5 Lyric Writing Tips - Songwriting Lessons with Stuart!

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  • @Orla-sc2ml
    @Orla-sc2ml 9 місяців тому +382

    If you constantly write lyrics down, interesting thoughts you have, stories you come up with, words that sound nice melodically you’ll honestly never struggle to write lyrics again

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому +27

      👍👍

    • @_Jackkv4
      @_Jackkv4 9 місяців тому +12

      seems to be true is what i recently discovered in my journeys of being a musician. it’s very intriguing the whole process.

  • @alejandrabarrios1554
    @alejandrabarrios1554 9 місяців тому +152

    Tip 1: Avoid obvious rhymes
    Tip 2: use other songs as templates!
    Tip 3: Dont tell how you feel, use metaphors!!!! describe the things that i feel and see when i feel that certain emotion; pick something specific to you
    Tip 4: The 5 word challenge... write down the overall message of the song in 5 words
    Tip 5: make a list of phrases youre not allowed to start with
    Bonus tip: hey yeah no ooh; use those words generously, those words go a long way!!!

  • @Azuhrael
    @Azuhrael 4 місяці тому +85

    Tbh as someone that has ADHD, this man not only managed to keep me attentive but I also learned something AND got a dopamine boost due to his nature. Thanks Stuart!

    • @lindblom9135
      @lindblom9135 4 місяці тому +2

      Same, bro

    • @0UmAndUh0
      @0UmAndUh0 2 дні тому

      Me too, and I'm not even a song writer. 😂

  • @Ryjins
    @Ryjins 9 місяців тому +103

    Stuart please don’t ever stop teaching😭

  • @virgiww
    @virgiww 9 місяців тому +131

    We love you stuart

  • @AmattEUR
    @AmattEUR 9 місяців тому +76

    "My world is too small" hit me as well Stu 🤔

  • @firewalk714
    @firewalk714 9 місяців тому +48

    stuart the best teacher on yt

  • @AzureIXVII
    @AzureIXVII 3 місяці тому +14

    even with the horrible metaphor I understand you. you seem like such a genuine person and are an inspiration for me to keep writing.

  • @leopoldbode8509
    @leopoldbode8509 9 місяців тому +64

    🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥Ouh ouh ouh im still here ouh ouh still here 🔥 🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥

  • @B.moon.
    @B.moon. 9 місяців тому +15

    i love that the color of your shirt fits the color of your eyes

  • @chicken_monkey
    @chicken_monkey 4 місяці тому +13

    "Forget I said anything" 2:23 I coughed up my drink. You're hilarious man xD

  • @releasetease9123
    @releasetease9123 Місяць тому +2

    your authenticity makes this whole lot better. thanks for your tips Stuart little

  • @camillessimo
    @camillessimo 9 місяців тому +40

    I can’t imagine Stuart without a guitar under the arm

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому +6

      Did I even play it at all in this vid?

    • @camillessimo
      @camillessimo 9 місяців тому +10

      @@marinmusic not a single time but I’m sure holding it the secret tip for songwriting

  • @ronaldbean3355
    @ronaldbean3355 9 місяців тому +5

    another thing that helped me a lot is to be more willing to stretch out words for longer than youre usually comfortable with, give em a few bars. also something that makes lyrics feel more natural and impactful at times is to give them more space, for a verse, instead of doing line after line of lyrics, throw some bars of just instrumental between them to let them breathe.
    excellent video stuart, (though i fear you may be lonely and or sad based on very hidden contextual clues)

  • @verysuperkoolepicperson9790
    @verysuperkoolepicperson9790 9 місяців тому +7

    this is the beginning of something great. a series of tips by the one and only. Guitar and Other tips and lessons would be amazing by Stuart. Like how to sing while playing guitar and so on

  • @someonequinof
    @someonequinof Місяць тому +5

    The tip about writing lyrics for a song that already exists is amazing and I use it all the time! And to expand on it, you can take a song with a similar message to what you want to say and think to yourself "If I had to add lyrics to this, what would I write?" and you use those!!

    • @joewilliams5396
      @joewilliams5396 Місяць тому +1

      Yes this is my favourite way to write songs.

  • @Mid_Mountain_Cucumber
    @Mid_Mountain_Cucumber 9 місяців тому +5

    Stewart you're awesome! I dont even own a guitar but i can't stop watching your videos lol
    You always manage to make my day, keep it up bud :)

  • @OscarSchaffer-et1uy
    @OscarSchaffer-et1uy 6 місяців тому +7

    This guy actually made my day so good. Forget the music part, he’s so happy and fun and it’s really cheered me up. Thank you

  • @christiansanders1
    @christiansanders1 9 місяців тому +12

    I really needed to hear tip #2. I’ve been writing lyrics for years and I was always embarrassed by the fact that I had to use existing songs as a template for my own

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому +1

      It’s the best. It gets you started immediately!

