FINALLY I found it again! My absolute FAVOURITE horror story. Otis and whoever voices the black guy work so well off of each other. They play their characters perfectly and the ending is such a twist you'd think your neck broke
Audio Producer/Composer here. It was a pleasure working with ***** and Otis Jiry on this production. This marks the first time we've featured MCP as a cast member in a CTFDN production. I think he and Otis did a great job bringing their characters to life. Thanks, too, to Rebecca Peason (Connor). I hope you enjoy the production!
This story, the narration. . . What can I say. . PERFECTION in all areas and in every aspect. BRAVO to all who were involved in it's execution!!!! I am a fairly new fan, having just discovered you within the last few weeks. I can't stop listening, but who would want to stop. Sheer talent and brilliance. Thank you all for the gifts you share with all of us.
Mr. Creepypasta has been given permission by CTFDN to repost this story in its entirety to his own channel on Tuesday 2/24. We would really appreciate it if everyone did everything they could to share that around, as it is our best chance at getting in front of a lot of new potential fans.
Hey I hope you guy do get a lot of new fans. You put out amazing work ill be sure to help get the message around. MrCreepyPasta is an awesome guy and does fantastic work. Your channel will definitely get around. Side note: it would be badass to see a story with MrCreepyPasta and Otis Jiry narrating together. Would be a masterpiece.
Chilling Tales For Dark Nights derp yes I did thanks for correcting. idk why I put Otis. Listening to this made me type his name. I can't quite think of the other guy. Darn
I actually went back and checked out the video that had the person I was thinking of and it ended up being Otis.....lol I guess I meant to say they should do *more* stories together.
It's kind of classic. A campfire story leading up to a terrifying prank. But it also has a great, creepypasta ending! A good and fresh spin on an old idea. I love it!
Wow wow wow! What a collaboration! My new and old favorites working together! Beautifully rendered! Otis, I loved how you introduced your guest narrator, what a tasty pasta indeed!
I love this story and the ending is great!!! We need more stories with Otis Jiry and Mr. Creepypasta they have a true chemistry. Keep up the great work.
BREAKING NEWS: We may....MAY...be featuring Markiplier again soon. And we MAY....MAAAAAAAAAAAAAY.....involve MCP, Otis, and Jeff Clement in it as well. Maaaaaaaaaybe....
Can you do productions on the other no end houses? I really dont like MCP thatmuch, the way his voice is how fast he talks irks me, I need rob dyke and jeff clemet producing audio
Holy crap! This story was amazing and the ending was absolutely bone chilling!!!! It was like a tightening of a rope that finally snapped at the end! I was expecting for Roger and Jackson to grab one of the douchey kids and the fact that they picked Connor, the weakest of the herd, was surprising but it made sense. It's the very definition of predatory hunting right there. The reading and the talent behind it was great!!!! This channel should be more popular!!!! Kind of intimidates me to ever be selected to have one of my stories read by you talented people. Keep up the good work, fellas
Lydia, the one thing I would like to share with you is that writing is passion. However, what one person finds appealing another might not. Yet, you'll never know unless you put yourself out there. It is a scary process but I encourage you to take a deep breath and dive in! Find me on Facebook and I'd be happy to read a story! ;)
+Jeffrey Ebright Thank you for your kind words. my story is sort of in the initial stages. I thought about a woman who finds a strange bug on her bed and mistakes it for a bed bug. Soon after she starts getting attacked by more of these bugs until they invade her body. Her body literally becomes a nest for these creatures, I have a thought for a scene where she rips open her arm to find thousands upon thousands of bugs crawling from her arm. It's not a happy ending for her or the rest of humanity. Whether it is good or not, I'm not sure.
+Jeffrey Ebright Thank you for your kind words. my story is sort of in the initial stages. I thought about a woman who finds a strange bug on her bed and mistakes it for a bed bug. Soon after she starts getting attacked by more of these bugs until they invade her body. Her body literally becomes a nest for these creatures, I have a thought for a scene where she rips open her arm to find thousands upon thousands of bugs crawling from her arm. It's not a happy ending for her or the rest of humanity. Whether it is good or not, I'm not sure.
