How To Write A Grade 9 'Inspector Calls' Essay For The 2024 GCSE Exams! | English GCSE Revision

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  • @FirstRateTutors
    @FirstRateTutors  9 місяців тому +5

    Sign up for our GCSE AQA 'Ultimate English Language and English Literature' Revision Course: www.firstratetutors.com/gcse-course

    • @nafizhasan3719
      @nafizhasan3719 3 місяці тому

      Hi madam. I asked for Edexcel IGCSE English Language B, not AQA.

  • @jonathanpennington5211
    @jonathanpennington5211 Рік тому +110

    It's a good idea to put an embedded quote in your introduction. e.g. Priestley shows how "we are all members of one body" and explores issues surrounding capitalist ideologies... this is a really good way of impressing your examiner because it will show them that you have good knowledge of the play (as you have quotes to spare) and also justifies your introduction by linking it directly to dialogue from the play.

    • @ahubble6980
      @ahubble6980 6 місяців тому +4

      Thanks for the tip thats great!

    • @WilliamB-ph5jg
      @WilliamB-ph5jg 2 місяці тому

      So do u also use evidence or is that ur evidence?

    • @kevinberkoh7243
      @kevinberkoh7243 Місяць тому

      ​@@WilliamB-ph5jgThat is your evidence

    • @kevinberkoh7243
      @kevinberkoh7243 Місяць тому +1

      ​@@WilliamB-ph5jgRemember William embedded quotes is the evidence as it's the direct statements from the source.

  • @alextrickey4751
    @alextrickey4751 Рік тому +131

    tmr's the exam, hi to everyone else also just last minute cramming :/ thankyou for the help first rate tutors!

  • @Scar.let.g
    @Scar.let.g 5 місяців тому +20

    My teacher taught us the PETAL structure. Point, Evidence, Technique, Analysis, Link. Its so useful if you forget to mention a technique!

  • @deadgamergirl876
    @deadgamergirl876 4 місяці тому +19

    I'll always choose the theme but I hope it's a good one for 2024 GCSE

  • @twitch_n0th1ng70
    @twitch_n0th1ng70 Рік тому +33

    these vids help so much, i got my grade 2 to a 6 :)

    • @zylo5131
      @zylo5131 Рік тому +5

      same haha but from 3 - 6

    • @twitch_n0th1ng70
      @twitch_n0th1ng70 Рік тому +3

      @@zylo5131 for real these vids are actually a godsend

    • @shafiqzaman1980
      @shafiqzaman1980 8 місяців тому +1

      bro how did you used it to get grade 6

    • @itsW1ngW0ng
      @itsW1ngW0ng 7 місяців тому

      damnnn im tryna get a t least a 6/7 im prayingg

    • @Pinkflamingo1458
      @Pinkflamingo1458 5 місяців тому

      @@itsW1ngW0nggrade 7 is all about perspective, so it’s more reading between the lines, looking at how it makes you as a reader feel, the writer’s intentions and linking to context. Grade 8 is doing all that but embedding context, looking at alternative viewpoints of why a subject term has been used

  • @rahmaaa6197
    @rahmaaa6197 Рік тому +1

    Thank you so much, this is so helpful!

  • @benjeiy7347
    @benjeiy7347 8 місяців тому +5

    miss you have been an amazing teacher thank you so much. Learning the content itself is one thing - but it's always the exam technique that has gotten to me. You've helped me fix that enormously. Thank you. You're a great help.

  • @migsstarsubliminals
    @migsstarsubliminals 5 місяців тому +4

    My mocks are tomorrow, first time I did pretty bad so I hope I can redeem myself this time. Wish me luck

  • @maddisonzara5230
    @maddisonzara5230 Рік тому +3

    Thank you so much I really appreciate this video it's soo helpful. Would you possibly be able to do some more Jane Eyre videos? Oh and do you have a walkthrough or model answer for the responsibility question? Thank you 😊

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому

      I've already done some Jane Eyre videos - search "First Rate Tutors Jane Eyre"

  • @xandermoore6485
    @xandermoore6485 Рік тому +17

    got my grade from a 3 to a 5, now i just gotta keep it up. nice video

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому +13

      You literally went up two grades - that's incredible!

