Some other guy mentioned it earlier, but the reason why there's a sudden jump in plot at around 14:18 is because huge chunks of the blog have been deleted by tumblr itself on account of graphic content. Although, the artist did provide a huge zip file on the blog where you can see a full archive of every single post, so that would give you the full and complete blog if your curious
As someone who followed the og littlemissrarity blog. The archive has a large chunk that is missing (I’m at 14:19 rn typing this) and I’d guess a large chunk of it was deleted in the p0rn apocalypse or wasn’t properly archived. As for why she had the doll inside her. It’s heavily implied both in the blog and the og creepy pasta story that it’s due to Rarity’s want to be a mother, but being incapable (or unwilling) to actually have a child. opal having been the closest thing to a child she ever had driving her out of her mind after his death and sacrificing her own body to well- rebirth him- I can’t remember much about how it came to be. I remember there being a lot of story to it and I was admittedly a little too young to grasp a large chunk of it. Edit: My guess is that the doll coming out of her is a representation of her fear of actual mother hood (the mutilation of birth, what have you) and a fear of her killing the actual baby like she did opal?? Just a random guess?
It's just a teenage trauma and trying to work through what was done to them. I knew the person. They were clearly working through childhood trauma, which shows in some pieces of the art. Edit: That was terrible grammar.
@@Topdoggie7 do you have a post where they explain so? Although I feel LMR at least was less disrespectful than Molestia by a long shot. (I was 15-17 while reading). Although I always wanted to ask them where the inspo came from and what propelled them to make the blog
@@Topdoggie7 Sorry. I just got curious. Is hard to trust anything you see unless it comes from the source. Most of the time I imagined all the ones running the nsfw art blogs to be adults. Of course short sighted but is cause as a kid I never thought anyone my age could draw that detailed nsfw stuff. I get they don’t want to talk about it. It was simple curiousity
Yes!!! So far the only creepypasta versions of apple jack that are actually popular are apple eyes, the apple sleep experiment (which is just the russian sleep experiment) and if you can count it apple pills from the elements of insanity- all of them are pretty meh oof oof so a genuinely good apple jack creepypasta would be great
ok wow just referencing the first 3 minutes, as a 'non professional' you handled these problems better than literally every other 'professional' I have ever seen on youtube. You owned up to your mistake but didnt drag it out and then redirected to text-post content for those that want more information on what happened. You are literally amazing i loved you last MLP vid and fell in love w your personality then but I even further love your personality now. You are probably by far the coolest person I have ever witnessed (dont tell my bfs i said that hahaha - also bfs as in poly)
That means the world to me, thank you! I was super embarrassed, but I really wanted to make my follow-up video be informative and honest, so I’m glad that I was able to do that respectfully! 💚💜
Man, I just absolutely love your concept of the Lil Miss Rarity rewrite. And even connecting it still to Icing on the Cake. You making these videos is actually inspiring me with some video, redesign, and rewrite concepts. It's really cool hearing your ideas for these rewrites and hearing you also talk about these creepypastas. And happy late birthday Rainbott!!! And hope you're having a good day!!!💖✨
i know toyhouse has rules against au characters and i understand why but a ban for this seems so harsh? they usually just freeze accounts or at least take the offending pages down, this seems like such an overreaction on their end? the fact they have locked you out of your account completely and won't let you have access to your artwork meaning you've lost hundreds of dollars worth of art is so unbelievably cruel when they don't even respond this harshly to well known scammers. really making me not want to use to site anymore honestly :/ very unprofessional on their end.
I agree! It's an extremely disproportionate punishment for simply a child engaging in drama. Yet they don't even manage actual threats on their site in the same manner. I kind of want to call for a boycott of the site and find a competitor I can transfer all my stuff to.
@@mioko2974 i was rereading the rules to refresh myself and maybe i'm missing more context but for the most part everything complies with the guidelines they have written so? i don't get why such actions were taken let alone the *whole account being banned* when they state the punishment would be taking the profiles down, not the account. the site has so much problems and really needs better management. it sucks how this always seems to happen to smaller creators who just don't have the platform to get the correct attention drawn on it. i don't use the site much anyway but at least i have a good reason to move my stuff elsewhere
@@obbinss Reading the text post, it seems like they'd probably ban under a repeat offense (bc a friend told them to try reuploading the pages?), but it still doesn't seem fair tbh.
@@MidnightCapricorn2696 that's the part i'm confused on but even then it still seems like it's really unfair? seems like a very harsh punishment for such a minor, frankly really confusing rule, when people who do much worse are given a slap on the wrist. like for reference below is the rule which i think is the one that's been violated if anyone else is scrolling and wants context: "5.1. Canon Characters We do not host canon character re-uploads. This includes: Direct re-uploads of characters that exist in published media Direct AU versions, re-designs or kinsonas of these characters, who share the same name, personality, and identity Regarding Canon-Inspired Characters We allow canon-inspired characters specifically where it's clear they're an original character who has been inspired by the canon content, rather than AU fanart and fanfic of a canon character. As long as your character has their own name, and a profile/design that reflects they're intended to be individual from the canon character and are not literally the canon character, they should be fine to upload. Adding some background to the character's profile to explain who they are will help a lot to ensure they don't get mixed up. Don't advertise these as for sale or trade on-site. We do not moderate visual similarities, but we reserve the right to take down profiles we believe have been made in bad faith. Please do not upload fanart of a canon character with a few letters of their name changed and a copy pasted profile."
When I was 14, I thought little Miss Rarity was her being inspired by agony in her work, putting herself and others through hell to bring out the beauty in pain. To say I was disappointed and disgusted was an understatement.
I love the detail that her eye is actually explained in your version. Eye during black because of a blast of magic? That's something I never thought of before.
@@kittenpaws8896 The black eye (first appearing on Opal actually) come for Rarity from Opal scratching her and infecting her with what is basically a demon's influence, the rest of the characters get it from the demon's dad taking over equestria for a bit.
There's normally a full archive you can download somewhere with no censors. You can see "(Backlog of the whole blog available for download here!)" on the sidebar As someone who read it, if I remember well (i'll avoid being too graphic but still): Basically, Rarity in this story is a woman who can't have a child but really wishes to . The big bad of this story got through Opal to reach Rarity, once she's scratched by Opal rarity is actually affected by the big bad, wish basically makes her go crazy. The big bad needs a woman desperate enough to have a child she would give birth to him, Rarity is that woman. Through her dream the big bad guy shows to Rarity how to give birth to him, then makes her wake up, Rarity wants to have a child and proceeds to give birth to the big bad. During this time, Twillight is aware of what's going on and summons Malice, the dad of the big bad, who proceeds to kill the big bad. Malice, for Twillight has summoned him, basically removes her teeth (that's why her mouth is sewn later on).Malice now inhabits Twillight's subconscious. Black eyes in this are cause by Malice's beard hair infecting people and making them go crazy, there's also some prophesized thing about sinners, Rarity being the master of the sinners 'cause she gave birth earlier, the two aren't necessarily connected. The master sinner has the power to decide the fate of the sinners. Also each sin makes people act weird (Rainbow Dash cannot refuse any orders) At some point we discover the whole apple Family is in fact fighting against Malice since generations and is very much ready for him : thing is they also are the sin of sloth, which makes them act reckless. Apple jack refuses that sin and gets herself infected with some kind of purification hair which makes her want to make the world pure basically. Through some dialogue with Malice we discover that those pure guys aren't necessarily good guys either, because once they've created their little utopias they basically let themselves and the world die. We also discover that Malice is in love with the person in charge of purity but that they are not allowed to be on the same planet at the same time, but right now Malice isn't on the planet he is in Twillight's head. I don't remember much of the rest, but also Applebloom is dead, but her family keeps her body alive with a bit of her soul .... sadly the bad part which makes her torture her bro at some point. But yeah, basically the whole story is a combat of good versus evil but where the good is also bad.
