"His choices were either to impress a violent alien super-predator by fighting a living nightmare twice his size or chicken out and just shoot the damn thing." Greatest line ever written, especially in a romance story.
There are so many of these stories out in just the last few weeks. I really liked this one, some are ok and others suck but to find this on accident was great.
A LOT have popped up using AI, and all of those sound like they were written by an 8th grader, AND have no sense of pacing, usually paired with third person perspective. I dont know which redditor wrote this under the same name, but aggrosquirrel did a narration of this... Like, 2+ years ago.
"Humans don't eat my ass" gavee pause and forced my to dissect your comment, omfg the mental images and misunderstanding is unreal... Use punctuation PLEASE
Do you truly thought, that Steven told them the thruth...? Even after the doctor mentioned, that she warned him, that the ship belongs to slavers? No, he told them that, so they would think of him less as a threat!
That final panckes bit is a little more revealing than you might think. it implies that humanity is actively trading food with them delivering good like syrup and pancakes, witch also tells us that humanity has safe trade networks meaning they probably beat the shit out of some people to clear the way over.
Not to mention comforts like electricity, given the way erinis talked of her culture, they were only somewhere in the medieval era. Still using bow and arrow and only having clothes of rough stitched leather. And the talk of lights being quickly turned on in the bedroom rather than lighting torches or lanterns.
I when stories like this point out the fact that colonizing other planets will affect the evolution of the species. Some stories have human colonization on a crazy scale while menshoning our adaptability, but adaptability comes true evolution, so that's one of the many things i like about this story.
hello storyteller how are you doing could you please make more chapters to this story i am legally illiterate with some mental problems too it needs more story of his family and his friends ah i can do it just asked you to make more stories of these characters if i could fund money to you i think i would so farewell fellow traveler...
@@carnifexor3010 hello storyteller how are you doing on home planet you are not insane you're normal like everybody else on this planet in a insane society you would appear normal and a normal person would appear insane are you gonna make more chapters to this story this person finds the love of his life with kids and everything of a princess and his very happy...
Old story but its a good one so I am happy to listen to it again. I don't remember if I read it or it was an audio book but i do remember it was divided up into chapters so its nice to get it all in one audiobook. A nice respite from the awful AI stories, I call them Hollywood class stories, very low quality and mostly with a girl boss super soldier, admiral or whatever the Hollywood woke feminist culture love pushing for hundreds of millions loss because nobody likes these dumpster fire stories. This story has a well written female alien main character but its not full of "The Message", its well written and a breath of fresh air.
I've noticed the girl boss trend in these stories, but most the one i listened to they are comander or captin of a fleet or something like that, but nothing that women aren't capable of. And I don't mind the girl boss thing as long the story is good.
What are you using for the AI voices? Got a friend who is a mute, who want to have her stories told. She is an excellent writer. Unsure what program to use though, with the best and most varied AI voices.
Very good story, I enjoyed it, but my only problem is a problem I find on all these types of storytelling Chanel. I would like to see some accurate character images just so I can visualize the scene better. I mean, I can't even imagine the female alian in this story, and that make the ending seem off, how can they procreate. Anyway this story is going on my Playlist as one of the best.👍
hello storyteller how are you doing this lovely evening i have listened to your story and i love your story it is a very good story i am hoping you are going to make more chapters to this story or he takes his family two his home on earth thank you very much for this story has moved one's heart...
The ending went from intelligent life to just straight deploracy worse the descriptive deletion when they talked about eliminating death worlders that *take that type* of human fears of the unknown and dangerous and crank it up to 15000 Sorry the damn auto correct hates me always has 😅
I do like the story, but the perspective between Steven and Ari changes wildly. First, she's smaller than him and he outweighs her significantly, later, she's taller than him and 150kg.
greetings fellow traveller how are you doing on home planet i have a question for you about this story have you made this story into a book i would like to purchase it thank you very much for the story peace be with you on your pathway in life farewell...
