"I decided to order contacts online" Creepypasta

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КОМЕНТАРІ • 255

  • @yahney-marie
    @yahney-marie 2 роки тому +86

    this was awesome. scary when it needs to be on a supernatural and grounded level. not insanely overdone nor “too grounded”. best story i’ve heard since the one about the girl stuck in the school and the timeloop. beautiful.

    • @Luis-ky7wx
      @Luis-ky7wx 2 роки тому +1

      Link?

    • @dankchickienuggies2518
      @dankchickienuggies2518 2 роки тому

      Title?

    • @legallypumpkin
      @legallypumpkin 2 роки тому +5

      Oh my gosh that story is possibly one of my favorites I’ve ever listened to!! It genuinely talked me out of what she was planning ^^;

    • @legallypumpkin
      @legallypumpkin 2 роки тому +8

      Also, for the other two replies, it is titled “lost in a snowstorm, I stumbled into an abandoned school - I don’t think it’s safe” ^^

  • @EdgyShooter
    @EdgyShooter 2 роки тому +92

    Clots are seriously no joke for people with paralysis, hence the need for regular physiotherapy and ultrasounds

    • @NoArtisticLimitation
      @NoArtisticLimitation 2 роки тому +13

      Clots are no joke in general, but definitely agreed.

    • @EdgyShooter
      @EdgyShooter 2 роки тому +14

      @@NoArtisticLimitation Indeed. Sadly being paralysed massively increases the chance of thrombosis due to the lack of motion of the limbs, similar to the (much lower) risk faced by regular long haul passengers. Make sure to move around folks!

  • @raymondfilyau7500
    @raymondfilyau7500 2 роки тому +46

    Im a grown ass man sitting here with tears in my eyes listening to this friggin story! Now that was damn good narrating!!! No one else could have done this story any better!!

    • @moonchild66
      @moonchild66 2 роки тому +1

      👍 agreed!!!!

    • @MyXyle666
      @MyXyle666 10 місяців тому

      41 year old guy here driving for uber. Had to turn off the app for a minute because this one was rough

  • @ZedMazaus480
    @ZedMazaus480 2 роки тому +93

    This story is pretty profound. So deep and pulls at the heart strings at almost every turn. Deffinetly on my top 10 short stories.

  • @savagegoose5124
    @savagegoose5124 2 роки тому +128

    This wasn't as scary as I expected, but the overall morality of it was so nice, I think it makes a nice change for the OP to have a selfless personality and have reason, fate is destined to happen after all, since if he could see the people, then down the line something would have happened, but since he couldn't, fate was already set for him, and he can't change it, like looking at a clock, you can't skip time, you just have to wait for the inevitable.

  • @GmodPlusWoW
    @GmodPlusWoW 2 роки тому +57

    *Ann:* "Your contact lenses from The All-Seeing Eye just arrived."
    *OP:* "The All-Seeing Eye? They can't have my brand! I HAVE SPECIAL EYES..."
    *Ann:* "Look. Look with your special eyes."
    *OP:* "MY BRAND!"
    Anyone remember that ad?

    • @MattRevs
      @MattRevs 2 роки тому +3

      Omg

    • @CynfulExotics
      @CynfulExotics 2 роки тому +2

      I still say I have special eyes from that ad. 😆

  • @kamenwaticlients
    @kamenwaticlients 2 роки тому +14

    This story made me cry. It made me think of the ones I've lost, watched passed especially my mom. Watching her fade.

  • @Texan_Patriot
    @Texan_Patriot 2 роки тому +146

    I haven't cried during a creepy pasta ever....always a first time for everything I guess. Such a good story, so powerful...

