My new book was a financial disaster. What happened?
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Austin: I made a book.
Everyone: ...
Austin: No one bought my book.
Everyone: TELL US MORE
Way I see it... the process is more interesting than the result :P
It's like his short film about the making of his short film ... only a few people can get away with it, because only a few people can do it wrong enough the first time to do it right enough the second time - it's an incredible "the making of", much better than "the disaster artist" which was itself pretty good.
SO TRUE
@@Vaaaaadim EXACTLY! That's how he should have done it the first time. He could've put up a video with the title "writing a book is harder than I thought" or something that would attract people's attention.
Hearing about a miserable failure is more interesting than just hearing a pitch + it gives him a kind of underdog appeal; you want to buy the book out of pity for him. Worked for me, I went from considering buying the book to actually buying it :p.
step 1: make a book.
step 2: sell the book.
step 3: realize you got the target demographics wrong.
step 4: make a video about a failed book you made.
step 5: profit.
Yeah I can imagine the 26 year old male stans buying this book right now
@@vinslungur honestly im vaguely interested now
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@@pathlastname9278 Me too, but not enough to buy it , let alone read it.
He won't make his money back. The book looks bad. His last book was painful............so other than the harry potter rewrite....he doesn't have much persuasive power.
I don't follow this dude. But he always pop-ups in my feed every few years with a failed project. Good for him.
For some reason I found this comment to be very funny.
LOOO
LOL
I'm trying to not be rude but "It's a coming-of-age story about family, high school sweethearts, and growing up in the year 1940" has so little information. It's hard to see what would the hook is? Maybe some of Neva's aspirations? Maybe where in the US this took place? Aside from some good cover art, there's no personality. A good hook is short, but still tells you something about the character/s. I get wanting to not spoil too much, but there's just not enough info there to interest me. I might go back and watch the video (honestly never saw it on my feed) but why is there so little information about this on the actual amazon listing?
Yeah it sounds incredibly boring but I'm definitely not the target audience so I think this criticism is invalid.
@@stanstanstan i think even the target audience would want something more to go on than "a coming-of-age story about family, high school sweethearts, and growing up in the year 1940", surely.
I agree, the character doesn't sound proactive, nor motivated by anything, as far as the description goes.
This post reminds me of the phrase "judging a book by it's cover".
If the premise of a story isn't enough to draw you in as a reader/viewer/listener, then you're likely not the intended audience for that story. If I describe Star Wars as "A young man learns he has special powers and becomes instrumental in a rebellion", that's pretty much the same amount of non-information as Neva's Story, but look at how much money that franchise makes. It's also the exact same description as Eragon, The Matrix, Dune, Animorphs, and an awful lot of YA novels.
To be blunt, you're allowed to personally want more details on a story before getting invested in it, but don't go calling authors out for not giving precise summaries. It's not like that would have made this book perform wildly better.
@@Ryu_Himora i don't really understand your point? yeah, if star wars was marketed with such a bare bones premise and 0 other information then it probably wouldn't have sold as well. it's a good thing they didn't just market it as "a young man learns he has special powers and becomes instrumental in a rebellion" and focused on what made it unique and interesting instead. austin probably should've done the same. i do not understand what point you're making.
This is probably the best ad the book could've had.
Honestly this video made me want to read it more then the previous ones
Considering it's been up for just hours and already has twice the viewership of the book's sneak peek video...
exactly. a change of the approach can do wonders ;D
Sure, I guess... Did a whole bunch of middle school girls start watching the channel by any chance?
Okay, while this video is an interesting look into self publishing, it's still not a good place to advertise the book. Here's hoping enough Dads and Uncles with middle school girls to buy gifts for are watching... Otherwise, maybe a couple hundred to an "influencer" who does cater to middle school girls might be a good idea.
Yeah ive never been guilted by proxy into buying a book before
i respect this dude a lot, half of his videos are about all the L’s he’s taken, it takes a big man to have that kind of self reflection and drive to keep going
I agree. I have so much respect for him!
Facts, takes a lot to keep putting yourself out there
i just want this guy to just win at something besides youtube
L?
@@thairinkhudr4259 loss
This guy's workshop failed
He embraced it
His first movie failed
He embraced it
His first book failed
He embraced it
He wrote another book
It failed ...God ..he is such an inspiration
He makes the best behind the scenes videos though
I think his BBU is a success so far his Spider Queen book seems to have sold well, and he raised 50k to make the Atlas movie so
This dude has an amazing way to even capitalise on his failures. It's the second time I'm seeing him do it. Gotta give it to him.
Or maybe he likes being pathetic
for real, I guess he's smart in this regard 😅
It's honestly at least his sixth. There was the video about his failed movie, his failed workshop that nobody came to, the terrible book that he wrote as a teenager, the one about his involvement in a panned Lonelygirl15 spinoff, and the one about Hollywood execs contacting him and about how it all fell through. Guess Austin just has a knack for this.
This man can’t catch a single break with his creative endeavors outside of this channel
Then why not keep doing what works? WE WANT PARACHUTE PART 2.