MrCreepyPasta was absolutely brilliant in this role, and Otis Jiry is as amazing as ever. Loved the collaboration between these two narrators this time around.
Another brilliant reading from Otis Jiry! Love him and Jeff Clement. I like listening to stories read by them when working late at night, like radio, or before bed (okay, bad idea, but their shooting storytelling voices always convince me otherwise). Also, sometimes I use shorter stories for my English class here in Indonesia. Thanks for your hard work, guys, keep the good stories up!
I always love seeing one of these vids in my sub box, there's always something exiting about knowing a story is gunna be good and with this channel I know it's not gunna be a lazy vid. I love how the narrators voices usually match what I think the characters would sound like. Usually I love to read thing myself, being a rather good reader with a good imagination (which, being a kid, is rather over active) but I can't help but love these, especially since u can tell the amount of work put into it. Besides, my high pitched kid girl voice isn't quite right for scary story's ;)
Tatianna Stoesz so glad you enjoyed our production. The voices matching the characters was intentional on this one; Jeffrey Ebright actually wrote it custom for Otis and MCP to voice!
Otis,Mr.Creepypasta You two are most likely my best narrators and putting you together was something I didn't even think of! This is an amazing story! I truthfully loved it. ❤️💚💜💙💛
(evil laughter) Of course monsters are real and sometimes so are the lost souls of the dead, to warn of the monsters being near by. A lot of the time the greatest monsters, are flesh and blood humans preying on the weak. But anyway, folk lore and myths are there as a warning of other real monsters, that have been long forgotten by the masses as true beings. But then again they like it that way. Prey is not good hunting if it is aware of what hunts them. Also great story, as one who listens to all the channels of those involved. I was thrilled to see an story that had some of my favorite voice actors in it. Now if we could get Markiplier, Otis, MCP and CreepsMcpasta in one story I would be in paradise. Hint, Hint. (evil laughter)
It's like putting best ingredients in the most exotic dish. Jeff u did a 'grreeeaaatt' audio production ( always loved it from your channel), Otis your voice is WOW and mrcreepypasta, I love your narration and your channel is my favorite along with ctfdn,creepsmcpasta and natenator77
Otis and Mrcreepypasta, a perfect duo for a great story. I hope they do more collaborations in the future.? I really enjoyed this story, and the ending really took me by surprise. I was like 😱. lol
★ Like this story? ★ Check out our playlist of *ALL* our special guest narrator collaborations! ua-cam.com/video/n9UuEWJ2N-A/v-deo.html Including: ● Markiplier (ua-cam.com/users/markipliergame) ● Cryaotic (ua-cam.com/users/ChaoticMonki) ● Patrick Rothfuss (www.patrickrothfuss.com/content/index.asp) ● Tay Zonday (ua-cam.com/users/TayZonday) ● Rob Dyke (ua-cam.com/users/TheRobDyke) ● Daniel Radcliffe (www.imdb.com/name/nm0705356/) ● Manga Minx (ua-cam.com/users/TheRPGMinx) ● John "HarshlyCritical" Wolf (ua-cam.com/users/HarshlyCritical) ● Mr. Creepypasta (ua-cam.com/users/mrcreepypasta) ● And more!
Tino5135 Liked this, curious about hearing a version where I read it completely on my own? Check it out here, if you dare! ua-cam.com/video/5DznmZxtsVY/v-deo.html/
Anything with Otis Jiry in it is phenomenal. Seriously, that man's voice is so smooth and engaging, I wouldn't doubt if he could go to the bank and be able to cash his electric bill. You read that last sentence correctly.
That was great. The narration, music, sounds. I never liked Mr Creepypastas narrations but this one was great. I didnt really get the ending though, it was a suprise but didnt really understand why they killed children.