19:31 I remember that rarity did surgery on herself to implant the pinkamina doll so she could give birth to her & that was from a dub I watched on UA-cam, although I could be misremembering an unrelated torture scene as a reverse c section.
your muffins deep dive actually inspired me to start writing my own rarity grimdark fic!! the idea is quite rough currently, but ill explain for anyone whos curious. basic concept is rarity has a dress line due, the dresses needing to be soft and plush. rarity no matter how hard she tries, cannot find a material that satisfies how she wants these dresses to look and feel. she goes out to clear her mind, and decides to meet up with pinkie pie. while talking they accidentally touch hooves, and rarity realizes how soft pinkies fur is after going home she thinks about murdering pinkie, and no matter how hard she tries to brush it off the thought will not go away. eventually she snaps and decides to kidnap pinkie, and manages to remove some of her fur. pinkie fights back, giving rarity a massive scar on her right eye. to avoid death, pinkie then forces herself to work with rarity, killing other ponies for raritys dresses. pinkie does not enjoy this at the start, but slowly gets desensitized to it, and later on gets manipulated and groomed into "enjoying it" (not in a weird way) its a rough idea, but i hope other people will enjoy this. i have rarity and pinkie pie designs planned out, and hope to design more later on if anyone read this all thanks for putting up with my silly story explanation, i really enjoyed making this idea up so far. if anyone has suggestions i would really appreciate it !!
@@ZaneEnthusiast i dont have a exact name yet, but a name idea i currently have is "unknown materials". im still not 100% sure on it, so it might change
Holy shit, your remake is amazing. I did not expect that twist. I was kinda weirded out by "Rarity's" color pallet, but I thought it was just a design choice. Things just got better from that moment forward. I hope you do more remakes.
Some stuff has been deleted most likely,either wasn't archived properly or simply perished during the tumblr porn purge (although if that's the case we can see pretty clearly that mess was very pick and choose what is and what isn't banned cause wow). Loved the rewrite! You even connected it to Icing on the Cake really nicely! And I find it a more interesting concept than whatever Lil' Miss Rarity eventually became. I do hope you do one of Fluttershy,or maybe you could do one with Applejack since she never had that many (what on earth was Apple Eyes,never read it,only seen fanart)
The build up of Rarity falling to peer pressure from her blog, being enticed by views and rummaging through her drawer to be played along by a midi cover of Blood was the funniest shit to me in the world! I had to pause to comment, so I wouldn't be distracted, because this is a great story so far :)
Why is nobody talking about the sa, incest and repeated abuse of sweetie belle made out as okay " because this child likes adults abusing her so it's okay!" Like why is nobody vastly unsettled by that????
I'm gonna be honest with little miss rarity. It always felt weird how they involved. Kinda Gardner. Sister, like and the story. It's stated that she also likes it. And does it with her friends? It felt like that's a step too far.
I think I'll update my thing I do sort of like this but I think this was used as an outlet for the Creator I've read a lot of stories over the years so I can save for a fact I generally believe that something some creators make wake Celestia that was horny every single day
@@dcscruz2970 it was a perversion thing people thought it was funny to make a character that was so horny that she would rape it any and everything like with little Miss Rarity it's a kink
Holy shit! This rewrite is so fucking good! I have very mixed feelings about Lil Miss Rarity, but I really like what you did here and wish we had a narration for your version, but I understand it's all in good fun! The twist is so good! Edit:Oh my god, I fucking love your addition with the Muffins rewrite! It makes this so good.
@@Red--Moon I knew the creator. They got some terrible stuff done to them as a minor and started this to work through it. You can see the cries for help every step of the way.
Man after the twist of your version going back and listening to the story again you can really notice all the red flags hidden through it! You make some really well made creepypastas! I cant wait to see more of your creepypastas and how they all connect with one another!
Yeah I think entirely removing the masochism and gory aesthetic utterly made it a little too different. The issue with the story wasn't the body horror or the psychosexual aspect, in fact, leaning harder into a gory psychosexual nightmare plot would have made the story stronger I think, the original was just really muddled and the plotlines seemed very indecisive and blatantly half-baked, often getting abandoned entirely as swiftly as they were introduced. Something more akin to hellraiser visually and thematically would have been a lot closer to the original story but still much cleaner and higher quality, though I can understand why someone who is not really into that sort of stuff wouldn't want to touch it with a ten foot pole, and youtube being the platform obviously imposes a lot of limits on how graphic it could get anyway.
i was blown away by the twist to your version of the story, it recontextualizes everything that came before it in such a cool way!! i won’t spoil it for people who’re reading the comments before getting to the end of the video, but going back over it is so fascinating to see how it all ties together!!
Some of the posts are definitely missing because of the porn ban tumblr went through, but some of the most confusing stuff and the change in text color is because the blog crossed over with other blogs. Following them when they were coming out was hard enough. 😅
On the second half of the story: When you first brought up that the Rarity we've been seeing wasn't actually Rarity and that Pinkie was later brought up, I got upset at the unusual twist and feared the worst...but I like how it played out! Excellent work.
I remember reading little miss rarity (it was a fanfic version of it) at thanksgiving at my aunts house, and my mom asked me what I was reading and I was like “my little pony! :D” and she was like “awee! Ok have fun!” And 13 year old me was like BRO THIS SHIT WACK
OMG THAT TWIST ON THE REWRITE THREW ME WAY OFF, yet again a really good deep dive! Still sucks about toyhouse, I do hope youll be able to get all your sparkledogs back though, I can't imagine how much work was put into it, but yeah, loving these mlp creepypasta dives alot and this one really sold it for me again!
That’s actually a common joke in the fandom! Lots of ponies wear clothes and accessories for special occasions, but the super rich horses also wear clothes regularly. It’s kinda silly, but I love it :>
@@ladymushroom9485it is most commonly used in social events and by the high-society, wearing clothes, especially hats seems to be an indication of wealth in places such as Canterlot, Rarity of course is one of the characters with the most outfits on the show which makes sense given she’s a fashionista, she likes to dress up
I honestly always hated that little miss rarity was just freaking porn. I remember finding it on Tumblr at 15 years old and I wish I never saw it. Thank you for fixing it and I feel like the author didn't know what they were doing at the confusing parts that you were talking about. Will you post more about your mlp rewrites on your blogs like Instagram and Tumblr?
@@Topdoggie7 that doesn't mean they have to post porn of a childrens show, and they certainly didn't have to include sweetie bell in this. trauma recovery has nothing to do with whether or not an action is moral, it can explain things but not justify, that just isn't how that works. And teenagers are more than capable of understanding right from wrong, they can move on and be a better person later but that doesn't mean that actions were ever okay. I don't care that much about little miss rarity, but I've always hated the excuse that "they were young!" or "they had trauma!"
@@Beerfear I'm pointing out a child drawing porn of themselves or a character the SAME age as them isn't the same as an adult doing it. They were a minor drawing porn of characters their age and up.
I'd honestly kill to see you do a video covering the entire Rainbow Factory series. There are other stories in the series other than the original (Pegasus Device, Pegasus Device: Reckoning, A Weather Worker's Song and Rainbow's Factory) that I never see get covered. It's just such a fun, bloody, analytical series that I think you'd do justice covering and potentially rewriting
Howdy! LMR fan, long time over, a LOT of the context and posts were deleted by Tumblr's Auto Censors, so the Archive doesn't have them any more. However, the Blog has a MEGA Link that contains both Series 1 and 2, well over 400 posts both, give or take a hundred or so. Happy Birthday, and shame about the Ban.
I’m so sorry you got banned from Toy House and lost a lot of your money. But I’m glad you talked about Muffins and decided to rewrite it as well as Little Ms. Rarity. Your rewrites are very interesting and the character designs are amazing.
okay I have to admit I was nervous coming into this video cause of what I've heard about this story and I was also worried that the video might get demontised cause 'you know' but I do l really like your rewrite, the whole twist with Vouge was pretty neat and I glad you removed all the traces of 'you know' out of the story and I like how you tied in an episode of the show into the story with the inclusion of Mina. Good job like with The Muffins vid and I can't wait to see more off ya 👍
as someone who is still on Tumblr and blocks idiots at the first sign of them showing their ugly heads I gotta say It's not as bad nowadays fsr? don't get me wrong there are still weird people around but it certainly feels like it's gotten better if you ever feel like it I think lots of peeps would like to see you there again The ask feature on there and the possibility to make an art sideblog sound like a good thing for you
the og tumblr actually has many posts missing, i believe there is a downloadable archive on the blog that has everything but honestly idk how worth it it is
I read the original comic for the first time a few months back. You could see the comic get better and better, and then it just stops. It started and ended as something different, and that's for the better.
lil miss rarity was one of my fav mlp creepypastas growing up and this rewrite made me realize how much i rlly love her!! i adore this and def will be making fanart when i have time to!
