Ajay was roaming outside after 9:00 pm even though lockdown was imposed. Suddenly the police came and started asking him that why he was wandering here and there in the late night. He replied that ' I came here to meet one of my friend, so we can complete the assignments together'. The police officer replied that he might go to the home early. After some time , his friend ravi came and they both started gossiping. Suddenly, it started raining heavily. So ajay offered ravi to go to his home with him and stay there till the rain would stop. They both ran quickly and reached the home. But Ajay remembered that he had to complete the assignment till the night as the next day was the last day of submission. They both had dinner at the Ajay's home and they noticed that rain had stopped. It was some about 11:00pm. they both went to the ravi's house and brought his assignments and supplies. After few minutes, they reached the home but they were surprised as they had brought the wrong notebook. Both of them were stressed and disappointed. All they were thinking about is that how would they able to complete their assignments. So they slept. Next day , when ajay woke up he saw that he has been late for school. He was totally ripped off. Suddenly, her mom came and said them it was sunday 😂
During the lockdown period Mr.Ajay was taking a walk after his dinner and suddenly policeman show him and he was questioned for violating the curfew rule set by the Government where no public is allowed to go out of his or her house after 9 PM. So he was asked to pay a fine. However Police didn't not listen to what Ajay explain about the situation after a while things got calm and he explained the police person that he has in hurry to call a Doctor as he didn't pick his call even after calling several times so it compels him to violate the rules as to safe his mother's life. Therefore after sharing his problem he agreed to pay the fine but the police man didn't accept it instead the police man took him to Doctor Resident and Doctor was able to reach in a perfect time of rescuing Ajay Mother.
*The search of the lost ring* Ajay was roaming outside after 9 PM even though a lockdown was imposed. Suddenly the police approached him and asked him, "what are you doing outside at this time?". He replied, "I am searching for a lost property". It got lost when I was chased by thieves, some minutes ago. I held the ring firmly during the hot chase. It fell the moment I passed this area. The ring belongs to my friend who is about to get married tomorrow. He inherited the ring from his father and he promised to pass it down to his wife. He would be much disappointed if I told him I lost it. Ajay cried heavily as he finished explaining to the policemen. The policemen sympathized with him and got down from their vehicle to assist Ajay in the search for the lost ring. The search went on for minutes after minutes, and nothing was found. This killed the hope in Ajay of finding the ring. He became more depressed. Suddenly he heard noise from one of the policemen, "I have found a ring". Ajay was very happy and he moved closer to the policeman to confirm the ring. On sighting, he realized that it was far different from the ring he was searching for. At that moment the call of his friend came in, and he declined the call with sadness. The search continued. Another minute went by, and nothing was found. As he was about to stop the policemen from searching, a voice was heard among the policemen, "I have found a ring. Ajay ran down to the place to confirm the ring. Seeing the ring, he realized it was slightly different from the ring he was searching for. He said to himself," the ring is brighter than this. This looks duller." upon cleaning the ring surface he discovered it was the lost ring. The surface has been covered by the surrounding dirt. Instantly he began bringing out tears of joy, saying loudly, "Thank you, God, thank you, my policemen". After showing gratitude, he left for his home happily as if he won huge amounts of money.
Amazing one 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 But you can also add some more twist like... The ring 💍 was finally got searched by Ajay himself after a brief slot of time. It was fall down and stuck in the middle stem of the small plant 🌱 which was on the edge of the road..
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A young woman went to her mother and told her about her life and how things were so hard for her. She did not know how she was going to make it and wanted to give up. She was tired of fighting and struggling. It seemed that, as one problem was solved, a new one arose. Her mother took her to the kitchen. She filled three pots with water and placed each on a high fire. Soon the pots came to a boil. In the first, she placed carrots, in the second she placed eggs and in the last she placed ground coffee beans. She let them sit and boil without saying a word. In about twenty minutes, she turned off the burners. She fished the carrots out and placed them in a bowl. She pulled the eggs out and placed them in a bowl. Then she ladled the coffee out and placed it in a bowl. Turning to her daughter, she asked, "Tell me, what do you see?" "Carrots, eggs, and coffee," the young woman replied. The mother brought her closer and asked her to feel the carrots. She did and noted that they were soft. She then asked her to take an egg and break it. After pulling off the shell, she observed the hard-boiled egg. Finally, she asked her to sip the coffee. The daughter smiled as she tasted its rich aroma. The daughter then asked, "What does it mean, mother?" Her mother explained that each of these objects had faced the same adversity - boiling water - but each reacted differently. The carrot went in strong, hard and unrelenting. However, after being subjected to the boiling water, it softened and became weak. The egg had been fragile. Its thin outer shell had protected its liquid interior. But, after sitting through the boiling water, its inside became hardened! The ground coffee beans were unique, however. After they were in the boiling water, they had changed the water. "Which are you?" the mother asked her daughter. "When adversity knocks on your door, how do you respond? Are you a carrot, an egg, or a coffee bean?" Think of this. Which am I? Am I the carrot that seems strong but, with pain and adversity, do I wilt and become soft and lose my strength? Am I the egg that starts with a malleable heart, but changes with the heat? Did I have a fluid spirit but, after a death, a breakup or a financial hardship, does my shell look the same, but on the inside am I bitter and tough with a stiff spirit and a hardened heart? Or am I like the coffee bean? The bean actually changes the hot water, the very circumstance that brings the pain. When the water gets hot, it releases the fragrance and flavor. If you are like the bean, when things are at their worst, you get better and change the situation around you. When the hours are the darkest and trials are their greatest, do you elevate to another level? How do you handle adversity? Are you a carrot, an egg or a coffee bean?