This story is on the CTFDN radio mod for Fallout 4. I've been conditioned to expect an attack by super mutant hooligans whenever I hear the name Lowell Frudd.
Thank you Munkee JM. I've actually done a couple movie narrations, the most recent is a film based on a narration I did on OJCPC, "The Thing That Stalks The Fields". It's making the rounds of this years film festival circuit and will be available on DVD soon.
I don't get it. How does a missing child bring in $60,000? The government can and will actually bring charges against a camp for losing a kid, especially one that is a ward of the state, as all foster kids are. So they would actually lose money, and eventually close down.
I'll save you some time and paste the explanation provided in previous comments: The orphanage administrator is a willing accomplice and is keeping the missing child "on the books" to cover up the abduction. The administrator is rewarded as he still charges the state and pockets 60K (the average yearly cost of caring for a foster child). It's your basic evil conspiracy, Lucky. ;)
Ahhhhh, okay. But eventually there would be a social worker coming in to check on the kid, and those are usually surprise visits. I know this for a fact because I lived in foster care for 5 years, and got checked up on by my worker personally about twice a year, if I remember correctly. It was back in the late 90's.
Lucky Vine That is good to hear that they did actually check up on you to make certain that you were alive and well. I hear so many tragic stories about children who are wards of the state dying of neglect and abuse and the cover ups that occur with in the system. I know you were just commenting on a fictional story but I was just happy to hear someone had at least a semi-positive experience in foster care. I think there may be more issues now then there were then due to some fairly stupidly written laws in which the Child Protection Agencies are rewarded for keeping the children out of stable homes and in the system. Or maybe now you just hear of the problems more because of the internet making everything available even if the news is not local. Best wishes to you, take care.
+Lucky Vine Yeah, I'm looking at this at a real world view and not as a story. I use to volunteer at a foster home and the state checks up on the individual child and the place often. Any slight discrepancy they will know.
+avaorchid From my experiences and what I heard that was decades ago that happen normally. Being the internet stories tend to float around and passed off as new. The modern foster care system in most states are very strict and tight. It's not perfect and you will have a few that fall from the cracks but thats is pertty much far and few now. The sad problem now is senior care and how people try to extort government money from the elderly.
well, that took one hell of a turn near the end.
FINALLY I found it again! My absolute FAVOURITE horror story. Otis and whoever voices the black guy work so well off of each other. They play their characters perfectly and the ending is such a twist you'd think your neck broke
Audio Producer/Composer here. It was a pleasure working with ***** and Otis Jiry on this production. This marks the first time we've featured MCP as a cast member in a CTFDN production. I think he and Otis did a great job bringing their characters to life. Thanks, too, to Rebecca Peason (Connor). I hope you enjoy the production!
Jeff....... BRAVO
This story, the narration. . . What can I say. . PERFECTION in all areas and in every aspect. BRAVO to all who were involved in it's execution!!!! I am a fairly new fan, having just discovered you within the last few weeks. I can't stop listening, but who would want to stop. Sheer talent and brilliance. Thank you all for the gifts you share with all of us.
Laura Pompey Wow, what a truly wonderful comment. Thank you for appreciating us, Laura. We're glad you discovered us!
Thanks and welcome to the CTFDN family! Stay tuned, because the horror keeps coming! Just make sure you dim the lights and have your popcorn ready!
Definitely will always be part of my week if not daily. Can't get enough of these spooky pastas
you got two of my all time fav. creepy pasta readers to do one together? thank you :D
It's amazing what can be achieved by asking nicely. :)
This was superb in every sense of that word. Excellent writing, perfectly narrated and sound effects not overdone. 11/10!
These are the ones I like the realistic, good job I was wondering where it was going there, great narrations
Okay... the ending... I DIDN'T EXPECT THAT...
+ς ђ є ч є ภ ภ є Lynn Not everyone expects twists endings.
I was about to go to bed, then I saw that this was narrated by Otis Jiry and Mr. Creepypasta.
I couldn’t resist.