  • @moalmashta7211
    @moalmashta7211 Рік тому +12

    I find it so hard to write a plan in 5 mins 😅

    • @Pinkflamingo1458
      @Pinkflamingo1458 5 місяців тому

      Each section is 45 mins long, sometimes u can do 10 mins planning, 35 mins writing. Just with ur plan, write down key quotes for aic that u remember (those with multiple key themes), structure them into 3/4 paragraphs in ur plan, and then write down some context u want to include

    • @RachelMcilhagger
      @RachelMcilhagger Місяць тому

      No same

  • @joshsingh2557
    @joshsingh2557 Рік тому

    Can you please do contex and quotes and explode the quotes💯🔥

  • @federalbureauofinvestigati750
    @federalbureauofinvestigati750 Рік тому +6

    Sorry for being 2 months late but I wanted to ask if alternative interpretations are necessary for getting higher grades and could you explain in a brief reply how to use them.

    • @shahdal-samarrai735
      @shahdal-samarrai735 Рік тому

      alternative interpretations are definitely useful for top grades and i would say necessary, to use them you would just start your regular PEEL + "however, others may interpret this to mean [shorter PEEL paragraph]." i would say you should try and use them, if you cant think of another point, just use something extremely base leveled like 'however some others may interpret this as the writer simply stating that the character was angry' rather than something in depth.

    • @federalbureauofinvestigati750
      @federalbureauofinvestigati750 Рік тому

      @@shahdal-samarrai735 tomorrow I have paper 1 literature. When I get a Shakespeare question and a 19th century novel question. How do I I structure my answer and in how many paragraphs

  • @missangela6627
    @missangela6627 2 місяці тому

    For Edexcel IGCSE they say 50% of marks are for context. Are students expected to use half of their essay for context?

  • @mysticwillows8233
    @mysticwillows8233 Рік тому +1

    Could you please make a video on your predictions for the 2023 aqa inspector calls question

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому +1

      That's on my list - I'll do predictions either next month or April 😊

    • @mysticwillows8233
      @mysticwillows8233 Рік тому +1

      @@FirstRateTutors Ok thank you so much!

  • @danieldowie5226
    @danieldowie5226 Рік тому +1

    Would you write the same layout for the poetry section ?

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому +3

      Slightly different if it's unseen poetry but similar for seen poetry.

  • @espanola0984
    @espanola0984 Місяць тому

    My exam is in 2h, I can’t remember anything, I’ve slept 4h and English is not my first language so let’s see how the exam is gonna be 😭

  • @Zodi-ot1jl
    @Zodi-ot1jl Рік тому

    Plzzz can you do one Romeo and Juliet and Jane eyre plzzzzz i love ur videos and they are really helpfulll

  • @vrdrive2538
    @vrdrive2538 Рік тому +1

    hello is there any discount code for your English courses? cheers

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому

      Thanks for asking but no - there are no discounts for the English Courses.

  • @edmarsh7611
    @edmarsh7611 Рік тому

    Cheers

  • @polaszelka9527
    @polaszelka9527 Рік тому

    would you use the same structure for the edexcel paper?

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому

      Yes... ish! I'm releasing some EDEXCEL videos (starting today at 4pm) for EDEXCEL GCSE English students. Today will be on Language Paper 1 but I'll soon do one on the English Literature exam

  • @chineduj-o6291
    @chineduj-o6291 Рік тому +3

    Came too late to the party. Darn. This is so well made, however, thank you so much and wish me luck...I guess.