The most known story: There was a king there was a queen both were dead the story end Main character:King and queen Problem: Both were dead Solution: The story ends Twist: I said that Final sloution: doesn't matter Title: Happy ending : )
The Secret Society of Thieves: A Lesson Learned Ajay was roaming outside after 9 p.m even though lockdown was imposed. Suddenly the police came and asked him to stop. Ajay was surprised and confused. He thought he was alone and nobody would notice him. The police asked him for his identity and purpose of being outside. Ajay hesitated to answer as he knew he was breaking the law. As they were questioning him, a woman nearby started screaming for help. The police officers immediately ran towards her leaving Ajay behind. Ajay saw a figure running away from the scene and realized it was the thief who had robbed him a few days back. Without thinking twice, he started running after the thief. The chase took them through dark alleys and deserted streets. Ajay was determined to catch the thief and get his belongings back. As he was about to catch up, the thief disappeared into a building. Ajay followed him inside and found himself in a strange room filled with strange objects. Suddenly, the door shut behind him, and he was trapped. As he looked around, he realized that he had stumbled upon a secret society of thieves. They were all staring at him with suspicion and hostility. Ajay knew he was in trouble and needed to come up with a plan to escape. He searched the room and found a small window that led to the outside. He managed to open the window and climbed out, but as he landed on the ground, he felt a sharp pain in his leg. He had stepped on a thornleaf plant, which caused a severe allergic reaction. He struggled to move, but he knew he had to keep going. He crawled and dragged himself through the streets until he finally reached his home. When he woke up the next morning, he realized that he had been in a coma for several days. The police had found him on the street and rushed him to the hospital. They also managed to catch the thief and recover Ajay's stolen belongings. As he lay in the hospital bed, Ajay realized that he had learned a valuable lesson. Breaking the law was never worth it, and it could lead to dangerous situations. He vowed to never break the law again and to be a law-abiding citizen.
Here are the corrections 1. Mistake 1: The car started deviating suddenly We add adverbs of manner after the verb .also better word for deviating is ,the car swerved abruptly. 2.The car speed was not too high- the car wasn't speeding on the road 3. One of the Tyre is wrong grammar We should say one of the TyreS( plural) 4.devoid of air is very bookish, in simple conversational English We say the car had a flat Tyre! 5.Tool kit was not there again is bookish version and Native English speakers don't say this. They say the tool kit was missing! 6."However as it was early morning" We can't use however and as one after the other.both are conjunctions. 7.Family got relief : family felt relief or was relieved sounds much better. 8.Ajay slowly and carefully drove the car Wrong again, look at the first example Adverb of manner here slowly and carefully are adverbs of manner so it will come at last. Ajay drove the car slowly and carefully I really appreciate your efforts to teach English but I believe whether it is English,Hindi or any regional language we must try to be correct,lucid and free-flowing. Story writing is not only about technique it is as much about choice of words and correct sentences.
One day Ajay was roming outside it was 9 pm and the lockdown has started ,suddenly two police officer stop him and asked its 9 pm and lockdown has been started and you are outside. Ajay got scared ! and said sir i am little late and walking to my house officer asked from where are you coming . Hearing this Ajay get frightened and sayed slowely that I m just walking but the officers told do you don't know about lockdown. Ajay told i know about but i was little late because a old lady was trying to cross the road so i helped him . And listening to this officers apperciate him and went to work .