    • @ricardocosta6987
      @ricardocosta6987 2 роки тому +2

      Not my first time, but its been a while

    • @ashleyalexandra9982
      @ashleyalexandra9982 2 роки тому +1

      Go listen to Pokemon Jessica by this same narrator if you want to cry at a creepypasta! Excellent story

    • @ricardocosta6987
      @ricardocosta6987 2 роки тому

      @@ashleyalexandra9982 already heard that one, didn't cry but loved it

    • @judahsk8s343
      @judahsk8s343 2 роки тому +2

      😢😢😢😢

    • @judahsk8s343
      @judahsk8s343 2 роки тому +1

      😢😢😂😂😢

  • @affexxe
    @affexxe 2 роки тому +8

    Listening to these stories helps me fall asleep so i usually listen every night. But sometimes its the oposite. Some stories are just so good i find myself wide awake, following every word instead. This was one of them and now i'm writing this with tears in my eyes. Amazing story.

  • @denniseriksson6135
    @denniseriksson6135 2 роки тому +15

    This ones really hit the spot, so much emotion in a relatively short story, i love theese, even tho it mostly have tragic endings, it gets stuck in my mind, 10/10 for both author and narrator (as usual) . Thanks

  • @1ee001
    @1ee001 2 роки тому +7

    wasn't so sure about this one just based on the title and thumbnail...but i am so glad i clicked on it. easily the best video on this channel. i loved the story so much 👏👏

  • @earndoggy
    @earndoggy 2 роки тому +24

    A janitorial job is NOT demeaning! Nothing is demeaning if you give it your best.

    • @SirKickBan
      @SirKickBan 2 роки тому

      Any job that doesn't respect you is demeaning, and giving those jobs your best is only rewarding them for treating you that way.

    • @earndoggy
      @earndoggy 2 роки тому +2

      @@SirKickBan I disagree. I am responsible for my actions and I won't let them bring me down.

  • @tristanbuckner1170
    @tristanbuckner1170 2 роки тому +6

    Creepymcpasta: “My brand”
    My regressed, meme addled brain: “They can’t have my brand, I have special eyes…”

  • @Nyctonaut
    @Nyctonaut 2 роки тому +65

    I can't even imagine where this one's gonna go. Whenever I see a title like this, as a lifelong horror buff, my imagination goes wild with what the story could possibly be! Now I def gotta listen and see if my predictions were correct!

    • @Nyctonaut
      @Nyctonaut 2 роки тому +1

      @@kirakaffee9976 hahaha!! That's hilarious. 😆

    • @Katarina155
      @Katarina155 2 роки тому +1

      So how'd you do?

    • @Nyctonaut
      @Nyctonaut 2 роки тому +1

      @XxNergi same lol

    • @Nyctonaut
      @Nyctonaut 2 роки тому +2

      @@Katarina155 totally wrong. Lol

  • @ashkanr4796
    @ashkanr4796 Рік тому +3

    goddamit! i come here for fear and adrenaline, instead I close the tab with heart broke and bleed a ton of emotion these feelpastas always get me :(

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 2 роки тому +24

    This reminds me of The Nightmare Room episode Four Eyes where the main protagontist gets the wrong glasses and it gives him the power to see aliens impersonating his friends and people around him.

    • @Texan_Patriot
      @Texan_Patriot 2 роки тому

      Yeah whatever that show is, it ripped off "They Live" pretty badly it sounds like...."JUST PUT ON THE GLASSES!" The makeup was pretty freaky for an '80s horror/action flick.

    • @shane3429
      @shane3429 2 роки тому +4

      Reminded a bit of Zelda Majoras Mask, and the contacts were like the lens of truth. The meteor shower was like the moon.

    • @sephirahisui
      @sephirahisui 2 роки тому

      Reminded me of the anime "Another" about a girl with a prosthetic eye that can see "the color of death" in people

  • @MADBD619
    @MADBD619 2 роки тому +3

    Just what kind of contacts did he order online anyway? REAPER Contacts?!😱

  • @laurengardella9524
    @laurengardella9524 2 роки тому +4

    Well this made me feel better about my cat passing suddenly at four years old. I've been beating myself to bits over it and I feel it's my fault. This relieved me a bit.

