Write a Killer Personal Statement! | My Tips & Tricks ✏️

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  • @shehanijayalath9828
    @shehanijayalath9828 3 роки тому

    Such a wholesome video!! Love the last few tips, super practical. Thank you!

  • @giuly_codes
    @giuly_codes 4 роки тому +2

    I'm just in love with her vocab, man, I'd love to sound so sophisticated when speaking!! Great video!! Thanks so much for the tips and the cute smile, you seem like a genuinely amazing person, cheers to that! xxx

  • @Pippi-rippi
    @Pippi-rippi 5 років тому +30

    Best video regarding motivational letters I've seen so far!

    • @edsradio5817
      @edsradio5817 4 роки тому

      Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)25

  • @WriteYourAcceptance
    @WriteYourAcceptance 3 роки тому

    I really like how you explain the "open with. bam!" especially starting with a question or experience. Really helps the reader get them invested in your story. Nice share.

  • @lgd3238
    @lgd3238 4 роки тому

    Hi Jasmin, First of all, Congratulations to getting into all of the Universities that you applied to. Jasmin, A million to one thanks for this fantastic video. You have provided so much clarity for me and I can't thank you enough. I had no idea of where to start, now I've got some structure and can begin. Greatly appreciated. :) All the best to you!Lorraine (South Coast) UK.

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    @lindaramsey5718 4 роки тому +15

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  • @kianabertrand3047
    @kianabertrand3047 5 років тому +8

    Coming from another filipino that wants to get into grad school, this was so helpful, thank you!

  • @socrathink
    @socrathink 3 роки тому

    I'm enjoying the way you explain it. Keep posting things like this. 😊😊

    • @aabsharkhan6883
      @aabsharkhan6883 3 роки тому

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  • @matchasketch8224
    @matchasketch8224 6 років тому +44

    Could you talk about your admission process (interview, any written work, tests, etc.) that got you into Cambridge? Love your vids btw!

  • @juliananixon8412
    @juliananixon8412 4 роки тому

    Thank you so much for this, this is my first time writing a personal statement from Nigeria. A little nervous but i needed this! Thank you and i love your personality too.

  • @akmgulzar
    @akmgulzar 4 роки тому

    Very good. Keep it up!!

  • @ebtsamhussien6134
    @ebtsamhussien6134 3 роки тому

    Thanks for this advice!

  • @HeyItsKora
    @HeyItsKora 4 роки тому +3

    Great video, thank you so much!
    (Just one thing, I hope you don’t mind me saying this but... the ukulele music on a loop is.. I don’t know maybe it’s just me but I can’t stand it, it’s on too many UA-cam videos 😂 sorry I’m not at all complaining, the video was fantastic and that’s the important thing. I just thought I’d mention it, I always prefer when the background music isn’t the same 20 second ukulele loop as many many other videos, I always immediately notice it then can’t help but notice it throughout the video and lose focus 😅)

  • @VictoriaKosasie
    @VictoriaKosasie 7 років тому +5

    thank you so much for making this video! this helped me get over my mental block of writing my personal statement

  • @lucylorenti3370
    @lucylorenti3370 4 роки тому

    Thank you so much for this super helpful video!!

  • @Lucia-lo8kw
    @Lucia-lo8kw 5 років тому +1

    Hi, just wanted to... well, say hi and thank you for your video. I have been watching some that were made by universities, people who read these and so on but I wanted to see one made by a student, someone who has genuinely written it and was on my side of this experience. I liked your tips, you made some great notes and gave me a lot of ideas so really, really, thank you for that. Wish me luck :)

    • @mehakfatima9145
      @mehakfatima9145 5 років тому

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  • @thetkohein1103
    @thetkohein1103 4 роки тому

    Hrrr,What a laughing smile!!! I can't focus on lessons..I've died in that priceless smile..
    I think I fell in your smiles and I fell in love ya.What a simple laughing ya...
    I don't have any words to express more...I've already fallen in love....Because of just your smiles..