Care by a Father for his son Ajay was roaming out by 9:00 p.m.. The lockdown was imposed in the country and the police was on duty. Ajay was going by the road where there was no police but unfortunately the police caught him. When inquired, Ajay told that her son was in extreme pain as he fell from stairs. After knowing that police said to Ajay that he should leave else anything serious can happen. Although when he was in the way his car diesel finished and he was in too much hurrry that he can't thought any solution. As he was standing the police man who meet Ajay before saw him and asked what happen and therefore, he helped Ajay to reach the hospital and his son was out of danger then. Written by-: Unnati
You have a lot of grammatical mistakes and you used "As he" a lot which made it look odd and story is incomplete. It was just short story and you didn't mentioned everything in detail so it was not good
@DRAGON GAMING I too wrote the story ok in my book but thing I can't send you the pic I think UA-cam should have an update of chatting sending pics etc. For proving wrong to the person who is provoking you
Ajay was roaming outside after 9pm even lockdown was imposed. Suddenly Police came and asked him, why he is roaming around the corner. Because of Ajay qas careless guy, he went out to buy cigarettes. Police took him straight to lockup. One hour later, he asked Police for making a call. They said No. Now Ajay realizes his careless attitude and begs for pardon. Police allows him to make one call. He called his friend but his number was busy at the moment. Police, asks him for some money contribution and then they can release him. Ajay told them he got no money at the moment. Then, police thought why shouldn't not they teach some lesson to this careless guy. So, they took him with them on patrolling. All day, Ajay was watching the barren streets with hungry stomach. Police didn't give him anything to eat because once he tried to run. Later on evening Police sets Ajay free with the Warning of being careful next time. Message of the story : You have to care sometimes for atleast yourself. Please please please give a feedback 🙏
Ajay was going out with his family on a picnic in his car but forgot to inspect the car, the car stopped on mid highway.After checking, Ajay found out that the petrol had got over. He forgot to fill up the tank before leaving. The problem was that their car got bad where there was no fuel station.He was worried as they had been planning the trip for quite a long time and finally they got the chance to visit.He prayed God to help him. As he was sad, a person came by and asked him what happened. He told the whole situation to that man. The man laughed and said that he was lucky as he just got extra fuel. The man offered Ajay to take the fuel that he was carrying in the bottle. Ajay was hesitant to take the help but when his parents forced him he took it and passed on money to that helpful man. Ajay filled the petrol and resumed his journey. As they were wrapping the picnic, Ajay remembered that man and said Thank you pls check it sir
I liked your story I hope you don't mind me helping you. On mid highway ( remove on, no need of preposition) Ran out of Petrol Car broke down in a place where there was no fuel station.( gone bad ke badle broke down) Ajay remembered se achcha hoga was reminded of the man( ajay ko achanak uska khayal aaya ya yaad aayi) keep learning, good luck :)
Can you pls help to write a story on dream girl? Plss i really want to write a book! I'm 12y old i really wanted to write a book! Plss help me to write ✨
@@raniamazharvlogsI love writing and I usually write both poems and stories I have already completed half of my fantasy book Idk if I'll publish it my parents will not support me so I stopped working on my book Idk if I can help you as what you just said really touched me I appreciate your dream and you have the potential so I thought if I could help you as I myself won't get chance to publish my own book maybe helping an another author to publish a book can complete my dream❤
Easy to Understand the format of Story Writing Although it's basic level which Every Story Writer should Know Thank You for sharing such a Simple Skillfull Content
ajay was roaming outside after 9pm. even though lockdown was imposed , suddenly police came and he showed his middle finger to police and he was arrested and put up in the jail and his story was finished ,
one fine day Ajay and his friends had friendly meeting to go outside for dinner. but they had forgotten about the new rule imposed by the indian government that no one should be outside past 9, so they enjoyed their dinner talked a lot everybody left home except Ajay because he had to walk home but he had lost his way so he roamed around but didn’t realize it was past 9 suddenly the police came and asked ajay why he was roaming around past 9 ajay had no answer because of his nervousness but then he thought the police are here not to hurt him , so he told them he was lost thinking it would solve everything and he wouldn’t get a ticket but the cops had further questions and told that his answer was not valid but suddenly ajay told abt his dinner and that he didnt have a car to reach back home and had to walk home, the police feeling sympathy helped ajay reach his house by taking him home in the police car ajay was thankful to the indian police for this help, Ajay was happy the police was happy and everything had a well end :)
Very easiest explanation and beautifully presented 👍👍👌👌also there is exam tomorrow English 1 story writing ✍ 10 marks total 50 marks paper 📃 sir give me blessings 🙌 🙏. Your guidance is the way to success 🙏
Identification: Monkey D. Luffy 🍖 Straw Hats 👒 ♥️ Problem: Many...😝🤪 Solution: Always there...👌🏻 Twist: The main villain enters the scenario...😱🤯 Final Solution: One Piece 😆😆👌🏻👌🏻
The lazy dog- Once upon a time there lived a lazy dog called braxy, he was very selective about food and preffered meat over anything else.He used to sleep the whole day and release toxic gases from his butt.The dog was fat because of devouring tons of meat everyday.His owner was worried, then one day he saw the dog was literally 100metres away from his home,the owner was confused and checked the cctv footage and saw braxy chasing a cat that had meat in his mouth , braxy was running faster than ever,pounding those feet on the floor with such force.Finally he had got the piece of meat.This enlightened the owners brain with a led light, the owner on the next day,took a log of wood and hanged a piece of meat on it with a rope, he called out braxy and he rushed quickly to get it and since this incident, braxy has been really active.
