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  • @reubenbacani0104
    @reubenbacani0104 Рік тому +111

    Yes. Peter Parker's maturity needs more justice. If the new young readers need a young Spider-Man, then Miles Morales will be a way to go.

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому +4

      When they did omd they had ultimate peter quesda is the worse thing to happen to Spider-Man

    • @OblivionOdditiesProjectStudios
      @OblivionOdditiesProjectStudios Рік тому +4

      So, you don't have a issue with the art of the Dark Web series.
      I don't think Norman should turn evil again just yet. We need to see him do more as a hero, to build up that hero, just to find out that the Goblin is still in his psyche & has just willing been quite. Watching as Norman built new things, upgrading tech, & learning new information. Instead the Goblin is encouraging him through his dreams/nightmares. Every time Norman has a nightmare he goes to make it up to that person in some way or fashion. In doing so it's lighten the mental load on Norman & that weakened his mind cause he doesn't have those walls up anymore. He can finally move on, right? Then after some time of being a hero & being loved as a hero, then Goblin makes his return with a new dark avengers team in Permanent control there is no more battle for Norman's mind. This would create an Avenger level threat that would take the spider family to handle. Leading up to a battle that would have Goblin killed by Peter, & not a simple death, oh no no. The goblin has inhanced himself, is wearing power armor, & more powerful than ever. The Goblin wins the fight by pissing peter off talking about how he was going to murder Mary & his kids. Peter goes to hit Goblin in the chest with holding back less, then the Goblin knowing that Peter's spider-sense only works on in coming dangers, he opens his chest and back on his suit letting Peter Murder the father of his best friend, the man that he respected Norman, the redeemed man. The Goblin does this for 2 reasons, the first is to try & turn his son who has a goblin in him evil. The second is that he knows what it would do to peter to know that he couldn't ever save Norman again.
      We go down a different route for love, we go down the poly route, both Mary & Felicia have it out over Peter, at first its not about Peter & more about protecting the guy & his kids that's she is with, but the fighting was too much for him so they leave for good after the fight ends. During the fight we find out that blackcat has been brain washed with a hyper aggressive love potion that the goblin gave her while pretending to be Norman. During the fight blackcat & Mary are throwing around Dialogue & Blackcat is making complicated comparisons & toxic remarks towards what she would do while in a relationship with Peter this pisses Mary off to where she gets the upper hand on blackcat & ends up throwing her into the ocean. The sea water washes the love potion off of blackcat. Then we see Mary & Felicia come to terms with what happened before running into each other in a busy shop where Felicia has a tear in her eye & starts apologizing while explaining how she didn't know what happened but she remembered everything & when she went to go find Mary she was what she did to Mary's relationship so she decided to give her some space. This is when they both realize that they love Peter and that's when they see a happy poly couple walking down the streets outside. At first Mary thinks the guy is cheating cause he's holding one of his partners behind the back of the other Mary confused but mad goes to confront him with Felicia as back up & then she gets embarrassed as they explain the whe situation & that's when Mary & Felicia get the idea. Then it becomes a rocky road of getting over toxic personality traits while it's making a poly relationship work. Especially since they have worked well together in dark web. Then he ends up knocking both of them up lol
      Now for Peter's job, he should honestly follow in Doc Oct Example & start a company. So he does, he creates a website site learning platform that does something similar to film & game theory creating videos that teach about scientific understanding of things like super heroes, their clothes, journalism, & more with the help of Mary & Felicia. They start teaching about things they know. This catches the interest of some others more open about themselves having powers to the public individuals to reach out and create videos teaching people how to control their powers safely & how to train safely. This is still journalism & it's highly educational.
      The next Arc after these are about Chasm & happening after having proposed to both of them. So the end of the last arc is Peter killing Goblin by accident in front of everyone after having a relationship with both Mary & Felicia & their both Pregnant.
      So in this arc Chasm is going to get everything he wanted his memories. Peter actually gets through to Ben & then Peter gets help from Doctor VooDoo cause Doctor VooDoo was one of the people who showed up on his website as an educator. (

    • @reubenbacani0104
      @reubenbacani0104 Рік тому +3

      @@OblivionOdditiesProjectStudios And after that, I might have an idea of a next arc called "Modern to Original" Arc, which is about time traveling to reverse and undo the changes that One More Day have created, thus resulting of Superior Spider-Man, Sinister War, Beyond, and Dark Web non-existent.
      And maybe in a future arc will involve Peter retiring from being Spider-Man again to finally have peaceful marriage with Mary Jane, because he finally realizes that because of his non-stop duties as a hero, he felt like he was losing his responsibility as Peter Parker by pushing his loved ones away again and again, and in order to regain his responsibility, he has to keep on living with it normally, by hanging up his costume until the time comes. Then both Ben and Miles will then tag-team for a would-be-later story arc "Spider-Men III"

    • @OblivionOdditiesProjectStudios
      @OblivionOdditiesProjectStudios Рік тому +2

      @@reubenbacani0104 but we don't want to reverse that much. If we do then the entire marvel universe will have to change. We will lose the king in black, agent venom, venomverse, spiderverse as you said superior Spider-man, & more. We want to make sure everything that has happened stays a part of the timeline. If we don't then we have to revisit everything. But if we keep everything & then tie up all the lose ends we can move forward. I personally don't want to lose anything from the series timeline. I want it all to still happen & the spider family to remember it all. That way we can move forward. Eventually we can have spiderman get labeled as the greatest hero, like how it was said in whichever comic that it was talking about marvels future. Peter can become an avengers level hero standing toe to toe with the best of them & Eventually retire where he only steps in when the world is in danger. Making Miles the official Spider-man & if we keep Chasm, we should have Ben being the one to handle all things supernatural at this point & be the Midnight Sun's Spider-man. Eventually they will team up. Eventually we would get Mayday. I personally don't want to spend another 15 years reliving events that are massively different with similar outcomes. I just want new stories where everyone is leading their own paths creating new villains along the way.