  • @lauryv1e
    @lauryv1e 6 місяців тому +10

    I love you pls dont die

  • @abdulrahman-cf4sk
    @abdulrahman-cf4sk 9 місяців тому +6

    STURAT YOU'RE MY FAV TEACHER OF ALL TIMEEEEEEE

  • @largechungus4209
    @largechungus4209 3 місяці тому +2

    11:59 you by radiohead starts with the word you

  • @KernowEDC
    @KernowEDC Місяць тому +1

    So glad I found this channel. Pure entertainment 😂

  • @whiteboywednesday1265
    @whiteboywednesday1265 9 місяців тому +6

    This and the song writing video were helpful a lot THANK YOU FATHER STUART 🙏

  • @alejandrabarrios1554
    @alejandrabarrios1554 9 місяців тому +1

    stuart i am literally so thankful you make these videos i love you

  • @beeg8979
    @beeg8979 9 місяців тому +2

    W this helps I’ve been writing a ton of lyrics at work but I tend to just drift out of a song and start on another when they start sounding repetitive

  • @St4rgzer
    @St4rgzer 9 місяців тому +3

    Stuart is the best music teacher I’ve ever had. ❤️

  • @richardmartinez9284
    @richardmartinez9284 9 місяців тому +6

    We love you stort

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому +7

      My new favorite nickname 😍

  • @filipneculai155
    @filipneculai155 9 місяців тому +3

    I really needed this!! Thanks unc! 😘

  • @skiper129
    @skiper129 9 місяців тому +2

    Thank you Stuart I really liked your green pencil

  • @eddiejoseph.
    @eddiejoseph. 9 місяців тому +1

    The songwriting tutorials/help/tip videos are the best, thank you

  • @jenbriela6762
    @jenbriela6762 5 місяців тому

    you're the best teacher ever stuart istg i learn sm with your vids THANK YOUUUUUUUU

  • @afsdfsda34a_j
    @afsdfsda34a_j 2 місяці тому +1

    Thank you for this

  • @lestat..
    @lestat.. 9 місяців тому +1

    Great tips Stuart ! 🕺👏🏼

  • @drummermomcjs
    @drummermomcjs 4 місяці тому +1

    You are a hoot wo watch! Thank you for these tips. As an aspiring song wri9yter I appreciate them.

  • @kraz000
    @kraz000 9 місяців тому +3

    i love you sm i’ve been wanted this recently

  • @grinningcheshire7695
    @grinningcheshire7695 9 місяців тому +1

    Thank you, Stuart xx

  • @SonicSympothy
    @SonicSympothy 2 місяці тому +6

    When I close my eyes, I hear Sonic The Hedgehog

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  2 місяці тому +3

      When I close my eyes I see sonic the hedgehog

  • @danielcarvalho1599
    @danielcarvalho1599 9 місяців тому +8

    For the bonus tips, I think Hey by Pixies is the best example, because they use Hey, Woo and Yeah in the same phrase

  • @BrianOboylemusic
    @BrianOboylemusic 22 дні тому

    Your personality is hilarious I appreciate the info !!

  • @freakpetux4452
    @freakpetux4452 9 місяців тому +1

    That's exactly what I'm currently struggling with 😔. Thank you a lot, Stu!❤❤

  • @laketoriver
    @laketoriver 9 місяців тому +1

    Saw this at midnight but knew I had to sleep so i’ve been excited since.. Thanks for your wisdom music man 🙏

  • @jessvrooman
    @jessvrooman 2 місяці тому

    stuart u are awesome. thank you

  • @progamerkevin3946
    @progamerkevin3946 9 місяців тому +1

    I will use this in my first song

  • @Nick-qj7ym
    @Nick-qj7ym 6 місяців тому +2

    You are HALARIOUS! 9:30 & 10:15 & 14:35😂🤣Love your sense of humor🙌

  • @Glxxsyqueen
    @Glxxsyqueen 2 місяці тому

    This is so useful and motivational

  • @nottheaverageperson7428
    @nottheaverageperson7428 9 місяців тому

    We Love You Uncle Stuart

  • @rileymooneyham8051
    @rileymooneyham8051 9 місяців тому +2

    These are actually really great tips 👍

  • @LQ2DARESQ
    @LQ2DARESQ 9 місяців тому

    This man is a national treasure

  • @luminadovletova2649
    @luminadovletova2649 4 місяці тому

    Love your energy!