Care by a Father for his son Ajay was roaming out by 9:00 p.m.. The lockdown was imposed in the country and the police were on duty. Ajay was going by the road where there was no police but unfortunately the police caught him. When inquired, Ajay told that her son was in extreme pain as he fell from stairs. After knowing that police said to Ajay that he should leave else anything serious can happen. Although when he was in the way his car diesel finished and he was in too much hurry that he can't think any solution. As he was standing the policeman who meets Ajay before saw him and asked what happen and therefore, he helped Ajay to reach the hospital and his son was out of danger then. Written by-: akshaya
Thanks sir! I remember something Main charecter, follow by event 1. Event 1 has problem and climax.. I remember my teacher talking about Foreshadow pretty useful but I prefer this idea because I'm writing a compo
On coming, Wednesday is my English language exam and I have story writing as one of my subtopics. This video will help me a lot. I will surely comment on how my exam went
The video is great sir. But I have some points for you all to see. A story doesn’t always have to have a hero or main protagonist . Even if you choose to have a protagonist, I think we should focus on the character’s personality more than strength. And secondly why do we always have to have a problem. We can also create stories with put having a problematic plot.
Ajay, was roaming outside after 9.pm even though lockdown as imposed.Suddenly the police come and ask Ajay for the reason to break the rules,Ajay got surprised when one policeman said him to get Into their vehicle.Another policeman said first give the Fine of Rs/3000 but Ajay has lacking of cash ,Ajay got into trouble that he has to go for cell for a day, Suddenly another policeman said leave him first time and next time follow the rules,Wear the Musk and at the same time go outside with some cash😆 To break the rules you have to understand and follow the rules first
Ajay was roaming outside after 9:00 pm even though lockdown was imposed. Suddenly the police came and started asking him that why he was wandering here and there in the late night. He replied that ' I came here to meet one of my friend, so we can complete the assignments together'. The police officer replied that he might go to the home early. After some time , his friend ravi came and they both started gossiping. Suddenly, it started raining heavily. So ajay offered ravi to go to his home with him and stay there till the rain would stop. They both ran quickly and reached the home. But Ajay remembered that he had to complete the assignment till the night as the next day was the last day of submission. They both had dinner at the Ajay's home and they noticed that rain had stopped. It was some about 11:00pm. they both went to the ravi's house and brought his assignments and supplies. After few minutes, they reached the home but they were surprised as they had brought the wrong notebook. Both of them were stressed and disappointed. All they were thinking about is that how would they able to complete their assignments. So they slept. Next day , when ajay woke up he saw that he has been late for school. He was totally ripped off. Suddenly, her mom came and said them it was sunday 😂
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During the lockdown period Mr.Ajay was taking a walk after his dinner and suddenly policeman show him and he was questioned for violating the curfew rule set by the Government where no public is allowed to go out of his or her house after 9 PM. So he was asked to pay a fine. However Police didn't not listen to what Ajay explain about the situation after a while things got calm and he explained the police person that he has in hurry to call a Doctor as he didn't pick his call even after calling several times so it compels him to violate the rules as to safe his mother's life. Therefore after sharing his problem he agreed to pay the fine but the police man didn't accept it instead the police man took him to Doctor Resident and Doctor was able to reach in a perfect time of rescuing Ajay Mother.
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*The search of the lost ring*
Ajay was roaming outside after 9 PM even though a lockdown was imposed. Suddenly the police approached him and asked him, "what are you doing outside at this time?". He replied, "I am searching for a lost property". It got lost when I was chased by thieves, some minutes ago. I held the ring firmly during the hot chase. It fell the moment I passed this area. The ring belongs to my friend who is about to get married tomorrow. He inherited the ring from his father and he promised to pass it down to his wife. He would be much disappointed if I told him I lost it. Ajay cried heavily as he finished explaining to the policemen. The policemen sympathized with him and got down from their vehicle to assist Ajay in the search for the lost ring. The search went on for minutes after minutes, and nothing was found. This killed the hope in Ajay of finding the ring. He became more depressed. Suddenly he heard noise from one of the policemen, "I have found a ring". Ajay was very happy and he moved closer to the policeman to confirm the ring. On sighting, he realized that it was far different from the ring he was searching for. At that moment the call of his friend came in, and he declined the call with sadness. The search continued. Another minute went by, and nothing was found. As he was about to stop the policemen from searching, a voice was heard among the policemen, "I have found a ring. Ajay ran down to the place to confirm the ring. Seeing the ring, he realized it was slightly different from the ring he was searching for. He said to himself," the ring is brighter than this. This looks duller." upon cleaning the ring surface he discovered it was the lost ring. The surface has been covered by the surrounding dirt. Instantly he began bringing out tears of joy, saying loudly, "Thank you, God, thank you, my policemen". After showing gratitude, he left for his home happily as if he won huge amounts of money.