@@pig0r how to survive a bear attack was pretty much the sequel
@@pig0r I guess that's not what he wants to do. Gotta respect that.
living life, experiencing it all one step at a time.
wish i had his willingness to try new things out :(
@@DOSeater respect, yes! Consume something I don't particulary enjoy just to fulfill an artists dream of "being famous doing what he/she loves", not so much! I love his comedy on that particular sketch, he could totally explore that while trying to send his message through those artistic (and very successful) means! Thats ultimately the point, I think.
Go Austin!
If you're saying "a financial disaster", I'm gonna say a few hundred copies.
Yep. Not even 210 copies.
WOW, I overestimated but suprisingly close
I thought it was a hundred, so the result was pretty solid
It's been an hour and this comment has more likes than the book's had purchased.
@@icannotchoose make that a /couple/ & you're in!
After seeing how many drafts and correction this book went through, I'm amazed that younger me thought it was a good idea to write and publish each chapter of a story one at a time on Wattpad without even having planned the next chapters
God bless the confidence of youth.
“A lady in ____ finds the sweetness of the first love while dealing with the reality of the beginnings of World War II” could be more appealing to young readers.
I love how this guy's career is basically "I made this and it didn't work or it flat out sucked"
A few thousand isn't that much for him. Trust me, content creators make much more than you think, it's crazy. A youtuber of his size wouldn't really mind a loss of a few thousand. Especially if he planned it out. What you said is true though. What I like about his channel is his honesty.
Just as God intended. To fail and to learn from it
@@French_Canadian_Pea_Soup No no, you got it wrong. He intended to annihilate us with fire falling from the sky.
So the guy is writing a book of someone else. And he isn't even a girl like the person in the book. And he nags about money. If you don't have the spirit and the will, don't start to do it in the first place. And you can't fake this spirit and will artificially.
@@dragonmartijn, did you... did you even watch the video? I can't imagine how anyone could misinterpret Austin's intentions any more than you have.
Another long awaited installment in the "I did a thing" series
*"I did a thing...It failed"
Conveniently also the name of an awesome UA-cam channel.
@@mattneff No, I did a thing, I learned a thing or two afterwards, so when it's time for my next book, I'm better prepared....
@@zorinzorinzorin5243 too underrated
It's what he does best :)
"Here's the beginning of my new book"
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"My new book was a financial disaster"
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Me and my good friend have always bonded over literary mediums and writing together, we decided spur of the moment to make a mini book club between the two of us, right as Neva’s Story dropped. We read through it and discussed it weekly, such a good story you’ve put together, your grandmother would be proud.
I remember thinking "oh this looks interesting!"
And then I promptly forgot the book existed
Yeah that's pretty much what I did.
same
yup me too
That was me. I was genuinely curious.
From an accountant who's spent 10+ years auditing publishers and now self-publishes: honestly, where you went wrong was starting with trying to predict total lifetime sales of your book, instead of focusing on your breakeven point. Even pros at traditional publishing houses get their estimates wrong ALL THE TIME (they'll have fancy spreadsheets and stuff but it all really comes down to wild guesses).
~$5k is fairly middle of the road as far as self-publishing costs go (the typical range is anywhere between $0 to $10k) but if you had created a title P&L to begin with, then monitored how each additional investment you made changed the breakeven point, that would have helped you reduce the size of your loss.
Another thing is the pricing - $12.99 for a paperback and $4.99 for an ebook of a NOVELLA?! Not my genre or niche, so I'm not sure whether this is on par for this particular kind of book, but it seems high to me (especially for a first title by a new author).
Combine that with your cover (does not match the style of the other covers in your categories, which is...not a good thing), your title (super generic - who is Neva and why should we care?) and your blurb (it's all about you and your grandmother, with some very generic stuff - instead of clearly telling someone what kind of story they're in for), I very much doubt the $150 you spent on Amazon ads were effective at all. Readers being targeted by Amazon ads or just coming across your book who don't know anything about you are unlikely to go for it.
HOWEVER!
Based on your current Amazon Best Seller Rank, you're selling about 9 ebooks per day and 19 paperbacks per day right now (maybe this video gave you a boost!) so that's a good place to be in. That boost won't last forever, so you have a narrow opportunity to fix things.
The good news is that your cover and your blurb each matter as much as the contents of your book. Which means 2 out of the 3 factors that drive book sales can STILL be fixed!
In order of least expensive to most expensive:
1. Write a better blurb. (FREE)
Delete the current blurb. The acknowledgements/dedication section is the place to put all the sentimental stuff about why you wrote the book and what it means to you, etc - and yours is already super extensive. The blurb is your sales copy, and it should tell people why your book is awesome and they should buy it. At minimum, they need to know: what kind of story they're in for; who the protagonist is; and what problem/s the protagonist is trying to overcome.
2. Move the dedications/acknowledgements/foreword (why is there a foreword in a fiction NOVELLA?!) sections - move all that stuff to the back of the book! (FREE)
Right now, when a potential buyer clicks on "LOOK INSIDE" (assuming they were even compelled to click on the product page in the first place), the first thing they see is a 2 page foreword about your grandmother, how this book is a book she never finished writing and that you also have questions about...and they haven't even read ANY of the story. All they want at this point is to take a look at the first few pages, and they have to scroll.
