Very good. One thing, when bringing someone out of a stasis machine mention that they straighten their uniform or something like that... cause in my mind was the image when Neo was eject from his pod in the Matrix, he wasn't dressed... so lol kinda though she wasn't either... lol. Good story though.
But don't worry, because here on the channel you always have something new and fresh for anyone who wants to copy to come later... so, it's always better to watch it here first... lol
great story.....I am sick of hearing that word PALPABLE.... that is in every other story no matter who is telling the story... WHO REALLY USES THIS WORD.... in the thousands of book from multiple different formats.... maybe one or two times I have seen it used...... Thank you for having more intelligence
Very good. One thing, when bringing someone out of a stasis machine mention that they straighten their uniform or something like that... cause in my mind was the image when Neo was eject from his pod in the Matrix, he wasn't dressed... so lol kinda though she wasn't either... lol. Good story though.
Good story. "Fine then, you are on dish duty:, Now be on the alert for a half dozen copycat stories.
But don't worry, because here on the channel you always have something new and fresh for anyone who wants to copy to come later... so, it's always better to watch it here first... lol
and watch out for the same story with different caracters
great story.....I am sick of hearing that word PALPABLE.... that is in every other story no matter who is telling the story... WHO REALLY USES THIS WORD.... in the thousands of book from multiple different formats.... maybe one or two times I have seen it used...... Thank you for having more intelligence
🤔Tell me to take it back
@@FictionalReimagined it was a complement that you didn't use Palpable....
Never heard that word until I started listening to U Tube. Every time I hear that word, I cringe.
Take it back.@@FictionalReimagined
@@FictionalReimagineddefinitely a compliment.
It was an awesome story until the Woman killed EVERY Human in Cryo Sleep. Talk about cold hearted because She’s the ONLY important person.
so you would like a world being run by people, like Khan and his super humans from Star Trek?.