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The ring 💍 was finally got searched by Ajay himself after a brief slot of time. It was fall down and stuck in the middle stem of the small plant 🌱 which was on the edge of the road..
Identify= I am the hero in my story
Problem=Exam will offline
Solution= I have teacher's like u
Twist= I am siting in 1st banch
Final solution= I was failed😭😭😭
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A young woman went to her mother and told her about her life and how things were so hard for her. She did not know how she was going to make it and wanted to give up. She was tired of fighting and struggling. It seemed that, as one problem was solved, a new one arose. Her mother took her to the kitchen. She filled three pots with water and placed each on a high fire. Soon the pots came to a boil. In the first, she placed carrots, in the second she placed eggs and in the last she placed ground coffee beans. She let them sit and boil without saying a word. In about twenty minutes, she turned off the burners. She fished the carrots out and placed them in a bowl. She pulled the eggs out and placed them in a bowl. Then she ladled the coffee out and placed it in a bowl.
Turning to her daughter, she asked, "Tell me, what do you see?"
"Carrots, eggs, and coffee," the young woman replied.
The mother brought her closer and asked her to feel the carrots. She did and noted that they were soft.
She then asked her to take an egg and break it. After pulling off the shell, she observed the hard-boiled egg. Finally, she asked her to sip the coffee. The daughter smiled as she tasted its rich aroma.
The daughter then asked, "What does it mean, mother?"
Her mother explained that each of these objects had faced the same adversity - boiling water - but each reacted differently. The carrot went in strong, hard and unrelenting. However, after being subjected to the boiling water, it softened and became weak.
The egg had been fragile. Its thin outer shell had protected its liquid interior. But, after sitting through the boiling water, its inside became hardened! The ground coffee beans were unique, however. After they were in the boiling water, they had changed the water.
"Which are you?" the mother asked her daughter.
"When adversity knocks on your door, how do you respond? Are you a carrot, an egg, or a coffee bean?" Think of this. Which am I? Am I the carrot that seems strong but, with pain and adversity, do I wilt and become soft and lose my strength?
Am I the egg that starts with a malleable
heart, but changes with the heat? Did I have a fluid spirit but, after a death, a breakup or a financial hardship, does my shell look the same, but on the inside am I bitter and tough with a stiff spirit and a hardened heart? Or am I like the coffee bean? The bean actually changes the hot water, the very circumstance that brings the pain.
When the water gets hot, it releases the fragrance and flavor. If you are like the bean, when things are at their worst, you get better and change the situation around you.
When the hours are the darkest and trials are their greatest, do you elevate to another level? How do you handle adversity? Are you a carrot, an egg or a coffee bean?
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The most known story:
There was a king there was a queen both were dead the story end
Main character:King and queen
Problem: Both were dead
Solution: The story ends
Twist: I said that
Final sloution: doesn't matter
Title: Happy ending
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The Secret Society of Thieves: A Lesson Learned
Ajay was roaming outside after 9 p.m even though lockdown was imposed. Suddenly the police came and asked him to stop. Ajay was surprised and confused. He thought he was alone and nobody would notice him. The police asked him for his identity and purpose of being outside. Ajay hesitated to answer as he knew he was breaking the law.
As they were questioning him, a woman nearby started screaming for help. The police officers immediately ran towards her leaving Ajay behind. Ajay saw a figure running away from the scene and realized it was the thief who had robbed him a few days back. Without thinking twice, he started running after the thief.
The chase took them through dark alleys and deserted streets. Ajay was determined to catch the thief and get his belongings back. As he was about to catch up, the thief disappeared into a building. Ajay followed him inside and found himself in a strange room filled with strange objects. Suddenly, the door shut behind him, and he was trapped.
As he looked around, he realized that he had stumbled upon a secret society of thieves. They were all staring at him with suspicion and hostility. Ajay knew he was in trouble and needed to come up with a plan to escape. He searched the room and found a small window that led to the outside.
He managed to open the window and climbed out, but as he landed on the ground, he felt a sharp pain in his leg. He had stepped on a thornleaf plant, which caused a severe allergic reaction. He struggled to move, but he knew he had to keep going. He crawled and dragged himself through the streets until he finally reached his home.
When he woke up the next morning, he realized that he had been in a coma for several days. The police had found him on the street and rushed him to the hospital. They also managed to catch the thief and recover Ajay's stolen belongings.
