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KlulessKitsune
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A fox on the internet who likes to write stories, and then talk about them.
Uhhh hashtags I guess.
#fiction #fantasy #vetros #writing #storytelling #videoessay
Uhhh hashtags I guess.
#fiction #fantasy #vetros #writing #storytelling #videoessay
Common Fallacies in Writing Fiction
#writing #writingtips #creativewriting #fictionwriting
There are three common fallacies that occur when someone is new to writing fiction. Today, I want to talk about them.
There are three common fallacies that occur when someone is new to writing fiction. Today, I want to talk about them.
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Writing Screenplays vs. Prose
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#creativewriting #writing #writingtips #screenwriting #screenplaytips Today, I'm talking about screenplays in comparison to prose fiction.
Narrative Research: Smartphones
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#creativewriting #writing #writingtips Smartphones have interesting implications when it comes to fiction.
Revisiting Generative AI and Writing
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#chatgpt #generativeart #ai #writing #creativewriting #writingtips Today, I revisit a topic I covered last year. Since then, the AI systems have changed, the discussion around them has shifted, and my opinion... Well, it's a more refined version of what I already believed. Kwebbelkop Clip: x.com/Kwebbelkop/status/1773349423923204216
Narrative Research 1: My ThinkPad T430
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#thinkpad #narrativeresearch Today, I talk about the laptop I use every single day, and has written every script for every video on my channel.
Writing Detective Fiction
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#writingtips #writing #creativewriting #detectivefiction #mysteryfiction Detective fiction is the part of the mystery genre that involves "detectives" solving a case. Today, I talk about it.
Romance is Hard to Write
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#writingtips #writing #creativewriting #romance Romance is a genre that is sometimes underestimated in how difficult it can be to pull off effectively.
How to Build Scenes
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#writingtips #writing #creativewriting Writers are often told to write "in scene". Today, I talk about some of the basics for constructing scenes.
Dialogue and How to Write It
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#writingtips #writing #creativewriting Today, I talk about dialogue and character interactions. This is a subject some new writers can find confusing, and even some experienced writers can burn themselves out over. My goal today is to take a step back and look at it.
Anti-Heroes (And How to Write Them)
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Anti-Heroes (And How to Write Them)
The Antagonist Video Will Be Uploaded Tomorrow
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The Antagonist Video Will Be Uploaded Tomorrow
Writing Points of View (Including 2nd Person)
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Writing Points of View (Including 2nd Person)
Star Trek (2009) is a Fun Mess (but Still a Mess)
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Star Trek (2009) is a Fun Mess (but Still a Mess)
The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly... of Writing Fanfiction
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The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly... of Writing Fanfiction
The Amazing Digital Circus's Pilot Was Better than I Expected
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The Amazing Digital Circus's Pilot Was Better than I Expected
Coldplay's "Viva la Vida" is Actually Good Historical Fiction
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Coldplay's "Viva la Vida" is Actually Good Historical Fiction
Ghosts and Paint it Black | Two Songs, One Subject
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Ghosts and Paint it Black | Two Songs, One Subject
Overrated vs Underrated | Initial D vs Wangan Midnight
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Overrated vs Underrated | Initial D vs Wangan Midnight
Lucky Star's Writing is Perfectly Executed
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Lucky Star's Writing is Perfectly Executed
See also: basically any main character played by Steven "doesn't actually know Aikido" Seagal.
I like the video, definitely seems informative but does this process change for animated vs live action?
Thank you! There isn’t much difference in the formatting, at least. Most differences would be stylistic in nature because of the two different genres. Granted, I am not in the animation industry and I don’t know anyone personally who is, so there may be differences I simply don’t know about. I’m just assuming that the general concept of the screenplay existing to serve a bigger medium than itself will still make it more utilitarian over something like a novel.
Glad to discover you. This style of SFM ain't common in writing advice so I definitely like it.
Thank you!
Would love to know if u have been able to look at mine yet, cuz well I get concerned sometimes that I may not be walking the line like I'm wanting with my writing, and that these low key are calling me out 😅
I haven’t finished reading it, but nothing jumped out at me for being sentimental/frigid/manneristic so you’re probably fine.
I really enjoyed the video, but found the visuals lacking, it could be more engaging if you added more clips about the words you’re speaking, the vtuber format doesn’t work with still 3d renders, still, I found the content interesting and will strive to apply it to my own works, so thanks for sharing. Btw, your voice is very soothing, kudos to that 👍
Yeah, I’m planning on a better setup when I can actually afford it.