(they're probably not going to spend the time scrolling. Most likely they're going to click off and look for a different book)
3. Change the title to something more compelling (FREE). If you're not sure what would be more compelling, come up with 2-3 candidates then do some testing on them with some Facebook ads. ($)
4. Change the cover ($$-$$$)
I know you like the current cover. I know you have already gone through several revisions of it. But your book is listed in "Teen & Young Adult Fiction about Girls & Women", "Teen & Young Adult Girls & Women Fiction" and "Teen & Young Adult Contemporary Romance eBooks" and its cover doesn't match ANY of the top sellers in those categories. The majority of covers in the first two categories are photo-realistic posed shots of the protagonist in question wearing cool clothes or text only titles with close ups of objects; the majority of covers in the romance category feature the love interest revealing a variable amount of bare chest and/or tattoos and smouldering their best Blue Steel at the camera.
Get a cover that stylistically fits in with the other covers in the categories you're targeting.
If I were you, I would do ALL of the above, because if you've written a good book that people enjoy, you should be able to recoup your investment in the long run if you fix these things now.
At an initial investment of $5,103,24, you only need to sell ~1,050 copies at a $4.89 royalty to go from a financial disaster to breakeven. Let's up that to around 1,200 copies to factor in spending some additional money to fix your cover.
1,200 copies is absolutely doable in self-publishing if you have written the right book for the right audience.
Great advice here!!
I screen shot Thai just because it seems so useful lol
I think he should tag it as period drama/comong of age/romance, I think that will result in a better fitting cover than teen girl in stylish clothes or woman getting her blouse torn off
@@thepinkestpigglet7529 Yep, I am actually not sure if Austin's picked the right Amazon categories for this book. I've only read the preview chapter, and it really doesn't vibe with the rest of the books in those categories.
@@swilson5320 Aww...thanks for that! I've been putting out a lot of videos on the business side of self-publishing on my channel, so it's really gratifying to know that you find it helpful!
I love how willing you are to just laugh at yourself and take things in stride. Respect.
You’re such an interesting person, the way you learn and view successes and failures as a learning opportunity is amazing. Really inspiring
I feel we’re glossing over the fact that you finished your grandma’s story - one that she had specifically wanted you to one day write. That’s awesome, I’m sure she’d be proud (or maybe she is proud right now, depending on how things work). From that perspective, doesn’t really matter how many you sold.
i dont believe the grandma had explicitly wanted him to finish it, his mother did. However, thats still just as cool.
Had she? I think McConnell said she never imagined it'd be finished, and that she just talked about it from time to time.
I see what you're doing, Austin. Hitting us with that reverse psychology. I bet a lot of people are going to buy the book due to this video (including me).
Now THIS is how you advertise.
Oh yeah, I am totally buying it for my sister.
Man is now guilt tripping us into buying this book.
And it's fucking working (for me at least).
already excited for the "My new book turned out big after failing hard. What happened?" video!
As someone who aspires to be an author as well this is a humbling and transparent video.
What I appreciate is you don't sugarcoat your failures and you understand and learned from them. I love that you are showing your mistakes as other people can take them as lessons to get better themselves.
Thank you for this
Its amazing that you put in so much effort into making something like this. This project was a huge undertaking, the amount of time and effort you put into it should definitely be celebrated.
That said, I can honestly say, I'm Neva gonna read it.
I'm probably somewhat within the target demographic of the book (young woman that reads a lot of YA, though I personally dislike YA romance). I watched and liked your original video about this project and loved the idea of finishing your grandma's book. I'm a big fan of your content. I also know exactly why I didn't read the book and never expected it to sell. I could tell as soon as I clicked on the Amazon page. I think I also know why my demographic didn't read the book. I don't think you touched upon any of those reasons in your video. Even if your audience was mostly teenage girls, I doubt you'd sell more than five hundred copies.
Gonna put on my tough-love critic hat on and suggest a few reasons why:
- It's low concept, or at least appears that way. The Amazon page has almost nothing to recommend the book or distinguish it from every other book of its kind. Coming-of-age is just not an interesting descriptor. Most every middle-grade and YA book is some sort of coming-of-age. I'm sure the description "It's a coming-of-age story about family, high school sweethearts, and growing up in the year 1940" fits the book, but it also fits five hundred other books. I'm sure the book has more going for it than just that, but the Amazon page wouldn't indicate it. Young girl in historical period is not enough. Regardless of the target demographic, there's countless books with that specific setting and character age that also have attention-grabbing premises (read the Amazon page for the Book Thief). I don't even know what country your book is set in. Who is Neva? Why should I care about her? I'm not going to pay 5 dollars for a Kindle book that I know nothing about. You also listed that it's a romance, and yet there's no information whatsoever on that. If it's a romance, commit to that and market it as such. Who are the people in the romance? Why should we care about them and hope that their romance is a success? Here's the tricky part. Explain that all as concisely as possible.
- The Amazon page description doesn't readily indicate a genre - it either doesn't have a genre, or isn't marketed according to its genre. Low concept books need a genre. I don't personally understand YA Amish Romances. They're all exactly the same (and all equally dull), but they all fit into a wildly popular genre and so are eagerly consumed. Or maybe it does fit into a genre - YA Historical Romance. If so, no aspect of it is marketed or described like a YA Historical Romance. You'd also need to give out ARCs to Goodreads reviewers that really appreciate that genre, to generate interest. Your platform is not good for marketing books - you're not a booktuber, after all. But you do have connections. You could reach out to Booktubers and ask them to promote your book. Either way, you need to tap into the reading community. This here is not a reading community.