Lol I half agree... but and I'm a proud meat eater BTW... I'd rather gamble on being vegan to a spacefaring species... best case for a species that can manufacture gells that taste like shrimp is pity or worst revulsion (stupid uptight aliens)
33:09 That's bullshit. Humans are omnivores. Yes, we are evolved (a better term to use than "designed") to eat meat. Not exclusivly or even primarily, but we are evolved to eat meat. And yes, we actually can eat raw meat, though it's unwise to eat it in large amounts since after thousands of years of preparing meat before consumption the tolerance of our digestive system for raw meat has significantly decreased. It's fine if humanity has collectivly switched to a vegetarian diet in the setting for moral reasons, it's fine if humans in the setting have lost the ability to digest raw meat, but saying it's because humans are not evolved to eat meat is just bullshit.
He's lying...he also lied about his "clan" or "tribe" name...it's pretty obvious he's playing harmless and dumb. Ya know what the big problem with the "we evolved from predators so we're badasses" stories is? Being a herbivore or not being the top of the food chain doesn't mean you're harmless or not aggressive or incapable of horrific violence. Elke and moose will fuck you up, hippo's kill and injure more people than crocodiles and alligator's, casually walking into a field with horny or angry bull is just asking to get crippled or killed...bison, water buffalo the list goes on and on...hell even swans and gease will attack and fight something twice or three times their size with little hesitation. Humans aren't even impressive predator's biologically...if life was an RPG game we'd be a weird glitch or exploit build with high intelligence and stamina stats but little else.
@@Shamelesscritique1 Did i say anything even close to "we are predators therefore we are badass"? I was just annoyed that there apparantly still are people that bring up this most stupid of stupid arguments for a vegetarian diet the "we aren't even evolved to eat meat" bullshit argument. And yes, technically humans aren't even really predators on a biological level. We were more scavangers and maybe carrion eaters. We only became predators (or at least succesful predators) after we developed tool use. Wether or not he's lying i'm not so sure about. I should say that i haven't listened much further than minute 35 at the time of writing this comment. And the whole "clan" and "tribe" thing i actually attributed to the translator having difficulties translating the human concepts into something the alien would understand. If that turns out to be the case i'd gratulate the author for bringing some realism into the situation. Because many authors just have their universal translators work perfectly without giving any consideration to how difficult it really is to translate a language into a different language.
@tranquilthoughts7233 Hey you shared what you thought was a valid complaint (it wasn't) so I decided to share what I thought was a better one...ya know concerning this genre. No offence but judging by your two comments...you seem prone to misunderstandings...I'm going assume english is your second language and the painfully obvious is being lost in translation. Stating the other possible conclusion would be rude.
Wow how dumb we aren’t carnivorous 😂 back teeth are for grinding plant matter 😂 It’s long been known that we have ALWAYS been omnivores and another fallacy in the character is that the character would not be muscular being a vegetarian or any other plant eater as you cannot get enough of the essential proteins I understand everybody has political leanings or beliefs, but let’s try to stay somewhat in reality yes it’s science fiction. We understand that but when you’re involving humans, you still have to stay with reality now if you wanna make up a race and they do whatever lock yourself out that’s as bad as saying what they’ve been saying about men and women today it’s dumb.
I've seen muscular bulls that only eat grass. Plenty of plants combinations that provide full protein like rice and beans, and several of the older grains that are complete proteins on their own.
Don't worry most Vegan kill themselves with there diets by the time there 40 anyway! or at least look like death warmed over, even with there "supplements"
@DarthTinderalla-qm9zw Please take a moment and go look at the digestive tract d😂ifferences between cow like animals and humans, the very first being that they literally have 2 stomachs in order to be able to process the massive amount of grass that they eat compared to their body weight on a daily basis. To say that Humans can live on grass and grains because cows do is like saying that humans can live on flower pollen because bees do. Of course, the other side of that argument is look at what the big cats, dogs and even gorillas eat when given a choice
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😆 Lovely: Humans are vegetarians, jumping from tree to tree. Stephen would be a perfect politician. Lying without batting an eye. A real Human.
lying right through his sharp omnivorous teeth, he does his ancestors proud.