Yeah, even the newer pages do it, too.. It's pretty fucking gross since I'm pretty sure that the author is an adult now yet it some of the most recent posts on the blog have gross shit of Sweetiebell too.
idk enough about the author to make assumptions about their intentions, but it still isn't a very good look for them, no matter what they were trying to do.
YOU GOT BANNED OFF TOYHOUSE?? That's WILD. For one, the team is so small so a lot gets ignored/slow to response. Secondly, that's just wild in general. I'm really sad. I was really excited to follow your toyhouse as I use it a lot. I'll just have to keep an eye on the weebly! I only found you today, but I LOVE your content!!
0:07 rocket to insanity fall of the apple family and dawn of the dying pegasus and lil miss rarity are the most violent detailed creepypasta especially since fan sequels and a comic are the most violent still some how
I really love the rewrite of Lil Miss Rarity! There were many twists and turns and elements of a story that I really love!! I would love to do fanart for that sometime!
literally screaming at the like. DETAILS??? IDK MAN I RLLY LIKED THIS. Silly little ramble but I was just reminded of, like, back in 2019 I was getting back into mlp creepypastas because I had liked them when I was younger. Little miss rarity's design always intrigued me, but the whole s3x stuff rlly bothered me and put me off of it. Plus I liked to tell my mom (she was oddly cool with it and finds these things interesting) about the different creepypastas, and I was never comfortable with telling her about this one. I love the way you made this into an actual story. The thing with creepypastas from the 2010s was that, like you said in the muffins deep dive (loved that one too), was that, yeah, shock value and gore was the main plot, throwing the story of it to the side. The one that you made is utterly wonderful, and feels like something I would actually read in a book (if you took out the point that it was mlp). Also, the fact that you took out the whole thing with Opal passing away so horribly AND the reason this rarity was scratched was because she was STOLEN I JUST- ough this is SO well done, man.
My main issue with the blog nowadays is that the artist is still drawing pedophilia and incest between Rarity and Sweetie Belle. There is absolutely nothing wrong with portraying these things in your stories!!! But it feels so blatantly sexualized like the artist is glorifying it. I don't know. They art just feels very fetishy. I'm really glad you're rewriting it, but I feel like we're looking over some major issues here. I know the context that Rarity wants to be a mother and how that affects her relationship with her sister. I know that Rarity has a hard time drawing a line between love and lust. I know Rarity has been corrupted and her impulses have become more fucked up. And the sexual abuse makes sense. But the creator did not have to make the child enjoy it. And if the creators actually improved. They wouldn't still be drawing stuff like that. They wouldn't draw a very sexually explicit piece of art that depicts rarity crushing her sister with her bare ass. I'm glad that they specified that it's fiction, but the creator clearly glorifies these things. Don't get me wrong. The original, It's a compelling story. It's very emotional and very dark. But I just can't overlook the pedophilia and incest being glorified.
This is the first time I’m actually diving into the story of a little miss rarity, because I never actually thought to look into the origins of it till now.
OK I decided to go through the archive thing to get a Rox’s parents of the ask blog, and I think the whole reason the cat is possessing the pinkamina doll is because of the fact she was used to make a doll and her heart is still beating in the doll.. that’s at least my understanding
I’d like to deep dive on something sweet to bite I’m utterly obsessed with the Candy Mare as concept something so other worldly terrifying and tragic about a candy monster with only goal being to consume and infect speaks to me on so many levels and I’m genuinely curious on you view such a story
Maybe (if you want) you can talk about "The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle" only because I've tried to listen to the reading but some of them have bad mic quality and I'm too lazy to read the whole story. I was hoping you could explain it or something along the lines of that cause you've been doing good with the pony videos so far.
Lil Miss Rarity has got a story and you can read it on the wiki. It is different from the main blog, but it has kept the concept of Rarity, and it is good, as it is not as strange as the blog.
Funfact there was an mlp book where a character called charity who started to pretend to be rarity so it's kinda just pure choice that you made a character who's whole thing is to mimic another character
I remember watching the video for Little Miss Rarity but because i was too young to understand i had no idea what was really going on. I also never got into the comic as i wasn't aware of fanfiction nor tumbkr at the time. The crazy thing tho is that im pretty sure this was the first time i was introduced to the word "masochist"
1. i wouldn't be super duper upset abt tumblr callouts on stuff you did as a kid, i have plenty myself for edgy stories/art and such! 2. i personally have been inspired to make my own pony oc because of both your content and LMR!
A Fluttershy Creepypasta would be so cool! She would be predestined for it, it's always the quiet ones from whom one would least expect it. 😈 Also, Happy late Birthday Rain!
feels weird to say that lil miss rarity was probably my favorite mlp creepypasta, and i didnt even see it as a creepypasta, just a different storyline that i really enjoyed for whatever reason i guess. i remember watching it on youtube specifically, though i did follow the blog too
I remember stumbling across little miss rarity as a kid, got kind of hooked on it since it was the closest thing to p*rn I had ever seen so kid brain was hooked on the new feeling. didn't even see why it was so wrong for years, it also caused me to find the pinkemena blog...
half a year late to the party with the SINGULAR TIDBIT of lil miss rarity knowledge ive retained. unless it was retconned, the reason opal possesses the doll is because actual pieces of her were utilized in the making of the doll. i believe it was her skin and her heart primarily, but it could be more, could be just one of those. but opals body was utilized in the making of the pinkamena doll, which is why its there in the first place!
Y'all should've cacthed the creative venting vids/podcasts of the og creator. It is very clear the creator had a fast moving hard life they had been struggling with and only had this silly little thing they come up with on the spot while joking for themselves some years ago for awhile to creatively express what they are capable of expressing, about what they had seen on tumblr or fandom spaces, like other blogs or other creepypasta style works like Pinkamena. From what I have seen or heard they werent capable of doing work that much to support themselves outside of drawing art, so they had to pump out many mlp coms at some point too, since then they had felt like their art had became stagnated at the time even tho they also thought drawing the same things for sometime also felt like them studying what they are drawing too. I remember listening to their sock puppet podcasts; venting about education, work, money, art, life struggles etc. I honestly thank them for sharing their story at the time. It is comforting to see and share art & life struggles; comparing and learning of creators you have seen their works of but didn't know much else about them outside of their art. It goes to show you behind the scenes somethings are different at the very least. Thank you for, while being reluctent to look at it, covering the topic with an understanding and level headedness non the less. Keep it up.
I havent read the blog but i have seen two videos from the creator of Lil miss rarity themselves which are a full analysis of the story and an official animation (??) of the entire blog in like 3 minutes and based on that I think the story ends when Rarity has those button eyes then she dies and Twilight tries to bring her back or wonder wft happend to her well that's my personal theory
I love this deep dive Little Miss Rarity its one of my favorite MLP creepypastas but I didnt read it till I was a teen dont know how old I was however I still enjoyed it regardless and there is a song based on the creepypasta and its really good also happy belated 21st birthday Rainbott
I was never huge into MLP, the grimdark stories got me pretty early. But I adore your writing! I was just returning to the Ice on the Cake video to write a comment about how I'd like to see more and this one dropped! It's started reigniting my adoration for writing and art, especially related to MLP :) Also, learning about tracing is... such an artist thing. Apologizing and making your own artwork is really all you can do afterwards :(
Your Fluttershy TBH is literally one of the best pieces of artwork ever created. It will be featured in a third MLP video I have coming later this year as well! I'm gonna add a fun little note to the credits just for your meme because it is so precious to me. /gen /pos :D
I genuinely think Toyhouse should give you your account back. A ban for a simple AU version of a pre-existing character is unneccessarily harsh, and just way over the top. I know you mentioned you were a chronically online bitch about it and handled it very poorly, but toyhouse is run by so-called professionals who shouldn't be acting out in that same manner. You lost so much art that they're now withholding from you, and it feels like you were straight-up robbed by website moderators over one simple drama. I feel like calling for a boycott of toyhouse, or looking for some kind of competitor site. What happened to you is horrible, and a disproportionate punishment for what you did. I'm so sorry you had to go through that.