- If it does fit into the genre of YA Historical Romance, then it's too short and the cover's entirely wrong for the genre (though the artwork is lovely, it doesn't look like a book cover). If it was marketed towards middle-school age girls (in which case the genre would be middle-grade, not YA), then the protagonist would have had to been around 12 and wouldn't be romantically involved in any serious way. Middle-grade novels don't feature high school girl protagonists. Even if middle-schoolers will sometimes read YA books they don't fall into that target demographic. You have to a) conform to genre conventions in cover and marketing as well as b) stand out in the genre, especially with an engaging premise. The first part comes before the second.
- Your marketing has been really timid. I get it. You don't want to humiliate yourself with yet another potentially-questionable project. But if you don't even seem to like the book or think it's worth reading, why would I?
- Maybe the average book consumer cares who wrote the book. I don't. I really enjoy Austin McConnell's content, but I would only buy Austin McConnell's book if it grabbed my attention and held it. Ultimately, there was nothing to sell it (not characters, premise, genre, or even prose) besides the fact that you wrote it.
Let's take the hat off now. I'm really glad you wrote it (hope it gave you some closure after your loss) and I'm sure it's wonderful - I just have no way of really knowing it's wonderful.
You're good at taking creative risks. Try seeing what happens if you complete revamp the marketing and Amazon page of this book (and, if possible, make your collaborations and send out book copies to Goodreads reviewers). If your beta readers were worth their salt, I suspect the actual novel is good. All you need now is to market it the way it deserves. It's difficult and it's daunting, but hey - at the very least, you could make a fascinating video about it.
Just know whether you choose to spend more time on this project or move on to a fresh venture, we're all excited to see what you create next.
What a lovely comment! I hope it gets more attention as it is very useful not only for him but also for everyone thinking of publishing a novel.
this comment really hit the mark
It looks like a JF book cover to my librarian eye, or possibly a JF graphic novel. Too cartoony to interest the YA audience.
boost!
That's a pretty cooooool review, good job 👍👏👏👏
I bothered to copyright a book and then never published it. It’s literally in the library of Congress and I never did anything with it.
So... Kindle release when?
So your book got into a library, technically. That's still an accomplishment in my eyes.
@@orangemoustash Well thank you for saying that. Got to start somewhere I guess.
@@rinylvinyl Right, this was 25 years ago, I really do need to do something with it. It’s really just a boring collectors book on American Military History. Would really only appeal to a small demographic. I’m focused on trying to write a book and a movie script and those alone are difficult. If I was more dedicated it would be done already. I’m just open to a lot of discouragement.
@@Die-CastMetal u got it fam, love me some nerdy military history
Re losing money on publication:
It's really a memorial to your Grandmother and a gift for your Mother. You could just as well make the e-book version free, or at least on Kindle Unlimited.
I had a similar situation: my wife's Chinese Poetry group wanted to publish a volume, and I warned her about "vanity presses" being a scam. She understood that it wasn't going to be marketed or sold by anyone, but she wanted to buy a bunch of copies to help finance the print run for the benefit of others in her group that could not afford to.
This isn't a common print-on-demand book, but a beautifully made, high-quality volume. And I have about a dozen left after giving out a bunch.
as an english major currently taking a seminar in coming of age modern american fiction (yes this is an amazing coincidence) the one thing i really wish you had done differently was the title. i’ll be honest, i didn’t buy or read the book, but the title is probably part of the reason why. i’ll point to two novellas i read in class the past two weeks for this aforementioned seminar. “The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian” by Sherman Alexie, and “We the Animals” by Justin Torres. these titles tell me what i’m reading in one way or another. theyre wildly different from each other but theyre both evocative in some distinct way. and they mean so much more after the story is over. an amateur mistake that i make often in my writing is letting the title be an afterthought. maybe your title came from your grandmother’s original vision which is great. and i haven’t read the book so maybe the title says more with the added context of the story, but titles in principle should say something ABOUT the story because people read titles before they even read the synopsis. the idea was there and i definitely admire you for the risk. i was one of the people who watched the original announcement videos when they came out, so i guess this is a peek into what kept me from even checking out the amazon page. i admit it is literally judging a book by its cover, but i’m just gonna be honest here.
I'm truly sorry this didn't work out. Regardless, I'm sure your mom and grandmother are very proud.
Your
@@vittovioletcreeper don’t be that guy man
@@conn6r someone had to be him
@@vittovioletcreeper As evidenced by the fact that people are routinely telling you to not be that guy, no you did not have to be that guy
his wallet on the other hand, is depressed
Now that you’ve made a video in the style of your audience’s tastes, I think you might get more sales from your audience
That’s exactly why I was thinking
Maybe that was secretly his plan all along.
Viewers buying the book out of pity will easily double it's initial sales
@@guacamolenightmaretv7720 to 400 you mean? Lol
@@guacamolenightmaretv7720 Perhaps more than double would be better.
You always teach us valuable lessons from your “failures”. Thank you for the vulnerability and honesty. I bet your family is so proud of the book.
