Yay!!! Someone with an actual resonant voice and not that annoying fake yell-growl crap most guys try in these stories. Mr. Winter actually sounds like a storyteller! Good pick for this role.
Well done! Made me feel like I was taking part in a good D&D session 30 years ago.... "Are you a Wayfarer?" Smart kid-- I was asking the same question!
INCREDIBLE!! BUT.....THERE MUST BE SOME MORE ACTION IN THIS MEDIEVAL SHORT MOVIE!!! IT IS JUST A HUMBLE ADVICE!!!! BUT I REPEAT ....INCREDIBLE !!!!INCREDIBLE SHORT MOVIE!!!! MAKE A SECOND PART!!! SAY YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!
Narration plus drawing's the whole shortie was excellent cant wait to see more ..there will be more I hope ..there is a great story there waiting to be told xx
I liked the quote about the best time to travel being during the storm. I thought the line: “she has way too much energy” about the daughter would be better rewritten as “she has a very adventurous (or curious) mind”. Overall, I loved the story, and am curious to how the evil is still around if the queen was thrown into the sea. Did she die or no? And where did the spiders come from or did I miss that part in the beginning?
Seriously this is awesome and surprising... I really didn't thought before that this short film would be so good, I mean like I'm stunned... Its really a short film to escape into another realm of fantasy medieval feelings
Not bad! I enjoyed it. Full of well worn fantasy tropes, but feels like a celebration of them, rather than just a tired use of cleche. My only major problem was the little girl outright asking him if he was a Wayfarer. Too on the nose, if you ask me. Sometimes subtle clues are all you need. It felt as if they didn't trust the audience to pick up on this without saying it. I had already picked up on that without her having to say it. Him and the elf chick exchanging a forlorn glance was enough.to get it. Anyhow, it feels like a cool start to something much bigger. Good stuff.
Amazing! congratulations for the great work, the music is good too. I am a cinematic & videogames music composer; if you need someone for the OST, hit me up. Good luck and keep up the amazing work!
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I was left feeling the story was not told. A little to much left for the imagination to fish. not that i can't, More like that's not what i watch a film for. Not to mention there was zero tavern brawl. Enjoyed what you did film. Just felt you left out to much for my taste.
Irl, those thugs would have chopped his chewer off , while he was still standing there with his eyes closed, for some reason. I could be wrong of course, but I just feel the old "Close your eyes and hope they disappear" tactic, has one or two major flaws. One being the simple fact that....well, you can't see them, can ye!!! Also, trying to stop any blade with your neck, has proven to be kind of....a flawed tactic, through the ages.
Mmm. Good try. The problem with too many of these fantasy stories is too low a budget to give it weight, too shallow a story to have meaningful content. Good guy with a gun, eh, magic vs a bad guy with a gun, eh, sword. That's soo cliché. The script needs a real issue underneath. Like corruption of those who see to do good, and making a mess. Or how to make a difference when more violence only makes matters worse? Also, this main character is already powerful. He's not in danger in the end. So, the real tension is missing. As Americans I'd advise making a wild west fantasy, mixing native stories, with magic brought from Europe. Then set pieces, and landscape choices would be way cheaper. The feel would be much more real. Perhaps start in a modern setting even. Evil business set to kill a small town through dark magic (a metaphor for the opioid crisis?) and an ancient wayfarer traveler coming in to help?
This was a quiet, beautiful piece of art. A window into a world far away. Thank you for this. It is truly appreciated.
Yay!!! Someone with an actual resonant voice and not that annoying fake yell-growl crap most guys try in these stories. Mr. Winter actually sounds like a storyteller! Good pick for this role.
A good yarn within a yarn rounded off with an unexpected, cliff-hanger epilogue. Good job!
Happy to hear you enjoyed it!
Please don't leave us hanging! I saw that this was made last February. This was good. Please don't stop.
Just amazing! Its really atmospheric, the drawings and the real scenes as well!!!
Thank you so much!
I really don't know what to say...
astonishing piece of art.
thank you so much.
