This is a great story. I wish you had gone into more detail during the segment when they rescued the hostages. There were some missed opportunities that could have created tension and shown how they have learned to work together instead of telling us that they worked together. I feel like they could have better earned their escape.
Interesting story but the very sweet girl was far above her age despite being only 5 years old having a special relationship with this man at least 20 years older, more like a father that obviously still needs so much but they discovered that together they are a formidabile team. Together they will form a team and inflicted a major blow to the core of this very ancient civilization rendering useless their system around the galaxy. In my opinion there should be the 2nd part of the story at least....
@@nicholashenderson6941 It's fiction. As long as the laws of physics hold, anything goes. These stories are not hard scientific facts. Ment only as a thoughtfull entertainment. Someone put the effort into telling a tale, enjoy without preconceived notions.
The problem with salvaging those ships is Ethan was alone and there's no telling how many of the raiders would still be left alive. Not to mention with him leaving his ship the raiders that were still left alive could flank him and commandeer his ship leaving them stranded. If he had others with him I would totally agree otherwise.
Last chapter seem like an outline of several chapters. Missing several aspects of the story like: 1. If the girl lived on an outpost, what happened to the rest of her species? If they had been destroyed, it wasn't clear. 2. What happened to the 5 that were rescued? 3. What evidence did they provide to the mercenaries of this galactic threat? 4. What were the mercenaries paid with? They are not known for being alterestic. 4. What jobs are they taking to get provisions? Additional stories would be nice, but you need to provide more details.
The captioning needs a learned, human hand to correct mistakes. Picking up "whole" for 'hull', and "mint" in place of "meant", "weekly" instead of "weakly" had me wanting to block the channel within the first two minutes.
Um I'm listening to the story and it sounds to me like the reader isn't adding the appropriate timing in between words to give emphasis to the stories plot, plus it's monotonous speech is pulling the story down a notch or two. It would have so much better effect if those two were fixed. Great story for sure otherwise.
This is a great story. I wish you had gone into more detail during the segment when they rescued the hostages. There were some missed opportunities that could have created tension and shown how they have learned to work together instead of telling us that they worked together. I feel like they could have better earned their escape.
Thanks!
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Interesting story but the very sweet girl was far above her age despite being only 5 years old having a special relationship with this man at least 20 years older, more like a father that obviously still needs so much but they discovered that together they are a formidabile team. Together they will form a team and inflicted a major blow to the core of this very ancient civilization rendering useless their system around the galaxy. In my opinion there should be the 2nd part of the story at least....
Baby Yoda was 50 and still in toddler territory. Suspend beleif and just enjoy the story.
@@RoseChilcuttfacts, don't put humans lifespan onto other alien races.
That’s why it’s called Ci.fiction .😅😅
@@nicholashenderson6941 It's fiction. As long as the laws of physics hold, anything goes. These stories are not hard scientific facts. Ment only as a thoughtfull entertainment. Someone put the effort into telling a tale, enjoy without preconceived notions.
@louischannel7008 very true but I didn't write this story...🤣🤣🤣
In the picture she looks like a 2ft toddler. I'm not saying her age is the of a non adult, but the picture colors a totally different perspective.
Stupid for not salvaging the first 2 raider ships.
AI ...
The problem with salvaging those ships is Ethan was alone and there's no telling how many of the raiders would still be left alive. Not to mention with him leaving his ship the raiders that were still left alive could flank him and commandeer his ship leaving them stranded. If he had others with him I would totally agree otherwise.
VERY GOOD STORY, THANK YOU. BUT IT WAS DEFINITELY A PRIME EXAMPLE OF CLICKBAIT.
They should have made a few stories, that has the feel of a story arc lay out.
Silver Hawk as oppose to the Millennium Falcon and Ethan Voss as oppose to Han Solo. Very nice
Does that make 7 ERA C3PO?
@@lolcatyt2066 : No, more like Princess Leia.
Let me hide in this handy asteroid field.
Twice.
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How are they paying for all this altruism?
"This channel is where I always find great stories! 6:20 was so captivating! 🌟
raiders don't come back if you turn them to vapor
Last chapter seem like an outline of several chapters. Missing several aspects of the story like:
1. If the girl lived on an outpost, what happened to the rest of her species? If they had been destroyed, it wasn't clear.
2. What happened to the 5 that were rescued?
3. What evidence did they provide to the mercenaries of this galactic threat?
4. What were the mercenaries paid with? They are not known for being alterestic.
4. What jobs are they taking to get provisions?
Additional stories would be nice, but you need to provide more details.
This needed about 30 more mins to tell this story correctly. Lazy writing
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Awww
A.I. story
What's with the name problem? Can't they get it right? 7era 3 ways
A.I. speech to text it's iffy
Okay, how can anything be "sleek and angular"???
Maybe like a Triumph TR7 automobile? 🙂
So what happened to the 5 refugees?
The captioning needs a learned, human hand to correct mistakes. Picking up "whole" for 'hull', and "mint" in place of "meant", "weekly" instead of "weakly" had me wanting to block the channel within the first two minutes.
Um I'm listening to the story and it sounds to me like the reader isn't adding the appropriate timing in between words to give emphasis to the stories plot, plus it's monotonous speech is pulling the story down a notch or two. It would have so much better effect if those two were fixed. Great story for sure otherwise.
Ai rubbish
Terrible AI narration makes it difficult to listen to.
This is absolute garbage.
Even for sci-fi a very un realistic story. 🥱🥱