I wish the story maker could have used this a bit better but still darn good story.
Yeah, at first I thought the guy was intentionally lying to seem less threatening.
Grandma, why are your muscles so big and bulky, said red riding hood calmly.
@@ArcLightShock37he was.
One of the best Storys from this genre , time flew by
"His choices were either to impress a violent alien super-predator by fighting a living nightmare twice his size or chicken out and just shoot the damn thing." Greatest line ever written, especially in a romance story.
There are so many of these stories out in just the last few weeks.
I really liked this one, some are ok and others suck but to find this on accident was great.
😊😅
Same! The wholesome is out of this world 😅
A LOT have popped up using AI, and all of those sound like they were written by an 8th grader, AND have no sense of pacing, usually paired with third person perspective.
I dont know which redditor wrote this under the same name, but aggrosquirrel did a narration of this... Like, 2+ years ago.
This was a pretty good story - stayed entertaining the entire time. Well made!
This is pretty good. Better than most. The main issue with most of these is the lack of character development.
One of the best Storys from this genre , time flew by-lololololol AWESOME a tale well told
Liked the ending of this one... DEfinitely one of the better stories, good sense of humor too...
This is my second time listening to this story, and it was just as much fun. Thanks for that.
Definitely written by a vegetarian humans don't eat meat my ass we are omnivores
"Humans don't eat my ass" gavee pause and forced my to dissect your comment, omfg the mental images and misunderstanding is unreal...
Use punctuation PLEASE
He was LYING because he knew what was going on.
@@jasonyoung581ego all around
@@jakeand9020No he wasn’t doing on purpose
Do you truly thought, that Steven told them the thruth...? Even after the doctor mentioned, that she warned him, that the ship belongs to slavers? No, he told them that, so they would think of him less as a threat!
I am such a sucker for these stories and this one has been a lot of fun.
That final panckes bit is a little more revealing than you might think. it implies that humanity is actively trading food with them delivering good like syrup and pancakes, witch also tells us that humanity has safe trade networks meaning they probably beat the shit out of some people to clear the way over.
Not to mention comforts like electricity, given the way erinis talked of her culture, they were only somewhere in the medieval era. Still using bow and arrow and only having clothes of rough stitched leather. And the talk of lights being quickly turned on in the bedroom rather than lighting torches or lanterns.
I need more of these literally star crossed lovers. lol great story.
I when stories like this point out the fact that colonizing other planets will affect the evolution of the species.
Some stories have human colonization on a crazy scale while menshoning our adaptability, but adaptability comes true evolution, so that's one of the many things i like about this story.
This is a good story. Very enjoyable. 😊
This is an EXCELLENT story and very entertaining….
Well done! Very well done.
Boop the deathworlders snoot
Good story❣️
Great story!
The front teeth are for plant matter the rear ones are for bones and also plants like grass and the sharp ones are for tearing meat.
This was an absolutely awesome story
This is yet another story about pancakes!
Makin’ Bacon pancakes 🥓🥓 🥞
😂😂😂😂😂😂🎉🎉🎉party time
PANCAKES!😱🙀😁😺
It is indeed about some kind of batter,, pancakes,,,maybe,,,,baby most definitely
@@kitkakitteh 🦜🦜
Aggrosquirrel did it first and better. But good job all the same.
This was the best story I have ever heard 👍👌🖖
Good fun, enjoyed it
One of my favorite stories
I hadn't thought that Chen Blackwood could do that with pancakes 🤔
Cute story!
Well received full of intrigued good story line
for A.I. that was really good, it would make a good movie.
The story is not ai generated, it's a tts of a story in r/HFY. Although the images are AI generated
@@AsianEgg explains why it was good
I wanna hear what happened during those 10 years.
