Taking Your Art to the Next Level: Redrawing Your Characters

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  • Опубліковано 5 січ 2023
  • Getting stumped on a character design? Looking for ways to enhance your art? I’m redrawing your characters in a method we can ALL learn from, through the 3 step process of Diagnosis, Drawover, and MUTATION- and maybe… getting stumped along the way myself.
    Submit Your Art and Designs: forms.gle/Jkxo3UwTHPziATcv6
    OR through the Novice Bard Tier and up on Patreon: / bageldenizen
    Take the Learn Character Design Course: learncharacterdesign.com
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 109

  • @maximillionare7547
    @maximillionare7547 Рік тому +80

    Was really not expecting to see Morgan show up in one of these, really honored to get some feedback!

  • @clawcakes
    @clawcakes Рік тому +33

    great green screen

  • @GunGryphon
    @GunGryphon Рік тому +21

    I'm liking this format, it seems like a good sustainable source to draw content from. No puns intended.

  • @milesyalzin2018
    @milesyalzin2018 Рік тому +31

    Woah, your production quality went up on this one. It looks very good.

  • @dransnake
    @dransnake Рік тому +63

    This is such a cool series! I plan on taking your character design course during the summer, but this feels like a nice prelude to it ^^
    Excited to see the next one in the series!

  • @theswig2339
    @theswig2339 Рік тому +8

    The lesson with the badger was really helpful, I normally just do flat colors because I don't fully understand shading. Thanks Brookes!

  • @tonguesurgery7188
    @tonguesurgery7188 Рік тому +23

    This is a really cool series! I love seeing your thought process when approaching other people's characters. I hope these get better engagement and you continue to do these, it's super helpful!

  • @salvidomum5287
    @salvidomum5287 Рік тому +10

    THANK YOU SO MUCH BROOKES!!!!!!!

  • @ShaulaXNinja
    @ShaulaXNinja Рік тому +4

    Even though my character; Bellatrix Orion, didn't make it in this video, it was nice to see you did with the others and I really learned a lot from your redesigns of them.
    Thanks Brookes.

  • @deklanb.4992
    @deklanb.4992 Рік тому +4

    ‘I’m on a beach somewhere. It’s nice.’ 😂 These were great to see Brookes, thanks for continuing this series in spite of the lack of engagement on the last one 💯❤️ EVERYONE WATCH THESE THEYRE GREAT *wills it to be so *

  • @jonathanhancock470
    @jonathanhancock470 Рік тому +7

    This is a really fun series. I hope it gets the needed traction to continue.

  • @ShaulaToons
    @ShaulaToons Рік тому +3

    Fantastic redesigns.

  • @feanaro2712
    @feanaro2712 Рік тому +5

    Always fun to see redraws/redesigns, and I especially appreciated the quick lesson on light/shading.

  • @victorhelm6515
    @victorhelm6515 Рік тому +5

    It's really great seeing the thought process behind the character redesigns and i like how you try to keep the original intend intact at first before doing your own take. These videos are super valuable for learning and i appreciate that you create them!
    Also your humour never fails to make me smile.

  • @cosmicspacething3474
    @cosmicspacething3474 Рік тому +6

    I think the IPN logo is supposed to resemble the red white and yellow plugs you see on certain devices. Would’ve been cool to keep that

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому +2

      That would have been cool, not sure if it was the intent of the original artist though!

  • @tempesttossed6029
    @tempesttossed6029 Рік тому +2

    These redesigns always have something interesting to teach about simplicity or readability I may not have thought of previously. Good work! And what a creative group of fans you have. These characters are always wonderful to see.

  • @BHRaccoon
    @BHRaccoon Рік тому +3

    This is a fantastic series :) It's so cool to see the variety of characters on display and the different solutions for making them read more clearly. It's a little unfortunate that you were flooded with characters from people, especially because it makes me feel a little bad about wanting to send a character your way too, but I think it also speaks to the huge level of trust your community has in you to give good feedback.

  • @sylvanshroom
    @sylvanshroom Рік тому +2

    I love this series and echoing comments that love the greenscreen, very fun!
    S/o to Sal theyre the goat and I love seeing your take on their deskgn sm!!