Well done! Made me feel like I was taking part in a good D&D session 30 years ago....
"Are you a Wayfarer?" Smart kid-- I was asking the same question!
Really enjoyed this! That ending! As an Old D&D player from way back, I found this short tale excellent.
INCREDIBLE!! BUT.....THERE MUST BE SOME MORE ACTION IN THIS MEDIEVAL SHORT MOVIE!!! IT IS JUST A HUMBLE ADVICE!!!! BUT I REPEAT ....INCREDIBLE !!!!INCREDIBLE SHORT MOVIE!!!! MAKE A SECOND PART!!! SAY YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!
The sound design is amazing huge props for that!
Truly excellent - well done !
More please !
Ha, the dwarven patron also sings the lovely closing credits song. Well played!
Nice catch! Thanks for watching!
Hawk the Slayer meets Zatoichi! LOVED IT!
Narration plus drawing's the whole shortie was excellent cant wait to see more ..there will be more I hope ..there is a great story there waiting to be told xx
There WILL be more😉
This is great! Can't wait to see your new project come to light!
I liked the quote about the best time to travel being during the storm. I thought the line: “she has way too much energy” about the daughter would be better rewritten as “she has a very adventurous (or curious) mind”. Overall, I loved the story, and am curious to how the evil is still around if the queen was thrown into the sea. Did she die or no? And where did the spiders come from or did I miss that part in the beginning?
Good story and characters! Well done! I hope you publish more of your shorts soon!
Hello, lads!
I can't believe I haven't seen this before. Excellent work. Respect for effort and humor! Give me more!
Thanks for the kind words! We are excited to make more!
Please make more awesome story and telling of it great job to all that put this out
I just typed in short film fantasy and found something even greater! This was awesome and I look forward to seeing more of your work!
Yes my teacher Mrsmurry showed this to class and now I gat to see again and it is amazimg
I just noticed this and this is by far fantastic!
What a wonderful short film! The work and thought put into this is excellent.
This is so good why doesn’t it have more likes
Good question. Because the internet is lazy. 64000 views only 1200 likes.
This is awesome! I loved everything and was surprised in all the work that you put into this piece, thank you!
This is amazing, you guys are amazing, and what's to come is the most exciting of all.
Masterpiece! Anymore??? Please link if soooo!!!
This is awsome! I love the medieval vibes This has to be noticed right now!! 😠
Exactly! It needs more comments, so it gets recommended to more people.
Wow this was SO gorgeous!
So glad you enjoyed it!!
This has been genuinely inspiring. Absolutely loved every minute of it
LOVE IT LOVE IT I will be submitting my clients for this series!!! I love the theme song....The Queen The Queen Love it definitely about to subscribe!
I wanted to see more 👍
🔵 What a way to end it!!....WITH NO END!
I call no fair!
Pretty freakin cool! wish it was a big ole nextfilx binger!
Anything’s possible🤞
It's amazing. Glad I found it today. Now I feel urge to play D&D. Great job!
Very well done! I’m really impressed!
So kind! Thanks for watching :)
Great title. thanks for your creative efforts.
It was an amazing story and narrating, sir
Awesome thanks
I want to see more as well that was excellent thank you.
I hope you get funding and make a full length version!
This is cool, a real inspiration for a project I've only dreamed of. Thanks for showing what's possible with a bit of creativity and determination.
This was amazing!
I want to see more
Awesome... We need more of the Tale...
The tale does not end here, my friend! Thanks for watching!
Good Job, want more.
This was so well done watching in 2024 ❤
Loved it. Can’t wait for more…
And Is it just me or does the beer barrel on the left at 11:41 have a creeper face on it…
Just saw this and I'm like invested lol where's the rest? Need more stories!
Good start. Could be an great series or movie.
Not my favorite genre, but definitely pulled me in and I wanted to keep watching!
Bravo! Great job :D
This was a nice story. I hope there are more.
Keep you eye out for more soon!
Sweet!, I could go for more.
