So hello, "small man", You've finally finished this project after three months lol. I've given you some pointers on some of the mistakes I saw in the editing process but here's something else I noticed. But before that i'd like to mention that this is one good animation. You're clearly a good dev. You should be proud of this. I'd like to mention this first bc this comment is going to sound like a nitpick. But enough said , First, BIG THING, the mouth movements , It looks very off especially during the parts where William is supposed to be lyp-nsyncing. Mouths don't move like that bruh. (0:12 ). I have no idea how you would fix this tho since this is roblox and the faces are very limited. A. You could change his mouths in every word to match the song or B.Keep it as is. Second as I've said many times to you irl , 0:48 , 1:08. You can see spring bonnie's hand clipping through. Look man , we both know what the fnaf community is like if I don't say it some other nerd might see it. Especially at 1:08 , u can see his hand on the other side of the tv. Third , the axe swing at the end, it's kinda underwhelming , we see him getting flashback about earlier parts of the video and expecting him to do something. But he didn't he just swung his axe once and ended. Also while he's standing he looks like a freaking game character animation when the player's afk. If you want this ending , instead of one longshot. Try rapid cuts from different angles and far shot to see the axe swing. This will add a bit more tension. Lastly, MY BIGGEST COMPLAINT, Afton's death. It's not scary or disturbing. The things that are missing are the blood , the brutal twitching and the ghosts. This ending is more kid-friendly but this is fnaf. Be a big man and give something that the original game didn't give us gore. This just looks like afton died from a heart attack or smth. Add blood since this video is already not monetized cause of the song. Another thing that could be beneficial to add is the analog grainy effect. If you don't know how to , hey don't worry I do just ask me. Otherwise , amazing work in the other parts, Love it. - Biggest Of Man ,2024
No, no, no... YOU MADE THIS? THIS BEAUTIFUL MASTERPIECE ???? I AM ABSOLUTELY SHOCKED. THIS IS LITERALLY THE BEST ANIMATION I'VE SEEN IN MY LIFE! I can tell how much effort you put in this, its insane.. I am sorry, but I got no words... Just... W O W!
![IT’S BEEN SO LONG || [FNAF SONG] - flipaclip animation || 10 YEARS OF FREDDY 🎉](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/nObPe7BC8Jw/mqdefault.jpg)
![IT’S BEEN SO LONG || [FNAF SONG] - flipaclip animation || 10 YEARS OF FREDDY 🎉](/img/tr.png)
So hello, "small man", You've finally finished this project after three months lol. I've given you some pointers on some of the mistakes I saw in the editing process but here's something else I noticed. But before that i'd like to mention that this is one good animation. You're clearly a good dev. You should be proud of this. I'd like to mention this first bc this comment is going to sound like a nitpick. But enough said , First, BIG THING, the mouth movements , It looks very off especially during the parts where William is supposed to be lyp-nsyncing. Mouths don't move like that bruh. (0:12 ). I have no idea how you would fix this tho since this is roblox and the faces are very limited. A. You could change his mouths in every word to match the song or B.Keep it as is. Second as I've said many times to you irl , 0:48 , 1:08. You can see spring bonnie's hand clipping through. Look man , we both know what the fnaf community is like if I don't say it some other nerd might see it. Especially at 1:08 , u can see his hand on the other side of the tv. Third , the axe swing at the end, it's kinda underwhelming , we see him getting flashback about earlier parts of the video and expecting him to do something. But he didn't he just swung his axe once and ended. Also while he's standing he looks like a freaking game character animation when the player's afk. If you want this ending , instead of one longshot. Try rapid cuts from different angles and far shot to see the axe swing. This will add a bit more tension. Lastly, MY BIGGEST COMPLAINT, Afton's death. It's not scary or disturbing. The things that are missing are the blood , the brutal twitching and the ghosts. This ending is more kid-friendly but this is fnaf. Be a big man and give something that the original game didn't give us gore. This just looks like afton died from a heart attack or smth. Add blood since this video is already not monetized cause of the song. Another thing that could be beneficial to add is the analog grainy effect. If you don't know how to , hey don't worry I do just ask me. Otherwise , amazing work in the other parts, Love it.
- Biggest Of Man ,2024
Well, It's my first long animation that I did. Mistakes are expected.
No, no, no... YOU MADE THIS? THIS BEAUTIFUL MASTERPIECE ???? I AM ABSOLUTELY SHOCKED. THIS IS LITERALLY THE BEST ANIMATION I'VE SEEN IN MY LIFE! I can tell how much effort you put in this, its insane.. I am sorry, but I got no words... Just... W O W!
thanks bro!