Hazbin Hotel | Tears To Shed Animatic | The First Murder Victim [Part 2]

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  • “Where's my mom and dad?”
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    Story: Abel was in the fields with his brother. The sun was rising, they woke up extra early to see which offering God had chosen hours prior. It was a contest, he was so happy he won because it meant that he would be the first out of the two to get a bride. Luluwa would be created first, and after an extended period of time, Cain would have his bride, Calmana, created later.
    While he was in the middle of rejoicing that he would have someone to love, everything went black. When he opened his eyes, he looked very different. At first, he felt calm but when the reality of what happened set in, panic unfolded. He was inconsolable over what he had lost. He begged to go home but death is permanent. And no, Luluwa was not to be created. He was given an exception to go straight to Heaven instead of Limbo and that was considered his consolation prize but the priority of the bride project was to populate the Earth. And since Abel was dead, there was no point in him getting a bride.
    Sera and Emily put their focus into helping him adjust and cope. But the situation was very foreign to them for it was the first of its kind to ever happen. Emily’s job is to bring joy, and this was the first time she failed so miserably that it deeply impacted her. Sera knew there was nothing they could do except give him his space.
    Abel had a lot of things robbed from him with that one act: his family, his would be bride, and the family he would have had with her. After the despair, came the anger. And it was not entirely surprising that he went on to create the Exorcist Angels, with Emily especially advocating for it. She failed once in making him smile and she was not about to let another opportunity go to waste.
    A sinner struck him down and from the ashes, a monster arose.
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    Halloween vibes, eyy. I want to make it clear that this is to show how Abel was like 10,000 years prior. He really was a sweet kid that became a genocidal jerk. This is to show how his mind has deteriorated since then. I know, it's easy to think he's justified but genocide is bad. I don't wanna woobify him and paint him in a totally good light (if that’s how it seems, sorry, it's a fine line to juggle) but what I also notice is that there is a lot of sympathy for Cain, especially in respects to his relationship with Awan.
    Awan is cosmic karma. The straw that broke the camel’s back was Abel getting a bride first. Due to years of pent up envy and pride (he thought he deserved a bride first because he was the first born), Cain killed his brother. He knew what he was about to do was bad, even if it tore him up on the inside. Yes, the Morningstars manipulated him but they didn’t physically force him to do anything. The murder was an act of free will, just like Eve eating the apple. Cain got what he wanted, in a monkey’s paw way: he got his bride first but she's crazy and one of the worst things to happen to him. And he deserves it. Killing your sibling means you do get to face consequences and have a not fun time.
    Biblically, Luluwa and Calmana are sometimes listed as Adam’s kids but here, they would have been created separately (no Alabama here). The reason there was a contest was because the Elders wanted to avoid a Lilith situation and they wanted to really take their time to make sure each bride came out perfect. And that meant making a bride one at a time.
    Oh, and if you notice, I started adding the word “part” in the title. Why? So you know: 1. Where in the timeline this is happening 2. To give new viewers the impression that there's more content for them on my channel :) With each upload, the titles will change part names depending on when the vid takes place.
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    p.s. Some ancient versions of the story have Cain kill Abel because he was jealous of who he was going to marry. Also, God has a sense of humor…because he made Lute a reincarnation of Luluwa. If this confuses you, read the pinned comment.

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  • @saffiro
    @saffiro  Місяць тому +90