Man, you are SO LUCKY to have that bit of creativity from your grandma. My great grandpa was a treasure hunter and a rock hound, and he had hand drawn maps of the mojave that were fucking thrown away by another relative after my great grandpa died. the only reason given was "they weren't worth anything." Some relatives are just vultures, waiting for the richest old person in the family tree to die so they can swoop in and pick the bones clean. Totally not bitter that LITERAL TREASURE MAPS are gone forever. At least i have one thing though, which is an awesome portrait my great grandpa drew of my great grandma on one of his air force manuals during WWII, and i have some of his minerals. You are lucky if you leave anything behind after you die that anyone finds value in
I almost wish Austin had published it with a different title and different cover art. As a teenage girl (pretty close to the target audience) the name and picture don't draw me in at all. The bit about it being his grandma's story does though, so maybe that should've been included. That part seems too cool to not put front and center anyway.
Gotta admire the effort that went into it though!
Ya, you need somthing to draw a crowd.
Yeah the title sucked
I agree about the title, but I love the cover art.
Great criticism lol
If I saw this at a bookstore I might have had picked it up and read the description. But the description doesn't make it sound interesting. I think that was it's biggest flaw.
"By the way, go make a website"
Best segue to a corporate sponsorship ever
i burst into laughing
It really felt like "Well, I gotta make up that money now"
I first subscribed to Austin when I heard him finish a video with "Feel free to subscribe, or not, I don't really care."
You went through the process and that to me is inspirational. I feel like this video will boost that book.
I think it's very sweet that you turned your grandma's story into a real book, and the fact that you basically did it to make your mom's wish come true. that's amazing, Austin
As an aspiring author, this is the kind of video I needed to see. I don’t know if I’ll go the self-publishing route, but it’s nice to get a look at what it entails.
Focus a lot on marketing. Not as, change your product, but discover who likes your book, and how you will get them to read it.
Try doing small stories first that you don’t care much about. It’s good practice and a great way to test ideas.
Austin earns a lot of money because of yt and he can afford to just lose a few thousand which would be a lot for an average joe like yourself. Yeah, probably a good lesson.
And definitely try to market your book so you can get some professional reviews of it out ahead of or at release day. The higher profile the reviewing source, the better.
Daniel Greene and Lindsey Ellis are both UA-camrs who recently published their first books in the last few months. They both talk about their experiences and what they've learned.
Perhaps a book containing “Useless Information” would have been a hit?
THIS, read this Austin! I want a large illustrated book countaining tons of useless information.
@@Game_Hero i want
Austin gonna make a bank out of this
Video: I lost money on a book so I complain about it to recoup my money. Ty Austin
I published my own book, doing my own marketing, no beta readers or anything. I paid 5k for marketing and print versions to sell. Total, I made 6k. I call that a good wash as that's my hobby. But hiring all those people for a 20k story? That's ludicrous!!! My stories go up to 80k words. You should have spent that money on your own development as a writer...which is weird...because you write out your transcripts for your videos, right?
I love how you casually listed Brandon Sanderson, who has sold over 10 million copies, alongside regular book-tubers.
*author tubers
@@theimplications635 Some booktubers have become authors as well.
I love Brandon Sanderson, particularly his Stormlight Archive works. Shallan and Adolin are life lol. But since each book comes out once in every few years, I've been resisting the urge to read Rhythm of War for quite a while now, so please no spoilers =D
@@nosananolife4190 All I'll say is that you will not be disappointed!
Probably because he's also on youtube, giving lectures to help writers. It makes sense to include him if his writing advice helped in the writing or publishing process.
Honestly, big respect for the dedication he put into this.
Damn. I remember seeing the announcement video on my feed, thinking "sure doesn't look like my thing but best of luck to him" and scrolling on.
Sorry it went so poorly man. It may not be my thing, but you deserved more than a couple hundred sales.
I don't think anything is deserved if the story isn't good enough
Love the honesty!
Ive Seen you host a Seminar with NO ONE in attendance, still went through with the whole powerpoint lol You're Fearless
but if no one was there how’d you see it
@@Solarof928 His wife filmed it lmao.
@@madamebkrt Lmaooo
whats fearless about it, no one there to judge you lol
The guy is BEYOND genuine!
Ouch.
- You spent 5x more than the average self-published author
- Middle-grade does better in traditional publishing
- You didn't market to middle-grade sources at all (like teachers/parents/librarians)
- Your cover, although very beautiful, is not on market and does not pop
- You wrote a book you weren't passionate about
- You wrote too it too short
- You priced it too high
Hi, Austin. I love your channel, and I commend you for fulfilling your nana and mother's dream, that's really lovely (I hope my kids grow up to be like you one day).
Self-publishing is definitely a different game than traditional and, based on the sources you gave, I think you needed a lot more research into the business side of things.
I will say, A LOT of people make the same mistakes you did on their first try, so you're not alone. I hope your video will serve as a great warning to help other authors from diving too deep, too fast.
Because this wasn't about money, just writing a beautiful story, I think you achieved your goal regardless. Writing a book that's meaningful to you doesn't always have to be about turning a profit. It can be about the journey and the satisfaction you feel at the end.