As he lay in the hospital bed, Ajay realized that he had learned a valuable lesson. Breaking the law was never worth it, and it could lead to dangerous situations. He vowed to never break the law again and to be a law-abiding citizen.
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Here are the corrections
1. Mistake 1: The car started deviating suddenly
We add adverbs of manner after the verb .also better word for deviating is ,the car swerved abruptly.
2.The car speed was not too high- the car wasn't speeding on the road
3. One of the Tyre is wrong grammar
We should say one of the TyreS( plural)
4.devoid of air is very bookish, in simple conversational English We say the car had a flat Tyre!
5.Tool kit was not there again is bookish version and Native English speakers don't say this. They say the tool kit was missing!
6."However as it was early morning"
We can't use however and as one after the other.both are conjunctions.
7.Family got relief : family felt relief or was relieved sounds much better.
8.Ajay slowly and carefully drove the car
Wrong again, look at the first example
Adverb of manner here slowly and carefully are adverbs of manner so it will come at last.
Ajay drove the car slowly and carefully
I really appreciate your efforts to teach English but I believe whether it is English,Hindi or any regional language we must try to be correct,lucid and free-flowing. Story writing is not only about technique it is as much about choice of words and correct sentences.
sister I'm admiring at your correcting mistakes i dunno where are you from if you don't mind sis will you help me to learn english please
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He made a good story okk. Miss Or Mr hater
@@artiparihar6588 no one told he dint do a good job
One day Ajay was roming outside it was 9 pm and the lockdown has started ,suddenly two police officer stop him and asked its 9 pm and lockdown has been started and you are outside. Ajay got scared ! and said sir i am little late and walking to my house officer asked from where are you coming . Hearing this Ajay get frightened and sayed slowely that I m just walking but the officers told do you don't know about lockdown. Ajay told i know about but i was little late because a old lady was trying to cross the road so i helped him . And listening to this officers apperciate him and went to work .
Care by a Father for his son
Ajay was roaming out by 9:00 p.m.. The lockdown was imposed in the country and the police was on duty. Ajay was going by the road where there was no police but unfortunately the police caught him. When inquired, Ajay told that her son was in extreme pain as he fell from stairs. After knowing that police said to Ajay that he should leave else anything serious can happen. Although when he was in the way his car diesel finished and he was in too much hurrry that he can't thought any solution.
As he was standing the police man who meet Ajay before saw him and asked what happen and therefore, he helped Ajay to reach the hospital and his son was out of danger then.
Written by-: Unnati
Very good story
You have a lot of grammatical mistakes and you used "As he" a lot which made it look odd and story is incomplete. It was just short story and you didn't mentioned everything in detail so it was not good
@Muhammad Eshan I know and I have written the story much better than her ok
@DRAGON GAMING Just shut up
@DRAGON GAMING I too wrote the story ok in my book but thing I can't send you the pic I think UA-cam should have an update of chatting sending pics etc. For proving wrong to the person who is provoking you
Editing 🔥🔥🔥
English King 👑🔥💀
And this video is better than others keep going 👍👍
Thanks bhai 1 no. Sikhate ho bhaiya! 🎉🙂😉
Ajay was roaming outside after 9pm even lockdown was imposed. Suddenly Police came and asked him, why he is roaming around the corner. Because of Ajay qas careless guy, he went out to buy cigarettes. Police took him straight to lockup. One hour later, he asked Police for making a call. They said No. Now Ajay realizes his careless attitude and begs for pardon. Police allows him to make one call. He called his friend but his number was busy at the moment. Police, asks him for some money contribution and then they can release him. Ajay told them he got no money at the moment. Then, police thought why shouldn't not they teach some lesson to this careless guy. So, they took him with them on patrolling. All day, Ajay was watching the barren streets with hungry stomach. Police didn't give him anything to eat because once he tried to run. Later on evening Police sets Ajay free with the Warning of being careful next time.
Message of the story : You have to care sometimes for atleast yourself.
Please please please give a feedback 🙏
Very Good Bete....... I am the English Professor from the America and I like your story...
Fabulous 🤩
YOU ,VE GOT A GREAT SKILL OF TEACHING 😄😄😄
Ajay was going out with his family on a picnic in his car but forgot to inspect the car, the car stopped on mid highway.After checking, Ajay found out that the petrol had got over. He forgot to fill up the tank before leaving. The problem was that their car got bad where there was no fuel station.He was worried as they had been planning the trip for quite a long time and finally they got the chance to visit.He prayed God to help him. As he was sad, a person came by and asked him what happened. He told the whole situation to that man. The man laughed and said that he was lucky as he just got extra fuel. The man offered Ajay to take the fuel that he was carrying in the bottle. Ajay was hesitant to take the help but when his parents forced him he took it and passed on money to that helpful man. Ajay filled the petrol and resumed his journey. As they were wrapping the picnic, Ajay remembered that man and said Thank you
pls check it sir
I liked your story
I hope you don't mind me helping you.