    • @ilikeparaguayan278
      @ilikeparaguayan278 Рік тому +1

      Bruh miles morales is black

  • @AustynSN
    @AustynSN Рік тому +37

    Theory: Paul and the kids are really just an illusion made by Mephestio to keep MJ and Peter from getting back together. When confronted about how he used a very similar plot on Scarlet Witch, Mephisto just responds: "What? It worked, didn't it? She went COMPLETELY nuts."
    (Note: Not actually reading Spidey. Why would I waste my time when the Spider-Man editors have been betraying me since the end of the clone saga?)

    • @billymccrary2246
      @billymccrary2246 5 місяців тому +3

      Yeah, this idea proves that you had potential to write Spider-Man than the actual writers and editors cause they refuse to let him grow up and should be highly ashamed of themselves.

  • @MaxP_88
    @MaxP_88 Рік тому +72

    I like pretty much everything you said. Peter should be 30+, making us think he's still 25 with everything that has happened to him is completely ridiculous. He married, was about to have a baby and became a school teacher. Hell, I'm totally sure JMS wrote him as being in his 30s. The appeal of the Peter character wasn't just that he was a teen, but that he grew up and evolved like any of us. That's what made him relatable. Having him perpetually stuck in a loop made him a shadow of his former self and it's just a disrespect to Stan Lee, Steve Ditko and John Romita Sr. The current run of Wally West Flash is how people wanted Peter to be written for ages, which is something incredible to say considering how Wally hit rock bottom as a character during the past decade and was completely down the shitter until a couple of years ago.

    • @danganronpaz12
      @danganronpaz12 Рік тому +3

      The writers be forgetting that those of us who read and watched Spider-Man have grown older and we want to see the character do the same as well, leave the story’s of a young Spider-Man with miles or any of the other hundred spider people

    • @ccelite3782
      @ccelite3782 Рік тому +1

      Every story where Peter grows up is an alternate universe.

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому +4

      @@ccelite3782 and there all still better than whatever going on in the main universe

  • @scarlet647
    @scarlet647 Рік тому +38

    The MJ having powers can also remind her of her relationship w/ Peter and realize having powers isn’t easy and maintaining relationships so she can feel and understand his pov and they can have the conversation as well

  • @michaelharmon8960
    @michaelharmon8960 Рік тому +34

    Maybe Peter can open a tech repair/repurpose shop like he collects the broken pieces of his villains armor and weapons repairs them to make them none lethal and sells them to the young up and coming street level superhero’s like he becomes the tinkerer but mainly focused on supplying teenaged superheroes with tech and maybe mentor them so they don’t make the same mistakes that Peter maid when he became a teenaged superhero 🤨🤷🏾‍♂️🤷🏾‍♂️

    • @thenightspider
      @thenightspider Рік тому +3

      I really love this idea. We have seen Peter be a high school teacher before and him trying to inspire younger kids, but this idea is something that has never actually been done with him. The idea of having Peter use his intelligence and help the next generation of superheroes I think is awesome.

  • @harryfleutv666
    @harryfleutv666 Рік тому +32

    I just read that title “how to” just as I was listening to “How to save a life”and I thought that’s what it was gonna say! 😂

  • @ethandoyle4978
    @ethandoyle4978 Рік тому +29

    I admit I’m a little behind on the Spider-Man comics but I personally believe that despite everything Peter and MJ are each others definitive soulmates.

    • @MaxP_88
      @MaxP_88 Рік тому +4

      Despite Marvel!

    • @mayotango1317
      @mayotango1317 Рік тому +4

      I read the comix Parallel Lives, and you are right.

    • @eeeee322
      @eeeee322 Рік тому +4

      They ruined it now by giving her kids that aren't peter's like even if it somehow turns out they're not her bio kids if she just abandons them thats not gonna be a very likeable character they need to retcon the whole shit somehow

    • @22espec
      @22espec Рік тому +6

      The sad thing is that Marvel doesn't want an adult Peter because they think that fans don't want that.

    • @miguelorozco4445
      @miguelorozco4445 Рік тому

      @@22espec idiots, since the 80s with MJ and Peter marriage and how they ruined spiderman in One more day... thats what the fans want since a long time ago !!!!!

  • @laststrike4411
    @laststrike4411 Рік тому +6

    "He killed the love of his life!"
    But Mary Jane is fine???

  • @ansongordon-creed4047
    @ansongordon-creed4047 Рік тому +8

    This is far better thought out than most of these fan plot summaries. I commend you.

  • @aaronstrerk5521
    @aaronstrerk5521 Рік тому +9

    I think I'd prefer Felica to egg Peter on to get back with MJ rather than start up another doomed relationship. Let Black Cat see the writing on the wall, and instead of losing it, embrace it.

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому +2

      I mean tbh I kinda see this point too. Like Cat and Peter ain’t gonna last so why bother. Then again that’s my attitude with any of peters relationships now

  • @danganronpaz12
    @danganronpaz12 Рік тому +12

    Honestly for the reason MJ and Peter broke up in recent comics my guess is with Ben going down the dark path and seeming turning into a literal demon, and supposedly demons being behind Osborn being evil, the secret reason they broke up was probably that Peter told her about the deal that was made with Mephisto in the one more day comic and what they had before the deal

    • @TheComicfan94
      @TheComicfan94 Рік тому +4

      MJ already remembers their past life together, though. It's been confirmed both in canon and outside sources that she asked Mephisto to let her remember their married life.

    • @locothei
      @locothei Рік тому +2

      @@TheComicfan94do you know the source for this?? I wanna read it for my own

  • @Ninjacobragame
    @Ninjacobragame Рік тому +7

    I think the current asm run is just a dreamscape that peter has been trapped in not an actual thing. Like when peter saw a newspapper about mj dying in a plane crash and then it was reveald that she's alive.

  • @joeydunno
    @joeydunno Рік тому +3

    I think it kind of hilarious that marvel editorial seems to believe that the fans want Peter to be young and single, when in reality ever since omd they've asked CONSTANTLY for them to be reunited permanently. It's quite frankly very odd.