  • @tt0kii
    @tt0kii 9 місяців тому

    I absolutely love ur vids stu , this made my songwriting skills better :)

  • @vikiblue_5651
    @vikiblue_5651 3 місяці тому

    Hello, there are other videos about songwriting? This one was very useful and very funny at the same time! I learnt a lot!

  • @chelseathomas4275
    @chelseathomas4275 9 місяців тому +2

    Love your vids!!! Do you have a video on how to start learning barre chords?

    • @laketoriver
      @laketoriver 9 місяців тому +1

      They’ll get easier over time, sometimes at the beginning they might feel to “stretchy” or might not be clean. You can do this!❤

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому

      You don’t even know. Check out marinmusic.com

  • @nimmisha
    @nimmisha 4 місяці тому

    bestest teacher ever

  • @gracemarr1195
    @gracemarr1195 3 місяці тому

    I LOVE this guy

  • @mitch5944
    @mitch5944 9 місяців тому +2

    Songwriting vids=best vids :)

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому +1

      Oh good, I’m glad you like them. I’ll keep doing song tutorials for sure, but I really like making these.

  • @BossManDayz
    @BossManDayz 2 місяці тому

    The rock metaphor reminded me of I’m just a fan by teezo touchdown

  • @lukitess2176
    @lukitess2176 9 місяців тому +1

    Stuart you are the best🥰🥰

  • @mitch5944
    @mitch5944 9 місяців тому +2

    Have fun in Colorado tommorow

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому +3

      Thanks I actually already got back and I got sick there. But I played fortnight for the first time

  • @Joaquim-i2h
    @Joaquim-i2h 3 місяці тому +1

    you could be a character from The Office XD ty for the tips!!!!

  • @peterfalc9989
    @peterfalc9989 9 місяців тому

    Like the song writing tutorials. Keep them going please! 🙏

  • @vivianrendall7099
    @vivianrendall7099 4 місяці тому

    Great tips thanks 😊

  • @feliciteebimina226
    @feliciteebimina226 9 місяців тому

    Thank you so much stu ive been trying with no succes… i hope these tips help

  • @SnuggeSnugge
    @SnuggeSnugge 7 місяців тому

    You crack me up man, you are very funny and I like your style! ❤

  • @FrogeFella
    @FrogeFella 9 місяців тому

    very good practical advice 👍

  • @celobisicchia8544
    @celobisicchia8544 9 місяців тому

    Stuart the GOAT

  • @I_AmCwispBruv
    @I_AmCwispBruv 3 місяці тому +1

    What about;
    Her look, turning cold,
    Her eyes colored gold
    I kinda like it, what do you think?

  • @greasebag7032
    @greasebag7032 9 місяців тому

    Needed this!! Thank you!

  • @danielcarvalho1599
    @danielcarvalho1599 9 місяців тому

    Love you stuart!! you are amazing

  • @RoneyLMA
    @RoneyLMA 3 місяці тому

    Thanks alllott..

  • @MommaKayleigh
    @MommaKayleigh 5 місяців тому

    Omg I found my new teacher!! 😂thank u so much man!!

  • @mirwanazzayni188
    @mirwanazzayni188 2 місяці тому

    thank you so much uncle stuart and you remind me of dr house for some reason idk

  • @nagitokomaeda6312
    @nagitokomaeda6312 14 днів тому +1

    thanks unc

  • @zvw444x3zefa
    @zvw444x3zefa 29 днів тому

    Good vid!

  • @aasara4
    @aasara4 9 місяців тому +1

    Youre the best

  • @melt3215
    @melt3215 6 місяців тому

    Youre awesome man

  • @JamesMarriottenjoyer
    @JamesMarriottenjoyer 8 місяців тому

    the only guitar teacher ever

  • @ThePhoenixSlayer
    @ThePhoenixSlayer 9 місяців тому +2

    Hey Stuart, I have a question: Do you recommend starting with the lyric-writing, or starting with a melody, and writing lyrics to fit that. Because when I start with lyrics, I always find it hard to think of a unique melody to fit with it, and the exact problem arises the other way round: when I start with a melody, I struggle thinking of lyrics that fit into that tune. A question to add to this is: how do you recommend trying to think of a unique melody. As a huge consumer of music, I sometimes sporadically start humming something unique, but as soon as I realize I'm doing it, my brain automatically just reverts to some random song that sounds kinda similar, and the idea is just lost. Hope you're having a good day (I guess your trip was good as well?)