  • @leonmashedpotatos4854
    @leonmashedpotatos4854 2 роки тому +3

    This one’s absolutely incredible I never get chills from scary stories like this anymore

  • @Dendrocnide
    @Dendrocnide 2 роки тому +6

    a seller named ''the all seeing eye'', yep classic optical marketing, definitely nothing suspicious to SEE there

  • @Datadog-1
    @Datadog-1 Рік тому +2

    10 years for a first offender trying to sell their recently deceased parent’s pills? I highly doubt that, especially considering the recent trauma of losing a parent…

  • @rodneybuckentime4838
    @rodneybuckentime4838 2 роки тому +3

    I knew what the plot twist was as soon as everyone was transparent in the store. God, that's absolutely dreadful, man.

  • @tristanbuckner1170
    @tristanbuckner1170 2 роки тому +3

    Oh fuck, that ending…that actually hit pretty hard. I feel like creepy pastas can be pretty varied in their quality, but damn, that was actually haunting…

  • @askashe2892
    @askashe2892 2 роки тому +3

    At almost the end of the story when the light bulb goes off and you realize what's about to happen. Creepy!! This was a great story and the narration was fantastic!

  • @vincentshadetree
    @vincentshadetree 2 роки тому +5

    Came here for the chills, walked away with the feels 🥲

  • @jaylush8566
    @jaylush8566 2 роки тому +2

    Made me cry. Thank you for this one.

  • @jfranks1295
    @jfranks1295 2 роки тому +5

    Fantastic pick! I enjoy hearing material that takes the time to actually flesh out an actual story. The fact that it was fantastic story and presentation helps too :)

  • @EdgyShooter
    @EdgyShooter 2 роки тому +3

    Very enjoyable that one! And that includes the emotional tugs on the heartstrings that make it feel more real

  • @miffedcuttlefish6139
    @miffedcuttlefish6139 2 роки тому

    And here I thought HE was the one fading. Like the contacts would eventually back fire on him. This was a wonderfully bittersweet story.

  • @ThermaCorp
    @ThermaCorp 2 роки тому +1

    Creepypasta- a story typically withh a scary factor. however some break your heart and leave you in tears. another great naration

  • @upomamoitro2999
    @upomamoitro2999 2 роки тому +4

    This story....it was sooo... beautiful 💙
    It's been long since I cried listening to any audio story

  • @jayceec3539
    @jayceec3539 2 роки тому +2

    1 of the best stories our family has heard so far.

  • @JP-rx2zu
    @JP-rx2zu 2 роки тому +3

    This one was honestly just beautiful.

  • @nookleer
    @nookleer 2 роки тому +1

    Holy hell that was amazingly written and read.
    Kudos. I was blown away. Every time I let my guard down i got smacked by a tiny but major twist.

  • @lukebarroso449
    @lukebarroso449 2 роки тому +9

    The artwork for these videos are always nice 👌

  • @L3_EnvyOnTTok
    @L3_EnvyOnTTok 2 роки тому +12

    Hope you’ve been well creeps!! Amazing narration as always!

  • @rublinlafebre3674
    @rublinlafebre3674 8 місяців тому

    That was a tear jerker. But in a way that you are still smiling. Not happy tears, nor sad ones. Just.. content tears , I guess you could say. Good job!!

  • @jacknapyer
    @jacknapyer 2 роки тому +2

    Loved this one! Bittersweet… 🥹

  • @mrfriendhorror
    @mrfriendhorror 2 роки тому +2

    Such a powerful story of morals. Really got me thinking. Amazing as always.

  • @walcodebruyn2135
    @walcodebruyn2135 2 роки тому +5

    Perfect bedtime story thanks a lot ☺

  • @rocknrollchemist9406
    @rocknrollchemist9406 2 роки тому +1

    Wow! One of my all time favorites.

