You've got my respect for describing the emotion and humiliation draupadi felt at that time...she is indeed one of the most powerful characters of Mahabharata and my favourite as well.
sach mein abhi bhi iss samaj mein kitne kaurav hai Jo paap karte Hain aur kitne Pandav Hain Jo chup hokar sab kuchh dekhte hain aur kitni Draupadi hai jinka chir haran bhi chir faad kar hota hai.....
आपके शब्दों का चुनाव अद्भुत है। आपकी कविता सुनकर रामधारी सिंह दिनकर जी की रश्मिरथी याद आ गयी.... आपकी एक एक पंक्ति में द्रौपदी के लिए जो सम्मान है उससे पता चलता है कि आपका व्यक्तित्व कितना अच्छा है Thank you UA-cam for this Masterpiece You nailed it brother ❤️ Salute you🇮🇳
No words to describe how well you have written. Young boys like you are less than 1 % in India who have embraced his language and culture proudly. Excellent 👍
I'm speechless Ashutosh..everyone can feel your words. Your voice and your thoughts are more powerful than anyone's fake voice. It touched my soul. Keep writing and keep sharing. Thank you ❤
Bohot acche shabdo ka chayan kiya hai aapne sir. Maine aisi poetry jo itne achhe se draupadi mata ka dukh varnan kare kabhi nhi suni. Meri aur se do shabd mata ke liye..... Kya pata ye logo ko ki saha kitna draupadi ne Khudka balidan deke ek mala me piroya hai pandavo ko Khudka samman tyagke sune hai logo ke tano ko Jab kunti mata ne tha kah diya ki mila hai jo bat lo pacho me Tab tyagke sab sukh apne vivah kiya pacho se Jab pitamah ne pandovo ke vivah pr asahamati dikayi to manaya tha draupadi ne unhe..... Or kya kya kahu mai mata ke liye mahabharat ki kahani to bohot badi he or mere liye vo sundar sabdo me utarna bohot kathin isliye meri taraf se itnahi....
Dropdi ki laz bacha gaye krishn....mgr is yug ki dropdi...ki laz na Bach saki....us yug me to chir haran pr Mahabharat hogya tha....but is yug ki dropdi ke liye to charcha bhi nhi hui.....nyaye to dur....h😢 jab jab dropdi ki story sunti hu to....ruh kap jati h....socho jispe bit rhi h uska kya hoga....use sambhalne ke liye to krishn bhi nhi aaye
Honestly kitni Draupadi hai iss kaliyug mein, jo Krishna ko bina doubt ke pukaar to hai. Kyun hai sankoch? Bhakti bhi kaha hai. Aur har waqt toh krishna nahi ayenge, yaha manushya ko hi dharam chalana hai. Kaha hai nyaya? Secular nyaya nahi bacha pa raha Draupadi ko aaj bhi.
You've got my respect for describing the emotion and humiliation draupadi felt at that time...she is indeed one of the most powerful characters of Mahabharata and my favourite as well.
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Thank you sir🎉
Konsa powerful character woh aurat ka, 😂😂hat women r weak and should remain weak
Men 💪🤟🤘👌
Women 🍺 🍺🍺🤧 liability to a man.
too good man ❤
"aaj toh krishna aa gye kalyug me kon aaega" 😊
sach mein abhi bhi iss samaj mein kitne kaurav hai Jo paap karte Hain aur kitne Pandav Hain Jo chup hokar sab kuchh dekhte hain aur kitni Draupadi hai jinka chir haran bhi chir faad kar hota hai.....
What a clear choice of words, what a delivery.
Great fluency
Love you brother, dinkar sahab yaad aa gye...
आपके शब्दों का चुनाव अद्भुत है।
आपकी कविता सुनकर रामधारी सिंह दिनकर जी की रश्मिरथी याद आ गयी....
आपकी एक एक पंक्ति में द्रौपदी के लिए जो सम्मान है उससे पता चलता है कि आपका व्यक्तित्व कितना अच्छा है
Thank you UA-cam for this Masterpiece
You nailed it brother ❤️
Salute you🇮🇳
Thank you so much for your kind and uplifting words ❤
I proud of you Ashutosh ❤️ kisi ne toh koshish ki humri takleef ko shabdho me otarne ki
लास्ट लाइन्स अल्टीमेट समस्या कौरव नही पांडवों का मौन है
👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏
No words to describe how well you have written. Young boys like you are less than 1 % in India who have embraced his language and culture proudly. Excellent 👍
Iss masterpiece ko dekhne keliye mein bohot late ho gayi
...but its awesome.....itne acche se har chiz ko describe kar raha hai yeh poem... superb 👌👌👌
Yaarrr ....hats off to you man ❤India need more men like you✨
Ohh My God....... mere ankhon mein anshu he 🥺
हर शब्द, हर भावना को महसूस किया! सचमुच क्या लेखन है🤍🙏
Goosebumps ✨....Bhut acha likha hai😢
Mind blowing 🤍Great writing..may krishna shower all the lighting and blessings to you ❣💙💫🙌
May Krishn Bhagwaan bless you in abundance, and you walk on the path of success🏆💪
You have written fiery words which described😢pain
Hare Krishna 🎉
Radhe Radhe 🙏🙏🚩🚩
Jai shree krishna 🙏🙏🚩🚩
Listening again and again... Sabdo ka chunav bahut acha hai👍🏻
Keep it up
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I am feeling proud Asutosh WOW
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Tum Krishn bano aur har draupadi ki raksha karo.