On mid highway ( remove on, no need of preposition)
Ran out of Petrol
Car broke down in a place where there was no fuel station.( gone bad ke badle broke down)
Ajay remembered se achcha hoga was reminded of the man( ajay ko achanak uska khayal aaya ya yaad aayi) keep learning, good luck :)
Can you pls help to write a story on dream girl? Plss i really want to write a book! I'm 12y old i really wanted to write a book! Plss help me to write ✨
@@raniamazharvlogswhat sort of story?
@@raniamazharvlogsI love writing and I usually write both poems and stories I have already completed half of my fantasy book Idk if I'll publish it my parents will not support me so I stopped working on my book Idk if I can help you as what you just said really touched me I appreciate your dream and you have the potential so I thought if I could help you as I myself won't get chance to publish my own book maybe helping an another author to publish a book can complete my dream❤
@@sitapant8774 aww thankyou so muchh 🤍but how i can publish it?
Thanh you sir to understand us that what is a story
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Who watch before one day of exam please 🥺 like the comment 😂
2 hours before 🎉🎉🎉🎉
I myself write and your tips helped me to write such a wonderful one that I got an award for it so thank you.
bravo ! dude cool😎😎efects
in tha video🎥
the best video to learn what is a story
Great Explanation in Simple words...Thank You ❤😊
Easy to Understand the format of Story Writing Although it's basic level which Every Story Writer should Know Thank You for sharing such a Simple Skillfull Content
Thank you bro tomorrow was my English exam you helped.😊🎉
Love u bro ....superb video ...
Thank u so much for this creative story writing
Thank you sir, it helped to pass my CRA exams (common revision test)
Thank you sir . I have to writer it and publish in my school magazine. It is very helpful 😊
Thank you for making this video
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Tomorrow is my english exam. Thank you so much for making this video.
Me also in kendriya vidyalaya
😅Tomorrow is my story telling competition It helps me a lot thank you so much😊😊
Thanks a lot today my english exam before 8 minutes I watch this video and same story was came . Again. Thanks 😀
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Very good keep it up
ajay was roaming outside after 9pm. even though lockdown was imposed , suddenly police came and he showed his middle finger to police and he was arrested and put up in the jail and his story was finished ,
this got me rolling on the floor laughung at 1am....its my exam tomorrow lol
Video helped me a lot in doing exam it is very much helpful thnks a lot ❤❤😊
Legends are watching this before 30 min before going to school for exam😂😂😂
Exactly
This method try in upsc exam
@@rasmimohanty4563 🤣🤣 fail hona pakka he!!
*Sir, can we write the story in paragraphs or should it be written in one para only??*
*Also thankyou sir for this video.*
one fine day Ajay and his friends had friendly meeting to go outside for dinner. but they had forgotten about the new rule imposed by the indian government that no one should be outside past 9, so they enjoyed their dinner talked a lot everybody left home except Ajay because he had to walk home but he had lost his way so he roamed around but didn’t realize it was past 9 suddenly the police came and asked ajay why he was roaming around past 9 ajay had no answer because of his nervousness but then he thought the police are here not to hurt him , so he told them he was lost thinking it would solve everything and he wouldn’t get a ticket but the cops had further questions and told that his answer was not valid but suddenly ajay told abt his dinner and that he didnt have a car to reach back home and had to walk home, the police feeling sympathy helped ajay reach his house by taking him home in the police car ajay was thankful to the indian police for this help, Ajay was happy the police was happy and everything had a well end :)
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Wow. What a fabulous and simple story. Well done
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Thanks for this video😊😊❤
Tommorow is my English half yearly thanku so much sir
No my grandmother, nor my mother or anyone ever read me a story as a child.
Very easiest explanation and beautifully presented 👍👍👌👌also there is exam tomorrow English 1 story writing ✍ 10 marks total 50 marks paper 📃 sir give me blessings 🙌 🙏. Your guidance is the way to success 🙏
Thanks bro your realy help full of me .story writing may first aaya hu thank for this love you bro 👍👍😀
All his videos are all excellent and understandable ..... 😍🤩 Love from chennai
Very much thank you😊😊😊😊😊❤
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Problem: Many...😝🤪
Solution: Always there...👌🏻
Twist: The main villain enters the scenario...😱🤯
Final Solution: One Piece 😆😆👌🏻👌🏻
(A joke that only One Piece fans will understand..) Thanks alot! Your explanation helped.