  • @TevyaSmolka
    @TevyaSmolka Рік тому +10

    Great job man on how to fix the Spider-Man comics and for me I love the idea of peter Parker and Mary Jane getting back together and her being pregnant 🤰 with baby mayday Parker makes me so happy. 😊

  • @jonmorris293
    @jonmorris293 Рік тому +2

    I love all of this. But I'd rather Norman just DIE before ever getting a chance to rehash as a villain. Norman dies, some rando takes the mantle, and a new problem haunts Peter. BUT Peter won't be as lenient with new Goblin as he was with Norman. He pulls no stops and goes for new Goblin.
    Still, you have an excellently laid out narrative plan. 🎉

  • @jvad007
    @jvad007 Рік тому +9

    That is not a bad fix. I'll be honest. I dropped Amazing Spider-man right after Wells first issue. I really thought the breakup and kids had something to do with Mysterio since he had been so prominent in the MJ comic. Mysterio just being completely obsessed with MJ and manipulating her through illusion to end up in her current relationship. I thought this was going to be another Scarlet Witch and Vision kind of situation, that being the kids weren't real and either androids/LMD or illusions. Whatever the case maybe I am still not happy with what I have been seeing about the book. Spencer did and excellent job with the characters, but they seemed to have tossed all that out the window. I like Black Cat and really like Terry Dodson's art...particularly with Black Cat...but my dislike of Wells writing is still keeping it sitting in my pull box.

  • @pearljaime2
    @pearljaime2 Рік тому +1

    Here. Easy sollution:
    "Peter Parker wakes up. Mary Jane is sleeping by his side. He realizes everything that happened after one more day was just a weird dream and nothing of that crap was real. Aunt may is dead. He moves on with his life together with his wife. Everything after that point is retconed. There you go.

    • @sesuneiro
      @sesuneiro Рік тому

      Funny thing is if this were to happen I wouldn't even be shocked lol

    • @MamaLoonaVyond-ns4tg
      @MamaLoonaVyond-ns4tg Рік тому +2

      This was in the newspaper comics ^^;

  • @kannan07
    @kannan07 Рік тому +2

    So I got a plan too
    An actually sane editor from Marvel goes into zeb wells' office
    Kicks him in the balls
    Get some material
    Make a panel where the one above all is like "fvck this event,am changing reality"
    And just retcon the entire run like it never ever happened
    But it probably won't happen
    Not cuz one above all being involved
    But cuz there are no sane editors left

  • @thedubbub316
    @thedubbub316 Рік тому +2

    I really just think we need to go back to basics.
    Have it be Mephisto that has conjured up this broken and skewed world for Peter.
    Have Peter be his favorite “toy” to play with, and after the events of one more day it’s been his crude pen writing the pages.
    Have Dr. Strange or someone of mystical power the one able to see the damages done to Spidey. And brings it to his attention.
    Then we get this entire arc of Peter battling his demons to defeat Mephisto and finally get the win.
    Peter gets the girl, if the editorial staff is gung-ho in keeping Paul around?
    Have him remember the previous timeline in some capacity? Make him a new villain that now has a personal grudge against Peter for “stealing his life away”. Then you get that whole comic book circle of drama for readers.
    I’d they [IE Marvel] want to insist on us being given a younger Spider-Man, then push that direction with Miles Morales.
    Peter is the mature Spider-Man with years of broken up adventures and lifelong experience.
    Miles is your new batch of clay. Or “New-er” I should say.
    If things like Doc Ock being dead after the Superior Spider-Man story is an issue? Then have the corrected timeline bring him back Red-Hood style or something? I’m sure there’s a creative way to do that.
    I’m not familiar with the recent plotlines Spidey is in now, I just have no interest anymore.
    Hopefully these ideas inspire, even if it’s minor.

  • @puffpuffpassmako
    @puffpuffpassmako Рік тому +4

    To get rid of the awful Paul and kids plot point, id just make it Mysterio pulling a REALLY long illusion and trick on both Peter and MJ. Using his illusions and hypnosis, he was able to make the kids look and feel almost exactly real. Paul will be Mysterio in disguise. The reason he did this was instead of using his illusions head on, this time he slowly inched into Peter's life to destroy his confidence and mentality. He planned doing something like this for years, but just needed the perfect opportunity. MJ and Peter splitting was the perfect opportunity he needed to pull it off. I would have this reveal be done after your Love Arc

  • @ahmadkhalaf8952
    @ahmadkhalaf8952 Рік тому +3

    tbf, Peter really only started acting like a teen again in Wells' run. He felt like an adult prior to it

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому +2

      Yeah I agree, but I feel like this regression happens far to often and far too quickly when it does. The Spencer run did him justice in that department

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому +1

      Spencer fixed peter and wells ruined him again

  • @lucaraiti6780
    @lucaraiti6780 Рік тому +3

    I have a better idea: since basically Mephisto has been retconned to be the cause of every bad saga in Spider-Man (sins of the Past. The "return" of his parents in the nineties etc, we can have a final confrontation between Peter and a Norman Osborn as the ultimate form of Demogoblin. After his win, maybe with the help of Dr Strange and Ghost Rider, Peter gets to purge Mephisto's influence from his life, altering the past in the same way One More Day did. As this happens, several events are erased from history: the Harry Osborn A.I., the gray goblins, the LMD parents... all gone! So we fladhbsck again to the Clone Saga, but a new and improved one, in which Ben Really dies for real in the end and Kaine is able to save Peter and MJ's daughter (she was pregnant at the time).
    Fast forward to Civil War: it's the child (about two years old now, who motivates Peter to roofie the world. The stress on the couple breaks it and results in a divorce, pushing Peter to try to rebuild his life as a separeted dad. The Superior Spider-Man arc is still there, but this time it's the memories of little Annie who keep Pete's consciousness alive. And MJ, not Carlie, is the one who realises something's really off with Peter.
    In the end of the Superior Spider-Man arc, Peter sells the company created by Octavius and gets back togethet with MJ. Now we reached Secret Wars, so the whole "Renew your vows story" is now retconned to have happened to 616 Spider-Man, not to an alternate version of him. Also in this version he'll have to kill goblin, not Venom. He and his little girl aged on battleworld, and when the Universe gets restored, they retain the memories and experience of those years, even though other people's memory are a little more fuzzy about it. Also with the restoration of the Universe both Goblin and Ock are back to life, but after the Red Goblin ark, Norman Osborn just f**ng dies, leaving just Ock as his main nemesis.