  • @mewomeoww5991
    @mewomeoww5991 7 років тому +12

    Thank you !! Your tips are really helpful

  • @fidelemighty3368
    @fidelemighty3368 6 років тому +4

    Thanks for the tips about writing a strong personal statement

  • @snehaguchhait1151
    @snehaguchhait1151 5 років тому +4

    You are just amazing.I loved your video:)

  • @Nat.DLS_
    @Nat.DLS_ 4 роки тому

    thank you, very great tips

  • @Drunkelephant0
    @Drunkelephant0 4 роки тому +13

    0:24 died from laughing , thank for the vid, awasome

    • @edsradio5817
      @edsradio5817 4 роки тому

      Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)25

    • @wilfried.bounsi
      @wilfried.bounsi 3 роки тому

      Very lovable person

  • @joeygo0999
    @joeygo0999 5 років тому +1

    Guuuuurl I loved your intro 😍

  • @kaziislam6009
    @kaziislam6009 4 роки тому

    Excellent

  • @chloerignall8475
    @chloerignall8475 4 роки тому

    This has really really helped me, thank you so much for doing this for us all

  • @onenoface2681
    @onenoface2681 5 років тому +5

    Girl, THANK YOU.

  • @h0197
    @h0197 6 років тому +3

    she is an amazing person

  • @abdelrhmanali9803
    @abdelrhmanali9803 4 роки тому

    Big smile ..
    Big heart 💙

  • @yamunas6641
    @yamunas6641 6 років тому +27

    That smile!..

    • @rubengading
      @rubengading 4 роки тому

      I automatically smiled when she's smiling. I don't know why.

  • @thechristoholic
    @thechristoholic 4 роки тому

    thanks a lot! this was really helpful !

  • @nathanaelcanesa
    @nathanaelcanesa 7 років тому +6

    Thank you for the tips Jasmin :) always knew from the beginning that you're Filipina :)
    Ive stopped studying since 2014 to venture on my own business and now planning to study again.
    just subbed too by the way :) I do youtube videos too :) thanks again

  • @garidmandakh6621
    @garidmandakh6621 4 роки тому

    im trying to write my personal essay, and actually this video has helped me a lot

  • @benyan3077
    @benyan3077 6 років тому +1

    Thank you soooooooooooooo much! You really help me saving tons of money!!!!!!!!!!

  • @hana2ha
    @hana2ha 5 років тому

    Appreciate this so much!!!! You are great, and give amazing advice!

  • @luga8709
    @luga8709 5 років тому

    Very helpful!!!

  • @崔宇婷-f1i
    @崔宇婷-f1i 5 років тому

    Thanks for your video :) Very helpful!💗

  • @carolinetaylor7653
    @carolinetaylor7653 4 роки тому

    Thank you so much, this was very helpful! :)

  • @griffinprojegg6275
    @griffinprojegg6275 7 років тому +26

    Hi Jasmin,
    Is there any chance you could do a video reading your PS or possibly share it? I'm thinking of applying to Land Economy in Cambridge and more courses like PPE in UCL & LSE and am having trouble figuring out how to gear my statement toward covering all of these.
    Thanks!

    • @hhamza10
      @hhamza10 6 років тому

      Griffin Projegg have you already started uni? I’m applying this year for land economy, any tips would be helpful?

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  • @mahrukhiftikhar4512
    @mahrukhiftikhar4512 6 років тому +7

    One thing i dont get is that you applied for different courses in different universities, that means different interests, how did you manage to write about all of them, one can not have five different interests which they can openly write about. How you understand 😅
    Because I want to apply for Architecture, but have studied science till now. I do not know how i could use that to emphasise on my interest in Architecture
    I will be applying for medical as well as architecture, architecture being my second choice, idk how to write for it

  • @shihuiruan7259
    @shihuiruan7259 6 років тому +1

    Thanks a lot. Really helpful

  • @stefanysoh557
    @stefanysoh557 7 років тому +1

    Already a fan xx

  • @brezjnev6372
    @brezjnev6372 5 років тому +2

    thank you for this!

  • @vaasuji
    @vaasuji 6 років тому

    Good video. Very useful

  • @rotes3106
    @rotes3106 5 років тому

    Good job

  • @thechristoholic
    @thechristoholic 4 роки тому +3

    You have such a beautiful smile :) God bless you girly

  • @gulzaibtareen2923
    @gulzaibtareen2923 6 років тому

    More than enough. Thank you.

  • @bettysiwa3065
    @bettysiwa3065 5 років тому

    this is so great

  • @emr6842
    @emr6842 5 років тому +5

    Hey, I was just wondering how you applied for a different course at UCL because you can submit only one personal statement ? It would be very helpful if you answered because I want to apply to two diff courses but I’m so confused on how to go about it. Thanks! V helpful video

    • @howelse
      @howelse 5 років тому

      literally same. Don't know what to doo

  • @aldsl1
    @aldsl1 6 років тому

    who's probably everybody haha good video xx

  • @sherrysherryuk
    @sherrysherryuk 5 років тому

    thank you for your tips:)

  • @pineapple4578
    @pineapple4578 6 років тому

    I love you. Thank you so much!!!!