  • @Athystsz
    @Athystsz Рік тому

    How do you get all these quotes + all the others ones you gotta revise n stuff. Like you sit there and you just know like every quote about gerald about this question

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому

      I’ve taught it so many times I’ve memorised the play and key quotes for all the characters. Watch my other Inspector Calls videos.. I share quotes to memorise which go with any essay ☺️

    • @Athystsz
      @Athystsz Рік тому

      @@FirstRateTutors if you could, could you link your best videos about this it would be really helpful

  • @RachelMcilhagger
    @RachelMcilhagger Місяць тому

    Remember to embed quotes

  • @malaika144
    @malaika144 5 місяців тому +1

    why do teachers make it look so easyyy like i dot understand it i have my mocks next month on the 12th and its on the inspector calls and poems and im here struggling to revise everything and memorise the key quotes for the poems and inspecter calls 😪😭

    • @Pinkflamingo1458
      @Pinkflamingo1458 5 місяців тому +1

      Sometimes smaller quotes are easier to remember. So like “millions and millions and millions” “Eva smiths and John smiths” “members of one body” “unsinkable” “a girl of that sort”, short quotes are easier to remember, and they also contain a few themes so it’s easier to use on multiple exam questions

    • @malaika144
      @malaika144 5 місяців тому +1

      @@Pinkflamingo1458 thank u ❤️

  • @MaryamAlyafee
    @MaryamAlyafee Рік тому +1

    are the aqa papers of inspector calls different from the edexcel papers of inspector calls

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому

      Yes fairly different as in EDEXCEL you get one quote that goes with the question and in EDEXCEL you can get two character questions to choose from (rather than one character and one theme in AQA).

    • @MaryamAlyafee
      @MaryamAlyafee Рік тому

      @@FirstRateTutors i see thank you so much im not doing AQA but im sure it still helped

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому

      @@MaryamAlyafee you're welcome 😃

    • @eleadtekie6134
      @eleadtekie6134 Рік тому

      @@FirstRateTutorswhat about ocr?

  • @amilshareef3792
    @amilshareef3792 Рік тому

    Hi is this the same for an edexcel paper?

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому

      Yes but watch the EDEXCEL video I made for Inspector Calls - I literally show how to answer the question for the 2021 EDEXCEL exam.

  • @ripzyee8677
    @ripzyee8677 Рік тому +2

    why are ur hand so moisturized

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому +2

      You'd rather look at dry hands?

    • @person2631
      @person2631 Рік тому +2

      @@FirstRateTutors yeah icl you have a point plus there's nothing wrong

    • @ripzyee8677
      @ripzyee8677 Рік тому

      @@FirstRateTutors yeah sure mate

  • @unclecondog9807
    @unclecondog9807 Рік тому +2

    How do you write so much in 50 mins

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  Рік тому +2

      Speed writing! It's a muscle... (kind of like exercise or running) - the more you practice, the faster you get. It's possible - but you've got to put in the work 😊

  • @nafizhasan3719
    @nafizhasan3719 4 місяці тому

    Hi madam. I emailed you. I have been trying to reach you since December 2023 but no one answered. I am interested for Edexcel IGCSE Language B. Do you have Edexcel? Do you have downloadable notes of language and literature of Edexcel?

    • @FirstRateTutors
      @FirstRateTutors  3 місяці тому

      Hi Nafiz, I'm so sorry! I get so many emails a day.. I think I must have missed your messages. For EDEXCEL IGCSE B... sadly that isn't covered in any of our courses BUT we do have Language & Literature notes you can download here: www.firstratetutors.com/flashcards

  • @Blossom-puppeter
    @Blossom-puppeter 3 місяці тому

    Tmmr exam help

  • @user-sr9go8ok9v
    @user-sr9go8ok9v 2 місяці тому

    ITS TOO MUCH TO WRITE

  • @ccx5591
    @ccx5591 Рік тому

    not me watching this video before the exam 😭😭

  • @aisxu6285
    @aisxu6285 2 місяці тому

    this is an awful response - this doesn't talk about anythign relevant to the actual gcse resposne in which you vividily repeat and remind the person marking your exam that priestley presents the greedy and unjust system which is capitalism as a form to bring change into the youth with socialism