It was probably because I tried to reupload the pages with the fan art / au content because I hadn’t known any better at the time. While I do agree with many of your points, I’ve accepted that there’s nothing I can do; the admin blocked me, didn’t reply to any of my emails (even when I tried begging / offered to pay TH money to get my art back), and they didn’t reply to my friends’ emails when they copy/pasted my same message. Some fans submitted support tickets, but the moderator shot them down and refused to reply to my messages or give any leeway to the ban. Fans even asked if I could have 24 hours to download my art before my account was permanently banned / closed, which is also what I asked for, but we were still denied. My friend even used their email to create a ToyHouse account to send a support ticket explaining our situation, since they’d been the one to mislead me about reuploading my pages, but because their email was one we sent one of my copied/pasted messages with, the admin just banned their brand new account because they thought it was me lmao 💀 I tried very hard, but I think it’s all lost media at this point. Even if the files still exist on ToyHouse, only the one admin can access it, and they have openly refused to give me the art multiple times. I don’t think we can do anything, and it was 100% my fault for not doing more of my own research, but I do appreciate the offer of support. Thank you. /gen ❤️
I've always loved these creepypastas but this one was always very iffy to me along with some others. I was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed your rewrite (and I'm very interested in listening to more of the story!
Your rewrite of the "Muffins Saga" has inspired me to make a follow-up called Fritters, which focuses on Sugar Belle having to undertake a massive special order whilst slowly losing her mind over the countless hours she's having to roll out dough, form mixtures and cook the apple fritters. It's more of a psychological thriller than a slasher fic and is non-canon to the actual show (therefore, SugarMac never happens as this is an au take). I also wanted to make SugarPie canon in the Bakers' Universe (Cupcakes, Muffins and Fritters) since I think Pinkie x Sugar is a cute pairing. But yeah, Sugar Belle keeps trying to find a "special ingredient" to improve her fritters and opts to use blood from the bakers' drip tanks, which are passed off as being strawberry jam.
Bro I genuinely really like your rewrites of these older classic MLP creepypastas/grimdarks I’d love to hear what other ideas you have for other classics :0
I like the idea of their cutie marks being linked in some way, in fact when the episode they get them in aired and people were displeased I was surprised seemingly no one had ever thought they would get related cutie marks as it was something I had imagined since like season 2-3 I really do like the idea, it’s a great concept but I do have a problem with the execution, their actual cutie marks are I’d say correct but could be more unique while maintaining similarities. Storywise, I’d like to hear a rewriting of them getting their cutie marks
*spoilers* Is this a year late yes, but I found more to the story and read it and I plan to give a small explanation to some of the points where Rainbott was confused just a heads up 12:15 Sweetie Belle somehow let it slip to guards what Rarity was doing so she was sent to prison 13:04 I think the doll was possessed by a demon and wants to be birthed? I'm not 100 percent tho 13:13 The doll was possessed by Opal because Rarity used Opal’s heart in the doll, plus cats have 9 lives and she was just brought back into the doll + When she gets back from Zecora’s, she goes to sleep and wakes up with buttons. They don't get explained or used later, I think the author just added it for fun 16:53 So after Applejack cut her Rarity went out and got Rainbow and Pinkie after they got tied up, Rarity gave birth to the doll/demon, the demon made weird vine things and they turned them evil all the sudden 17:48 After Rarity birthed the demon new Twilight found a book with a blood ritual and summoned goat dude to help defeat the demon in the boutique 19:41 That’s the demon Rarity birthed that also possessed the pinkie doll with opal 20:26 The eyes are from the goat dude they are his sinners/followers or something like that 21:43 Applejack was a sinner, she gets called the sin or sloth at one point in think, i think she may have bled the evil out of her eye like Rainbow, rainbow is the sin of lust for some reason and I do not know what Pinkie was If that clears anything up, yay If you’re still confused, so was I. Every three posts I thought I knew what was going on and then the next post I was confused again 🙃
I tried reading Little Miss Rarity before but could never get through it all. Thanks so much for doing us this favor, hahah. It'd be awesome if you could look into other ask blogs, the community is still kicking, even if its a lot smaller c:
I'd really love a coverage of the silent ponyville series eventually or also a coverage of the something sweet to bite series. Would love to see more of these videos
Thank y’all for wishing me a happy birthday! This was absolutely crazy from start to finish.💚💜
July 18 is my birthday and I just turn 17!🎉😂
Happy birthday!
Wait it’s your birthday?? :000 HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! 💚💜
HAPPY BURTHDAY🥳🥳🥳
happy birthday! did you ever get your TH account back or not?
Some other guy mentioned it earlier, but the reason why there's a sudden jump in plot at around 14:18 is because huge chunks of the blog have been deleted by tumblr itself on account of graphic content. Although, the artist did provide a huge zip file on the blog where you can see a full archive of every single post, so that would give you the full and complete blog if your curious
i did a reread of it since its been a Long time since i last read Lil Miss Rarity, but if you could point to where the zip is id Love It
@@sparrow_moon1110 download link is on the front page
Here here
Ah, you see, the reason that Rarity's eye turns a different color is because Rarity is secretly Sans Undertale
CORRECT
LMAO
No… Sans is Ness…😂❤
*first few notes of megalovania*
*plays megolvainia with a flute porely*
As someone who followed the og littlemissrarity blog. The archive has a large chunk that is missing (I’m at 14:19 rn typing this) and I’d guess a large chunk of it was deleted in the p0rn apocalypse or wasn’t properly archived. As for why she had the doll inside her.
It’s heavily implied both in the blog and the og creepy pasta story that it’s due to Rarity’s want to be a mother, but being incapable (or unwilling) to actually have a child. opal having been the closest thing to a child she ever had driving her out of her mind after his death and sacrificing her own body to well- rebirth him- I can’t remember much about how it came to be. I remember there being a lot of story to it and I was admittedly a little too young to grasp a large chunk of it.
Edit: My guess is that the doll coming out of her is a representation of her fear of actual mother hood (the mutilation of birth, what have you) and a fear of her killing the actual baby like she did opal?? Just a random guess?
It's just a teenage trauma and trying to work through what was done to them. I knew the person. They were clearly working through childhood trauma, which shows in some pieces of the art.
Edit: That was terrible grammar.
I know for a fact that there is an archive of the original LMR, but... Last I saw, it was on a veeery NSFW site-
@@Topdoggie7 so many of the lmr stuff happened to someone for real? I hope the creator is safe
@@Topdoggie7 do you have a post where they explain so? Although I feel LMR at least was less disrespectful than Molestia by a long shot. (I was 15-17 while reading). Although I always wanted to ask them where the inspo came from and what propelled them to make the blog
@@Topdoggie7 Sorry. I just got curious. Is hard to trust anything you see unless it comes from the source.
Most of the time I imagined all the ones running the nsfw art blogs to be adults. Of course short sighted but is cause as a kid I never thought anyone my age could draw that detailed nsfw stuff.