    (If you're new, watch the other videos on my channel for context on this AU)
    +Remember the More Than Anything Reprise animatic, where I revealed that in this AU, Lute and Abel were in love? Read the description on that vid. I came up with a deeper reason for this: Luluwa was never created properly, she and Calmana were shelved after the murder. God, behind everyone's back, repurposed their souls with some alterations. Fast forward 10,000 years later, Lute and her sister are Luluwa and Calmana reincarnated. Lute getting murdered by her sister is now a genderbent parallel to Cain and Abel. And her successfully exterminating her sinner sister and the mental breakdown that followed is what would happen if Abel got his revenge on Cain.
    +Luluwa being Lute is literally inspired by the first letters of their name being similar. But it makes sense why Abel was so drawn to her: in the end, he did end up meeting his intended, even though it wasn't how he expected.
    +I wanted Lute to have a deeper lore and making her a reincarnated biblical character sounds neat. Also explains the type of bond she shares with Adam, given that biblical Luluwa is his daughter
    +No one except God knows that Lute is a reincarnated Luluwa. The Elders didn't notice because during the bride project, their priority was personality, not looks. Avoiding Lilith 2.0 was the focus, they sure as hell don't remember what their looks were meant to be. But if Lute ever found out about this, cue existential identity crisis. What's funny is that if you were to put both of them in a room, they look identical.
    +God did this because it's all part of the Plan (™). 10,000 years later, it was about time to humble Abel’s hubris and so screw you, you got what you wanted but she left you with a broken heart and is conspiring against you.
    +Again, seeing Abel’s other eye is symbolic. What started as me being lazy ended up being a narrative choice: his other eye represents his innocence. But nowadays, we only see the X eye because the reminder of his murder is what fuels his rage to keep doing what he is doing. And speaking of lazy, lmao I didn't want to draw hands in this one, so he's wearing an oversized outfit because….yeah.
    +”...why is he SKINNY?!”. I try to choose my words carefully in my descriptions. When I called him lanky that one time, this is what I meant. He hit the gym regularly after becoming an angelic warrior. In life though, he was a sticc.
    +”Wasn't this animatic meant to be something else?” Yeah…art block. I hate leaving you guys with long hiatuses so have this in the meantime. Also, yes, toonsquid is still a learning curve. But at least it looks different than past animatics.
    And nope, I don't think my eye won't twitch whenever I watch that one scene where Sera calls Adam the first human soul in Heaven.

    • @stefaniarusso
      @stefaniarusso Місяць тому +4

      Looks good 😊

    • @JohnBluemon
      @JohnBluemon Місяць тому +8

      Thank you for not leaving us dry ^^.
      Honestly, I am happy to see Abel while he is vulnerable. I enjoy the contrast from then to now. As it is easy for an audience to say "get over it, your brother didn't mean to do it", it's a wholesale different thing when people are able to witness their trauma.
      Just cut out the Biblical names. Think of it like this: how would YOU ever feel is tge older brother that you looked up to murdered you in cold blood?

    • @JohnBluemon
      @JohnBluemon Місяць тому +5

      I like to think that later on Abel and Cain can join with their father against Lucifer. Although for it to make sense, we need strong Angels. Lucifer and the other Sins are no push overs.

  • @misteroscuridad9719
    @misteroscuridad9719 Місяць тому +64

    I like how these young Abel and Emily look like true inhabitants of heaven you find with their current versions but it's also a bit sad to compare them and see how they became corrupted until they were consumed by darkness. They fought with monsters for so long that they became monsters.

  • @felipemelniski4371
    @felipemelniski4371 Місяць тому +83

    Interesting to see how Abel's reaction just after Cain killed him

    • @brunomerabarboza6933
      @brunomerabarboza6933 27 днів тому +1

      But Adam is the first soul in heaven, did Abel go to hell?

    • @Fallenharmony13
      @Fallenharmony13 27 днів тому +3

      ​@brunomerabarboza6933 technically, if you think about it if they have Cain and Abel in the actual show one day how would they explain Adam being the first soul in heaven when Cain killed Abel first.

  • @JohnBluemon
    @JohnBluemon Місяць тому +36

    I adore how you can make Abel and Cain understandable but not say that it is black and white.

  • @ABBYXD597
    @ABBYXD597 Місяць тому +37

    It would be interesting to see Lute at some point trying to convince Abel to not kill Cain since it would only leave him with a big void once he gets what he wanted, I wonder if Lute and Abel would ever get a chance to go back together, and I would also like to see Abel's reaction in case he realizes that Lute is the wife Abel never could get but reincarnated.
    Abel has certainly real reasons to hate his brother, Cain took everything from him, I can't imagine his pain once he realized that his hopes and dreams were gone in the blink of an eye... that was a huge emotional shock, and ofc we can't justify a genocide but, if I was in his place, I would probably also want revenge on the person that took everything from me.
    But as a wise said:
    "Revenge is never good, it kills the soul and poisons it"
    Gosh, you really make a good job at making us empathize with all the characters, and I love how this AU is mostly biblically accurate! This is what I mean when the AUs are even better than the originale series.

  • @eltigre221
    @eltigre221 Місяць тому +15

    This was beautiful and painful, showing how hard it was for Abel in the beginning. Yet the lore dump is even better~ I still feel more for Cain, even if he made that choice and has suffered for it... I feel for him because temptations are hard to resist and thus what happened and then for Abel... well his story is still unfolding, until another amazing animatic have fun ^^

    • @hunterg.1300
      @hunterg.1300 21 день тому

      Yeah, even after what was written in the description, I'm still rooting for Cain. I appreciate a good redemption story for the underdog.