I'm sure your mom and nana would be proud of you (I would be if my son had done this). Good on you and good luck with your future projects.
Wonderful analysis of the key issues! :)
Did he say he wasn’t passionate? I mean… everyone who’s read it liked it…. So that criticism seems odd.
Ah, good question. I got that because:
1. It wasn't his idea
2. He said he struggled because he was a different demographic than the protagonist
3. He had difficulty getting it to 20,000 words
4. He spent so much on developmental edits and re-edits
I have no doubt he was passionate about the project (based on all the work he put into it), just not the story.
As a viewer who's followed his channel for a REALLY long time, I'm going to put my armchair psychologist goggles on for a minute and say I also think his struggle with wanting to be an author but not having a "good idea" stems from the paralysis of needing said idea to be "the big idea" or "the perfect idea".
(I only say that in the hopes he reads this and breaks past that fear)
Letting go is something a lot of successful authors have to do. Most of the time their favourite books are not the ones they're remembered for (Harlan Ellison is a good example of this).
It's never EVER the idea, it's the execution.
Anyways, thanks for letting me ramble haha. I'm just glad to be getting new content from Austin, he never disappoints.
For some reason I haven't been getting notifications from the channel for a bit, and completely missed this happening. Having seen this video, I'm glad to have found out about the book and its history and I'll be sure to check it out next payday 🙂
I am looking forward to reading Neva’s Story while taking a 7-hour flight to visit my mother. I haven’t seen her in three years. That first hug will be special because our moms are special.
what i love about you is that you are honest about making a crap ton of mistakes, and are able to effectively reflect on those mistakes and share it with others. You are wildly different from other content creators because you aren't shy about being human and making mistakes. This might sound odd, but you are the most real and human content creator on youtube.
I agree. That's why his videos appeal to me so much.
You were definitely missing professional reviews as well. You have the connections to reach out and get your works reviewed in other publications, I have to assume. I was looking forward to writing a Wikipedia article on Neva's Story, but there was nothing to work with. No reviews anywhere to serve as reliable secondary sources for building an article.
How does one do that? Asking for a friend.
@@thairinkhudr4259 Get reviews, I assume you mean? There's organizations and other avenues to try and get newspaper and other reviews of your book. Though it's definitely harder to do so if you're self-published. Cultivating relationships with publishing people and literature journalists would be helpful.
@@Silverizael Cultivate connections with people in publishing and literary world, got it. Thank you!
Austin you’ve helped me so much. I’v learned so much from your videos like this, instead of you telling me about your amazing projects that sold great and were wonderfully excepted…
Thank you so much for taking the time to fail so completely, and document the process for other creative types like myself. I own two businesses, neither of which have anything to do with writing or literature… Or even content creation for that matter.
But both my businesses are based on creativity and passion…… So videos like this help me more than anything! I can apply them to my own life and situation, and I genuinely think about them more throughout the day than any other content absorbed.
Seriously… Thank you
Just bought the audio version from Amazon. Great choice of narrator. So far I'm hooked. Love your vids. Ran into you accidentally. Best accident I ever had 🤣
“Financial Disaster” doesn’t inspire _much_ optimism, as a title.
Does inspire A LOT of interest though.
@@Fortunateis4luck this man just singlehandedly explained all of YT right now.
@@lvbboi9 All of YT for the last 5+ years
@@lvbboi9 tbf, content creators still do make a shit ton of money. A few thousand isn't too much for a channel of his size. I find it hilarious though, that his audience is comprised of young adults to middle aged males bur his book caters towards teenage girls. As he states in the video, it ain't his brightest moment.
Most books aren't financially successful. Doesn't make them bad books.
I'm sorry your book failed, but you have to admit, that "Neva's story" doesn't inspire a lot of interest in the actual... You know, story. At least you could have given the accompanying videos a catchier title, but I appreciate how you did things and your honesty!
Yeah, that’s really what kinda stood out to me watching this video about the development.
The full title is “Neva’s Story: A Coming-of-Age Romance in 1940s America.” It sounds very clinical and uninteresting as a result. Needed a more attention-grabbing title.
@@jackdaone6469 I personally think just calling it "Neva" would have been more captivating, as it won't give away what it's about from a first glance at the front.
But then, it's his mom and grandma's story, not his, so I doubt changing the title would be something that would be considered.
Titles aren't nearly as important as you think. Unless a book's title is literally unprintable or egregiously misleading, it will never be a roadblock to selling it. Like, think of the dumbest, most unsellable title you can imagine that's fit to print, and I can probably find you a comparable book that was on the bestseller list at some point (I won't actually bother doing that fyi, so don't waste your time, but you can play the game yourself if you want)
@@z-beeblebrox An example for a good, catchy title: Dostoyevski "Crime and Punishment". Boom, it's "in your face". You want to read what it's all about! ... Tell me that titles arent "as important as you think"... They a r e. The title and the cover art are one of the things you see first if you're looking though the book shelves...