This was soooooooooooooo good
Thanks for watching!
@@stormforgedstudios is there coming more.....
Moar. I need more!
wow i love that
wow.....
that was really good!
I love the drawings! They gave me major Witcher 3 vibes.
A lot of our inspiration came from the parallax scenes in The Witcher 3! Glad you enjoyed it!
FACTSSS im glad I'm not the only ons
I love this!
Seriously this is awesome and surprising... I really didn't thought before that this short film would be so good, I mean like I'm stunned... Its really a short film to escape into another realm of fantasy medieval feelings
Super glad you enjoyed it!
this is a masterpiece
You definitely deserve more views!
🤍 love it!
Love this song
Wow!
Wow, great story 🤗
Not bad! I enjoyed it. Full of well worn fantasy tropes, but feels like a celebration of them, rather than just a tired use of cleche. My only major problem was the little girl outright asking him if he was a Wayfarer. Too on the nose, if you ask me. Sometimes subtle clues are all you need. It felt as if they didn't trust the audience to pick up on this without saying it. I had already picked up on that without her having to say it. Him and the elf chick exchanging a forlorn glance was enough.to get it. Anyhow, it feels like a cool start to something much bigger. Good stuff.
Thanks for the feedback! Always good to hear criticism that isn't mean-spirited. Thanks for watching!
This man is obviously a wayfarer
Its there a video or link of the credits song? I love it!
Glad you like it! You can check out the whole song here: ua-cam.com/video/95y1cGxJuag/v-deo.html
This looks interesting. I think it needs rose brew mead to make the setting.
Is there a name for this style of animation used in this film?
Parallax
Where is part 2 of this please
This...
This is beautiful...
May i ask the ending music was?
JESUS IS THE WAY THE TRUTH AND THE LIFE. AMEN.✝️🙏😇👍
Praise Nimbion!
Good sir, may I have some more, please?
We must give the people what they want! Thanks for watching!
Kiaora (Hello) from nz New sub like your vids
Awesome! So glad you enjoyed it!
Amazing! congratulations for the great work, the music is good too. I am a cinematic & videogames music composer; if you need someone for the OST, hit me up. Good luck and keep up the amazing work!
Que PENA QUE NO ESTÉ DOBLADA AL CASTELLANO
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I was left feeling the story was not told. A little to much left for the imagination to fish. not that i can't, More like that's not what i watch a film for. Not to mention there was zero tavern brawl. Enjoyed what you did film. Just felt you left out to much for my taste.
This is was great however public intoxication and nudity wouldnt have been an issue at all in the medieval times.
Irl, those thugs would have chopped his chewer off , while he was still standing there with his eyes closed, for some reason. I could be wrong of course, but I just feel the old "Close your eyes and hope they disappear" tactic, has one or two major flaws. One being the simple fact that....well, you can't see them, can ye!!! Also, trying to stop any blade with your neck, has proven to be kind of....a flawed tactic, through the ages.
He was just closing his eyes to concentrate his energy bro lol
another nightmare story
Mmm. Good try. The problem with too many of these fantasy stories is too low a budget to give it weight, too shallow a story to have meaningful content. Good guy with a gun, eh, magic vs a bad guy with a gun, eh, sword. That's soo cliché. The script needs a real issue underneath. Like corruption of those who see to do good, and making a mess. Or how to make a difference when more violence only makes matters worse? Also, this main character is already powerful. He's not in danger in the end. So, the real tension is missing. As Americans I'd advise making a wild west fantasy, mixing native stories, with magic brought from Europe. Then set pieces, and landscape choices would be way cheaper. The feel would be much more real. Perhaps start in a modern setting even. Evil business set to kill a small town through dark magic (a metaphor for the opioid crisis?) and an ancient wayfarer traveler coming in to help?
Thank you for the feedback!
Sounds like you've got a lot of good ideas, maybe work on something like this and show us what ya got
Decent production value, but your cast is desperately in need of a personal trainer.
Such potential and then to go with such a thinly veiled political message. How sad
I love this!