  • @Rob_Boss99
    @Rob_Boss99 Рік тому +9

    I really love this series! It's so cool seing amazing artists and their characters and the changes/interpretations you make are definitely helpful and inspiring. :)

  • @cheesypies5166
    @cheesypies5166 Рік тому +1

    UGH watching these videos is always inspiring

  • @atlas9852
    @atlas9852 Рік тому +1

    Another Brookes video, another good day.

  • @jaywalker.
    @jaywalker. 10 місяців тому +1

    Wow, I love this series, and your channel is great!

  • @bunni_22
    @bunni_22 Рік тому +1

    This series has given me some invaluable advice and has a really fun vibe to it! The time and effort put in can't be commended enough.

  • @muttrogers6586
    @muttrogers6586 Рік тому +2

    I'm really digging this series! I love seeing all these different designs and styles, and your commentary gives me so many helpful pointers and reminders to apply to my own work. Thanks for everything you provide us, Brookes!

  • @kakao-katze
    @kakao-katze Рік тому +2

    All the art in this is genuinely really cool! Ya'll have some great ideas and really solid art technique. I love this series for thst reason of getting inspired by everyone's art and thinking more about what can be improved about a design.
    Ya'll are awesome.

  • @adreancooper5439
    @adreancooper5439 Рік тому +2

    Can't wait to get to work with this new found knowledge. Thanks so much for the advice, Brookes. You're the man!

  • @myrmexi_mien
    @myrmexi_mien Рік тому +1

    man your vids always cheer me up and i love to see your takes on character design in practice! thank you for the inspiration and positivity you very cool and funky dude 🙏🙏

  • @BOBJONES-vm8qj
    @BOBJONES-vm8qj Рік тому

    This channel is way too underrated These videos are always enjoyable to watch keep up the great work!

  • @AZUREPHOENIX777
    @AZUREPHOENIX777 Рік тому +1

    Looking good, Brookes! Happy New Year!

  • @rachelthompson7487
    @rachelthompson7487 Рік тому +2

    Happy new year. I love your videos

  • @punto3205
    @punto3205 Рік тому +1

    These are great! Loving this series

  • @4_seagull
    @4_seagull Рік тому +1

    This is so good. So much effort in these videos!! All of your takes were really cool along with the original character designs. Probably my favorite series so far. I love seeing alternate designs.

  • @foxmccloud9609
    @foxmccloud9609 Рік тому +3

    I think I am not good at lighting. I try putting shadow and light onto the characters. Only use Pencil and paper though, so it is all final.

  • @LochlainnMacLock
    @LochlainnMacLock 8 місяців тому +1

    Digging these redraw videos!

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  8 місяців тому

      Thanks! Make sure to support them, cant make more if no one watches!

  • @ROACHMETH
    @ROACHMETH Рік тому +3

    Oh okay its really cool and helpful.

  • @4_seagull
    @4_seagull Рік тому +4

    4

  • @cringe_shattles69
    @cringe_shattles69 Рік тому

    I haven't watched this channel for some time now, and man I think I regret missing out💀

  • @HaywireRuckus
    @HaywireRuckus Рік тому +2

    Par for the course with your videos, I learned a lot! Thanks Brookes!
    And why yes of course it was difficult to iterate on Sal's design that's because their designs are flawless :P (I'm kidding but only halfway, love you Sal your stuff is very cool)

  • @mismiserables
    @mismiserables Рік тому +1

    I love this series. I'm currently designing a character and struggling lol especially with a colour palette. These videos have been really helpful.

  • @GoingSwimmingly
    @GoingSwimmingly Рік тому +1

    AND I EMERGE FROM THE ASHES
    Honestly half of my watches are under the mercy of the reccomendations but thank goodness I found this channel again, I do really enjoy the ideas you added to those characters!
    … Although I don’t know if the video is gonna get anymore likes from where I am-

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому

      Sincerely appreciate you coming back! There’s another in this series from a Month back !

  • @anyadocious
    @anyadocious 6 місяців тому +1

    Super cool series. Hope to seem more!

  • @simple_acount
    @simple_acount Рік тому +1

    This is such a nice series! It's a nice reminder to push my shapes more. Love to see more!