  • @Heartmelt4
    @Heartmelt4 2 місяці тому

    I couldn’t help but think of the “my brand” contacts commercial when he discovered it was his brand in the package

  • @Nepafarius
    @Nepafarius Рік тому

    I figured the contacts were going to be inverted at the end, and he'd see Ann beside him. The meteor killing them all isn't as satisfying imo, but I understand the power of the narrator still going to watch it.

  • @octoberalvarez3490
    @octoberalvarez3490 2 роки тому +2

    Such a beautiful story. Thank you so much

  • @trishamingin9003
    @trishamingin9003 2 роки тому +3

    Perfect way to end a stressful day! Ahhhhh..... Thank you so much sir!

  • @reeven1721
    @reeven1721 2 роки тому +1

    16:05 That sarcasm/wit is marriage material. Would have fallen in love right there if he isn't already.

  • @onanthebarbarian4842
    @onanthebarbarian4842 2 роки тому +2

    This story is very similar to another I've heard. Except there it's an inherent power a guy has, where people close to death become incorporeal to him. He becomes a doctor to make the most of it, then one day notices he can't touch anyone anymore, and he's writing to say that he doesn't know whether it's because he's about to die himself, or because something really bad is about to happen. I thought that was more effective, honestly. This story just lays it out flat and 90% of it would have been the same without the magical contacts.

  • @CLCinflorida
    @CLCinflorida 2 роки тому +4

    I'm loving this Storyline 👍♥️✌

  • @xpikapeltx22
    @xpikapeltx22 2 роки тому

    This was significantly better than I expected. I thought it would be a bit ridiculous but wow. The ending especially.

  • @danutoballzz
    @danutoballzz 2 роки тому

    The story was good and when I put 2 and 2 together I was all like "oh sh*t I see what's going on" so good.

  • @wesleythomas7125
    @wesleythomas7125 2 роки тому +1

    They won't have my brand. I've got S P E C I A L eyes 👁👄👁

  • @thefishgolder
    @thefishgolder 2 роки тому +1

    came for the horror left with the feels

  • @kikikungfukakes6639
    @kikikungfukakes6639 Рік тому

    as a person that wears contacts, and lives with ghosts this is low key horrifying in a different way. Thank you

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 2 роки тому +1

    Ok, prediction, a meteor is going to hit the earth and kill everyone he cannot see…ahh, the one lady he CAN see is leaving town! I’m so close…it seems that I was onto something…great story! More sadness than creepy, but no less enjoyable. Top marks to the author!

  • @agentsnorlson7913
    @agentsnorlson7913 2 роки тому +3

    MC would have solved the initial problem by having glasses instead

  • @ZoeyTheWoofer
    @ZoeyTheWoofer 2 роки тому +2

    Why you have to gimme a sad pasta, now I do a cry ;~;
    Amazing narration!!
    So good it brought a tear to my eye, lol

  • @deborahlindsey1229
    @deborahlindsey1229 2 роки тому +3

    This was soooo sad but good!

  • @rustyspoon4911
    @rustyspoon4911 2 роки тому +3

    I ordered contacts from the UK once they gave me a gummy

  • @davidlittlejohn6636
    @davidlittlejohn6636 2 роки тому +3

    Another good story and a Excellent reading...!!!👍👍👍

  • @kishaa819
    @kishaa819 2 роки тому +1

    What a lovely, sad, story 🥺

  • @brotherjew1
    @brotherjew1 2 роки тому

    Creepy pasta titles be like: “Never buy off brand condoms from a shady man in an alley.”

  • @SWA81
    @SWA81 2 роки тому +2

    Holy shit, now this is a great story. Excellent job OP!

  • @nedisahonkey
    @nedisahonkey 2 роки тому

    Lol before this I got an ad with the song" My neck, My back"
    Definitely never thought I'd hear that 😂

  • @GrifoStelle
    @GrifoStelle 2 роки тому

    Reminds me of that mind bending story with that garbled note 'don't trust with your eyes see' or something along those lines. It made me wonder if op had gone off the deep end right up to the sucker punch and the helplessness that followed. Great story.