I get they don’t want to talk about it. It was simple curiousity
if you ever do a part 3, could you PLEASE give some respect to my girl Applejack? That girl needs more love in the creepypasta/mlp space lol
Applejack is one of the best horses, 11/10 I respect her sm
Yes!! We need more Applejack love
we need aj love frr
The best background pony
Just kidding AJ is my fav hehe
Yes!!! So far the only creepypasta versions of apple jack that are actually popular are apple eyes, the apple sleep experiment (which is just the russian sleep experiment) and if you can count it apple pills from the elements of insanity- all of them are pretty meh oof oof so a genuinely good apple jack creepypasta would be great
ok wow just referencing the first 3 minutes, as a 'non professional' you handled these problems better than literally every other 'professional' I have ever seen on youtube. You owned up to your mistake but didnt drag it out and then redirected to text-post content for those that want more information on what happened. You are literally amazing i loved you last MLP vid and fell in love w your personality then but I even further love your personality now. You are probably by far the coolest person I have ever witnessed (dont tell my bfs i said that hahaha - also bfs as in poly)
That means the world to me, thank you! I was super embarrassed, but I really wanted to make my follow-up video be informative and honest, so I’m glad that I was able to do that respectfully! 💚💜
Man, I just absolutely love your concept of the Lil Miss Rarity rewrite. And even connecting it still to Icing on the Cake. You making these videos is actually inspiring me with some video, redesign, and rewrite concepts. It's really cool hearing your ideas for these rewrites and hearing you also talk about these creepypastas. And happy late birthday Rainbott!!! And hope you're having a good day!!!💖✨
i know toyhouse has rules against au characters and i understand why but a ban for this seems so harsh? they usually just freeze accounts or at least take the offending pages down, this seems like such an overreaction on their end? the fact they have locked you out of your account completely and won't let you have access to your artwork meaning you've lost hundreds of dollars worth of art is so unbelievably cruel when they don't even respond this harshly to well known scammers. really making me not want to use to site anymore honestly :/ very unprofessional on their end.
I agree! It's an extremely disproportionate punishment for simply a child engaging in drama. Yet they don't even manage actual threats on their site in the same manner. I kind of want to call for a boycott of the site and find a competitor I can transfer all my stuff to.
@@mioko2974 i was rereading the rules to refresh myself and maybe i'm missing more context but for the most part everything complies with the guidelines they have written so? i don't get why such actions were taken let alone the *whole account being banned* when they state the punishment would be taking the profiles down, not the account. the site has so much problems and really needs better management. it sucks how this always seems to happen to smaller creators who just don't have the platform to get the correct attention drawn on it. i don't use the site much anyway but at least i have a good reason to move my stuff elsewhere
@@obbinss Reading the text post, it seems like they'd probably ban under a repeat offense (bc a friend told them to try reuploading the pages?), but it still doesn't seem fair tbh.
@@MidnightCapricorn2696 that's the part i'm confused on but even then it still seems like it's really unfair? seems like a very harsh punishment for such a minor, frankly really confusing rule, when people who do much worse are given a slap on the wrist. like for reference below is the rule which i think is the one that's been violated if anyone else is scrolling and wants context:
"5.1. Canon Characters
We do not host canon character re-uploads. This includes:
Direct re-uploads of characters that exist in published media
Direct AU versions, re-designs or kinsonas of these characters, who share the same name, personality, and identity
Regarding Canon-Inspired Characters
We allow canon-inspired characters specifically where it's clear they're an original character who has been inspired by the canon content, rather than AU fanart and fanfic of a canon character. As long as your character has their own name, and a profile/design that reflects they're intended to be individual from the canon character and are not literally the canon character, they should be fine to upload. Adding some background to the character's profile to explain who they are will help a lot to ensure they don't get mixed up.
Don't advertise these as for sale or trade on-site.
We do not moderate visual similarities, but we reserve the right to take down profiles we believe have been made in bad faith. Please do not upload fanart of a canon character with a few letters of their name changed and a copy pasted profile."
You get banned for making au characters!?
When I was 14, I thought little Miss Rarity was her being inspired by agony in her work, putting herself and others through hell to bring out the beauty in pain. To say I was disappointed and disgusted was an understatement.
That would actually be a much better story for little miss rarity than the actual little miss rarity
I love the detail that her eye is actually explained in your version. Eye during black because of a blast of magic? That's something I never thought of before.
Also explained in the original. I can elaborate if need be.
@@lascanteki8188yeah. Cuz I was genuinely confused because of the original one.
@@kittenpaws8896 The black eye (first appearing on Opal actually) come for Rarity from Opal scratching her and infecting her with what is basically a demon's influence, the rest of the characters get it from the demon's dad taking over equestria for a bit.
@@lascanteki8188Where do you get this idea from? It's never explained clearly
@@lillysparrow Pretty sure it is, but then I don't remember it, it's been 1 year since I posted this comment, good etiquette to not necro posts /nm
There's normally a full archive you can download somewhere with no censors. You can see "(Backlog of the whole blog available for download here!)" on the sidebar
As someone who read it, if I remember well (i'll avoid being too graphic but still):
Basically, Rarity in this story is a woman who can't have a child but really wishes to . The big bad of this story got through Opal to reach Rarity, once she's scratched by Opal rarity is actually affected by the big bad, wish basically makes her go crazy.
The big bad needs a woman desperate enough to have a child she would give birth to him, Rarity is that woman. Through her dream the big bad guy shows to Rarity how to give birth to him, then makes her wake up, Rarity wants to have a child and proceeds to give birth to the big bad.
During this time, Twillight is aware of what's going on and summons Malice, the dad of the big bad, who proceeds to kill the big bad. Malice, for Twillight has summoned him, basically removes her teeth (that's why her mouth is sewn later on).Malice now inhabits Twillight's subconscious.
Black eyes in this are cause by Malice's beard hair infecting people and making them go crazy, there's also some prophesized thing about sinners, Rarity being the master of the sinners 'cause she gave birth earlier, the two aren't necessarily connected. The master sinner has the power to decide the fate of the sinners. Also each sin makes people act weird (Rainbow Dash cannot refuse any orders)
At some point we discover the whole apple Family is in fact fighting against Malice since generations and is very much ready for him : thing is they also are the sin of sloth, which makes them act reckless. Apple jack refuses that sin and gets herself infected with some kind of purification hair which makes her want to make the world pure basically.
Through some dialogue with Malice we discover that those pure guys aren't necessarily good guys either, because once they've created their little utopias they basically let themselves and the world die. We also discover that Malice is in love with the person in charge of purity but that they are not allowed to be on the same planet at the same time, but right now Malice isn't on the planet he is in Twillight's head.
I don't remember much of the rest, but also Applebloom is dead, but her family keeps her body alive with a bit of her soul .... sadly the bad part which makes her torture her bro at some point.
But yeah, basically the whole story is a combat of good versus evil but where the good is also bad.
Damn this blog has waaaaaaay more lore than I thought
I understood none of that somehow the essay couldn’t help I’m not smart enough for this insanity
It's ending pretty much sweetie belle kills apple bloom saving apple Jack and then it ends with sweetie belle asking for a balloon
19:31 I remember that rarity did surgery on herself to implant the pinkamina doll so she could give birth to her & that was from a dub I watched on UA-cam, although I could be misremembering an unrelated torture scene as a reverse c section.
What the actual fuck
your muffins deep dive actually inspired me to start writing my own rarity grimdark fic!! the idea is quite rough currently, but ill explain for anyone whos curious.
basic concept is rarity has a dress line due, the dresses needing to be soft and plush. rarity no matter how hard she tries, cannot find a material that satisfies how she wants these dresses to look and feel.
she goes out to clear her mind, and decides to meet up with pinkie pie. while talking they accidentally touch hooves, and rarity realizes how soft pinkies fur is
after going home she thinks about murdering pinkie, and no matter how hard she tries to brush it off the thought will not go away.
eventually she snaps and decides to kidnap pinkie, and manages to remove some of her fur. pinkie fights back, giving rarity a massive scar on her right eye.
to avoid death, pinkie then forces herself to work with rarity, killing other ponies for raritys dresses. pinkie does not enjoy this at the start, but slowly gets desensitized to it, and later on gets manipulated and groomed into "enjoying it" (not in a weird way)
its a rough idea, but i hope other people will enjoy this. i have rarity and pinkie pie designs planned out, and hope to design more later on
if anyone read this all thanks for putting up with my silly story explanation, i really enjoyed making this idea up so far. if anyone has suggestions i would really appreciate it !!
this sounds so interesting and id love to read it !!
me too!
@@besitos. tyy!! glad to know its interesting to others ^__^
This sounds like a great idea! And I’d definitely read it!
Do you have a name for the grimdark fic yet?