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    @kimberley1235 4 роки тому

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  • @robinsonfaye5371
    @robinsonfaye5371 4 роки тому

    hello Jasmin thanks for your helpful video !! I'm from France and willing to apply for universities in the UK but I don't quite get a really simple aspect of the personnal statement... do we only need to write one ?? does it mean it will be one single statement for 5 universities, which means we don't adress ourselves directly to one university by saying something like "I'd like to follow the course you offer..." Thanks for your help !!

  • @gaur_abhishek
    @gaur_abhishek 3 роки тому

    At 7:03, spelling of environment is wrong.

  • @rachelmcivor8039
    @rachelmcivor8039 7 років тому

    Hey, just found your video, I'm trying to get myself together for applying to Uni next year. For the Uni I really want to go to they don't do interviews or anything, you just send a personal statement. (I'm applying to an Arts uni) I'm just worried that it might be bad that I only want to go to this Uni, its kind of an all or nothing situation because I feel the course is unique and the best for what I want to learn. I'm afraid my college may not agree with my mind set and may try to force me to apply to others as well. I guess its all just feeling like a lot and after quite a tough time of it at college my confidence is quite shaken and I don't want that to come through in my Personal Statement. Any tips or advise? :)

  • @MTSAc00k1e
    @MTSAc00k1e 7 років тому +1

    What courses did you apply for at LSE, UCL, King's and Edinburgh? Land Economy is so specialised :/

  • @lotvandermeer7759
    @lotvandermeer7759 4 роки тому

    Hey, Im working on my personal statement and your video is really inspiring! Im applying to a hotelschool (hospitallity managment), so a whole different course, but after seeing your video I really wanna see your letter to get a better view of what you mean. Is there anyway you could share your letter with me?

  • @didakissy
    @didakissy 5 років тому +2

    what to write in case I´m applying to different course? I´m studying economics, but I want to apply for multimedia design :/

  • @archiebunker4108
    @archiebunker4108 4 роки тому

    Are you from the Philippines?

  • @willsonbasyal7883
    @willsonbasyal7883 7 років тому +6

    So, you applied to a bunch of schools in the UK and also to some US Universities? How did it all go, and how did you decide which school to pick?
    And BTW, what is an IB?
    Also BTW, These videos are wonderful! I hope you'll keep updating about your ventures. ☺☺

    • @willsonbasyal7883
      @willsonbasyal7883 7 років тому

      Jasmin Dalsgaard Well, I am an A Level student myself and I was thinking, may be, I should apply to a couple of schools in the UK.
      What things should i consider before i do that?
      I mean, what are the requirements that are different from those of US universities?

    • @willsonbasyal7883
      @willsonbasyal7883 7 років тому

      Jasmin Dalsgaard and thanks again for the reply! ☺☺🙂

    • @willsonbasyal7883
      @willsonbasyal7883 7 років тому

      Jasmin Dalsgaard Thank you☺☺ I think I will be applying to Princeton under its EA program, and a couple of other top and a few medium schools in the RD. Also, the A Level results will be out this Thursday. Patiently waiting..

    • @bere.garcia
      @bere.garcia 7 років тому +1

      Willson Basyal How did you do? Haha I'm curious, you seem very intelligent

    • @willsonbasyal7883
      @willsonbasyal7883 7 років тому

      Haha, Thanks for the concern! and I did pretty well, although I had high hopes for Chemistry!
      Well, I took five A Level Courses and I received A*s in Physics and Biology and As in Chemistry, Maths, and General Paper.

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    @VladyslavKL 4 роки тому

    🕊

  • @MG-ui8jk
    @MG-ui8jk 5 років тому +1

    I never involved in any extracurricular activities but rite now I am preparing to apply for scholarship, what do I think

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      @mehakfatima9145 5 років тому

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  • @ikraminnorfolk6299
    @ikraminnorfolk6299 6 років тому

    thank you so much

  • @andaraatteenaputri7599
    @andaraatteenaputri7599 7 років тому +1

    Please share your PS! :)

  • @LeeHutchingsdrumsUK
    @LeeHutchingsdrumsUK 4 роки тому +1

    A question: Is there a difference between personal statements made by young students and mature students, or are both the same?