  • @straybard_art
    @straybard_art Рік тому +1

    This has been pretty amazing to watch. I feel like i learn something from each (also the edtings and jokes were pretty great in this episode - I watched it while drawing!) 👍

  • @jjstarA113
    @jjstarA113 Рік тому

    The vibe I get from Studio Gillian's Mike design is an award show host wearing a suit or tuxedo, now THAT could be a good angle for that design.

  • @justaguywhocandraw1793
    @justaguywhocandraw1793 Рік тому +1

    i like seeing these edits and "mutations". i submitted one of my own characters, but take your time. i can imagine that there are near infinite submissions :)

  • @oddysay
    @oddysay Рік тому +2

    Sweeet this is such a fun idea I have TONS of characters i would love you to redesign!! I cant wait to build up my channel so i can collaborate with you !

  • @ellie7252
    @ellie7252 Рік тому +1

    loved the video c:

  • @Sprigatito687
    @Sprigatito687 10 місяців тому +1

    Oh my gosh so relatable i have to redraw drake the wolf or Jake i might change the name for my animated series called petzootes and i was like his teeth is horrible i had to take some inspiration because it was to horrible then i had to deal with what his hands will be like next oh god this that was really annoying his finale design is almost here

  • @mikoartz5006
    @mikoartz5006 Рік тому +6

    44 seconds ago, let's gooo

  • @gijis02
    @gijis02 Рік тому +1

    Engagement engagement engagement. But thank you for this!

  • @merrari_epix
    @merrari_epix Рік тому +1

    good video :D

  • @tridek1949
    @tridek1949 Рік тому +2

    I love this series! (Is that how you spell series? I don't know.)

    • @mikoartz5006
      @mikoartz5006 Рік тому +1

      I think. Probably......idk English is dumb

    • @Kate_rynDraws
      @Kate_rynDraws Рік тому +1

      Yup, that’s how you spell it!

    • @tridek1949
      @tridek1949 Рік тому +2

      ​@@Kate_rynDraws Rolled the dice and won. Nice.

    • @Kate_rynDraws
      @Kate_rynDraws Рік тому

      @@tridek1949 XD

  • @blueblaze27
    @blueblaze27 Рік тому +1

    this video was a really fun and educational experience, but i have a question, do we have to resubmit our designs to the form for the next video?

  • @Demolicious
    @Demolicious Рік тому

    Sent a design form! Hope you can help me :)

  • @poke4074
    @poke4074 9 місяців тому

    I realized I submitted my character Jozlyn some time ago and forgot to comment, oops

  • @henryfleischer404
    @henryfleischer404 Рік тому +1

    Do you accept renders of 3d models for submissions? I'm wanting to work on my character designs, but I'm a 3d modeler, not a drawer.

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому +2

      I mean I am a 3D artist so something comprehensive as a 2D image I could draw over, I likely wouldnt remodel something myself though- already spending a lot of time on these and it’s likely outside of the interest of most people watching.

  • @frogartti
    @frogartti Рік тому +1

    Why do so many cartoon animal characters have some article of clothing?

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому +1

      🤷‍♂️ from a design perspective, it helps break up the proportions, and adds a little extra identity and personality. But practically, can’t help you there

  • @klg9549
    @klg9549 Рік тому +1

    Hey, I'm sorry this might sound really weird so please don't take this the wrong way ... but is there some way to get feedback and critique that isn't public? I've checked out the patreon options and I was wondering because after a decade-long slump, I don't exactly have a perfect portfolio to show right off that bat but I do have a TON of development things (various drawings/notes etc, it's just that I'm only just getting back into drawing my original characters regularly again) I'd love to get an opinion on (without spoiling all my story online before it's finished - it's very precious to me as I actually made the main character 22 years ago!!) ... more like a paid tutor/mentor sort of deal? Again I know, I probably should have said this in an email, but maybe there are other people who are wondering the same thing. I apologise if this is inappropriate.

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому +1

      Absolutely optional to have it shown to anyone else at all!

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому

      And yes, i have mentoring calls available on my site as well 🙂

    • @klg9549
      @klg9549 Рік тому

      @@CharacterDesignForge Thank you for your reply! Is it okay to email you to ask more about them?

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому

      @@klg9549 Sure, although most of the information should be on the shop site!

