If it weren't for the pic of the dragon, i'd have scrolled on by. I'm honestly impressed !! I hope the journey with these 2 crotchety old "men" raising a young dragon is expanded, plus i hope more are located and the human/dragon bond is strengthened and expanded with more such noble men as our main character Malcolm. Dragon's need names!😊
Good story, but you gotta fix the incongruities in what you write. Things like "the only remaining escape pod" on a ship so massive it had to have more, Malcolm suddenly being able to fully understand the language in the consoles, maybe a way to explain who the bad guys were other than them just attacking. Do better, part 2 deserves it.
If it weren't for the pic of the dragon, i'd have scrolled on by. I'm honestly impressed !! I hope the journey with these 2 crotchety old "men" raising a young dragon is expanded, plus i hope more are located and the human/dragon bond is strengthened and expanded with more such noble men as our main character Malcolm. Dragon's need names!😊
I would love to listen to a second part. This story was a good one.
Most excellent ❤
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Great story! Thank you. 😊
At last somthing inventive..
Very good. Thank you
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This is indeed good and with a novelty about it but it demands a continuation of the same quality...🤞🏻🪓🪵🧙🏼♂️
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WOW great work ❤
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Absolutely! I enjoyed it thoroughly! Did you write this? So well done! It had my attention all the way through. I would love to hear a part 2!
Το τέλος θα μπορούσε να είναι καλύτερο 👍
Good Story ❤
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Nice one thanks
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WoW, great Story !
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Good story, but you gotta fix the incongruities in what you write. Things like "the only remaining escape pod" on a ship so massive it had to have more, Malcolm suddenly being able to fully understand the language in the consoles, maybe a way to explain who the bad guys were other than them just attacking. Do better, part 2 deserves it.
Ai generated stories always contain the phrase mind racing we're halfway through. I've already heard it seven times
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@FictionalReimagined And ended up being something like 12 or 15 times