Radhe Krishn
Excellent bahiya I have no words to describe the strength of draupadi
I'm speechless Ashutosh..everyone can feel your words. Your voice and your thoughts are more powerful than anyone's fake voice. It touched my soul. Keep writing and keep sharing. Thank you ❤
These kind of words always inspire me to write more. Thank you so much ❤
Bhut achchhi kavita apne likhi h dil ko chhu gayi
Waah msihra jii aapki ek ek baat dil m utri ... Aadhram ko chupchap dekhna khud adharma krne k barabar hai
Proud of Bhaiya ❤👍🔥
Words has power to mark the world but need to respect with all ways 👍Ashu sir wel done
I get goosebumps watching this.
Wahhhhhhh❤❤❤❤❤
Bohot acche shabdo ka chayan kiya hai aapne sir.
Maine aisi poetry jo itne achhe se draupadi mata ka dukh varnan kare kabhi nhi suni.
Meri aur se do shabd mata ke liye.....
Kya pata ye logo ko ki saha kitna draupadi ne
Khudka balidan deke ek mala me piroya hai pandavo ko
Khudka samman tyagke sune hai logo ke tano ko
Jab kunti mata ne tha kah diya ki mila hai jo bat lo pacho me
Tab tyagke sab sukh apne vivah kiya pacho se
Jab pitamah ne pandovo ke vivah pr asahamati dikayi to manaya tha draupadi ne unhe.....
Or kya kya kahu mai mata ke liye mahabharat ki kahani to bohot badi he or mere liye vo sundar sabdo me utarna bohot kathin isliye meri taraf se itnahi....
These are not only words but the emotions attached to every single word are at another level.Just amazing
Great ❤😢
Only a real man nd a pure soul can think like u❤every word is an emotion in itself ❤
Beautiful eyes see beauty in everything. 💞
@@ashu_ki_baatein just like u
V true❤
Thank you for this wonderful poem .. literally gave me goosebumps and I'm going to speak this in my school for tomorrow thanks..
Beautiful Outstanding heart poem every women relate to draupadi 🤗❤️🙏
Outstanding ashutosh 👏🏻👏🏻..
I have no words for this person.....only🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
You have the amazing word power...
🙂🙂
Keep going sir😍😍
Every Picked words are perfectly
Well related to today's situation
Uttam kavita utkrisht message for this society 💯
Osm..., may Krishna bless you 💫💫✨...
बहुत सुन्दर रचना। उत्तम पाठ। भाविष्य उज्वल हो।
Goosebumps ✨💫
Speechless🤐👏🙌
Respect ur commitment!
Super se bhi uper ❣️
उठो द्रोपदी
वस्त्र संभालो
अब गोविंद ना आयेंगे 🙃
Daammmm good 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Dropdi ki laz bacha gaye krishn....mgr is yug ki dropdi...ki laz na Bach saki....us yug me to chir haran pr Mahabharat hogya tha....but is yug ki dropdi ke liye to charcha bhi nhi hui.....nyaye to dur....h😢 jab jab dropdi ki story sunti hu to....ruh kap jati h....socho jispe bit rhi h uska kya hoga....use sambhalne ke liye to krishn bhi nhi aaye
Honestly kitni Draupadi hai iss kaliyug mein, jo Krishna ko bina doubt ke pukaar to hai. Kyun hai sankoch? Bhakti bhi kaha hai.
Aur har waqt toh krishna nahi ayenge, yaha manushya ko hi dharam chalana hai. Kaha hai nyaya? Secular nyaya nahi bacha pa raha Draupadi ko aaj bhi.
Adbhut❤✨...... Nihshabd kar diya aapne 🤩✨
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The way you represent this just wow♥️ lovely
Great good Ashutosh ✨👍
More power to you!!
Waao....u r excellent poet bhaiya👏
Amazing 🎉sir….
Wah...🥰
The way you describe the situation is so amazing and terrifying this poem helps me to win 1st prize in my college compidition 😊
Congratulations 🎉
do you have the lyrics? if you do, could you send them to me?
Deep ✨..no words
Outstanding🤝🤝
Beautiful...❤
Hat's off to u❤
Well explained the situation of that time👌👌👌
Too goood bro
Bahaut achaaaa bhai ❤❤❤
Bravo. 🎉🎉🎉 Very nice.
Outstanding ✌🏻🔥
Really amazing
No words to describe this .. कविता.... Great🎉
Waah 👏🏻👏🏻 bhavnao ko shabdon me kya utara hai aapne 🔥
the power in ur words ❤🔥
You made me cry. Thank you
I am lost of words.. hats off brother
Speechless
Such a connecting poem. Love it.
Amazing
Bhai majaa a gaya ..❤❤❤❤
So nyc sir....✨✨
Huge respect brother
Outstanding
🥺👏👏❤❤💜
This is so powerful! Totally in love with your poetry.❤
Amazing 👏
You re amazingg🎉🎉
*hats off*
Excellent 👌
Beautiful words❤
Amezing...
Incredible U r 👏👏👌👍
Very nice 👍👍
Gave me goosebumps ❤
Draupadi is my always idol🙏🙏
Amezing words choice 🙏🙏
Wowwww....... It's amazing.... Great lines..... Great work..... God bless u... 😇
Awesome !
Wow❤🌠
Wow felt Goosebumps
Wah Mera Bhai Ashu
Great lines🙌🏻✨
Just wanna say amazing ❤️🥺
Just amazing ashu🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥keep going
Beautifully written
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Bohut khoob ❤
Well done💯💯