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому +3

      This is such a big question. Answer #1: every approach is a totally legit approach- lyrics first, melody first, both at the same time… Answer #2: I’ll dive into that in some upcoming vids 😉

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому +3

      Answer #3: I usually write lyrics first, but change them quite a bit as I’m writing the melody.

    • @ThePhoenixSlayer
      @ThePhoenixSlayer 9 місяців тому

      @@marinmusic Thanks Stuart!

    • @dickrichard626
      @dickrichard626 6 місяців тому

      It's easier to make a great piece of music without lyrics. If you write lyrics first then the music gets forced to comfort to them somehow and the actual creating of the music suffers as a result because it's much more difficult where as if you create the music and have basically the entire song worked out it can be used as inspiration for the lyrics because the music should have some kind of vibe already to base your ideas off of. People that write lyrics and then put music to them usually don't make music that is very creative or complex. Many famous bands do the music first, then vocalist goe's to work for reasons that I just described.

  • @KinoKutie
    @KinoKutie 5 місяців тому

    the uh oh at 9:38 tugged at my heart!! ;=;

  • @jakekilemade3313
    @jakekilemade3313 9 місяців тому

    Stuart you are too good

  • @thecoolestmanever9068
    @thecoolestmanever9068 2 місяці тому +1

    i’m gonna write five songs instead of going to sleep now uncle stu, i like your green pencil.

  • @freakpetux4452
    @freakpetux4452 9 місяців тому

    Thank you Stuart

  • @osifoeke
    @osifoeke 9 місяців тому +3

    can you do a modern baseball song tutorial next pls

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому

      Added to the list- thanks!

  • @NOTurbuisness-r5q
    @NOTurbuisness-r5q 9 місяців тому

    Very awesome video.

  • @OWIEEE123
    @OWIEEE123 9 місяців тому

    Stuart, how do you keep reading my mind like this. I wanted to learn Chop suey and saw that you just uploaded it, same thing with apple cider and now just when I want to write a song, you upload this.

  • @J831-t5i
    @J831-t5i 9 місяців тому +1

    Thank you

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  9 місяців тому

      Welcome!

    • @J831-t5i
      @J831-t5i 9 місяців тому +1

      @@marinmusic we need more music theory, you’re a good teacher, whether it being chromatic scales or explaining music theory, I know it’s boring… but you’d break it down well for your followers

  • @Insane_world-y5k
    @Insane_world-y5k 6 місяців тому

    Stuart ! Its too art 🎶 😂❤

  • @adelaide5437
    @adelaide5437 9 місяців тому

    best teacher

  • @hrrrtshapedbox129
    @hrrrtshapedbox129 9 місяців тому

    I LOVE U MAN!!

  • @cheribarkman1784
    @cheribarkman1784 3 місяці тому

    Thanks for the info and the laugh. 😂

  • @zrprchyx
    @zrprchyx 9 місяців тому +2

    always

  • @leoozuni87
    @leoozuni87 9 місяців тому +2

    Tip 1: Avoid Complete, perfect rhymes ; Use imperfect rhymes more often.
    Tip 2: Use an existing song as a template (regarding the rhyme scheme, syllables in each line, rhythm etc)
    Tip 3: Try to be concise with expressing your feelings, thoughts ( add metaphors )
    Tip 4: Sum up the songs meaning, main theme in 5 words (or so)
    Tip 5: Write down clichéd phrases used to express your songs' meaning; Try to be more creative while avoiding those.
    !Extra tip! : Frequent the use of these words -> hey, ooo, yeah, no.

  • @psychostick555
    @psychostick555 9 місяців тому

    You’re the best uncle Stu 😭

  • @VocalEdgeTV
    @VocalEdgeTV 4 місяці тому

    This is quite good.

  • @brandonstrauss5228
    @brandonstrauss5228 9 місяців тому

    Thanks Stuart! Can you do a tutorial of Run by Snow Patrol, I’d be forever grateful.

  • @sy-ik8xm
    @sy-ik8xm 9 місяців тому

    we want to learn your songs too stuart

  • @michalterplyvec4044
    @michalterplyvec4044 9 місяців тому

    Hi stuart I love your energy and I was thinking if you could teach this song called dont know how to love by band caled ever thanks so much

  • @steven4969
    @steven4969 6 місяців тому

    thank u bro

  • @aysnothingmore
    @aysnothingmore 9 місяців тому

    stuart can you make a tutorial on that "disneyland rules" song? i really need that

  • @dannychainsaw8615
    @dannychainsaw8615 9 місяців тому

    thank u Stuart, this is exactly what I needed