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Lol 😂
Op
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Legends watching one day before exam...😂
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Thanks this really helped💬
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My story : Ek tha Raja Ek thi Rani khatm hogai unki kahani 😂😂😅
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Thank you very much sir❤❤❤
Sir , nice teaching , thank you so much
u made things so easier for us ...trust me ....thnx a lot
Sir when tool box was not there how they took out the wheel of the car
yes how ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
True😂❤
sometimes you do not need to say the main chara. Though there are 2 endings. One is a happy ending and a sad ending.
I HAVE ALSO
Tomorrow is my English term 1 exam, thanks for helping sir!😊😀
Same
Same
My after 1 week 👌
my is tomorrow on 29 sep 2021
Same
Hey guy you deserve to go 2 million ❤❤😊
After 2 hours I have my ut 1 english exam (off-line) and this video help me a lot
The lazy dog-
Once upon a time there lived a lazy dog called braxy, he was very selective about food and preffered meat over anything else.He used to sleep the whole day and release toxic gases from his butt.The dog was fat because of devouring tons of meat everyday.His owner was worried, then one day he saw the dog was literally 100metres away from his home,the owner was confused and checked the cctv footage and saw braxy chasing a cat that had meat in his mouth , braxy was running faster than ever,pounding those feet on the floor with such force.Finally he had got the piece of meat.This enlightened the owners brain with a led light, the owner on the next day,took a log of wood and hanged a piece of meat on it with a rope, he called out braxy and he rushed quickly to get it and since this incident, braxy has been really active.
I honestly made this up
congratulations🎉
It was a quick teaching and a good example also with the picture.
Sir narrative writing and story writing is the same thing or not ?
sir what is the name of your software in which you teach us
Sir i likes to write a story but how to started.because my english is weak.but I want to write story.
Thank you sir yesterday was my English exam and your tips helped me a lot
Today is my thank you a lot for the video ❤
Thanks sir my son have tomorrow exam your explanation is best 👍👍
Yeah right 👍🏻😌
Care by a Father for his son
Ajay was roaming out by 9:00 p.m.. The lockdown was imposed in the country and the police were on duty. Ajay was going by the road where there was no police but unfortunately the police caught him. When inquired, Ajay told that her son was in extreme pain as he fell from stairs. After knowing that police said to Ajay that he should leave else anything serious can happen. Although when he was in the way his car diesel finished and he was in too much hurry that he can't think any solution.
As he was standing the policeman who meets Ajay before saw him and asked what happen and therefore, he helped Ajay to reach the hospital and his son was out of danger then.
Written by-: akshaya
Thank u so much sir ❤❤
Which Ultra legends are watch before exam 😅❓
Me😂😂
1st learn English
Thank you bhaiya because of you I was able to write a good story 🤗😚♥️🌟💫✨
Thanks sir!
I remember something
Main charecter, follow by event 1.
Event 1 has problem and climax..
I remember my teacher talking about Foreshadow pretty useful but I prefer this idea because I'm writing a compo
Tysm now I might have a better chance of passing the finals
Everyone who is having exam tomorrow or today , good luck for your exam. I am also having exam tomorrow!
Best of luch fighting 👍
I have an exam tomorrow and I am watching it at 11 o clock 😂
@@smuthukumaran1same 😂😂
Thank you
So good Ajay this was too helpful for my exam...Thankyou and please post like this video's....
On coming, Wednesday is my English language exam and I have story writing as one of my subtopics. This video will help me a lot. I will surely comment on how my exam went
All the best for your upcoming exams.
How your exams went??
Haw was your exam
How was your exams
Almost 100% of educational videos these comment is present but it also get so many likes too
Like those legend which are watching thise video one day before exam 🤣🤣
Ya bro
Thank You So much ! ... 👍
Sir on Monday 04/09/23 is my English exam and you help me a lot 😊😊
Same bro
4:53 sir very good video but still in this example you add “but”and “moral” between the story which you yourself said no to add 😅
Tomorrow is my term2 exams u helped a lot thank you sir
Myalso
My also
Nice explanation 😊😊
The video is great sir. But I have some points for you all to see.
A story doesn’t always have to have a hero or main protagonist . Even if you choose to have a protagonist, I think we should focus on the character’s personality more than strength. And secondly why do we always have to have a problem. We can also create stories with put having a problematic plot.
Thanks sir for telling five steps to create a good story
Ajay, was roaming outside after 9.pm even though lockdown as imposed.Suddenly the police come and ask Ajay for the reason to break the rules,Ajay got surprised when one policeman said him to get Into their vehicle.Another policeman said first give the Fine of Rs/3000 but Ajay has lacking of cash ,Ajay got into trouble that he has to go for cell for a day, Suddenly another policeman said leave him first time and next time follow the rules,Wear the Musk and at the same time go outside with some cash😆
To break the rules you have to understand and follow the rules first
Excellent 👍
ap ny jo video bnai hy ye kis trah bnai hy which app you are using to make your video??