Mr. Creepypasta has been given permission by CTFDN to repost this story in its entirety to his own channel on Tuesday 2/24. We would really appreciate it if everyone did everything they could to share that around, as it is our best chance at getting in front of a lot of new potential fans.
Hey I hope you guy do get a lot of new fans. You put out amazing work ill be sure to help get the message around. MrCreepyPasta is an awesome guy and does fantastic work. Your channel will definitely get around.
Side note: it would be badass to see a story with MrCreepyPasta and Otis Jiry narrating together. Would be a masterpiece.
Brolaire Of Astora The story you are commenting on *is* a collaboration between Otis and MCP. Did you mean someone else?
Chilling Tales For Dark Nights derp yes I did thanks for correcting. idk why I put Otis. Listening to this made me type his name. I can't quite think of the other guy. Darn
I actually went back and checked out the video that had the person I was thinking of and it ended up being Otis.....lol I guess I meant to say they should do *more* stories together.
+Chilling Tales For Dark Nights Good Ol' JR Jim Ross sent me your way. Time to listen while I lay here a 4 am.
-Deadie, a rebel without a Clause.
I know it's a horror story, but the ending left me like, "Well, that was dark."
It's kind of classic. A campfire story leading up to a terrifying prank. But it also has a great, creepypasta ending! A good and fresh spin on an old idea. I love it!
A Fallout 4 radio mod brought CTFDN to my attention. I'm really glad it did. You guys do an incredible job with your stories!
Always good to have Mr. Creepypasta in these videos.
I first found this from a mod on fallout 4. I was so captivated by the story that I stopped everything I was doing and listened to the whole thing
Wow wow wow! What a collaboration! My new and old favorites working together! Beautifully rendered! Otis, I loved how you introduced your guest narrator, what a tasty pasta indeed!
I love this story and the ending is great!!! We need more stories with Otis Jiry and Mr. Creepypasta they have a true chemistry. Keep up the great work.
Wow, that was truly stunning. Brilliant production, amazing story and top notch narration.
Jean De Beer Thanks for the kind words, Jean!
BREAKING NEWS: We may....MAY...be featuring Markiplier again soon. And we MAY....MAAAAAAAAAAAAAY.....involve MCP, Otis, and Jeff Clement in it as well. Maaaaaaaaaybe....
Yes! I loved hearing Markiplier in The Scarecrow. Him, MCP, Otis, and Jeff are my four favorite narrators!
I feel sorry for the writer. ;)
Chilling Tales For Dark Nights I'm looking forward to it! Bless you all
YES MORE MARKIPLIER!!
Can you do productions on the other no end houses? I really dont like MCP thatmuch, the way his voice is how fast he talks irks me, I need rob dyke and jeff clemet producing audio
Otis actually sounds like he would be a voice of a person in this story
The story was written specifically with him in mind, so it ought to sound that way. Thanks for listening!
Wasn’t expecting that!
Dark twist! Awesome!
Jeff, Otis and MCP really made this story come to life. Excellent as always really well done
Saul Silver Thanks, Saul!
Holy crap! This story was amazing and the ending was absolutely bone chilling!!!! It was like a tightening of a rope that finally snapped at the end! I was expecting for Roger and Jackson to grab one of the douchey kids and the fact that they picked Connor, the weakest of the herd, was surprising but it made sense. It's the very definition of predatory hunting right there.
The reading and the talent behind it was great!!!! This channel should be more popular!!!! Kind of intimidates me to ever be selected to have one of my stories read by you talented people. Keep up the good work, fellas
+Lydia Cebreros Go ahead and submit; what do you have to lose?
Lydia, the one thing I would like to share with you is that writing is passion. However, what one person finds appealing another might not. Yet, you'll never know unless you put yourself out there. It is a scary process but I encourage you to take a deep breath and dive in!