Hello❤
i simply love that i discovered you with the 'how to develop characters' video and i saw that 3d modeled thinkpad and thought,.... wow ... that's specific ..... and now there's the reveal of the full thinkpad t430 w/ arch and everything !!!! (also i loved the bit talking about how it can be something that everyone can do with a bit of patience, but i guess talking about the gatekeeping in the linux community is beating a dead horse lsdfjdslk)
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed! And yeah, gatekeeping in the Linux community is frequently covered but I think it’s because we all inevitably have something we need help with, and getting answers can be needlessly difficult.
I've written fanfiction in the past and I found it best to focus the story on an OC inside this story setting and have the canon characters as side characters. So on, I've always struggled with depicting characters that are not of my own creation accurately. Yes, I've had ppl compliment me on how I write canon characters, that gives me hope I guess. I've read fanfic that is better than the canon material, that's the best thing about fanfiction to be honest.
I use a T430s with Arch(btw) , have had a great experience!
USB is overrated
These are the last Thinkpads that you can replace the keyboards with the OG ones. I replaced the one on my x230 with a T510 I think. 😊
I think you’re right. I’ve thought about doing the swap to a 7-row, but I’m still undecided.
Thanks ! But i can't find a Thinkpad T430 in my country. So i use now a Thinkpad X240 with Archlinux
x240’s are cool too!
A. Older than Google, B. Haven't had wifi in over 7 years, all I have is phone lol
I would struggle to use my phone for everything. I get distracted easily
how the hell did you manage to have the same wallpaper that i have right now
I mean, it’s such a good wallpaper
Cool video man, i own and use on a daily basis the following Thinkpads....T500, T520, T420, T430, X1 Carbon and x201, all running various Linux distro's. The odd man out is my way old LG C500 also running Linux
That’s a nice collection. I’ve only really used older ThinkPads, so how’s the X1 Carbon? They seem interesting, but I haven’t had a chance to see and try one in person yet.
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what idle temp u get? with this cpu ?
It idles between 32-36C. Granted, the current thermal paste isn't great, and I'm planning on getting better paste soon for all of my systems.
@@KlulessKitsune are u using dgpu heatsink ? that ideal temp
Actually, I use the normal heatsink. I didn’t feel like replacing it, plus the difference between the two isn’t worth buying the dgpu version imo.
@@KlulessKitsune are u increase fan speed? i have same laptop, but my idle doesnt ideal 47-48
I just got my T480 quite cheap for broken wifi slot. I bought it because of my Legion 5 is such a pain in the a$$ to carry with. There's certain app that I can't run on Linux, so I do Hackintosh instead.
A Hackintosh ThinkPad is definitely interesting. I've been tempted to try it, but I have very little familiarity with macOS, so I don't think I personally have need for it.
@@KlulessKitsune It was, and macOS my only option. I mainly use it to code, and my experience with Windows was not great. I've tried Hackintosh like 6 year ago with my previous MSI laptop. It quite time consuming to do config, like Arch (If I do WM). Nice video btw, subs.
Thank you! I would think it’s probably more difficult than Arch, as Hackintosh is a modification of an otherwise very locked down system whereas Arch has always been an OS installed after purchasing the PC. Idk for sure, I’ve never done Hackintosh, but that would be my initial guess. I think Arch’s reputation as being really difficult is an artifact of the past. I know it used to be really hard, but today, the only issue a user is likely to run into is something of their own fault. (Like how I once accidentally deleted my mirrorlist, and in trying to copy from the backup mirrorlist, accidentally wiped that too lol)
I feel called out, I used the image generator..😮💨, it's helping me keep track of my character's
Lmao, you’re fine. I’m not trying to say you can’t use them at all. I was just complaining about the megatons of AI generated stuff being dumped online from people trying to get money or popularity through it.
@@KlulessKitsune I completely do agree, the AI game add and so on are tearable
They really are. It’s just so exhausting to have to deal with AI stuff being forced on me all the time.
@@KlulessKitsune is their a better method for the layout of created character's, I'm finding it hard to keep track, I know your last videos on it, was just a check list, but is that all I should be using
The creation process itself is relatively loose. Basically, as long as the necessary parts of the character are there, it should be fine. The “character check” I made is mostly for retroactively making sure those particular parts are there, because without them, the story probably won’t function. I can’t really say there is a definitive layout to writing every single feature of a character. I’ve seen some thorough character sheets, but I always hesitate to recommend them because they tend to make character development a box ticking exercise, which can have its own set of issues further along the writing process. I think the main thing to remember is that a reader of a story does not have the sheets for the character next to them for reference. You pick the traits you need the character to have, but it’s more about writing scenes that display those traits once you know what they should be. In other words, the story itself lays out the character, and any notes are for your own organization and memory.