    • @marwa1698
      @marwa1698 4 роки тому

      they are both the same but you need to have a high school diploma in case you don't have

  • @sealy999
    @sealy999 5 років тому

    Why did you choose Stanford over Cambridge ?

  • @sharaththatikonda5386
    @sharaththatikonda5386 5 років тому

    Can we get a sample letter of it?

  • @santiagodelvalle1910
    @santiagodelvalle1910 4 роки тому

    what does it bam means?

  • @HyunKang650
    @HyunKang650 5 років тому +11

    could you go over my personal statement :)

  • @sakhonephommavongxai5546
    @sakhonephommavongxai5546 5 років тому

    What should I start with my motivation letter

  • @kristintalia1688
    @kristintalia1688 7 років тому +6

    Hi! I'm interested in LSE, but i can't seem to find information about the entry requirements for international students, What's the minimum subject taken for the A Levels? Is it fine if the subject that i take is the science-ish subject?(math,bio,chem,physics) because i was interested in biotech before, but now i'm interested in business (but i've already take that 4 subject for my a levels)

    • @bhoomig1437
      @bhoomig1437 6 років тому

      Kristin Talia My sister is going LSE so I know a lot about it and she has taken the same a levels. I hope this helps!

  • @therealbs2000
    @therealbs2000 4 роки тому

    Great smile lol

  • @rue6224
    @rue6224 6 років тому

    Hala ateee paturo po! 3 days na kong tulala kakaisip sa personal statement ko. Huhu

  • @jobinkj5915
    @jobinkj5915 5 років тому

    May i send the model

  • @carolllj
    @carolllj 6 років тому

    thank u sooooooo much (although i don't apply for UK

  • @liveyounganastasia
    @liveyounganastasia 4 роки тому +2

    Hi, I have a big concern. I've seen a lot of videos but my question is: when you chose several universities with different courses, how do you write your statement? The tip of putting a certain course is useful to show interest towards one particular uni but then won't the others get offended? Can you still get accepted without referring to a particular course? I don't know why some info seems contradicting to me, or maybe it's because I chose courses that vary slightly in its subject.... But I honestly don't know what to do.
    Would really appreciate if someone could help me. Thank you!

  • @kyling1231
    @kyling1231 7 років тому +2

    Girl where was this when I was writing mine?

  • @allisonsimbana9272
    @allisonsimbana9272 5 років тому

    Did you get admitted in any university?

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  • @pituitary
    @pituitary 3 роки тому

    08:26 can I ask you to see my personal statement?? Jasmin

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    @MuhammadSarwar20 4 роки тому +1

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  • @abhishekkulkarni7057
    @abhishekkulkarni7057 7 років тому

    where did you get in? what are you studying?

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    • @edsradio5817
      @edsradio5817 4 роки тому

      Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)25

  • @jeffmeskabru1525
    @jeffmeskabru1525 5 років тому

    Nice sister

  • @lakhvirsingh1529
    @lakhvirsingh1529 6 років тому

    Can you help me to write SOP

  • @ranzanyadav9758
    @ranzanyadav9758 5 років тому

    @jasmindalsgaard have a crush on you😍😍

  • @malekmestiri9715
    @malekmestiri9715 5 років тому

    fuck the background music, however, this is so benefical

  • @stella7789
    @stella7789 6 років тому +1

    Hey @jasmindalsgaard ! Thank you so much for this video, is there any chance I can get you to proof read my personal statement? That’d be so great! Hope to hear your reply soon

  • @alexanderjones5920
    @alexanderjones5920 7 років тому +4

    Hi Jasmin! Thanks so much for this amazing video. I'm thinking of applying to UK universities next year (mostly the same as the ones you applied - except for Edinburgh and UCL). I'm applying for Economics as well but I just don't quite know how to write a good personal statement that will appeal to the universities. Is it possible for you to share yours as a reference? (my email is alex.jones17633@gmail.com) Or can you make a video reading out your UCAS personal statement?

  • @hareshvharanlavindran5650
    @hareshvharanlavindran5650 7 років тому +1

    Is an AAA enough to get into LSE for accounting and finance?

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    @veronikagarsson4746 4 роки тому +20

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  • @camcwells
    @camcwells 5 років тому

    Why is no one subscribed?

  • @farukhshees6588
    @farukhshees6588 5 років тому

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  • @devtejwani3945
    @devtejwani3945 7 років тому

    what is deadline for UK and Canada universities for application

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    @MIA-ho9jx 4 роки тому

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  • @andrewgebraelart
    @andrewgebraelart 4 роки тому

    you're very cute!