Outstanding! That was one hell of a story. I was hooked all the way thru it. I couldn't wait to get to the ending to find out what happens to the queen. Her empire being forgotten is probably the worse thing that could have happened to her. Great ending, I'm impressed.
It was a good idea for a story. It just needed some proof reading to remove the duplication and tangents. However in its present form I couldn't finish it, too much repetition and things happened and then the story carried on as if they never did.
If you are going to use ai to write the story, at least proofread it. This is like 2 different versions of the same story. It's a good story, just disjointed as all hell.
OMG...... What garbage............. It was all over the place......... They are here..... they are not......... they are talking to her on the ship then they are not...... THIS WAS GARBAGE
Excellent story, thank you😊
Outstanding! That was one hell of a story. I was hooked all the way thru it. I couldn't wait to get to the ending to find out what happens to the queen. Her empire being forgotten is probably the worse thing that could have happened to her. Great ending, I'm impressed.
Now THAT was one Hell of a story! 👍👍
very different than many of the others here, definitely a big improvement.ty
A very good story.💯
must aliens have crystalline or bioluminescent bodies all the time?
Now that is why they're called the special forces
It was a good idea for a story. It just needed some proof reading to remove the duplication and tangents. However in its present form I couldn't finish it, too much repetition and things happened and then the story carried on as if they never did.
inconsistencies between chapters ruined it.
AI at its best?
Two parts are mixed up. Not great.
It was not edited. Too bad.
Chapters are out of sequence ruining the story
No logic behind this. Poor story
Ai slop
If you are going to use ai to write the story, at least proofread it. This is like 2 different versions of the same story. It's a good story, just disjointed as all hell.
I don't care about AI if the story is food, but the failure to proof read and stop the repeats and different story lines ruin this.
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OMG...... What garbage............. It was all over the place......... They are here..... they are not......... they are talking to her on the ship then they are not...... THIS WAS GARBAGE