Great video as usual mate! I spend a lot of time worldbuilding and I find it really fun, but I absolutely agree with your point near the end. I can't wait to see the next one, I hope you delve into the different types of third person point of view writing as well! That always intrigues me.
Thank you! I’ll be spending time on the different subsections of 3rd person because they have a lot of differences, but they can be difficult to spot, so I’ve seen stories start with Limited and then slowly slide to Omniscient, and then back to Limited, etc. I have to keep on myself about it too sometimes.
If it’s not the main location, then it’s still within the main “world”, even if it’s not an actual plane of existence. Within the larger world, I would recommend making sure the rules allow for the existence of other planes in whatever form (dream, vision, etc.) and having the justification for whichever characters experience it.
@@KlulessKitsune that's what I was going for, to give my own spoiler "yet have discretion", something happens and only the mind is getting ripped to another plain so to speak.. and within that dimension im wanting a description of what is being witnessed, but can't think of way of depicting the concept without cliche. Or actual imagery....ps I believe it would be considered sci-fi
I still don’t have a lot of info to work with, but my guess is that you’ll want to focus on whatever it is that causes the mind/body separation to make sure it works, and to avoid cliche, I would recommend doing something with it that other plots haven’t looked at. For example, instead of just a viewing window, if the character is able to change things in both planes from that position, possibly in a very destructive way the character doesn’t fully understand.
@@KlulessKitsune I believe I'd have to share the whole story, and I don't wanna bother you. I'm also concerned about leaks or the story being claimed by another, with it being my first & all, but I do appreciate all the advice.
Great video as usual mate! I spend a lot of time worldbuilding and I find it really fun, but I absolutely agree with your point near the end. I can't wait to see the next one, I hope you delve into the different types of third person point of view writing as well! That always intrigues me.
Thank you! I’ll be spending time on the different subsections of 3rd person because they have a lot of differences, but they can be difficult to spot, so I’ve seen stories start with Limited and then slowly slide to Omniscient, and then back to Limited, etc. I have to keep on myself about it too sometimes.
How would u build a world that isn't an actual place but a plan of existence, But isn't the main location.
If it’s not the main location, then it’s still within the main “world”, even if it’s not an actual plane of existence.
Within the larger world, I would recommend making sure the rules allow for the existence of other planes in whatever form (dream, vision, etc.) and having the justification for whichever characters experience it.
@@KlulessKitsune that's what I was going for, to give my own spoiler "yet have discretion", something happens and only the mind is getting ripped to another plain so to speak.. and within that dimension im wanting a description of what is being witnessed, but can't think of way of depicting the concept without cliche. Or actual imagery....ps I believe it would be considered sci-fi
I still don’t have a lot of info to work with, but my guess is that you’ll want to focus on whatever it is that causes the mind/body separation to make sure it works, and to avoid cliche, I would recommend doing something with it that other plots haven’t looked at. For example, instead of just a viewing window, if the character is able to change things in both planes from that position, possibly in a very destructive way the character doesn’t fully understand.
@@KlulessKitsune I believe I'd have to share the whole story, and I don't wanna bother you. I'm also concerned about leaks or the story being claimed by another, with it being my first & all, but I do appreciate all the advice.
Ok! I wish I was able to help you more.