  • @supereren7373
    @supereren7373 Рік тому +3

    I don't like MJ having powers...

  • @nickwilliams904
    @nickwilliams904 Рік тому

    this video got recommended to me, i didnt even know there was an issue with the amazing spider-man comics

  • @ChamzaTheArtist
    @ChamzaTheArtist Рік тому +4

    Marvel if you're watching this,hire Lewis right now!

  • @mr.dystopian5554
    @mr.dystopian5554 Рік тому +2

    There needs to be a team up comic with Ghost Rider to take on Mephisto.

  • @docblade3270
    @docblade3270 Рік тому +1

    Delete EVERYTHING since one more day and keep going like is just another day with funny and smart peter parker and his amazing redhead wife!

  • @Broncomat12
    @Broncomat12 Рік тому

    Man with how zeb wells run has been get this mans in as the writer for once wells contract is up

  • @DzustComics
    @DzustComics Рік тому +4

    YOU SAID IT, BROTHER! YOU'VE SAID IT! I've been shouti the exact same words about Peter and Miles from the rooftops since 2018! It's exactly what both books need! An adult Peter and a youthful Miles. And look, I'm a huge fan of redemption arcs! It's why Superior Spider-Man was my gateway story into comics and it's why Venom has been my favorite character in all fiction since I was like 8 years old. But Norman getting that treatment was too quick to work. Someone forgot about the clone saga... And Dark Reign... And Goblin Nation... And the classic stories. 🤣

    • @srstriker6420
      @srstriker6420 Рік тому +1

      Well redemption is becoming like comedy and comedy is subjective like the Osborns have cross one too many lines and they’re lost causes like say Kylo Ren because they couldn’t make up their minds with him is supposed to be the victim or the villain after killing Snoke because I think he is bipolar and speaking of ua-cam.com/video/C2EqmZtWX5A/v-deo.html also have you seen Antman 3?

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому +1

      You’re absolutely spot on with this

  • @XD-xl3rd
    @XD-xl3rd Рік тому +2

    DRAMA, I think it's the biggest problem with Spider-Man comics, there's too much drama, almost all the villains and Peter's friends have a dramatic story.
    It NEEDS to be a little more fun (or whatever you want to call it) like its golden age

  • @Stoneepic
    @Stoneepic Рік тому +1

    0:50 he looks depressed

  • @CoolMan1_SonicAndOtherStuff
    @CoolMan1_SonicAndOtherStuff Рік тому +17

    A love triangle between Peter, MJ, and Felicia, and Peter getting a new job. Alright. Those are some interesting ideas right there.👍
    But what I really agree with is the fact that they should use miles more! Miles is getting all the attention now, so the comics should probably use him more too. And there's also other young spider people they can use, if they make Peter Parker into an adult. Not just miles, but Mayday and Peni Parker are also options.
    And the last thing i wanna say is that they SHOULD keep Peter and MJ together. In my opinion, MJ is a better love interest for Peter than Felicia, even though I wouldn't mind if any future movie or show of Spider-Man uses her as his love interest. But MJ is just better.

    • @vibechecker3168
      @vibechecker3168 Рік тому +2

      Yeah maybe have miles take the front in a series. Have a scene where Peter's calling Miles and Miles is trying really hard to not let it known that he's in a fight, because Peter WILL jump in and he's got a birthday or special event or something, and Miles doesn't want to ruin it for him.

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому +2

      Agreed!

    • @CoolMan1_SonicAndOtherStuff
      @CoolMan1_SonicAndOtherStuff Рік тому +3

      @@vibechecker3168 that sounds like a really good idea!

  • @undisclosedmusic4969
    @undisclosedmusic4969 Рік тому +1

    Funny how everyone who is talking about this is showing Insomniac's Spidey. Just goes to show how much they nailed this character

  • @docmysterio71
    @docmysterio71 Рік тому

    Comics need to stop thinking it's some sort of milestone to reach 1000 issues of the same series. Every generation they should be rebooted for new audiences to keep it fresh. Still maintain what made the characters but take the old stories in a different direction, give new writers who understand the characters, and new artistic talent a chance to work on giving their take on how these the characters look (no not changing costumes unless it makes sense in the story).
    This will solve the issue of needing to have character grow up because if you have them age and have kids, then eventually they need to die and NO ONE wants that.
    An example of this reboot is the superhero cartoons, they are not the same story going on for 60+ years. Spider-Man specifically has had some AMAZING cartoon series.

  • @King_Kev78
    @King_Kev78 Рік тому

    Marvel just hire this man! Best UA-cam video ever!

  • @edmaldonado8207
    @edmaldonado8207 Рік тому +2

    This is pretty good and more or less what I'd go for as well. The only thing that makes me sad is seeing Felicia done dirty. So I'd also would like to get Felicia to have more agency. Maybe have her lead the Thieves Guild, or get involved again with the other street level female characters like Misty Knight, Colleen Wing, Jessica Jones, etc to do a Marvel equivalent of the Birds of Prey. And when Felicia is back in Peter's life, they can settle their differences and become friends and occasional partners again. In terms of romance, maybe she might end up with Flash Thompson, aka Agent Anti-venom. There's already precedent there since they've dated before as well. Just some ideas. I really like Black Cat and wish she wasn't only defined by her relationship with Spider-Man.

  • @theicekingkobe
    @theicekingkobe Рік тому +1

    bro, got a better pitch of how to retcon all this latest comics. Peter actually dreamt all of this while in the coma in the recent beyond era.