@@ZaneEnthusiast i dont have a exact name yet, but a name idea i currently have is "unknown materials". im still not 100% sure on it, so it might change
Holy shit, your remake is amazing. I did not expect that twist. I was kinda weirded out by "Rarity's" color pallet, but I thought it was just a design choice. Things just got better from that moment forward. I hope you do more remakes.
Some stuff has been deleted most likely,either wasn't archived properly or simply perished during the tumblr porn purge (although if that's the case we can see pretty clearly that mess was very pick and choose what is and what isn't banned cause wow). Loved the rewrite! You even connected it to Icing on the Cake really nicely! And I find it a more interesting concept than whatever Lil' Miss Rarity eventually became. I do hope you do one of Fluttershy,or maybe you could do one with Applejack since she never had that many (what on earth was Apple Eyes,never read it,only seen fanart)
For Fluttershy, there's maybe Rose of Life, though it's rather grotesque/bloody if I recall correctly.
@@nameynamd9212 I've seen butterflies and my little amnesia, iirc both have Fluttershy as a big character in both stories
The build up of Rarity falling to peer pressure from her blog, being enticed by views and rummaging through her drawer
to be played along by a midi cover of Blood was the funniest shit to me in the world!
I had to pause to comment, so I wouldn't be distracted, because this is a great story so far :)
Why is nobody talking about the sa, incest and repeated abuse of sweetie belle made out as okay
" because this child likes adults abusing her so it's okay!"
Like why is nobody vastly unsettled by that????
I'm gonna be honest with little miss rarity. It always felt weird how they involved. Kinda Gardner. Sister, like and the story. It's stated that she also likes it. And does it with her friends? It felt like that's a step too far.
I think I'll update my thing I do sort of like this but I think this was used as an outlet for the Creator I've read a lot of stories over the years so I can save for a fact I generally believe that something some creators make wake Celestia that was horny every single day
@@TOMMY716molestia. I never knew why people created her but
@@dcscruz2970 it was a perversion thing people thought it was funny to make a character that was so horny that she would rape it any and everything like with little Miss Rarity it's a kink
Well those are kinks, if it's for you it's okay, nobody is asking you to like it
@@makinyoumad9498dawg.
Wow, im so glad Rarity's top surgery went so well
Holy shit! This rewrite is so fucking good! I have very mixed feelings about Lil Miss Rarity, but I really like what you did here and wish we had a narration for your version, but I understand it's all in good fun! The twist is so good!
Edit:Oh my god, I fucking love your addition with the Muffins rewrite! It makes this so good.
It's pretty cringe but any story that's someone's life abuse put into a story is going to be wack. They were an abused minor, so.
@@Topdoggie7 I heavily disagree.
@@Red--Moon I knew the creator. They got some terrible stuff done to them as a minor and started this to work through it. You can see the cries for help every step of the way.
Man after the twist of your version going back and listening to the story again you can really notice all the red flags hidden through it! You make some really well made creepypastas! I cant wait to see more of your creepypastas and how they all connect with one another!
I feel like if this project was taken in a more "Hellraiser" direction it could have potential.
Yeah I think entirely removing the masochism and gory aesthetic utterly made it a little too different. The issue with the story wasn't the body horror or the psychosexual aspect, in fact, leaning harder into a gory psychosexual nightmare plot would have made the story stronger I think, the original was just really muddled and the plotlines seemed very indecisive and blatantly half-baked, often getting abandoned entirely as swiftly as they were introduced. Something more akin to hellraiser visually and thematically would have been a lot closer to the original story but still much cleaner and higher quality, though I can understand why someone who is not really into that sort of stuff wouldn't want to touch it with a ten foot pole, and youtube being the platform obviously imposes a lot of limits on how graphic it could get anyway.
i was blown away by the twist to your version of the story, it recontextualizes everything that came before it in such a cool way!! i won’t spoil it for people who’re reading the comments before getting to the end of the video, but going back over it is so fascinating to see how it all ties together!!
Some of the posts are definitely missing because of the porn ban tumblr went through, but some of the most confusing stuff and the change in text color is because the blog crossed over with other blogs. Following them when they were coming out was hard enough. 😅
On the second half of the story: When you first brought up that the Rarity we've been seeing wasn't actually Rarity and that Pinkie was later brought up, I got upset at the unusual twist and feared the worst...but I like how it played out! Excellent work.
I remember reading little miss rarity (it was a fanfic version of it) at thanksgiving at my aunts house, and my mom asked me what I was reading and I was like “my little pony! :D” and she was like “awee! Ok have fun!” And 13 year old me was like BRO THIS SHIT WACK
OMG THAT TWIST ON THE REWRITE THREW ME WAY OFF, yet again a really good deep dive! Still sucks about toyhouse, I do hope youll be able to get all your sparkledogs back though, I can't imagine how much work was put into it, but yeah, loving these mlp creepypasta dives alot and this one really sold it for me again!
Question from someone who knows nothing about mlp: How can the ponys be fashion designers when they don't wear clothes?
That’s actually a common joke in the fandom! Lots of ponies wear clothes and accessories for special occasions, but the super rich horses also wear clothes regularly. It’s kinda silly, but I love it :>
@@Rainbott It's kind of neat that they still choose to use clothing as a means of self-expression, even without any social obligation to wear it.
@@ladymushroom9485it is most commonly used in social events and by the high-society, wearing clothes, especially hats seems to be an indication of wealth in places such as Canterlot, Rarity of course is one of the characters with the most outfits on the show which makes sense given she’s a fashionista, she likes to dress up
As I kid i remember knowing little miss rarity liked the pain but never understood it was her liking it in that way
I honestly always hated that little miss rarity was just freaking porn. I remember finding it on Tumblr at 15 years old and I wish I never saw it. Thank you for fixing it and I feel like the author didn't know what they were doing at the confusing parts that you were talking about. Will you post more about your mlp rewrites on your blogs like Instagram and Tumblr?
The author did know what they were doing, it's just that not all of it was archived?
Also they didn't fix it they just rewrote it
It was a teenager drawing to work through what was done to them. Sooooo.
Porn is part of CSA recovery.
@@Topdoggie7 that doesn't mean they have to post porn of a childrens show, and they certainly didn't have to include sweetie bell in this. trauma recovery has nothing to do with whether or not an action is moral, it can explain things but not justify, that just isn't how that works. And teenagers are more than capable of understanding right from wrong, they can move on and be a better person later but that doesn't mean that actions were ever okay. I don't care that much about little miss rarity, but I've always hated the excuse that "they were young!" or "they had trauma!"
@@Beerfear I'm pointing out a child drawing porn of themselves or a character the SAME age as them isn't the same as an adult doing it. They were a minor drawing porn of characters their age and up.
I'd honestly kill to see you do a video covering the entire Rainbow Factory series. There are other stories in the series other than the original (Pegasus Device, Pegasus Device: Reckoning, A Weather Worker's Song and Rainbow's Factory) that I never see get covered. It's just such a fun, bloody, analytical series that I think you'd do justice covering and potentially rewriting
I hope you had a wonderful birthday! Thank you for giving us a gift in this wonderful video, I thoroughly enjoy these deep dives!!💚💜
Howdy! LMR fan, long time over, a LOT of the context and posts were deleted by Tumblr's Auto Censors, so the Archive doesn't have them any more.
However, the Blog has a MEGA Link that contains both Series 1 and 2, well over 400 posts both, give or take a hundred or so.
Happy Birthday, and shame about the Ban.
That plot twist was so immaculate! I really enjoy your rewrites
I’m so sorry you got banned from Toy House and lost a lot of your money. But I’m glad you talked about Muffins and decided to rewrite it as well as Little Ms. Rarity. Your rewrites are very interesting and the character designs are amazing.
okay I have to admit I was nervous coming into this video cause of what I've heard about this story and I was also worried that the video might get demontised cause 'you know' but I do l really like your rewrite, the whole twist with Vouge was pretty neat and I glad you removed all the traces of 'you know' out of the story and I like how you tied in an episode of the show into the story with the inclusion of Mina.
Good job like with The Muffins vid and I can't wait to see more off ya 👍
The muffins series is a comfort series for me but I absolutely hated Babss personality in it.