  • @BlackPeerama
    @BlackPeerama Рік тому +2

    I Really Want To Make My Own Cartoon Show Animated Series One Day But I Don’t Know Where To Get Started

  • @tobythecatmc1134
    @tobythecatmc1134 Рік тому

    I have completed the form for help with redesigning my character Aspen the reindeer. Hope you can squeeze it into one of your future redesigning characters videos. 😄😀

  • @Twentynyne
    @Twentynyne Рік тому +1

    Seeing other peoples are in your style sits somewhere in the pleasing, but also uncanny valley. Also this video just doesn't seem long enough, getting more in depth analysis about what you did with each character seems more fitting. Instead of watching such a short speed draw, its hard to tell what do did without pausing the video.

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому +2

      Cant tell if this is supposed to be a positive or negative comment, which is defeating, but there are so many factors regarding audience retention that I am already facing an uphill battle with, let alone making the videos longer.

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому

      As it is, this video took about 50 hours of work to put together and it’s performing very poorly. Perhaps because my art is so uncanny valley! 🙂

    • @Twentynyne
      @Twentynyne Рік тому

      @@CharacterDesignForge I am so sorry, it's moreso criticism, I don't mean to be negative. I'm sorry that it's not doing well, I do generally like the concept, I love your content, it sucks that this isn't doing well. I don't want to be a reason you stop making videos

    • @Twentynyne
      @Twentynyne Рік тому

      @@CharacterDesignForge your art style isn'tz it might just be the design switch for some of these that make them uncanny for me. but tbh my opinion doesn't matter if other people love your art. there will always be people that do not enjoy your art.

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому

      @@Twentynyne my takes are inherently going to be more technically proficient, because of higher experience, but aren't going to have the same motive, context, and reasoning as the original artist- they should theoretically be able to make something better because the characters are their baby. But if it's just that you don't like my work, that's fine- I just don't know that I'll be changing it in response anytime soon just because.

  • @ninjajon93
    @ninjajon93 11 місяців тому

    Looking forward to submitting a character

  • @artnestt
    @artnestt Рік тому

    I tried to submit the link of my oc from twitter but It doesn't work and i cant figure out how to do it oml💀

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому

      You mean to copy and paste a link?

    • @artnestt
      @artnestt Рік тому

      @@CharacterDesignForge i think i did it,not sure but yeah lol

  • @racheln8563
    @racheln8563 9 місяців тому

    I just now came across this video. Would you consider looking at my OC, even after all this time?

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  9 місяців тому

      The patreon option continues to be available. The performance of these videos vs the free labor involved makes the possibility of the series continuing uncertain.

  • @matthewgarner7215
    @matthewgarner7215 Рік тому

    How would you suggest I draw younger characters when my artstyle has characters with pretty round, sort of cal-artsy like faces even when they’re adults?

  • @elpretender1357
    @elpretender1357 Рік тому

    A bit of advice for the person who submitted the alien:
    The grey color of the hair made me think at first that your character was in her senior years, even if it has a green tinge to it. Maybe consider another color that isn't specifically grey (or white) since when somebody has that hair color you can tell that they're older. A different shade of green could be all you need

  • @markguyton2868
    @markguyton2868 Рік тому

    I'd like to get my bad designs -roasted- reviewed by a pro too someday, but I can tell you are already overwhelmed in the lottery section and I'm not very interested in the backpack stuff.
    Eh, I'll figure it out what I'm doing right/wrong at some point :) cool vid.

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому +1

      Sorry the backpacks arent cooler, let me know any feedback on what would make them more appealing!

    • @markguyton2868
      @markguyton2868 Рік тому

      @@CharacterDesignForge It's not the stuff that's the problem, I just wouldn't know what to do with it. Not enough room where I live. Apologies if it sounded like I was insulting your products/designs :(

    • @CharacterDesignForge
      @CharacterDesignForge  Рік тому +1

      @@markguyton2868 no worries! I just try as always to offer something worthwhile and would love for the Backpacks to do better.

  • @LARADEKA
    @LARADEKA Рік тому

    *_It took me too many redraws of my main character just because of the body and THE HAIR._*
    *_And I might do the same for the other characters too._*
    *_But I'm on high hiatus and very busy, so no new arts + music tracks from me because of it. Although I CAN say I'm secretly experimenting and improving... in a different way._*