once upon a broken heart broke my heart with its mediocrity

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  • @user117-ella
    @user117-ella 10 місяців тому +73

    It’s so weird to me that so many cringe ya romance writers are university teachers. Like YOU are trying to teach other people how to write ?? I’d drop out if my teacher wrote something like that 💀

    • @user-bl4hj9zd4c
      @user-bl4hj9zd4c 8 місяців тому +3

      Well, technically speaking, it has nothing to do with that because teachers at uni don't usually teach this type of writing but instead, academic writing, which is very different from the writing ya books specifically.

    • @user-bl4hj9zd4c
      @user-bl4hj9zd4c 8 місяців тому

      Nevermind, I didn't know about the creative writing detail

  • @marianamauricio
    @marianamauricio 10 місяців тому +33

    52:28 "He just has to resist the urge to drink human blood until the morning and then the venom goes away or smth. I don't really know where it goes. Maybe he pees it out" 🤣

  • @nazhoni
    @nazhoni 10 місяців тому +32

    all of her books are so bad like i’m so sorry but i will never take another stance. mediocre and people eat this shit up, same with fourth wing and half of the “romance books” that have fantasy involved like acotar and the cruel prince.

  • @marianamauricio
    @marianamauricio 10 місяців тому +35

    30:04 Ariel Lagrimas?? lágrimas means tears in portuguese.... and i looked it up and apparently that girl has magical tears or whatever.... miss garber....... cmon now 😭 I've noticed several times that authors will use foreign words (sometimes slightly misspelled) to name their characters after something that's somehow related to their powers/personality/appearence, etc. It's so lazyyyyy 🥴

  • @Anna-lu3zp
    @Anna-lu3zp 3 місяці тому +5

    I actually liked the idea of the trilogy and I was trying to convince myself that I'm just not used to this writing style - little did I know that it was just really bad. I truly thought that the problem was me and read all three books hoping it will get better. It did not. I was so disappointed because I think that with a completely different writing style, that could perhaps give more plasticity to the characters which were otherwise so dull, it could really be an interesting a fairytalelike trilogy. But right now I'm just mad I got tricked by the pretty covers and bought all three books and just had to finish them

  • @fernandarosa6581
    @fernandarosa6581 5 місяців тому +3

    The way you say "Caraval", I just love it

  • @user-bl4hj9zd4c
    @user-bl4hj9zd4c 8 місяців тому +8

    I honestly enjoyed Caraval (at least the first book) but maaaan, OUaBH is such a disaster like, the writing got so bad wtf

    • @vina36
      @vina36 7 місяців тому +1

      Really? I've heard only good things I was debating on whether or not I should read it

    • @user-bl4hj9zd4c
      @user-bl4hj9zd4c 7 місяців тому +2

      @@vina36 Well, you can always give it a try. It's not unreadable like Shatter Me's writing for instance. If you're into fantasy, you may overlook some elements. Personally, I just found it so boring??? Like, it's so boring I can't even explain it, I only ever progress in its reading when I do the dishes, I put the audiobook, but like, I genuinely don't care what happens or what will happen. I see the hype about it and I just don't get it cuz it's kinda confusing and there's literally no chemistry between the supposedly couple??? Like, if people weren't yapping about Jax (idk how to write his name) and Evangeline, I wouldn't have guessed that they are supposed to feel anything for each other cuz like, whenever they meet and there's an interaction, I just be like 'please let it finish' cuz it's so cringe and uninteresting and superficially written '-'
      And I'm way past 50% of the book but I'm not rooting for whatever romance is supposed to unfold between them because they just- don't match at all? That is, plus the fact that Evangeline's character is just so stupid and supercial as well, no personality no nothing, and she keeps repeating that she wants her happily ever after, her lines are annoying and boring asf. The relationship and romance, dialogues and chemistry are very important to me, and if I find myself hating it, it just kills the vibe and the hype for me.
      However, there are some details in the book that I really enjoyed, some events and setting, some elements of fantasy and magic that were pretty interesting in my humble opinion.
      Sorry for rambling... You don't have to read all this 💀

    • @vina36
      @vina36 7 місяців тому

      @@user-bl4hj9zd4c haha I get your point, I've heard the main female character is a naive and dumb girl and honestly I hate that in books especially fantasy!! Like give me a Jude Duarte kinda girl!!!

  • @jo_helaci
    @jo_helaci 10 місяців тому +9

    So looking forward to another of your reviews and a good laugh at your spot on comments! ❤ Peace and love ❤

  • @marianamauricio
    @marianamauricio 10 місяців тому +6

    unrelated but you look so prettyyyyyyy 💗❤

  • @jasminv8653
    @jasminv8653 10 місяців тому +15

    A uni teacher moving to her parents' house just to write a teenage romance novel series is... So american im sorry peace and love but like. How in the publishing industry. No one in northern europe would be doing that akdjfhskkfhs

    • @angelwings967
      @angelwings967 14 днів тому

      Maybe bc in Northern Europe they actually take care of their population with proper social safety nets. This allows people to pursue their dreams without resorting to such “American” measures. 💖 Be grateful, not judgmental.

  • @demitwice
    @demitwice 10 місяців тому +7

    sophie do you like any books? not judging i love your videos and agree with most of your opinions im just excited for the day you enjoy a book you read

  • @clara3858
    @clara3858 10 місяців тому +5

    We love a bit of Ballad of Never After slander 😂

  • @Jasmyne241
    @Jasmyne241 7 місяців тому +1

    Just finished it… omg 😅

  • @nwm9267
    @nwm9267 10 місяців тому +2

    ❤PEACE AND LOVE❤

  • @MollieLolly
    @MollieLolly 10 місяців тому

    💔

  • @deja5477
    @deja5477 10 місяців тому +1

    W H Y

  • @mikabookshunter5354
    @mikabookshunter5354 10 місяців тому

    💞💞💞