Beautiful story
hello storyteller how are you doing could you please make more chapters to this story i am legally illiterate with some mental problems too it needs more story of his family and his friends ah i can do it just asked you to make more stories of these characters if i could fund money to you i think i would so farewell fellow traveler...
I'm insane now
@@carnifexor3010 hello storyteller how are you doing on home planet you are not insane you're normal like everybody else on this planet in a insane society you would appear normal and a normal person would appear insane are you gonna make more chapters to this story this person finds the love of his life with kids and everything of a princess and his very happy...
@@hillbillyhippipe I am insane in the membrane, I'm insane got no brains
That was a great story
Really good story. I enjoyed quite a bit.
I think the most unbelievable part of this story is an American using kilograms as a unit of measurement.
Actually most of us in technical fields have no problems moving back and forth between the two units of measurement.
That was great
Old story but its a good one so I am happy to listen to it again. I don't remember if I read it or it was an audio book but i do remember it was divided up into chapters so its nice to get it all in one audiobook. A nice respite from the awful AI stories, I call them Hollywood class stories, very low quality and mostly with a girl boss super soldier, admiral or whatever the Hollywood woke feminist culture love pushing for hundreds of millions loss because nobody likes these dumpster fire stories. This story has a well written female alien main character but its not full of "The Message", its well written and a breath of fresh air.
I've noticed the girl boss trend in these stories, but most the one i listened to they are comander or captin of a fleet or something like that, but nothing that women aren't capable of.
And I don't mind the girl boss thing as long the story is good.
Well someone needs to pat themselves on the back. This was a brilliant storey and enjoyed all of it.
What are you using for the AI voices? Got a friend who is a mute, who want to have her stories told. She is an excellent writer.
Unsure what program to use though, with the best and most varied AI voices.
Not sure what they use, but ClipChamp is a good one I've used before!
The second story is pretty good as well
Very good story, I enjoyed it, but my only problem is a problem I find on all these types of storytelling Chanel. I would like to see some accurate character images just so I can visualize the scene better. I mean, I can't even imagine the female alian in this story, and that make the ending seem off, how can they procreate.
Anyway this story is going on my Playlist as one of the best.👍
hello storyteller how are you doing this lovely evening i have listened to your story and i love your story it is a very good story i am hoping you are going to make more chapters to this story or he takes his family two his home on earth thank you very much for this story has moved one's heart...
The ending went from intelligent life to just straight deploracy worse the descriptive deletion when they talked about eliminating death worlders that *take that type* of human fears of the unknown and dangerous and crank it up to 15000
Sorry the damn auto correct hates me always has 😅
I do like the story, but the perspective between Steven and Ari changes wildly. First, she's smaller than him and he outweighs her significantly, later, she's taller than him and 150kg.
This is really good tho..... Why. How.
30:00 Oh, he be gaslighting! lol
If we're a 12, I wanna hear a story about meeting a 15-20!!! XD
Lost me absolutely at the part where he says nasa, usa and vegetarian.
greetings fellow traveller how are you doing on home planet i have a question for you about this story have you made this story into a book i would like to purchase it thank you very much for the story peace be with you on your pathway in life farewell...
"this epside of Farscape is brought to you by Sprite"
02:05:00 "Single combat is honorable, however we don't have the time, or resources to do this one at a time"
Nice 👍👍🇺🇲
They keep reposting the same stories.
Babe...No! 🤣
BTW the Vegan Horse (you know what) ruins the story!
Lol I half agree... but and I'm a proud meat eater BTW... I'd rather gamble on being vegan to a spacefaring species... best case for a species that can manufacture gells that taste like shrimp is pity or worst revulsion (stupid uptight aliens)
where do all those HFY AI channels coming from..wtf?
33:09 That's bullshit. Humans are omnivores. Yes, we are evolved (a better term to use than "designed") to eat meat. Not exclusivly or even primarily, but we are evolved to eat meat. And yes, we actually can eat raw meat, though it's unwise to eat it in large amounts since after thousands of years of preparing meat before consumption the tolerance of our digestive system for raw meat has significantly decreased.