  • @daki-i6x
    @daki-i6x Місяць тому +6

    It saddens me to know that Cain's destined partner is exterminated, that they never met and never will, unlike Abel and Lute/Luluwa who despite not being able to have their own children, will have each other.

  • @shadowldrago
    @shadowldrago Місяць тому +48

    Cain and Abel both deserved better. But, because these versions of Lucifer and Lilith decided to embrace being the monsters they were seen as, they suffered tremendously because of it.

    • @CarlosBisogninperes
      @CarlosBisogninperes Місяць тому +18

      and it would be interesting for Cain to have the role of destroying the perfect image that Charlie has of her parents, showing their rotten side, thus making him the first antagonist to win in the end.

  • @allyssahanner8202
    @allyssahanner8202 Місяць тому +7

    Poor Abel. *Hugs him in comfort*

  • @JohnBluemon
    @JohnBluemon Місяць тому +13

    Reading "no Alabama here" made me laugh so hard, I began to tear up, causing me to rub my eyes, litter did I firget I had touched jalapeños earlier. Causing me great pain.
    I am okay now though.

  • @feh1121
    @feh1121 Місяць тому +13

    Poor Abel

  • @JohnDoe-df7bl
    @JohnDoe-df7bl Місяць тому +25

    If Able and Cain ever have a battle might I recommend the song "Play with fire" that Lydia the bard just released? When I heard it I immediately thought how perfect it would be for this series.

  • @eduardomacias9994
    @eduardomacias9994 2 дні тому +1

    Knowing the story of him. It's sad that his own brother killed him

  • @piercepayumo4212
    @piercepayumo4212 Місяць тому +14

    After reading the description , it’s understandable why Abel turned out the way he did and soon grew worse when sin ran rampant across the Earth. Hey Saffiro, I hope you don’t mind if I add this to my Hazbin Hotel story on Wattpad.

  • @dante_0962
    @dante_0962 День тому

    Man Abel has such a beautiful feminine (singing) voice.

  • @rosemaidenvixen
    @rosemaidenvixen Місяць тому +26

    Abel is still very much in the wrong, because no matter which way you cut it genocide is not ok, but you do an amazing job of humanizing him (Cain to but in other animatics) showing how and why Abel became who he is. He didn't wake up one morning and decide to be a dick, he was a legitimate victim and eventually his coping turned toxic. Humanizing villains is so important not to condone their actions, but to show that given the right circumstances, anyone can become a villain.

  • @hectorjoaquinhernandezrami2054
    @hectorjoaquinhernandezrami2054 27 днів тому +2

    Me gusto mucho el video y la información que muestran

  • @miaacosta8522
    @miaacosta8522 Місяць тому +4

    If Lute's sister was still alive,would she have helped with the hotel or did she not repent of her sin?

    • @saffiro
      @saffiro  Місяць тому +9

      Calmana's reincarnation (She's nameless for now idk) was a violent loser drug addict that was outshinned by Lute. If she was created 10,000 years prior, she would be well adjusted and stoic. But God altered her soul to be an unrepentant bad person to make things go according to plan, she didn't feel remorse before getting exterminated.

  • @RP16444
    @RP16444 Місяць тому +4

    Pretty💙
    Love how younger Abel, Sera, and Emily look or is that just an accident.

    • @saffiro
      @saffiro  Місяць тому +5

      Idk why I draw Sera like that but it's a mix of my style/my art improvement/new software. Yeah, they technically are younger here but appearance wise, the only difference is that Abel is skinny. That's it, they look about the same in the present because they don't physically age

  • @TaliZenAvi
    @TaliZenAvi Місяць тому +1

    Khm. Great as always. And now I ship Emily and Abel even more.

  • @castbracelet.2409
    @castbracelet.2409 Місяць тому +3

    I really like the colors in the thumbnail. All the blues helped me figure out it was gonna be a lil sad video even before watching it. Also how did Abel react to Seth being born to, if I remember correctly, take his place?

  • @r-171
    @r-171 Місяць тому

    Damn.

  • @thecriminadevilia
    @thecriminadevilia Місяць тому

    ❤❤❤

  • @user-iu5bt8qw6c
    @user-iu5bt8qw6c Місяць тому

    When will the sins of the father end I'm just wondering ?

  • @marisagarzon8341
    @marisagarzon8341 Місяць тому

    We...que hermoso y triste.. [Name of the song...please...it reminds me of...Corpse Bride...-^^- ..:")
    We..gran video y saludos [^^]♥︎♥︎♡♡❤❤❤🎉🎉😢😢😢🎉🎉