I LOVE how the music comes in on the cold open. I wasn't sure how the test footage would translate to an actual episode so I'm quite impressed all things considered. The title card shot is really well done If I were to critique - there are a couple of things that I personally would change. 1. Now with absolutely 0 context of the robot personally I'm not a massive fan of the footstep noise in the first bit (particularly the second shot) now I'm not sure if it's the noise in general or a timing issue but I found it more distracting than atmospheric 2. I think the shot at 1:47 in the intro lingers for a little too long - I think the first 2 shots after the music comes in are more interesting and readable - I'm not sure what the robot is shooting at and maybe that's the point but with the text over the robot too I'm not sure where I'm supposed to be looking 3. I also don't know what the shot at 2:30 is for? I wanna say it's to show how far he's going to fall but it's not on fire and the camera isn't aiming down really - it reads a little confused to me all that to say good job and I hope to see a full episode at some point!
Wow! Thank you so much for this honest critique. I really do take all of these into account, I do agree with you on all of those points. Even after developing the animation I determined that some things need to change if I were to make a full episode. I've been working towards some redesigns of the characters as I've been getting a lot of feedback that they aren't original enough. I've also been storyboarding some new ideas for the shots of this cold open that way they are more coherent. The problem with the audio was caused by the bad video editing software I had been using, since then I moved to Davinci Resolve so expect some better audio mixing in the future. Otherwise thank you so much for your help!
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Very cool can’t wait to voice act for the show
Are you a robot unlike dr. Didget
I love the music and the visuals!!! They work super well together!!!
Yoooo this new Ultrakill series lookin' good
I LOVE how the music comes in on the cold open. I wasn't sure how the test footage would translate to an actual episode so I'm quite impressed all things considered. The title card shot is really well done
If I were to critique - there are a couple of things that I personally would change.
1. Now with absolutely 0 context of the robot personally I'm not a massive fan of the footstep noise in the first bit (particularly the second shot) now I'm not sure if it's the noise in general or a timing issue but I found it more distracting than atmospheric
2. I think the shot at 1:47 in the intro lingers for a little too long - I think the first 2 shots after the music comes in are more interesting and readable - I'm not sure what the robot is shooting at and maybe that's the point but with the text over the robot too I'm not sure where I'm supposed to be looking
3. I also don't know what the shot at 2:30 is for? I wanna say it's to show how far he's going to fall but it's not on fire and the camera isn't aiming down really - it reads a little confused to me
all that to say good job and I hope to see a full episode at some point!
Wow! Thank you so much for this honest critique. I really do take all of these into account, I do agree with you on all of those points. Even after developing the animation I determined that some things need to change if I were to make a full episode. I've been working towards some redesigns of the characters as I've been getting a lot of feedback that they aren't original enough. I've also been storyboarding some new ideas for the shots of this cold open that way they are more coherent. The problem with the audio was caused by the bad video editing software I had been using, since then I moved to Davinci Resolve so expect some better audio mixing in the future. Otherwise thank you so much for your help!
Great work!
That's me!
Amazing!
This is a really great work!
Damn dats pretty cool also can u release that horror game from chem on Mac so I can play it lol
yo !! thats meee!
No it is not. Are you a robot.
Are you scared of me. Are you scared that I caught you.
@@toad9782 nah I am a robot
@@VivianPandaif you answer this question right then you are a robot since robots are smart. What is 1+1-1+1-1+1.
@@toad9782 no clue
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