Find me on Facebook and I'd be happy to read a story! ;)
+Jeffrey Ebright Thank you for your kind words. my story is sort of in the initial stages. I thought about a woman who finds a strange bug on her bed and mistakes it for a bed bug. Soon after she starts getting attacked by more of these bugs until they invade her body. Her body literally becomes a nest for these creatures, I have a thought for a scene where she rips open her arm to find thousands upon thousands of bugs crawling from her arm. It's not a happy ending for her or the rest of humanity.
Whether it is good or not, I'm not sure.
+Jeffrey Ebright Thank you for your kind words. my story is sort of in the initial stages. I thought about a woman who finds a strange bug on her bed and mistakes it for a bed bug. Soon after she starts getting attacked by more of these bugs until they invade her body. Her body literally becomes a nest for these creatures, I have a thought for a scene where she rips open her arm to find thousands upon thousands of bugs crawling from her arm. It's not a happy ending for her or the rest of humanity.
Whether it is good or not, I'm not sure.
Let me know when you finish. All writers were once readers. :D
I love you guys! These stories get me through the undertaking that is collegiate work
Wow. Never thought about two really good narrators being even better together. Thanks for bringing this to us, CTFDN!
You're very welcome!
MCP and Otis make a great team.
Wow. Another excellent production! Top Notch!
Thanks very much DocGriffon
Wondering why you don't have over a million subscribers already! #love
+Phoenix Valentine We wonder as well. If you enjoy what we do and haven't already, please become a patron today and help support us: goo.gl/wy8B78
Twisted... I like it! 👍🏼
Awesome work from both narrators! Well done, guys.
A story worthy of two of my favorite readers. Well done CTFDN! Well done!
Wow this was just... wow! I didn't see this coming I should have but I didn't! This was the best story I've ever heard! Can't wait to share it!
Great story!
Wow! Insane quality!! Just wow!!
Great job Otis I hope you can keep doing this
Great writing. Great pacing and storytelling. And great surprise twist ending!
this was excellent! and Jeff did a great job !
This couldn't be a better combination. The two of my fovourite narrators together, totaly awesome. Love you guys, stay awesome. :)
MrCreepyPasta was absolutely brilliant in this role, and Otis Jiry is as amazing as ever. Loved the collaboration between these two narrators this time around.
This is the ultimate combination
That was messed up but good Lord was it amazing. Hope to see more collabs with Otis and Mr. Creepy pasta in the future
Another brilliant reading from Otis Jiry! Love him and Jeff Clement. I like listening to stories read by them when working late at night, like radio, or before bed (okay, bad idea, but their shooting storytelling voices always convince me otherwise). Also, sometimes I use shorter stories for my English class here in Indonesia. Thanks for your hard work, guys, keep the good stories up!
Thanks very much, Putri Prihatini. I'm happy to hear you enjoy my work :)
Excellent. The best I've heard so far.
I always love seeing one of these vids in my sub box, there's always something exiting about knowing a story is gunna be good and with this channel I know it's not gunna be a lazy vid. I love how the narrators voices usually match what I think the characters would sound like. Usually I love to read thing myself, being a rather good reader with a good imagination (which, being a kid, is rather over active) but I can't help but love these, especially since u can tell the amount of work put into it. Besides, my high pitched kid girl voice isn't quite right for scary story's ;)
Tatianna Stoesz so glad you enjoyed our production. The voices matching the characters was intentional on this one; Jeffrey Ebright actually wrote it custom for Otis and MCP to voice!
I'm 13 but my voice is really deep and perfect for this
=)
Otis,Mr.Creepypasta
You two are most likely my best narrators and putting you together was something I didn't even think of! This is an amazing story! I truthfully loved it. ❤️💚💜💙💛
wow...this is one the ones,i didnt see it coming...very good work:)
(evil laughter) Of course monsters are real and sometimes so are the lost souls of the dead, to warn of the monsters being near by. A lot of the time the greatest monsters, are flesh and blood humans preying on the weak. But anyway, folk lore and myths are there as a warning of other real monsters, that have been long forgotten by the masses as true beings. But then again they like it that way. Prey is not good hunting if it is aware of what hunts them. Also great story, as one who listens to all the channels of those involved. I was thrilled to see an story that had some of my favorite voice actors in it. Now if we could get Markiplier, Otis, MCP and CreepsMcpasta in one story I would be in paradise. Hint, Hint. (evil laughter)
Calli, if you could get all four to agree to your most excellent casting suggestion then I would be happy to write it for CTFDN.