Should have called it avengers endgame
Another Great Video I like these kind of videos where you talk about your creative endeavours what you did , how it went , always learn a lot from it thanks for your open honesty Sounds like a massive amount of work
Austin, I am _thrilled_ to know I am not the only one with results like this. I self-published a novel and a sequel novella a decade ago and, after similar collaborative and financial investments, I sold about 30 copies. And my book and sequel were about a young woman, giving me the same genre conflicts. However, since I didn't have any 1 mullion-plus subscribers, I guess I'm ahead of your pace! 😉
"I have an audience" - top 10 moments before disaster.
Probably because that audience consisted of young adults to middle aged men, and he tried to sell them a book meant for young girls. Idk what he thought was gonna happen.
@@insertnamehere658 like seriously did he never notice what happens to his vids or what?
One of the reasons I like Austin's channel is that he fails quite a bit and keeps at it. It's a reminder that failure is ok and getting help is too 😉. Perseverance wins in the end.
Even if this were in my middle school bookshelf I see no reason why I'd pick it up. All I can find plot wise is a coming-of-age romance in the 1940s. Which would probably not interest most middle schoolers. It's genre-savvy which many middle schoolers aren't, and it's in the 1940s which if you're a middle schooler is also not very interesting. How about summarizing what happens in the first chapter or the overarching theme or plot so I can see if this is something I'd want to read about.
Man your approach to this is so refreshing. It's somehow more motivating than seeing someone succeed at something
Agreed 💯
It’s not about the money, it’s about sending a message…..
- Sun Tzu, The Art of War
And the message is, "where's my money?"
When you’re dropping four g on editing, it’s at least partly to do with the money.
Honestly, one of my favorite parts about your channel is that I have no idea what you'll put out next.
I love this video. Thanks for sharing this with us. I just discover the channel and i still have 136 videos to binge. Lucky me.
Howdy Austin, I just ordered your book from Amazon. It should arrive next week after I return to work from my 3-week vacation so I’ll probably be reading it at my desk when I’m not monitoring my desk phone; emails from various company departments and the field technicians since my coworker has her 2-week vacation. I will leave a review on Amazon and I’m hoping it’s going to be a good read. Thanks for the opportunity to experience something different than my normal existence. Be well and have a Merry Christmas.
Yeah, back when you were marketing it, I was thinking “wrong demo” the whole time. But as someone who starts and stops a lot of similar projects myself, I was rooting for you, and still am. Perhaps it’s not too late to go back to the traditional publishing house route?
Another thing that comes to mind is that maybe people would be more interested if the book were something more related to the channel, and sounded more like Austin. Like many, I got here via the Useless Information vids but stayed for the extremely relatable personal stories of creative endeavors. I used to make comics and video games - and the readers of my comics weren't interested in my games, and the few people who played my games cared about comics even less.
@@Po4to Honestly the best way to make it work would be to either focus on one, or have them connected, but separate. Like, both in the same universe, but each one is their own story within it; that way, if either is interested, they may be inclined to either play the game or read the comic.
The story of how he wrote this story is a nice story in itself
Storyception
When his best-selling book is how not to write a book (in terms of finding interesting content, advertising, and marketing)
Man i have been watching you stuff for quite some time and i gotta say, you are one of the most resilient and self aware persons i have ever seen. As a kind of frustrated artist myself i really respect the confidence that you have on your work. Sorry for not being a middle school girl but best of luck to you!
Thank you for sharing your experience. It sounds like you learned a lot. I like learning vicariously through you. Sorry the book didn’t sell well. You’re awesome.
I would have been too afraid of failing to get as far as to show my first draft to anyone in the world... Your tenacity and work ethic is very admirable.
Very true
Mashallah
Woah brooks brooks a cool name thats probably fake but still funny also rip
I genuinely wished I had your motivation, persistence, and resilience.
Fr, i could do so much with it
Mashallah
Glad u shared your thoughts and experiance. the cander is refreshing this is why i like watching you! keep up the great work
It’s awesome to see you admit mistakes you made. That takes a lot
It's good to know you're still posting. A lot of people were worried.
What?.... this is a standard amount of time between videos on his channel.... who was worried about him?
Watch his videos...
You'll know
@@brooksbrooks6805 see his recent vids
He just posted a month ago wtf lol
@@brooksbrooks6805 He has a heart condition that could kill him.
I'm just glad you're still kicking my dude. Here's to more potential successes (or failures) in the future.
This comment represent the target audience of this channel well. Same here, am glad as well.
I love your videos because of your honesty, hard work, and playful attitude no matter the outcome. You give me the courage to work on hard things and not be deterred by the outcome. You are my inspiration, please keep making stuff.
it’s so refreshing seeing someone be honest about failure, thank you for not glorifying your life austin
Austin: I’ll never financially recover from this.
Also Austin: uses this this video to have a minor financial recovery.
Jesus Christ this man can't catch a break .
At this point he can create a separate playlist for all the rough things he has gone through during these past few years..
Thanks for sharing your experience on this.
Thank you dude for this video, I’m myself working into publishing my 1st self-made book after working on it after 2 years now. I tried to handle everything myself and felt really similar to you in a way concerning they way you approached this experience yourself. I’m almost done with all the pre-publishing step, and I’m happy to see that even youtubers with 1 million suscribers can “only” get 208 sellers for their books ! Thank you dude, like my stress vanished a bit, a big bit to say the least lol. Overall, I’m sure you’ll understand it but it’s just incredible to have your own book and to reach even just one person and impact her with your words. Can’t wait to achieve this goal. I’m not a big youtuber nor a recognized writer yet, but I’m sure it gonna work out, whatever happens, I’ll be pleased. Much love from Morocco by a Moroccan junior writer hehehe, take care dude and thanks again !!
