How to Write the PERFECT DIVERSITY ESSAY ! | What Admissions Staff Are REALLY Looking For !

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  • @nziahall
    @nziahall  3 роки тому +11

    I’m a teacher & super outgoing ! Wbu? What makes you diverse & unique ?! ❤️

  • @alabiisrael6742
    @alabiisrael6742 2 роки тому +9

    I love meeting new people and listening to their stories. From others, I learn to appreciate their realities, childhood experiences, and what has made the into who they are. It sharpens my horizon and informs my value and respect for others.

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  2 роки тому

      That’s beautiful! Thank you for sharing !!

  • @antonsvids5237
    @antonsvids5237 3 роки тому +7

    Finally, someone with a good diversity definition. It's that understanding that a lot of people lack.

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  3 роки тому +1

      I’m glad you found the video helpful, & hopefully anyone else who needs it finds it too🤞🏽

  • @rebeccabotchway2484
    @rebeccabotchway2484 2 роки тому +3

    I love to make life easy for people since I didn't get that same treatment growing up and it hurts.out if my experience I discovered mentoring and teaching was my greatest potential and this I helped alot of people I come into contact with and it put smiles on their faces.
    Your vid has really helped me put together over 400 words in few hours. Thanks alot dear 🙏

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  Рік тому +1

      wow, that's beautiful ! I'm SO happy this video helped you and I wish you the very best of luck !!

  • @jessienickolas5236
    @jessienickolas5236 2 роки тому +4

    thank you for giving the motivation I need to get through these essays right now!

  • @chisommaureenjessicanwoye485
    @chisommaureenjessicanwoye485 2 роки тому

    I love meeting people, listen to their experiences and get through their minds to understand how best to relate with them based on their experiences, exposures and background.

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  2 роки тому

      This is wonderful ! I bet you're a GREAT communicator !

  • @sumayauthmaan6698
    @sumayauthmaan6698 3 роки тому +3

    I LOVE learning and teaching! Im passionate about giving back to my community through acts of service (tutoring, mentoring, etc)

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  3 роки тому

      Omg that’s awesome ! 👏🏽 Admissions committees would LOVE to hear about that !! ❤️

  • @rafidulalam8532
    @rafidulalam8532 10 місяців тому

    VERY GOOD VIDEO .
    THANK YOU SOOO MUCH.
    it helped me out a lot.

  • @bukatamubanga1716
    @bukatamubanga1716 2 роки тому +1

    I love her energy

  • @ndindakasyoka5733
    @ndindakasyoka5733 2 роки тому

    I get deeply inspired by people's experiences and stories and I try to make the world a better place for people around me

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  2 роки тому

      That’s so good ! We need ppl in the world like you!

  • @nikiafenix9199
    @nikiafenix9199 2 роки тому +3

    this is so so so helpful! just got me out of writing block, so thank you!

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  2 роки тому

      omg yay !! I'm so glad it helped !

  • @JadaLea-u5o
    @JadaLea-u5o 24 дні тому

    Thank you Nzia!!!

  • @Nylerocks
    @Nylerocks 3 роки тому +4

    This is such an eloquent and helpful approach for writing this topic. Thank you!

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  3 роки тому

      Thank you so much ! So glad it helped !🤍

  • @kookoonuthead5644
    @kookoonuthead5644 3 роки тому +16

    Now how I'm gonna fit this in 200 words?😭

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  3 роки тому +4

      That’s honestly the hardest part lol ! Once you’re done writing, leave your essay alone for a few days and then look at it again. Cut out the fluff, rephrase sentences to be more concise, delete sentences that aren’t critical to your point (aka the major takeaways of your essay). It can also be helpful to have others read your essay to help you do this! I hope that helpssss !

    • @kookoonuthead5644
      @kookoonuthead5644 2 роки тому

      @@nziahall Thank you so much

  • @excelamaefule5997
    @excelamaefule5997 2 роки тому

    I wrote my first draft watching this.. so I definitely hit the follow

  • @MayraRodrigues-qh5zh
    @MayraRodrigues-qh5zh Рік тому

    I loved the video! congratulations!!!

  • @johnegbung2106
    @johnegbung2106 2 роки тому +1

    I love you baby girl...ur video is impactful... keep up the good work!

  • @i_am_the_phenomenal1
    @i_am_the_phenomenal1 2 роки тому +1

    Beneficial was this video. Thank you.
    As an aspiring medical student, I'll love to ask you some questions.

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  Рік тому

      Yay ! I'm glad it helped. Best of luck w/ your app cycle ! If you still have questions you can DM me on instagram @Dr.zhall

  • @aminatayobami4744
    @aminatayobami4744 Рік тому

    This is really helpful. Thank you.

  • @Mary-wy5ly
    @Mary-wy5ly 2 роки тому

    This video is super helpful and inspiring! Thank you so much!

  • @jibrijibri4548
    @jibrijibri4548 2 роки тому

    This was so helpful, thank you!

  • @swithinegwuchim481
    @swithinegwuchim481 Рік тому

    Thank you for this.

  • @itiswhatitis4964
    @itiswhatitis4964 3 роки тому +2

    Good. This IS different and simple
    And also good

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  3 роки тому +2

      Thank youuuu! 🤞🏽

  • @NiceNikka
    @NiceNikka 3 роки тому

    I am so proud of you💜🌻

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  3 роки тому +1

      Thank you so much🥺❤️

  • @lizquezada7719
    @lizquezada7719 3 роки тому

    Great video! Thank you for your insight. BTW - what color/brand of lipstick are you wearing? LOVE IT

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  3 роки тому

      Thank you so much !! I'm pretty sure it was Fenty Stunna Lip Paint - Uncuffed with the Fenty Glow Gloss Bomb on top

  • @temesgenkahsay826
    @temesgenkahsay826 2 роки тому

    I’m a hard worker stemming from seeing my father work 7 days a week and I’m a open person because of frequent moves as a child

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  2 роки тому

      I love this ! Thank you for sharing !!

  • @livelife2324
    @livelife2324 3 роки тому +1

    I loved the points you made about being a researcher and a teacher. And I really appreciate this video for giving such a fresh outlook on what "diversity" can mean.
    HOWEVER when it comes to the points of being an extrovert and a friendly person/family person it related back to being an only child from a single-parent household. Being a POC, only child and having a single parent are pretty "diverse" in itself imo. those are boxes that not everyone can tick off.
    It's a great video tho❤️ I was stuck about the diversity essay and this gave me a lot of ideas/ways i can look at this essay topic.
    That said, do you think mentioning religion is a good idea?

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  3 роки тому +1

      Yaaayyy! Thank you! I’m SO glad this video helped you! ❤️
      You’re right! my personality things were unique to my background. I’d encourage you to think of your own childhood/family/cultural experiences and see what things from those experiences had a strong impact on who you are today. Those things make YOU unique ! So yes! If religion had a strong impact on who you are then by all means mention it. (I hope that helps! 💕)

    • @livelife2324
      @livelife2324 2 роки тому

      @@nziahall Yes, thank you❤️

  • @brandensattler2544
    @brandensattler2544 2 роки тому +1

    THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • @nziahall
      @nziahall  2 роки тому

      Of course! I’m super glad it helped !!

  • @Dodgevair
    @Dodgevair 2 роки тому

    Which core value encouraged A&M to chose a football team stadium entrance song laced with profanities including racial slurs?

  • @korenjacob7033
    @korenjacob7033 2 роки тому

    You're repeating just 2 concepts in different ways.

  • @kuse166
    @kuse166 4 місяці тому

    I’m a broke bus rider