Yeah, it wouldn't hurt to ask.
Jeffrey Ebright Well, I sent messages to them so we will see what happens.
Calli Williams *insert animated thumbs up emoji here*
All you guys are very talented and I'd love to see more collabs in the future. Props boys.
Aww wow that was spectacular xxx
awesome story. also otis saying the word pasta was pretty funny.
One of the best stories ever. :)
loved loved loved this one!!
This is on the F4 mod and it is AMAZING to listen to in the Far Harbor DLC. (Enhanced probably the most decent area in the game. Its why I'm here)
Welcome!
It's like putting best ingredients in the most exotic dish.
Jeff u did a 'grreeeaaatt' audio production ( always loved it from your channel), Otis your voice is WOW and mrcreepypasta, I love your narration and your channel is my favorite along with ctfdn,creepsmcpasta and natenator77
Ateen, perhaps you should check out my channel, Otis Jiry's Creepypasta Crypt. There's over 130 stories to pick thru.
Otis Jiry's Creepypasta Crypt I didn't know u had a channel. Yes..... More creepypastas
Ateen Thanks for the nice compliment on the audio production! You made my morning :)
Aural Stimulation | Jeff Clement. It was only deserved.
Love your videos... You do give me some good ideas about certain things.
I really loved this one.
Morgan Freeman telling me Ghost Stories... love it
This would make an excellent short film. Heard it on the podcast first, love it.
+The Great Jon So you discovered us through the podcast?
Otis and Mrcreepypasta, a perfect duo for a great story. I hope they do more collaborations in the future.? I really enjoyed this story, and the ending really took me by surprise. I was like 😱. lol
★ Like this story? ★ Check out our playlist of *ALL* our special guest narrator collaborations! ua-cam.com/video/n9UuEWJ2N-A/v-deo.html
Including:
● Markiplier (ua-cam.com/users/markipliergame)
● Cryaotic (ua-cam.com/users/ChaoticMonki)
● Patrick Rothfuss (www.patrickrothfuss.com/content/index.asp)
● Tay Zonday (ua-cam.com/users/TayZonday)
● Rob Dyke (ua-cam.com/users/TheRobDyke)
● Daniel Radcliffe (www.imdb.com/name/nm0705356/)
● Manga Minx (ua-cam.com/users/TheRPGMinx)
● John "HarshlyCritical" Wolf (ua-cam.com/users/HarshlyCritical)
● Mr. Creepypasta (ua-cam.com/users/mrcreepypasta)
● And more!
So freaking good!!! Ah!
Sooo Good.
Good twist guys!
God, why is this channel not more popular?
We'll get there, *****
Another great one. Do you guys take music submissions?
We do. Email us at business (at) chillingtalesfordarknights (dot) com
Bring otis in more his voice is just unique with the mood
And atmosphere
That ending was very bone chilling.
I'm probably the only one in the gym that loves to workout listening to chilling tales!! by the Badass Otis Jiry! he's the best!!
Tino5135 Liked this, curious about hearing a version where I read it completely on my own? Check it out here, if you dare! ua-cam.com/video/5DznmZxtsVY/v-deo.html/
Otis and mr creepy!!! Ahhhh dreams come true
Love your channel, new fan here, and just subscribe to your awesome channel. Keep up the great work guys. :)
+Maya Lee Thanks for listening!
Dismembered hand giving a "like" at the end ! :-) c r e e p y
What a twist.
Mr. Jirys voice is amazing..Where can I hear more from him?