Haha I'm one of those people who had no idea you even wrote a book. Somehow I missed it! I picked up a copy though. Definitely interested in giving it a shot. I always love how you just roll with the punches. Can't wait to see what you do next!
how did you comment here? wizard
Wtf
How the fuck did you post this comment 1 week ago
@@Br00tz966 it says one week ago for me lol
@@Br00tz966 Simple: Patreon.
Austin's dedication to keep on creating despite his failures motivates me. I have no right to lose confidence in my own work now.
Really insightful look into the process. It is always brave to put yourself out there and I think it is lovely that you decided to finish a “family” story.
I can say I was one of the people who watched the announcement videos and I opted not to purchase for a few reasons which might provide helpful data.
1) Irrespective of the saying, book covers have a lot of impact on whether I would chose to buy a book and both the artwork and selected font looked…. DIY. It has a cheap, unappealing feel to me and as someone who works in the art and design field - it just has a lot of issues. Kerning, typeface, balance, layout, visual focus, colour palette… all looked a bit “first year design student” to me.
2) Nothing about the way the story was presented made me want to take a chance on a YA book. I definitely can still enjoy a good YA novel despite being definitely beyond my YA years. However, to convince me that it is worth my time, a bit more effort needed to be made to make the idea seem relevant to me.
I am not trying to slam the book in any way - I always hope people are successful. I just thought it might be some useful data to anyone out there looking to self publish.
I bought Neva's Story on Amazon right after watching the first video on it, and was moved by the act of completing your grandmother's story. I feel that's still an accomplishment with profound meaning, regardless of the financial outcome. I'm honored to be one of those 208 buyers and did enjoy the book, but I too will admit that as a 29 year old man, this was definitely a leap in genre & I probably would have never bought this book if I didn't "know" the author and its backstory. I look forward to whichever projects you're working on next!
Imagine being encouraged to finish a manuscript another family member started. Creative family, really cool.
One of my favourite books, the Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society (funny title, but great book lol) was written this way as well. The writer wrote most of it but passed before she could finish and her granddaughter finished writing it.
Between this, and Lindsay's videos on the subject, I've actually learned a lot about the process of writing, drafting, and publishing a first book.
Sorry for your loss Austin
This was a great video and it worked on me! I'm going to get your book when I have the chance.
Austin really out here roasting his Gramma-ma’s stories smh.
Huh, I spell it grand-mama
@@misteryA555 that's because you're correct
@@WobstaCat dang does that mean I'm wrong? tragedy. shoutout to all the gramma/grandma-mas
Don’t downplay how impressive writing a book is. Congrats man.
It really isn't but sure man
@@Whatismusic123 Hear that? It’s the sound of someone who’s never written a book before.
@@TheShadesOfBlack you hear that? It's the sound of lack of creativity
@@TheShadesOfBlack TBf your response doesn't make much sense because that's like saying you can't call a movie bad just because you've never mad one. Whether the og is right or wrong, your own logic is flawed.
@@crazydragy4233 It was a joke.
This is very encouraging as I approach the self publication of my 1st comic
Dude I almost started crying a minute in. At first I was stunned at you had blown past the fact that your mother had passed. Then you pulled out that old short story written by the grandmother and immediately just that sense of interconnectedness hit. Like I can only imagine the emotion for your, someone whom actually had memories of the two.
Something I noticed was that the title and cover art really weren't that interesting. I'd suggest a more intriguing title that sounds a little more poetic, and have "Neva's story" be the subtitle. something like "when the trees swayed with my heart: Neva's story" except better because you are the author and you know the story and themes much better than I do. (note: this is obviously my own personal observations, and I'm probably alone in most parts) The cover art just wasn't that eye-catching. Now that I know more about I definitely might check out the audio book. Excellent video, as always. Very informative on what it takes to actually write a book.
Unrelated but your pfp tells me you are a true man of culture as well.
Even just “Neva” would’ve been a better title - it’s an unusual name and would stand out!
yeah. the title was especially poor. The cover-art was very evocative of ladybird books 40-50 years ago. Which is probably not what it was meant to be.
“That time I a teenager from 1940’s America got taken to another world”
I agree about the title (not the one you suggest though, that's a bit extensively corny) but I love the cover art.
Let's take a minute of an appreciation for Squarespace, for helping you recover your loss.
Thanks for making the video on this experience. We're looking forward to another one.
subscribed for your honesty
I didn't even see the original two videos in my feed! The algorithm really did you dirty man.
Loved your story but I have a small, insignificant gripe... you should put your grandma's name on the cover too
I don't think it's that insignificant tbh.
This man records essays on all of his short comings and then makes money
fr a great book i wish u well man
This is hugely inspirational Austin. Yeah, I’m not the target demo for the book. Does that change the fact that now I’m wondering if it’s time I start my own creative dreams? Heck no. You’ve inspired me yet again. Praying for you man. You’ve had a rough year and it shows but I’m amazed at your strength. From the bottom of my heart, thank you.