⚡ beating second act sag, or the "mushy middle" of your novel

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  • Опубліковано 15 січ 2025

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  • @σκοτάδι-υ7σ
    @σκοτάδι-υ7σ 11 місяців тому +6

    This was very helpful, thank you! I love your workshop videos, and I often put them on when I am writing!

  • @ender7278
    @ender7278 2 місяці тому +3

    Skip to 2:09 for the actual topic.

  • @amparoortiz2234
    @amparoortiz2234 3 роки тому +11

    Little fun pit stops is a GREAT way to view it. It can be frustrating, but revisions are always going to be another opportunity to fix what’s not working.

    • @lynndjung
      @lynndjung  3 роки тому +2

      exactly!! revisions are where it all comes together. thanks for watching!!

  • @sanyaa4278
    @sanyaa4278 3 місяці тому

    Omg thank you so much ! I was really struggling with writing an interesting 2nd act for my story and this really helped !!

  • @toffbear
    @toffbear 2 роки тому +2

    im actually so happy i found ur acc

  • @kensiha
    @kensiha 3 роки тому +1

    Girl, i need this video thank you so much for sharing your insight!!

    • @lynndjung
      @lynndjung  3 роки тому +1

      ahh thank you for watching the video!!

  • @kelleyiswriting
    @kelleyiswriting 3 роки тому +2

    I definitely have a hard time writing the middle. Thanks for sharing !! I learned a lot :)

    • @lynndjung
      @lynndjung  3 роки тому +1

      glad to hear it!! thanks for watching kelley

  • @bttmofthebrrlstudios
    @bttmofthebrrlstudios 2 роки тому +2

    I'm struggling with this a lot in my current novel outline! I have a lot of disparate elements I want to braid together, but after a certain point I'm unsure of the line of consequence that'll 1) progress the plot, and 2) tie all those elements in. It's very tricky! At least it's comforting to know this is a common enough problem that it's not insurmountable xD

  • @ysabels2244
    @ysabels2244 3 роки тому +2

    Hey! Just found this channel and you are super helpful and easy to listen to, definitely subscribing!

    • @lynndjung
      @lynndjung  3 роки тому +1

      thank you for subscribing!

  • @erikslader2299
    @erikslader2299 2 роки тому +5

    Really enjoying your insight!
    I do highly recommend at least watching the LOTR trilogy, because there are a lot of great narrative techniques used throughout. :)

    • @lynndjung
      @lynndjung  2 роки тому +5

      thank you so much! you're right, i definitely do need to check out lotr properly at some point (honestly i'm trying to get over my childhood fear of gollum)

  • @literalexisse
    @literalexisse 3 роки тому +1

    Your videos are super helpful! Thanks for making them!! :">

  • @caesuracrossing5473
    @caesuracrossing5473 2 роки тому +1

    I just want to beat the fist page and first chapter anxiety when it comes to writing my first novel since 2009

    • @lynndjung
      @lynndjung  2 роки тому +1

      you've got this!! just gotta push through

  • @ThrowawayAccount-d7w
    @ThrowawayAccount-d7w Рік тому

    Cheese. 🧀