MONOLOGUE: Can I Use Your Toilet?

This was my monologue for my acting class at El Camino College. Please tell me how you liked it, what you liked or didn’t like about it, and what you think I could’ve done better. Any feedback, be it positive or negative, is greatly appreciated, for I want to improve my acting. Thanks :)

[@DarthAbhi]

Amazing performance.
You need a tremendous amount of patience and skill to pull this off, yet you did it without breaking a sweat.
Bravo good sir, bravo

[@oneinchwonder5766]

10/10 would watch it again.

[@karenmaida1048]

Omg 🔥🔥

[@mahmoudtarek7207]

You the best

[@indigo......]

I was rooting for u to shit on the floor💙