  • @smileyp4535
    @smileyp4535 2 роки тому +1

    9:04 - 9:22ish unfortunately what the manager is afraid of (or rather making light of) is actually something that happens a lot in assisted living facilities, (not to say it's at the point that it's happening all the time or at EVERY facility but and good luck ourbi)
    Edit: had to find the time and I'm on mobile

  • @Lofsnesmonster
    @Lofsnesmonster 2 роки тому +4

    This was a top tier short story might be my favourite. Wasn’t scary but it was amazing nonetheless ❤️😌

  • @stumptdawg4684
    @stumptdawg4684 2 роки тому +1

    Goodness me I cried so much cuz the way anne died is similiar to my grandma's and the stuff the guy did Is so similiar to how I reacted after she died she was paralized and had a blood clot I will forever miss her

  • @dexmods8055
    @dexmods8055 5 місяців тому

    makes me wonder how translucent i would or wouldn't be to someone with contacts like that...
    lupus, scoliosis, and epilepsy make me fear for my life every day

  • @_Your_Mom_Is_Very_Hot
    @_Your_Mom_Is_Very_Hot 2 роки тому +6

    40:14 My jaw just dropped, I haven't finished the video yet but I think I know how its going to end, this writer is amazing

  • @Melcatsite
    @Melcatsite 2 роки тому +1

    This was a feelspasta I didn't know I needed

  • @ringluvr
    @ringluvr 2 роки тому +6

    Thank you for helping me sleep. Your 24 hour streams have been a winner for me.

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 2 роки тому

    His portrayal of Ann is saddening. On top of her story it’s even sadder.

  • @thalia5382
    @thalia5382 2 роки тому +8

    Weird, I’m assuming the author is basing this off of how the American system works to get contacts
    (Please correct me if I’m wrong with this info)
    In my country, they only check your eyes ever 2 years (excluding specific degenerative disorders) even then, they don’t alway dilate your pupils when double checking your new prescription (and you can get contacts from any eye place, you just need to give them the contact specifications)

    • @histguy101
      @histguy101 2 роки тому +1

      You're correct. In the US, you need an annual exam for contact lenses, and every 2 years for eyeglasses. They don't usually put the dilating drops in your eyes though, unless you request that kind of exam.
      I just order contacts from Britain, whether I have a current prescription or not. My prescription hasn't changed since I was a teenager

  • @ArtemisRavencroft
    @ArtemisRavencroft 2 роки тому

    This one hit really hard... almost made me cry. At least she went peacefully. I feel for all the others though...

  • @dylancampbell1165
    @dylancampbell1165 2 роки тому +1

    The ending was very sweet 😍

  • @tryintolive1960
    @tryintolive1960 2 роки тому

    This was so good. Rare a creepypasta hits every emotion. But this 1 sure did. Excellent writing and narrating.

  • @PLSS
    @PLSS 2 роки тому +1

    this was really quite lovely :) both the story and the narration. well done to all involved

  • @CKlegion7272
    @CKlegion7272 2 роки тому +1

    Very good job!
    👍🏻Greetings from Netherland✌🏻

  • @dogthievery101
    @dogthievery101 2 роки тому

    most stories i've listened to lately haven't been too interesting to me, but this one i really like for a change. tysm!

  • @ashleighstratmann7783
    @ashleighstratmann7783 2 роки тому +1

    I been wearing glasses since elementary school and I don't remember if my vision is ever since the last appointment. I know it hasn't for the last few but it been longer than 13 years for me since I started wearing glasses. I do know my vision is worse in one eye than the other which is normal in those in my family that wears glasses. My grandpa use to keep all his glasses because his vision always changed. It could be worse one day and better the next. Fortunately loss of vision doesn't run in my family like loss of hearing for the men in my family.