Mia Wikström Here's a great place to start: ua-cam.com/video/KJmfJKr7oZ4/v-deo.html
Chilling Tales For Dark Nights
thank you very much.. btw your videos are amazing. its your fault that I fail my exams cuz Im addicted to your vids :D
O god that was worth the wait
WHAAAT!!!??? How did I miss this colab?? *late arrival in heaven -here!*
Anything with Otis Jiry in it is phenomenal. Seriously, that man's voice is so smooth and engaging, I wouldn't doubt if he could go to the bank and be able to cash his electric bill. You read that last sentence correctly.
My goodness, these stories aren't good for my heart.
Anine De Paepe They may be good if you're constipated, however.
Chilling Tales For Dark Nights true.
Anine De Paepe Its good for my heart :3
Chilling Tales For Dark Nights lol
Hardcore Gaming
Great for you then.
HOLY SHIT MY TWO FAVORITE CREEPY PASTA NARRATORS OTIS AND MCP IN ONE VIDEO!!!!!!
That was great. The narration, music, sounds. I never liked Mr Creepypastas narrations but this one was great. I didnt really get the ending though, it was a suprise but didnt really understand why they killed children.
This story is on the CTFDN radio mod for Fallout 4. I've been conditioned to expect an attack by super mutant hooligans whenever I hear the name Lowell Frudd.
LOL!
I've been playing through survival mode with this chilling tales as the backing track. And let me tell ya, it fits perfectly
Powerful Ending.
I love you, Otis.
yes!
Yes Mr Creepypasta I love you
Dope.
HOLY SHIT!!!! Dat plot twist.
Otis has got to be in movies!! Or put him in the FFF!
Thank you Munkee JM. I've actually done a couple movie narrations, the most recent is a film based on a narration I did on OJCPC, "The Thing That Stalks The Fields". It's making the rounds of this years film festival circuit and will be available on DVD soon.
oh man I can't wait to see it!
So THAT'S what happened to my friend, 45 years ago !
wow!
Hooooly crap, that ending got me. o-0
I don't get it. How does a missing child bring in $60,000? The government can and will actually bring charges against a camp for losing a kid, especially one that is a ward of the state, as all foster kids are. So they would actually lose money, and eventually close down.
I'll save you some time and paste the explanation provided in previous comments:
The orphanage administrator is a willing accomplice and is keeping the missing child "on the books" to cover up the abduction. The administrator is rewarded as he still charges the state and pockets 60K (the average yearly cost of caring for a foster child).
It's your basic evil conspiracy, Lucky. ;)
Ahhhhh, okay. But eventually there would be a social worker coming in to check on the kid, and those are usually surprise visits. I know this for a fact because I lived in foster care for 5 years, and got checked up on by my worker personally about twice a year, if I remember correctly. It was back in the late 90's.
Lucky Vine That is good to hear that they did actually check up on you to make certain that you were alive and well. I hear so many tragic stories about children who are wards of the state dying of neglect and abuse and the cover ups that occur with in the system. I know you were just commenting on a fictional story but I was just happy to hear someone had at least a semi-positive experience in foster care. I think there may be more issues now then there were then due to some fairly stupidly written laws in which the Child Protection Agencies are rewarded for keeping the children out of stable homes and in the system. Or maybe now you just hear of the problems more because of the internet making everything available even if the news is not local. Best wishes to you, take care.
+Lucky Vine Yeah, I'm looking at this at a real world view and not as a story. I use to volunteer at a foster home and the state checks up on the individual child and the place often. Any slight discrepancy they will know.
+avaorchid From my experiences and what I heard that was decades ago that happen normally. Being the internet stories tend to float around and passed off as new. The modern foster care system in most states are very strict and tight. It's not perfect and you will have a few that fall from the cracks but thats is pertty much far and few now.
The sad problem now is senior care and how people try to extort government money from the elderly.
* writing down for prank *
That ending. 😮
What a twist!
Nice story. Surprise ending. LoL
I've been there!
I need to watch these on the toilet because I might shit myself
I was waiting for the scary part...
Damn this is almost scary enough with MCP being so damn happy sounding