  • @iamjosephmcgill
    @iamjosephmcgill Рік тому +1

    So basically hitting all the same beats as JMS run from 2001 to 2007?

  • @sammysstopmotionoas2004
    @sammysstopmotionoas2004 Рік тому +3

    If we want this to happen, we will have to not buy or read Wells' crap! And hold Marvel to the fire! MJ and Peter must get together and married in order to fix Spider-Man and Marvel!

  • @keeganhall2988
    @keeganhall2988 Рік тому +1

    I feel like the best thing for the story is to have Peter be battling with Norman and to maybe finally cross the line unknowingly. Since in Nick spencers Arc we have Peter and MJ gain control of their own souls again it should accumulate in peter regaining his memories of being married to MJ and remembers the death of baby May and how much hes gone through because of the deal and he breaks normans neck in his blind rage of having the life he wanted taken away from him. (In my version Dark goblin would be given a new power set by Mephisto and Norman would be the one to give peter all those memories back and he would give them back to MJ and this would also cause her to resient Paul and her own kids because of the revililation) In the Love Arc i would keep everything the same expect for one thing. Have Peter say he wants to be with MJ but allow him to make the meture decision to say hes not ready for them to start again and he needs time to find out who he is. Like the ending of No Way Home, make him a purely sole Villian where he fights his Villians but also comes to a level of adultness that he can be with MJ Properly

  • @harryfleutv666
    @harryfleutv666 Рік тому +4

    Honestly with my Spider-Man vs Goblin final battle in the "Dark Goblin" arc, I'd just kill off Norman...for good this time

    • @brewmaster2912
      @brewmaster2912 Рік тому

      I’d just keep Norman reformed but have him retire from the Gold Goblin, leave Oscorp, and just leave New York. Earlier, I’d have the Hobgoblin be the villain of the first arc instead and almost kill MJ but Norman saves her life. He and Peter talk. Peter says that while he can’t forgive Norman for killing Gwen, Norman still saved MJ and Peter won’t forget that and thanks him. That way, we can finally have clarity between Norman and Peter and have a good ending.

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому +1

      I mean fair enough, that’s a good way to end it 😂

  • @SparkTFS
    @SparkTFS Рік тому +1

    Just make everything from the past 10+ years a trippy dream and let Peter resume his life with actual development and progression

  • @adrianrocha6844
    @adrianrocha6844 Рік тому +1

    That’s a really good way to fix the Spider-Man comics but in your analysis who’s kids are those because in 6 months you can’t give birth to two kids and have them be 7 and 8 years old already

  • @MaxP_88
    @MaxP_88 Рік тому +1

    The first arc of your run starts with the final battle between Peter and Norman? Damn you're not pulling any punches

  • @MyCarnageExtreme
    @MyCarnageExtreme Рік тому +1

    I already said this in your community post, putting here again so more people can agree or disagree with me.
    Marvel had one chance to make MJ and Parker work, and they screwed up erasing their marriage. Now the dynamic just isn't the same, not even when they are at their best. Unlike other heroes Peter has a great "cast" of love interests and he would lose this in exchange for a relationship that lost it's spark already. Above all we have a lot of alternative universes were they ended up together, so we are not losing much.
    Having a relationship is not equal to growing up, he can still have progress as a character without a main girl, Marvel just needs the courage to stop pretending MJ is still the main girl.
    By the way, great video. I love your content so keep it up!

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому +2

      Yeah it’s getting convoluted. And thank you!

    • @mayotango1317
      @mayotango1317 Рік тому

      The problem is that most of the girls are toxic bitch (Carlie Cooper, Michelle Gonzales, Debra Whitman, Mockingbird) even Black Cat try to kill him.

    • @mayotango1317
      @mayotango1317 Рік тому

      And no, Peter need MJ to told him "Is not your fault".
      Or Otto Octavius stole his body again.

  • @AsgersWeb
    @AsgersWeb Рік тому +1

    He needs a reboot timeline. Strip away all the bs. Set him up in a new status quo. Erase all the post OMD bullshit. This is all well and good, and admirable to attempt to fix it but at the end of the day there has been done way too much damage and it needs to erase all of that bullshit. The continuity for Spider-Man is so awful so yeah they need to reboot him. Undo One More Day and when they do it undoes all the bullshit and now they've been married for years again and have a kid etc.

  • @AustynSN
    @AustynSN Рік тому

    Peter as a science teacher was actually his job before his ID reveal in Civil War.

  • @Vali_Z4ne
    @Vali_Z4ne Рік тому

    My only gripe of this story is that Gold Goblin will just be another 2019 Superior Spider-Man.

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому

      Yeah i get that

    • @Vali_Z4ne
      @Vali_Z4ne Рік тому

      @@LewisFilmsProductions
      Overall, I do agree though.
      We can have Miles play this youth Spider while Peter plays the old Spider (I would say have it like Gohan/Goku from Dragon Ball).

  • @TK3477
    @TK3477 Рік тому

    What issue is that thumbnail from? With the Spider-Man 1 famous kiss?

  • @gambit22x
    @gambit22x Рік тому

    They should use Renew your vows for a while, add a son called Peter Parker-Watson, then Peter and MJ disappear, May and Peter now live with Grand aunt May, everybody saying you look and act like your father. There you have a young peter spiderman again.

  • @Coimbrice
    @Coimbrice Рік тому

    Is that spider-man blue comic of yours in portuguese?

  • @civilbeast165
    @civilbeast165 Рік тому +2

    🙌👏🙌👏🙌👏🙌👏 you don’t literally mean we’ll never get Norman or green goblin ever again do you? It wouldn’t be right to have a hero continue without his arch nemesis

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому +1

      Hmm idk for a long while. I just think he’s overdone

    • @MaxP_88
      @MaxP_88 Рік тому +3

      Norman wasn't seen around in the comics for about 20 years, from the 70s until the 90s, when he was believed dead after his slider impaled him. I think Spidey can go on without him for a while just fine.