  • @droid2645
    @droid2645 2 роки тому +1

    So sad and so beautiful. Good job.💔💛💙

  • @histguy101
    @histguy101 2 роки тому +1

    Why didn't he just drive a few states away and watch the meteor shower from somewhere safe? If the people there are also invisible, he could catch flight outta there. He could drive 100-200 miles in 2-3 hours. He's got from 5pm until 3am. That's 10 hours! If people are still invisible, he'll know that this is going to be a world catastrophe. What's a last minute plane ticket when your frickin life is on the line? Or he could just book a flight to Europe right away knowing already it will be a safe place. That's probably the best option, actually.
    He could even take his urn with him. Not the 6-pack though. That's not allowed on the plane. He'll have to either drink it first, or buy another one at his destination.

    • @NaliTikva
      @NaliTikva 2 роки тому

      Maybe didn't wanna mess with faith? On the other side he wasn't transparent so maybe it wouldn't mess with faith.

  • @MblackMysteryM
    @MblackMysteryM 2 роки тому +1

    I'm in tears bro

  • @Donquixotedoflamingo0107
    @Donquixotedoflamingo0107 2 роки тому +2

    You should do more devil stories 🔥🔥

  • @jamesissadyo
    @jamesissadyo 2 роки тому +1

    Hahaha my prescription gets stronger every year😂😂😂😅😆😄😁😀🙂😐😶😕🙁☹️😦😧😟😥😢😭😭😭😭😭

  • @CidVeldoril
    @CidVeldoril 2 роки тому +1

    So this is basically the plot to the movie "Your Name" except with no happy ending and different characters.

    • @sejalnagpuria9111
      @sejalnagpuria9111 2 роки тому

      exactly what i thought! I'm sure Taki would've also done something similar if Mitsuha was Anne.

    • @CidVeldoril
      @CidVeldoril 2 роки тому +1

      @@sejalnagpuria9111 Obviously there is also no bodyswap involved here. Still, I feel like this story took place in Itomori.

  • @aaronweaver9751
    @aaronweaver9751 2 роки тому +1

    Kudos to the narrator and author.

  • @piercingtheveil7749
    @piercingtheveil7749 2 роки тому +1

    Nice! A long story from the king of creepyPasta

  • @jimathy96
    @jimathy96 2 роки тому +1

    I really enjoyed this story today.

  • @moonchild66
    @moonchild66 2 роки тому +1

    I really like this story!!!! Great narration as always...many thanks🖤🖤🖤🖤

  • @splezzayanowhat6784
    @splezzayanowhat6784 2 роки тому +1

    I wonder how many people he ran over while driving

  • @shilohkay6821
    @shilohkay6821 2 роки тому

    See, I think it's that he's going to die that night, and that's why everyone else looks invisible. That older woman was probably going to or getting ready to die as well, which is why he could see her

  • @Car1Sagan
    @Car1Sagan 6 місяців тому +1

    He should have looked in a mirror or at his arm to see if he was going to die.

  • @jeffreyarnold2626
    @jeffreyarnold2626 2 роки тому

    bittersweet. he will see her again soon.

  • @halonostalgiatheater7440
    @halonostalgiatheater7440 2 роки тому

    That’s a heavy one to carry

  • @druidictroy1157
    @druidictroy1157 2 роки тому

    Yeah, having to check that fu**ing box, no context involved, really sucks a$$.

  • @JimmmyRaynor
    @JimmmyRaynor 2 роки тому +2

    I decided to order the same contact lenses as creeps mcpasta. what I saw will forever be burned into my brain 🧠 🙃

  • @616gnosismaster
    @616gnosismaster 2 роки тому +1

    This is beautiful

  • @SalaD__FrienD
    @SalaD__FrienD 2 роки тому +1

    O man, another Feelspasta, just what I needed 😢

  • @shadowfox1609
    @shadowfox1609 2 роки тому

    I just realized that the reason he couldn't see people anymore except for the granny was all the people are going to die during the meteor shower