Ima be real the reddish lighting both being used as a nod to the original blog and being a way to mask the redder shade of hair in universe is amazing
as someone who is still on Tumblr and blocks idiots at the first sign of them showing their ugly heads I gotta say
It's not as bad nowadays fsr?
don't get me wrong there are still weird people around but
it certainly feels like it's gotten better
if you ever feel like it I think lots of peeps would like to see you there again
The ask feature on there and the possibility to make an art sideblog sound like a good thing for you
the og tumblr actually has many posts missing, i believe there is a downloadable archive on the blog that has everything but honestly idk how worth it it is
I read the original comic for the first time a few months back. You could see the comic get better and better, and then it just stops. It started and ended as something different, and that's for the better.
lil miss rarity was one of my fav mlp creepypastas growing up and this rewrite made me realize how much i rlly love her!! i adore this and def will be making fanart when i have time to!
You can really tell someone who went through trauma was putting their emotions into art.
My problem with it is the fact that the author sexualized Sweetie Belle ://
I felt like I was the only one super bothered by this fact
It worries me that no one else is talking about this
I had a similar ick with Ask Pinkamena because of the… moments.. with Scootaloo.
Yeah, even the newer pages do it, too..
It's pretty fucking gross since I'm pretty sure that the author is an adult now yet it some of the most recent posts on the blog have gross shit of Sweetiebell too.
idk enough about the author to make assumptions about their intentions, but it still isn't a very good look for them, no matter what they were trying to do.
Just found you today while looking for some old traumatizing things for nostalgia, and you seem great!
YOU GOT BANNED OFF TOYHOUSE?? That's WILD. For one, the team is so small so a lot gets ignored/slow to response. Secondly, that's just wild in general. I'm really sad. I was really excited to follow your toyhouse as I use it a lot. I'll just have to keep an eye on the weebly! I only found you today, but I LOVE your content!!
20:01 ah yes, the perfectly reasonable reaction to seeing horrors beyond your comprehension!
*H A T*
0:07 rocket to insanity fall of the apple family and dawn of the dying pegasus and lil miss rarity are the most violent detailed creepypasta especially since fan sequels and a comic are the most violent still some how
I love the re-write, didn't expect it to go where it did, but I really enjoyed it!
I really love the rewrite of Lil Miss Rarity! There were many twists and turns and elements of a story that I really love!! I would love to do fanart for that sometime!
literally screaming at the like. DETAILS??? IDK MAN I RLLY LIKED THIS. Silly little ramble but I was just reminded of, like, back in 2019 I was getting back into mlp creepypastas because I had liked them when I was younger. Little miss rarity's design always intrigued me, but the whole s3x stuff rlly bothered me and put me off of it. Plus I liked to tell my mom (she was oddly cool with it and finds these things interesting) about the different creepypastas, and I was never comfortable with telling her about this one. I love the way you made this into an actual story. The thing with creepypastas from the 2010s was that, like you said in the muffins deep dive (loved that one too), was that, yeah, shock value and gore was the main plot, throwing the story of it to the side. The one that you made is utterly wonderful, and feels like something I would actually read in a book (if you took out the point that it was mlp). Also, the fact that you took out the whole thing with Opal passing away so horribly AND the reason this rarity was scratched was because she was STOLEN I JUST- ough this is SO well done, man.
this was so amazing! the twist was written PERFECTLY. now I'm SO excited for a fluttershy creepypasta, please write one!!!!
I wish there were more episodes of these ngl, even if am not a mlp fan anymore
Happy Birthday Rainbott! :D
NOW THA REWRITE WAS AMAZING. I LOVE HOW [SPOILERS] huh? oh right
I LOVED THE PLOT TWISTS?? 11/10!!
My main issue with the blog nowadays is that the artist is still drawing pedophilia and incest between Rarity and Sweetie Belle.
There is absolutely nothing wrong with portraying these things in your stories!!! But it feels so blatantly sexualized like the artist is glorifying it.
I don't know. They art just feels very fetishy.
I'm really glad you're rewriting it, but I feel like we're looking over some major issues here.
I know the context that Rarity wants to be a mother and how that affects her relationship with her sister. I know that Rarity has a hard time drawing a line between love and lust. I know Rarity has been corrupted and her impulses have become more fucked up. And the sexual abuse makes sense. But the creator did not have to make the child enjoy it.
And if the creators actually improved. They wouldn't still be drawing stuff like that. They wouldn't draw a very sexually explicit piece of art that depicts rarity crushing her sister with her bare ass.
I'm glad that they specified that it's fiction, but the creator clearly glorifies these things.
Don't get me wrong. The original, It's a compelling story. It's very emotional and very dark. But I just can't overlook the pedophilia and incest being glorified.
This is the first time I’m actually diving into the story of a little miss rarity, because I never actually thought to look into the origins of it till now.
OK I decided to go through the archive thing to get a Rox’s parents of the ask blog, and I think the whole reason the cat is possessing the pinkamina doll is because of the fact she was used to make a doll and her heart is still beating in the doll.. that’s at least my understanding
Happy belated birthday by the way, I hope you had a nice party!
I’d like to deep dive on something sweet to bite I’m utterly obsessed with the Candy Mare as concept something so other worldly terrifying and tragic about a candy monster with only goal being to consume and infect speaks to me on so many levels and I’m genuinely curious on you view such a story
Maybe (if you want) you can talk about "The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle" only because I've tried to listen to the reading but some of them have bad mic quality and I'm too lazy to read the whole story.
I was hoping you could explain it or something along the lines of that cause you've been doing good with the pony videos so far.
Okay, I need to know the story before Lil’ Miss Rarity now omfg
Lil Miss Rarity has got a story and you can read it on the wiki. It is different from the main blog, but it has kept the concept of Rarity, and it is good, as it is not as strange as the blog.
I remember that tumbler of lil miss rarity but in irony there is a “sadistic rarity” tumbler~
Funfact there was an mlp book where a character called charity who started to pretend to be rarity so it's kinda just pure choice that you made a character who's whole thing is to mimic another character
*falls into the comment section* aA- yay more mlp creepypasta videos! anyways, hope you had an awesome birthday, rainbott!
I remember watching the video for Little Miss Rarity but because i was too young to understand i had no idea what was really going on. I also never got into the comic as i wasn't aware of fanfiction nor tumbkr at the time. The crazy thing tho is that im pretty sure this was the first time i was introduced to the word "masochist"
First time watch, knew about both of the source material series and clicked on a whim. now I'm super invested in this au you cooked!
7:00 is that the daughter of evil playing in the background ???? god i love that series of songs
1. i wouldn't be super duper upset abt tumblr callouts on stuff you did as a kid, i have plenty myself for edgy stories/art and such!
2. i personally have been inspired to make my own pony oc because of both your content and LMR!
GOD I LOVE THESE REWRITES SO MUCH!! I hope to do my own rewrites for fun at some point maybe
A Fluttershy Creepypasta would be so cool! She would be predestined for it, it's always the quiet ones from whom one would least expect it. 😈
Also, Happy late Birthday Rain!
watching this because of my reccs having it and my mlp hyperfixation threatening to come back and YOOO SAME BIRTHDAY
feels weird to say that lil miss rarity was probably my favorite mlp creepypasta, and i didnt even see it as a creepypasta, just a different storyline that i really enjoyed for whatever reason i guess. i remember watching it on youtube specifically, though i did follow the blog too
I remember stumbling across little miss rarity as a kid, got kind of hooked on it since it was the closest thing to p*rn I had ever seen so kid brain was hooked on the new feeling. didn't even see why it was so wrong for years, it also caused me to find the pinkemena blog...
half a year late to the party with the SINGULAR TIDBIT of lil miss rarity knowledge ive retained. unless it was retconned, the reason opal possesses the doll is because actual pieces of her were utilized in the making of the doll. i believe it was her skin and her heart primarily, but it could be more, could be just one of those. but opals body was utilized in the making of the pinkamena doll, which is why its there in the first place!