It's fine if humanity has collectivly switched to a vegetarian diet in the setting for moral reasons, it's fine if humans in the setting have lost the ability to digest raw meat, but saying it's because humans are not evolved to eat meat is just bullshit.
He's lying...he also lied about his "clan" or "tribe" name...it's pretty obvious he's playing harmless and dumb.
Ya know what the big problem with the "we evolved from predators so we're badasses" stories is?
Being a herbivore or not being the top of the food chain doesn't mean you're harmless or not aggressive or incapable of horrific violence.
Elke and moose will fuck you up, hippo's kill and injure more people than crocodiles and alligator's, casually walking into a field with horny or angry bull is just asking to get crippled or killed...bison, water buffalo the list goes on and on...hell even swans and gease will attack and fight something twice or three times their size with little hesitation.
Humans aren't even impressive predator's biologically...if life was an RPG game we'd be a weird glitch or exploit build with high intelligence and stamina stats but little else.
@@Shamelesscritique1 Did i say anything even close to "we are predators therefore we are badass"? I was just annoyed that there apparantly still are people that bring up this most stupid of stupid arguments for a vegetarian diet the "we aren't even evolved to eat meat" bullshit argument.
And yes, technically humans aren't even really predators on a biological level. We were more scavangers and maybe carrion eaters. We only became predators (or at least succesful predators) after we developed tool use.
Wether or not he's lying i'm not so sure about. I should say that i haven't listened much further than minute 35 at the time of writing this comment. And the whole "clan" and "tribe" thing i actually attributed to the translator having difficulties translating the human concepts into something the alien would understand. If that turns out to be the case i'd gratulate the author for bringing some realism into the situation. Because many authors just have their universal translators work perfectly without giving any consideration to how difficult it really is to translate a language into a different language.
@tranquilthoughts7233 Hey you shared what you thought was a valid complaint (it wasn't) so I decided to share what I thought was a better one...ya know concerning this genre.
No offence but judging by your two comments...you seem prone to misunderstandings...I'm going assume english is your second language and the painfully obvious is being lost in translation.
Stating the other possible conclusion would be rude.
Advanced class 12 Planet: Earth
😂😂😂😂😂
Far better than the usal crap posted....
Whose story is this? It’s on numerous channels, this one is at least a human narrated version, not AI.
Or is it?
Its still AI but good
💖💖💖
Wow how dumb we aren’t carnivorous 😂 back teeth are for grinding plant matter 😂 It’s long been known that we have ALWAYS been omnivores and another fallacy in the character is that the character would not be muscular being a vegetarian or any other plant eater as you cannot get enough of the essential proteins I understand everybody has political leanings or beliefs, but let’s try to stay somewhat in reality yes it’s science fiction. We understand that but when you’re involving humans, you still have to stay with reality now if you wanna make up a race and they do whatever lock yourself out that’s as bad as saying what they’ve been saying about men and women today it’s dumb.
He was lying. Did you watch the whole thing?
I've seen muscular bulls that only eat grass. Plenty of plants combinations that provide full protein like rice and beans, and several of the older grains that are complete proteins on their own.
Don't worry most Vegan kill themselves with there diets by the time there 40 anyway! or at least look like death warmed over, even with there "supplements"
Yes but cows are ruminants. They have four chambered stomachs which are adapted to their diet.@@DarthTinderalla-qm9zw
@DarthTinderalla-qm9zw Please take a moment and go look at the digestive tract d😂ifferences between cow like animals and humans, the very first being that they literally have 2 stomachs in order to be able to process the massive amount of grass that they eat compared to their body weight on a daily basis. To say that Humans can live on grass and grains because cows do is like saying that humans can live on flower pollen because bees do. Of course, the other side of that argument is look at what the big cats, dogs and even gorillas eat when given a choice
is it weird or beastiality that i want to marry the night beast?
Not too much. Stephen actually did.
this seems a lot like a rehash of another story
Trash
Why is it trash 🤔