  • @nonotion3815
    @nonotion3815 Рік тому +2

    at this point I already prefer Felicia over MJ lol

  • @heroicgangster9981
    @heroicgangster9981 Рік тому

    Add Ben Reilly being a mentor to Mayday once she's actually allowed to exist, and I'll love your take.

  • @UltimatePower01
    @UltimatePower01 Рік тому

    2:32 that’s so depressing, especially considering that was the logic that brought the end of Superior Spider-Man Doc Ock. That wasn’t a well written conclusion for that character.

  • @jackjaws
    @jackjaws Рік тому

    Forgive me because I haven’t exactly kept up with comics for a while but doesn’t there have to be some sort of magical event to allow them to be together again? I feel like something could happen to undo one more day and it would mess up a bunch of other stuff in their lives, but ultimately they carry each other through in the end.

  • @ostyne5523
    @ostyne5523 Рік тому

    Instead of having his uncle killed off, they could have him be NEARLY late, witness the altercation, and try to stop the dude, causing the bullet to hit his uncle in the shoulder instead. According to an article, people are TIRED of the dead-uncle shit!

  • @MuggMen
    @MuggMen Рік тому +1

    I don't get it, how can I won't let Peter Parker grow up; we have a teenage Spider-Man if you wanted to be that young and relatable superhero, he's called Miles Morales. Hell Batman had a son, Superman had a son those books were selling really well until Brian Michael Bendis ruined Superman.

  • @inadequate6863
    @inadequate6863 Рік тому +2

    Zeb Wells need to LISTEN UP

  • @michaelharmon8960
    @michaelharmon8960 Рік тому +2

    I’m guessing the big reveal on why mj dumped Peter is that she found out that Peter sold there marriage and unborn child to mafisto yes I know in one more day she agreed to sacrifice there marriage to save aunt may but making that deal basically turned back the clock it took those years that Peter and mj spent married and erased them imagine if you spent five years growing you meat a girl a girl or guy have a kid then a demon comes and rewinds time so those years never happened would you be the same person no cuz you wouldn’t remember and have the wisdom you learned over those five years

  • @speedreviews583
    @speedreviews583 Рік тому +2

    I like this idea. the only thing I don't like is Mj getting pregnant before peter and Mj get married, I think peter and mj get married at the end of the arc and then at the end of the next art Mj gets pregnant. just so we don't rush into this really imported thing for the comics.

  • @michaelharmon8960
    @michaelharmon8960 Рік тому +1

    I kinda always felt that mj was holding Peter back cuz whenever they breakup Peter hits rock bottom dates a few other girls then mj comes back and she mainly always breaks up with him for being spiderman and gets angry at him for it like if a police officers wife dumped him for being a police officer

    • @AustynSN
      @AustynSN Рік тому +1

      I've always felt it's the Marvel Editors holding Peter back.

  • @thespidercrafter8547
    @thespidercrafter8547 Рік тому

    I'd totally buy the Spider-Man: Lewis Films Run!

  • @srstriker6420
    @srstriker6420 Рік тому +2

    2:42 yes because it is his and Harry’s true nature because that’s one thing Peter pointed during the kindred saga is that they always blame him for everything wrong in their lives but it is own damn fault because it was their greed and ambitions but maybe it was Peter’s fault for turning in Norman back in Amazing Spider-Man vol 1 issue 40 because that is obstruction of justice and covering up a crime and maybe Harry should have stayed in hell, I know that seems harsh but if he comes back to life what is he going to do continue on 💩 on Peter’s life because of some extreme sense of entitlement to MJ which has he forgotten that he married Liz Allen ?
    Issue 21 will finally give the answers on everything in run of Spider-Man comics.
    I saw Antman 3

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому +1

      What did you think to Ant man?

    • @srstriker6420
      @srstriker6420 Рік тому +1

      @@LewisFilmsProductions I think it was good in some places like Kang’s design is awesome and MODOK

  • @TommyMarioAshSpiderManSonic1
    @TommyMarioAshSpiderManSonic1 Рік тому +1

    #PeterParkerDeservesBetter

  • @spideraty1529
    @spideraty1529 Рік тому +5

    I love the story great job I hope this does happen but I don’t think that Paul’s kids are biologically related to her so Paul probably would get custody since they are his actual kids and mj step kids right

    • @srstriker6420
      @srstriker6420 Рік тому +3

      Yeah because it doesn’t make sense on how given birth to kids that look like around their 10’s

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому +1

      Yeah the her pretending those kids are hers makes no sense marvel doesn't understand how pregnancy work

  • @EmperorDxD
    @EmperorDxD Рік тому +2

    Listening to fans is why we have our problems

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому

      When has marvel ever listened to spiderman fans let's not blame fans for the incompetence of editorial

  • @martinadams8877
    @martinadams8877 Рік тому

    i think most of what you say is the direction wells plans on going. In fact in order to get where your going you need exactly the kind of set up wells is giving you so why not sit back and enjoy. the main problem with the current volume is the constant interruptions from editorial directed events like helfire gala and dark web which are utterly unreadable (re: Krap) and stop the flow of the main story. Personally i don't think we need to go back to the boring old mj waiting home, worrying about pete storylines of the past in order to go forwards. However pete needs a believable life outside spidey with a believable job and circle of friends (and maybe even some friends who know his ID.) and perhaps some new love interests as felicia can never be a long term option as it would reveal his ID. Pete had this during slott's run and it disappeared during spencer's awful run (one of the worst ever) and it seems wells is trying to resurrect proper story telling. Norman will go goblin crazy again and i actually hope wells drags that process out for as long as possible. Norman could start engineering problems for pete secretly for a long time and not even know he was doing it.

  • @marcelahernandez369
    @marcelahernandez369 Рік тому

    I think the ultimate universe did it well, where he passed the torch onto Miles

  • @at9648
    @at9648 Рік тому

    Not exactly what I want, but a big improvement from where we are. I like using MJ’s past to influence her character arcs. Doubt the current editors even know her history.
    I would add, show Peter is competent. He does not need help fighting the Adrian Tooms. And tell Aunt May he’s Spider-Man. JJJ has know the trust longer, and Marvel have done nothing with it

  • @TevyaSmolka
    @TevyaSmolka Рік тому +2

    Personally for me I want peter Parker and Mary Jane to have there marriage return and have their daughter mayday Parker spider-girl alive and kicking in the mainstream marvel universe boom problem solved everybody wins.

