lol I thought it was cause that's what I heard, I looked up the lyrics and it's said nit, sorry again sjdbsibrkd
pretty little thing, silly little nit* :/ check things before you make statements
We need more Warriors Sweeney Todd MAPs. A lot more.
Y e s
This is so good! I would assume hollyleaf would either torment or make up with ashfur in starclan but you somehow made her do both and I love it! I also love sweeny Todd so I'm glad this is a thing! It fits so well because she acts more frantic a when she tells her point of view as if it's hard for her.. I love this map.
"It's Todd now... Sweeney Todd... and he will have his revenge..."
Cue the Bramblefake
that ending aged incredibly well
this is gorgeous! every part turned out amazing!
OMG! This came out really beautiful! Everyone did amazing! Thank you for letting me participate!
I just wanna say RavenEcho, your animating in this and art are awesome
@@myusednoiseandkisses awwww! Thank you so much qwq
I love your part! The expression on Hollyleaf was amazing!
@@astraeatheapus3647 awwwww! Thank you so much!
lol now you don't know why this comment got so many likes
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Canon ashfur voice
If I didn't know better I would say it as "Swan Todd"
I actually headcannon Johnny as sweeny to be Tallstar's voice.
Aaaa this is such a good map !!! Great job everyone ;>
This MAP hits different after the newest arc
"and he will have his revenge"
Lost Stars spoilers
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That looks like foreshadowing now that there's a possibility Ashfur is the one possessing Bramblestar. :0
OKAY I DID NOT EXPECT THIS TO BE THAT AMAZING-
I was browsing maps and this pops up and I'm like "Yeah, why not"
(Later, singing) Me:
POOR THING! POOR THING!
Spoilers????
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i havent been keeping up with the newest books but this mixed with the high probability that Ashfur is posessing Bramblestar is PERFECT. ESPECIALLY the last part where it zooms in on his eyes
the story of ashfur shouldve ended like it was supposed to, with hollyleaf being truthful when she said she and him were beginning to get along well in starclan. it shouldve been genuine (for the sake of ashfurs arc) that he change his ways. it made no sense for the team to draw his “story” out as long as they did; plus, we wouldnt have lost a dear character (who i wont name for spoilers sake) by the end of it. ash had an obsession, he acted out on it in a terrible way, and he paid for it with his life. something that drastic shouldve been the turning point for him in which he actually questioned his behavior and changed. instead we got the latest arc… cant say im happy with it.
this MAP predicted TBC
It’s really ironic how the last lines fit into the current ark, as when you would’ve started it, the broken code wouldn’t have began
"and he will have his revenge"
Oh OOF this predicted it perfectly
The premise of this MAP, especially near the ending, actually syncs up extremely well to the current arc, The Broken Code, where Ashfur takes over Bramblestar's body to get revenge on the living.
The ending of this map is even more perfect with the recent reveal!
I like how when Ashfur says "NOO!" he stomps his paw into the water and it literally did nothing.
tbh I found that bit incredibly underwhelming in facial expression. Like, not hating on the animator and their work, but...
He's trying so hard but it's oh so difficult to make things move when you're a ghost you see. Being incoporeal and all really puts a wrench in your plans for dramatics.
And then we get the broken code....
And Ashfur shows up XD
holy crap
a shiver went down my spine when he said
"its Todd now. Sweeny Todd. and he will have his revenge."
ThE ANIMATION IS SO FRICCIN GOOD!!!
liKe friccin sgdrhjblk, Its beautiful!! i love this so much!!
Revenge? More like rabies :p
I am stunned. This map was just.. AH! I am squealing! You people are my blessings! Thank you! Ashfur and Hollyleaf bring back memories from the book when there animated together. Squirrelflight and Brambleclaws mini quarrel was gold! All animators did beautiful work! I’m not kidding. This is beautiful! The end when Ashfur said ‘ and he will get his revenge. . . ‘ and then Hollyleaf walked away, was emotional. This was beautifully done. The Thumbnail Contest Winner art was very well done. Had to add that in. Thank you for creating this masterpiece. All of you. Great job.
And now with the newer books, he has had his revenge
'NO! its TODD now. Sweeny Todd. AND HE WILL HAVE HIS REVENGE'
Foreshadowing man
Ash fur meant ‘he would have his revenge’ quite literally, if he ends up being there imposter
Wow and the other day, we were given the Bird MAP with the SAME CHARACTERS.....
Cant tell if this is supposed to be salty or not
@@saddeniq_5298 Nope! I mean it as an "I can finally enjoy these two chracters together twice!" thing
Offfff this is A M A Z I N G, EVERYONE DID AN AMAZING JOB. everyone's part is so smooth and sweet!!! Thank you for letting me in this amazing map!!!!!
SOMEONE MAKE ASHFUR SING 'PRETTY WOMEN'
YES
Of course, with Bramblestar
YES
Or with Tigerstar and Scourge
After reading the new series the “and he will have is revenge” means something completely different. Of course we don’t know if he is the imposter, but that gave me chills nonetheless
edit: HE IS THE IMPOSTER IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW
OH MY GODD THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF MY FAVOURITE MAPS EVER I STG
This is so beautiful!!
This aged well.
WHAT IS IT WITH SWEENY TODD AND WARRIOR CATS???
This is bootyful btw
IS SWEENEY TODD AND WARRIOR CATS A THING NOW??? OH MY GOSH YES
I’m digging it too!!
Helena's voice as Hollyleaf💗💗💗😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
AHH THIS IS GORGEOUS!!! The end result is so stunning and everyone did an incredible job, I'm honored to be a part of this project!! Thank you!!
This MAP really aged well, concidering hiw things did go with Ashfur in the "Broken Code"!