Y'all should've cacthed the creative venting vids/podcasts of the og creator. It is very clear the creator had a fast moving hard life they had been struggling with and only had this silly little thing they come up with on the spot while joking for themselves some years ago for awhile to creatively express what they are capable of expressing, about what they had seen on tumblr or fandom spaces, like other blogs or other creepypasta style works like Pinkamena. From what I have seen or heard they werent capable of doing work that much to support themselves outside of drawing art, so they had to pump out many mlp coms at some point too, since then they had felt like their art had became stagnated at the time even tho they also thought drawing the same things for sometime also felt like them studying what they are drawing too. I remember listening to their sock puppet podcasts; venting about education, work, money, art, life struggles etc. I honestly thank them for sharing their story at the time. It is comforting to see and share art & life struggles; comparing and learning of creators you have seen their works of but didn't know much else about them outside of their art. It goes to show you behind the scenes somethings are different at the very least. Thank you for, while being reluctent to look at it, covering the topic with an understanding and level headedness non the less. Keep it up.
Just sucks the artist is okay/has made incest and underaged NSFW art tho
I havent read the blog but i have seen two videos from the creator of Lil miss rarity themselves which are a full analysis of the story and an official animation (??) of the entire blog in like 3 minutes and based on that I think the story ends when Rarity has those button eyes then she dies and Twilight tries to bring her back or wonder wft happend to her well that's my personal theory
Already rewatching bc of how good the rewrite is, I love Vogue so much it’s such a good idea
I love this deep dive Little Miss Rarity its one of my favorite MLP creepypastas but I didnt read it till I was a teen dont know how old I was however I still enjoyed it regardless and there is a song based on the creepypasta and its really good also happy belated 21st birthday Rainbott
I was never huge into MLP, the grimdark stories got me pretty early. But I adore your writing! I was just returning to the Ice on the Cake video to write a comment about how I'd like to see more and this one dropped!
It's started reigniting my adoration for writing and art, especially related to MLP :)
Also, learning about tracing is... such an artist thing. Apologizing and making your own artwork is really all you can do afterwards :(
AHHH I need more of little Ms Vogue!!! PLEEEASSE
Happy b day ! Watched the previous mlp creepypasta vid some days ago and felt it was a blast diving back into the these stories :3
I would absolutely love to see a deep dive on Rocket to Insanity, it’s genuinely such a great mlp fic
i LOVE your deep dives i am glad you show me this.
Lil miss rarity could've been good if it didn't have... THAT... in the beginning
this made me inspired to create a Pinkie clone "OC" (though, without the context of a grimdark setting)
also I might just create a TBH of Icing on the Cake Minkie and Lil Miss Vogue, due to my fluttershy TBH featuring in one of your videos twice now
Your Fluttershy TBH is literally one of the best pieces of artwork ever created. It will be featured in a third MLP video I have coming later this year as well! I'm gonna add a fun little note to the credits just for your meme because it is so precious to me. /gen /pos :D
6:49 oh my god is that daughter of evil playing in the backround?
I genuinely think Toyhouse should give you your account back. A ban for a simple AU version of a pre-existing character is unneccessarily harsh, and just way over the top. I know you mentioned you were a chronically online bitch about it and handled it very poorly, but toyhouse is run by so-called professionals who shouldn't be acting out in that same manner. You lost so much art that they're now withholding from you, and it feels like you were straight-up robbed by website moderators over one simple drama. I feel like calling for a boycott of toyhouse, or looking for some kind of competitor site. What happened to you is horrible, and a disproportionate punishment for what you did. I'm so sorry you had to go through that.
It was probably because I tried to reupload the pages with the fan art / au content because I hadn’t known any better at the time. While I do agree with many of your points, I’ve accepted that there’s nothing I can do; the admin blocked me, didn’t reply to any of my emails (even when I tried begging / offered to pay TH money to get my art back), and they didn’t reply to my friends’ emails when they copy/pasted my same message. Some fans submitted support tickets, but the moderator shot them down and refused to reply to my messages or give any leeway to the ban. Fans even asked if I could have 24 hours to download my art before my account was permanently banned / closed, which is also what I asked for, but we were still denied. My friend even used their email to create a ToyHouse account to send a support ticket explaining our situation, since they’d been the one to mislead me about reuploading my pages, but because their email was one we sent one of my copied/pasted messages with, the admin just banned their brand new account because they thought it was me lmao 💀 I tried very hard, but I think it’s all lost media at this point. Even if the files still exist on ToyHouse, only the one admin can access it, and they have openly refused to give me the art multiple times. I don’t think we can do anything, and it was 100% my fault for not doing more of my own research, but I do appreciate the offer of support. Thank you. /gen ❤️
I've always loved these creepypastas but this one was always very iffy to me along with some others. I was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed your rewrite (and I'm very interested in listening to more of the story!
Your rewrite of the "Muffins Saga" has inspired me to make a follow-up called Fritters, which focuses on Sugar Belle having to undertake a massive special order whilst slowly losing her mind over the countless hours she's having to roll out dough, form mixtures and cook the apple fritters. It's more of a psychological thriller than a slasher fic and is non-canon to the actual show (therefore, SugarMac never happens as this is an au take).
I also wanted to make SugarPie canon in the Bakers' Universe (Cupcakes, Muffins and Fritters) since I think Pinkie x Sugar is a cute pairing. But yeah, Sugar Belle keeps trying to find a "special ingredient" to improve her fritters and opts to use blood from the bakers' drip tanks, which are passed off as being strawberry jam.
Bro I genuinely really like your rewrites of these older classic MLP creepypastas/grimdarks I’d love to hear what other ideas you have for other classics :0
Wow ! Your rewrites are genuinely so cool, and I love that it's all connected ! I can't wait for the next rewrites ! 😆👍
Happy b-day!
Came for Hazin, stayed for dreamworld, here for you.
Mlp creepypasta is a strange genre but thats what makes it good
How would you rewrite the cmc getting their cutiemarks? I always thought them getting individual cutiemarks would've been better
I like the idea of their cutie marks being linked in some way, in fact when the episode they get them in aired and people were displeased I was surprised seemingly no one had ever thought they would get related cutie marks as it was something I had imagined since like season 2-3
I really do like the idea, it’s a great concept but I do have a problem with the execution, their actual cutie marks are I’d say correct but could be more unique while maintaining similarities. Storywise, I’d like to hear a rewriting of them getting their cutie marks
I watched the last MLP Creepypasta video yesterday and it's so awesome you've made another :p
*spoilers*
Is this a year late yes, but I found more to the story and read it and I plan to give a small explanation to some of the points where Rainbott was confused just a heads up
12:15 Sweetie Belle somehow let it slip to guards what Rarity was doing so she was sent to prison
13:04 I think the doll was possessed by a demon and wants to be birthed? I'm not 100 percent tho
13:13 The doll was possessed by Opal because Rarity used Opal’s heart in the doll, plus cats have 9 lives and she was just brought back into the doll
+ When she gets back from Zecora’s, she goes to sleep and wakes up with buttons. They don't get explained or used later, I think the author just added it for fun
16:53 So after Applejack cut her Rarity went out and got Rainbow and Pinkie after they got tied up, Rarity gave birth to the doll/demon, the demon made weird vine things and they turned them evil all the sudden
17:48 After Rarity birthed the demon new Twilight found a book with a blood ritual and summoned goat dude to help defeat the demon in the boutique
19:41 That’s the demon Rarity birthed that also possessed the pinkie doll with opal
20:26 The eyes are from the goat dude they are his sinners/followers or something like that
21:43 Applejack was a sinner, she gets called the sin or sloth at one point in think, i think she may have bled the evil out of her eye like Rainbow, rainbow is the sin of lust for some reason and I do not know what Pinkie was
If that clears anything up, yay
If you’re still confused, so was I. Every three posts I thought I knew what was going on and then the next post I was confused again 🙃
I tried reading Little Miss Rarity before but could never get through it all. Thanks so much for doing us this favor, hahah. It'd be awesome if you could look into other ask blogs, the community is still kicking, even if its a lot smaller c:
I'd really love a coverage of the silent ponyville series eventually or also a coverage of the something sweet to bite series. Would love to see more of these videos
14:54 I think it's becuase it's a mental breakdown for rarity rather then the actual reality, like she imagining it