  • @etabiansosin
    @etabiansosin Рік тому +1

    Are you going to make another Ben 10 Trilogy in the future?

  • @HistoriaenCeluloide
    @HistoriaenCeluloide Рік тому +1

    Why are they so afraid to make more mature like Stracynski did?
    I would like to see Peter Parker as a college profesor or something like that🧐

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому

      The idiots in charge of marvel hate Spider-Man having any form of character progression him be old to them means not relatable anymore (even though they have no data to back this claim up)

    • @billymccrary2246
      @billymccrary2246 5 місяців тому

      That's because both Marvel writers and editors are stupid and immature morons who refusing to let him grow up, marrying to MJ and have kids, i mean if Eddie Brock had a son with Dylan Brock, why not Peter, Marvel editors?
      Along with other stupid decisions like try to be like the MCU, doing a lot of massive crossovers again and again and others.
      And yeah had Miles Morales to be the only YOUNG Spider-Man for young readers to relate rather than of having to reset Peter again and again, instead of doing an actual full-on reboot of their mainstream, like how DC Comics did before and stuff.

  • @jamesjackson6563
    @jamesjackson6563 Рік тому +2

    I really am glad your a fan of the comics so am I but we all know marvel editorial just won't do anything new or LOGICAL with Peter parker. Unfortunately for us. They hire a lot of people who either don't respect the characters or understand the characters to write them correctly. Although I know these characters are fictional. The current staff at marvel just think that anyone will accept their poor writing choices just because it's from marvel and it's an extremely popular character like spiderman. They are like everyone loves Spider-Man so the fans will buy the book even if it sucks. Smh marvel. Ngl. An older Peter parker typically only exists in what if stories or different earths altogether. Like earth 9997 (earth x) my favorite older peter parker. Or earth 982 (spider-girl) mayday parker universe.

  • @1nONLY_DRock
    @1nONLY_DRock Рік тому

    I'd not give parker a teaching job. I'd make him a freelance photographer again. And maybe patent a couple of his Spider-Man derived tech for civilian use, like a inferior web formula that makes for a better kind of rope or fabric. Team up with Reed Richards, sell the patent to him, collect royalties. But only enough royalties and money from the freelancer job to get by. That way you can adjust his money struggle levels without going ridiculously over the poverty line or having him find a new job every writer's run, making him relatable as a guy working in the gig economy, and gives him the flexibility to be a vigilante superhero. Bing, bang, boom, done!
    Also, I'd turn Paul into a superpowered parasite. Such a Marty Stu! I'd like nothing more than to find out he's actually leeching off MJ and turning her against Peter Parker all along, but all along he was trapping her in a co-dependent relationship so he could have his power fix. That would make the most sense.

  • @gustavocardozo5468
    @gustavocardozo5468 Рік тому

    Please make a series of vídeos about what if the MCU had every character since phase 1 (not keeping popularity of a character, Phoenix Saga and other sagas being saturated, or any other stuff like that in mind).
    Just, what would a complete MCU, a utopian MCU, look like with full potential since the beggining?

    • @gustavocardozo5468
      @gustavocardozo5468 Рік тому

      Just imagine we seeing Franklin and Valeria growing up during Infinity Saga, Cyclops and Jean's relationship developing throught phases 1-3, just for us to see Cable showing up when the MCU starts dealing with time travel in Phase 4. More characters for the Civil War, more space lore development

  • @colesonlamb
    @colesonlamb Рік тому

    Yo how come every comic book creator has better ideas for their Spider-Man run then the people Marvel actually pays to write the book?

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому

      It’s the editorials. They believe that keeping Peter young in this state is good for sales, but unfortunately it just causes the stories to be bland and indifferent

  • @BSH9009
    @BSH9009 Рік тому

    MARVEL! HIRE THIS MAN, PLEASE!

  • @EmperorDxD
    @EmperorDxD Рік тому +3

    I'm blaming fans for the state of Spiderman because everytime Spiderman progress fans keep complaining that oh this isn't how Spiderman is supposed to be Spiderman isnt supposed to be rich and successful he shouldn't be happy he should always give up his happy
    I will never forgive fans for complainh about Peter having Parker industry never

    • @mayotango1317
      @mayotango1317 Рік тому +1

      The problem is that Peter never had the maturity to be CEO.

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому

      Peter under slott had no maturity to run a company that was a combo of the fans and slotts horrible writing

    • @DevilHunter1994
      @DevilHunter1994 Рік тому

      It can't be considered genuine progress when Parker Industries was just handed to Peter, without him needing to do a thing. Parker Industries wasn't Peter's company. It was Otto's. Peter didn't earn that company on his own, so it makes logical sense that he wouldn't know how to run that company effectively.

  • @ericpeterson8732
    @ericpeterson8732 Рік тому

    Sounds good. There's only one problem. I don't think the editors and writers at Marvel are willing to admit they screwed up. Look at how much they crap on Peter. Everyone and their brother have told us Peter did something terrible. All to create an "event" for #25. Yeah, these a-holes are not ready to give in. Did they really think teens would see themselves in this crap? Honestly, I don't know what it would take to right this ship. Your ideas are strong and good, but nobody is going to listen because they stopped listening to us years ago. Personally I would like an angel dressed like Stan Lee to undo the Mephisto deal. It's quicker and the fallout would be fast and the reaction would be better. Nobody likes Paul and the kids. Nobody like superMJ. All these changes to write around the single greatest problem with Spider-Man: not being with MJ. Let's review: Ultimate Spider-Man: with MJ, Marvel Age Spider-Man: loves MJ (it was even in the title) the best Spiderman arcs with MJ. Avengers Spiderman: with MJ. Quit being jackholes and give us their happy marriage. Give us Mayday Parker. But they won't. Because they hate us and think they know better. No, they don't.