I got my T470 up and running Arch on it this week. I was running Mint XFCE for the longest time, but am really, really enjoying Arch. I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your video. I found your voice to be calming and I really loved your fox character! Take care.
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed the video! I’m also glad you are enjoying your ThinkPad setup!
i am hoping Win 11 and Thinkpad T430, but turned out to Arch Linux. Linux will run on anything, so yeah... no news here
Yeah, modern Windows is just so… fat. It’s full of tons of stuff that feels so unnecessary, and I’m not even someone who cares too much about bloat. But, even with KDE Plasma and a bunch of other stuff, it’s still leaner than an out of the box installation of windows 11.
Try btop instead of htop.
Thanks, I’ll look into it!
You just convinced me to get my old rusty t430 out and install arch on it.
I’m glad! I think you’ll enjoy it!
I have the same wallpaper 😄 and also a small pile of old laptops, including a Thinkpad, all with a different Linux distro installed on them
Nice! It’s fun to throw Linux on old laptops. There’s just something charming about them.
Where can I get that wallpaper
I just found it again by looking up “miku 39 wallpaper”. There’s a site called “backiee” that has a high res version.
Get out of my brain
Too late lol
Good to know, but it was hard to stay with you, took some rewinds
Thank you, I’ll keep it in mind!
What movie?
The movie I used was Top Gun: Maverick and the game I used was Red Dead Redemption 2.
I've always wanted to write romance but I've never been able to commit to writing it as the a-plot due to reader expectations. Not a knock on romance writers there are just too many rules for a rule breaker like me.
The good news is, if you do try, the reader expectations and rules will be pretty much met just by being a romance focused on characters, so it wouldn’t be too difficult to try out.
The only thing to my knowledge you didn't mention is a love triangle, I'm actually incorporating the concept in my background story
That’s a good point. I probably should have mentioned love triangles, but I wanted to hold off and cover those when I talk about using B plots because love triangles play nicely with them. The hardest part of talking about writing is deciding which subtopics go with which general topics.
A few points I'd like to add are obvious ones but could help someone, Where/when the scene is taking place can change everything, decide on who all from your story should be apart of the scene, and lastly over or under depicting the immersion detail.
Thank you!
Shop Hand/Kim's Kid:- Miss.Joanna Klara Wilkinson Location:- (Stana-Udrua) Age:- Was4-Is13-End23 X-but-Y:- Loves her mother but resents her for her missing father. Flaws:- Young, Passionate, Daring. Other traits:- Tea shop Helper. Plot integration:- A growing lady that has been explicitly vigorous with self discipline, with a desire for answers regarding her missing father. (Continued on Book 2)..... "This is one of my character things, im having some trouble with a few, is there a way you can do a video on various examples of this being done correctly?" 🙏
I probably wouldn’t do a video running through the check simply because I intended it to be a tool to check a character after they’ve already been planned, so I’m not actually sure how to make a video like that without it just being making a lot of characters and going through them. As far as your character, you seem to be pretty close. I’d have to know more about the story. I am still planning on reading and assisting you with it, but I’ve been on the road every week (and I’m STILL on the road) so I have been to swamped to take on any projects other than my own for the time being.
@@KlulessKitsune that does put me at ease, I am eagerly awaiting lol... And I could only imagine how busy you must be, I hope things become less sporadic, I know how tiring it can be....and as far as my suggestion, I was wanting you to make a few characters for examples to ensure I had the idea correct, I had figured it could be one of the YT shorts, I was going through my book and redoing all the characters with that check list, and it's already making a big difference!! Which is why I went ahead and asked
Beautifully put. I’m enjoying the amount of examples used. For 14 minutes, you’ve covered a heck of a lot more than I tried discovering in 3 years!!! You usually pick this stuff up subconsciously. it’s great to see it put into words, for someone who has been writing too it’s a good refresh. Can’t wait for the scene construction breakdown.
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed! And thank you for suggesting it!
W vid. I’ll comment for engagement.
Thank you!
I have no idea why so many video essays are being recommended to me, but I'm loving all of them. This one very much included!
Yeah, the video essay rabbit hole runs deep. Thank you for watching!