Everyone: admiring this map
Me: *trying to find out what happened in the actual movie/play or sum thing I don’t know*
the movie is called "sweeney todd" based on a musical of the same name.
Love the idea of HollyLeaf and Ashfur talking it out in Starclan tbh. It's an idea i feel like too many fans pass up
Guys.......i think this was a sign when he said his revenge i mean check out the newest books
This is sooo good, I love this! The colors are just beautiful and everyone did such great parts!
Thank you so much for choosing my thumbnail ;w;
This is so amazing! So much heart must have been put into this, and the animation is so smooth. I really like the idea of having HollyLeaf and AshFur remembering their tragic past in Starclan together. Both sides of their stories were told, and it gives the sense of justification for both characters. Thank you to everyone who helped make this masterpiece! :D
Hollyleaf: kills Ashfur to keep him from telling their secret at the gathering
Also Hollyleaf: reveals the secret at the gathering 1 second later
Ashfur: am I a joke to you?
Me: well d a n g
Thank you for letting me be apart of this map!! Glad to see it finished! :D
Aside from my general fanboy babbling about how enthused I am that there's so many more new Sweeney Warriors MAPs, thank you so much for unintentionally making me realize how much I like Helena Bonham Carter's voice for Hollyleaf. I'd never considered it before, but it actually works really well for me now that I've seen that voice come out of that character.
This is awesome! I have been following the development and am glad to see it out! Thank you for bringing this masterpiece to life!
Aww, Ashfur just had a crush on Squirrelflight
Poor Thing
Brooklynn Grimes
And then Squirrelflight had a crush on someone else so Ashfur tried to murder 3 cats
Poor thing
@@juicelord9337 oh wow😂😂😂
@@juicelord9337
I like ashfur but he isnt just a poor thing
@Mystical Poodle
I was joking XD
@@juicelord9337
I wasnt even talking to you, I'm not even sure why it replied to you
I feel so bad for squirrel’flight at the end, at the start she was kind of… entitled? She was living her best life while others “suffered” I guess, but she didn’t deserve what ashfur did, why did they gotta make ashfur a villain all of a sudden?
Wow, what a fitting song for all the characters! Everyone did such a great job in making it flow together so well!!
Broken code: *He wants his revenge. . .*
and he’s having his revenge. currently- in broken code. 👀
This looks amazing
Great job to all the participants 🍬👏
SCREEE THIS LOOKS AMAZING
Thank you so much for letting me be apart of this!!
I forget that the authors of Warrior Cats were actually British so their characters probably all had British accents
Is it bad that I kinda ship Ash and Holly
no
Nah
I mean anything is possible in Starclan
Not bad, per say, but not especially great either lmao
Well, it's not crazy (points at Jayfeather x stick)
Yooooo this is so pretty!!!!! Tysm for letting me join!!!!
And then ashfur went to go posses Bramblestar
OH MY GOD
THIS IS SO GOOD???
WHAT
Honestly, for some reason I love the idea of holly and ash meeting in starclan
This map hits different after Broken Code (assuming the possessor is Ashfur)
Wow I actully imagine Holly Leafs Voice to sound like that, The same with Ash fur
Beatiful map!♥️
OH MY GOD ITS COMPLETED VSJAGSJSVSJSBSEB :’) everyone did such a good job I’m so proud!! And thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to be in it
Wait I wasn't in the end credits with my thumbnail entry? Sad, but still an amazing MAP 💕
I didn't get your entry??? Or maybe I did but I lost it?
Aah I'm so sorry for this ;v;
CloverGalaxy No don't feel bad! I believe I sent it to you through Instagram! I'm sorry for sounding rude haha 😄
I'VE WATCHED THIS SO MANY TIMES CNDIWOnjr
After TBC, that last line is pretty terrifying
This is such an amazing map! Love it! Someone should make a moss kit map with the song lost boy. Me and my random ideas 😂
YES
i can't explain how wonderful this is in words.
Omg guys!I got a like!!MY FIRST LIKE!!!......why is it blue?🤨
Whose here after reading the newest Warriors Book?
Idk why but ashfur sounds like jack sparrow
Johnny Depp played both Sweeney Todd and Jack Sparrow, so it would be strange if he _didn't._
Ahh gosh I keep coming back to watch this map I love it so much! Every time I get literal chills it’s wild!
Everyone did so good I love the work everyone put into the project!
Good job y’all!!!
Part of this made me think
I'd really like to see Hollyleaf and Ashfur confronting eachother in starclan, Hollyleaf beginning to apologize and Ashfur interrupting her immediately to say his own apology for all the shit he dragged her family through
I wonder what would’ve happened if Squilf chose ashfur
oh my god this map has so much emotion, and I absolutely love how dramatic it is
This is so good and I just found ur channel and so far it is so amazing!!! How are u not famous!!!!
I WANNA SCREAM!!!! IT TURBED OUT AMAZING AND IN THE TIME ITS BEEN UP IVE REPLAYED IT LIKE 10 TIEMS ALREADY! I LIKED IT SO MUCH I DID FANART
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Show me!
CloverGalaxy it’s honestly not that good but her eh go >w< (also I had to do it on my iPod, so I don’t have the speed paint) ua-cam.com/video/BU6-RhU_Ocw/v-deo.html
i forgot how much ive been waiting on this until i watched it
Just so you know, it’s Sweeney, not Sweenie. Amazing anyways! :3
2:52 my favorite part :>
*cool*
OMG I LOVE DIS
Wish I could've joined
Oh my god, this is incredible! Definitely underrated! :00
I kinda ship it
You forgot Ashfur's blonde hair in his design. :P