  • @spidermerrik6318
    @spidermerrik6318 Рік тому

    This idea sounds awesome and miles better than what zeb wells has done

  • @a.e.r.o.m.e.c.h9981
    @a.e.r.o.m.e.c.h9981 Рік тому

    Ima be honest I would simply destroy the past 20 yrs of Spider-Man comics directly before Civil War. I would then clean up Peter's story and have a very limited group of writers give him his end goal and a ending to his life. Then anything write afterwards is simply a go between.

  • @22espec
    @22espec Рік тому

    They should kill his aunt May already or make the child that Mary Jane lost in the Clone Saga alive again, maybe because of Norman.

  • @luxzord865
    @luxzord865 Рік тому

    I don't think Marvel could pull something like this now, I just don't like this MJ who cheated on Peter after less than 4 years.

  • @baggin.
    @baggin. Рік тому +1

    If we really want things to change we should quit the book marvel doesn’t care if we hate it

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому

      The sales aren't even good they could care less about the fans

  • @bekzodjonisamiddinov7623
    @bekzodjonisamiddinov7623 Рік тому

    I think we all want mature Spider-man i the end

  • @nooctip
    @nooctip Рік тому

    While I don't agree with everything. It's still a lot better than anything Marvel will give us over the next few years,

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому

      Yeah I mean anything would be better at this point, I kinda just want them to move him on

  • @keeganhall2988
    @keeganhall2988 Рік тому

    Honestly at this point i just want those bloody kids retconned or for it to come out that their peters and that MJ ied to Paul because it was actually the other way around and instead of MJ cheating on Peter during Nick Spencers run that she was Pregnant and when ever wells decides to reveile what happened MJ lied because she knew Paul would get mad at her for having someone elses kids

  • @mr.protagonist5639
    @mr.protagonist5639 Рік тому

    You basically echoed most of what I've been thinking for years in regards to spiderman. Except one thing. One more day needs to be explicitly addressed and it needs to be pointed out how bad of a move taking that deal at all was. Have Peter resolve never to do anything so irresponsible again.

  • @ShinKais3r
    @ShinKais3r Рік тому

    I agree that the modern Spider-Man comics can be A LOT better. But also readers need to realise that Peter isn't getting back with Mary Jane. Get over it already.

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому +2

      Lol no had Pete and mj not been married people would be over it but seeing as that no spiderman fan complained about the marriage or had a problem with it and it got taken away in the worse way possible and has lead to some of the worse writing for Spider-Man the fans will never get over something that should've never been erased in the first place you don't do dumb shit like marvel's been doing with spiderman and expect fans to be quiet

  • @jds3k_616
    @jds3k_616 Рік тому +1

    step one... fire nick lowe

  • @tobluetoblack
    @tobluetoblack 10 місяців тому

    Straight up the only thing that could really save spider man right now is to undo all the evil shit that Marvel has been doing to him for the past 20 years it all started not with just one more day but it started with Gwen Stacy having an affair with the green fucking goblin having his kids and then worst of all Mary Jane knew about it and didn't tell Peter that is some fucked shit right there. Secondly they need to fire all the current writers of spider man and editors and all that because they are the ones who perpetuate this nonsense. Second Paul needs to die horrendously like in the most evil way possible. Since you Uploaded this video the children have disappeared and genuinely spider man fans were rejoicing that those kids are now gone and quite literally or possibly dead. That just shows how much contempt that Spider-Man writers have created between the fans. But all in all I wholeheartedly agree with you they need to have Spider-Man be a damn adult already put the emphasis on the man part because even though he is Spider-Man he like you said acts like a teenager still the relationships are still teenager like the relationships are still stuck in high school when Spider-Man has not been in high school since the goddamn 60s and they still have them at like a child. And have I said how badly I along with many other Spider-Man fans want Paul to die as horrendously as possible?

  • @Oddfosshaugbagi
    @Oddfosshaugbagi Рік тому +1

    Peter mj get back togheter 🤞 and if not im gonna find the one that created this arc and and do to him what Wanda did to the illuminatie 👿

  • @varinstar7
    @varinstar7 Рік тому +3

    The problem with Miles is that they really need to give him his own identity.
    He will never be the real Spider-Man so continually trying to force him into the role is never going to work in the long run.

    • @LewisFilmsProductions
      @LewisFilmsProductions  Рік тому +5

      I think he does from Into the Spiderverse. Those movies are gonna define the character for decades imo

    • @yasserjimenez8070
      @yasserjimenez8070 Рік тому

      @@LewisFilmsProductionsyeah he may be “Spiderman” but everyone knows he will never be “THE” spiderman like Mario said he really needs his own identity.

  • @sesuneiro
    @sesuneiro Рік тому

    Funny how spider-man fans would make a better story than the bums getting paid to do so

  • @-Scrapper-
    @-Scrapper- Рік тому

    fan fiction vibes

    • @retronerds6884
      @retronerds6884 Рік тому

      And it's still better than bullshit marvel's putting out 🤣😭

  • @miguelgallegos7874
    @miguelgallegos7874 Рік тому

    It is ironic that the run does more or less that, les see wgat happens whit MJ así the jackpot, as for the relashionship betewen MJ and Peter, Just lentitud die man.

  • @adambraun1990
    @adambraun1990 9 місяців тому

    This 100%

  • @marcelahernandez369
    @marcelahernandez369 Рік тому

    If only Peter could pass the torch on of Spiderman WITHOUT HAVING TO DIE

  • @zealousforyah1008
    @zealousforyah1008 Рік тому

    Too many Spider-Man in a universe
    The oversaturation of Spider-Man needs to stop.
    Keep it at Peter at main universe
    Miles in another
    Bring mayday along the way in the main
    Build towards Spider-Man 2099 in the main universe and why not make a new origin for him like him being an descendant of Peter/Mayday, so that It could explain the spider powers