The Surprising Truth about STING'S Songwriting Process

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  • Опубліковано 13 лис 2023
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    Hi I'm Benny. My passion for music and creativity stretches across multiple disciplines and art-forms. I am a founding member and songwriter / lap-slide guitarist for one of Australia's best and most bearded country-bluegrass-folk bands, THE GREEN MOHAIR SUITS. To date the Mohairs have released 4 full-length albums and tour both nationally and overseas.
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  • @fgoindarkg
    @fgoindarkg 5 місяців тому +26

    I write songs in my dreams. I have to rush words into them before I forget the melody.
    I had a dream I was Sting's studio arranger, conducting a school choir for the chorus of his song.
    That was 40 years ago. I still remember the melody. I still dream new songs.

  • @ferkinskin
    @ferkinskin 6 місяців тому +16

    I tend to do that quite a bit. in fact, I collect titles. i write them down in songbooks. I often have a page just full of titles waiting for ideas and every now and gain, when I am looking for an idea, I'll go through the titles to find something that fits or has appeal. A title can be a phrase I have heard or something that seems to carry something, meaning, something that often has a double meaning or is ambiguous. I find it saves a lot of headaches....often....not always!

  • @fromchomleystreet
    @fromchomleystreet 6 місяців тому +46

    The other thing instructive about “message in a bottle” is that it is a good example of a song lyric entirely comprised of an extended metaphor - the song isn’t literally about a castaway lost at sea, but it completely commits to the metaphor right to the end of the song, never explicitly saying “and THAT (the cultural cliche we all recognise of the castaway sending a message in a bottle or trying to send an SOS) is a bit like being me, a lonely person unable to connect with others, and mistakenly believing I’m the only one who feels that way”

    • @jimmyowenmusic
      @jimmyowenmusic 6 місяців тому +2

      Classic! 🎶✨️ we are all lonely!

    • @ishko108
      @ishko108 6 місяців тому +4

      Yes! Also, the message is not too obvious nor too hidden - the right balance. Super songwriting.

    • @jimcullinane4074
      @jimcullinane4074 5 місяців тому

      So lonely!

    • @RavenRidgeRanch
      @RavenRidgeRanch 5 місяців тому

      Yes, I’ve been there… connection with other people is KEY to navigating this life!!!

  • @albertoguiraldelli8952
    @albertoguiraldelli8952 6 місяців тому +24

    Edgar Allan Poe describes a similar backwards process in Philosophy of Composition using his poem The Raven as an example. Thank you for the video. Really great.

    • @colindayo
      @colindayo 6 місяців тому +2

      Nevermore!

    • @latentsea
      @latentsea 6 місяців тому +2

      Backwards writing like I.

    • @Frances-Livings
      @Frances-Livings 4 місяці тому +1

      Thanks, I'm curious to check that out...

  • @geoffschuller4875
    @geoffschuller4875 6 місяців тому +3

    Thanks for sharing this…and I LOVE the Sodajerker Podcast! So good, and so is yours!

  • @mjm5081
    @mjm5081 5 місяців тому

    Thank you for sharing.
    Happy Songwriting!

  • @DavidBrown-ez5jc
    @DavidBrown-ez5jc 6 місяців тому +1

    This is excellently described and all you need on top off this is a good melody brilliant piece of work thank you fellow youtube

  • @mikebozik
    @mikebozik 6 місяців тому +2

    I'll say this, I've never heard this explained so clearly in my life. Thank you so much! I will pass this information on.😊😊😊😊😊😊

  • @patrickcarroll1754
    @patrickcarroll1754 5 місяців тому +1

    This has become my new favorite channel. I almost wonder If I'm allowed to learn these secrets.

  • @Andrew-cu9lf
    @Andrew-cu9lf 6 місяців тому +1

    Absolutely fantastic! Thank you!

  • @QuincyKane
    @QuincyKane 6 місяців тому +1

    These are some great tips; thanks for sharing!

  • @jonathanroyce9692
    @jonathanroyce9692 6 місяців тому +4

    Very very helpful 🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻

  • @joecvar
    @joecvar 5 місяців тому

    This was inspiring, Thank you ✌🏻

  • @tericarter2019
    @tericarter2019 5 місяців тому +1

    If I could record with him one time I would love to meet Sting. He is a beautiful person and artist.

  • @ErJoeJehosaphatz
    @ErJoeJehosaphatz 6 місяців тому +2

    Great episode!

  • @seanbeach1976
    @seanbeach1976 6 місяців тому +10

    "Message in a Bottle" is slick because it plays with the idea of isolation without being on-the-nose about it. The song isn't literally about a shipwrecked person, but it leans into the whole feeling of solitude. It uses the whole message-sending thing as a big picture way of saying how it feels to be alone and shouting into the void, hoping someone will shout back. It skirts around stating the obvious and lets you know it's about reaching out when you're feeling solo, which, tbh, is pretty relatable for most of us.

    • @smhdpt12
      @smhdpt12 3 місяці тому

      I think another key element to the song is that the lyrics tell you that there are "A hundred Billion" others that feel the same. It's the feeling of loneliness circled in that he's not the only one! That's the real heart of it.

  • @Willsonix
    @Willsonix 6 місяців тому +5

    Really helpful, Sting is an incredible songwriter

  • @Dex619
    @Dex619 6 місяців тому +2

    It doesn’t always have be the title and/or refrain that comes first. I just finished a song with the first line “settle down..”. I then asked myself “Who are you talking to, and why do think they need to settle down”? The lyrics practically wrote themselves once I answered the question. I’m not disputing the idea of the video. I think it’s a great way to get started. I’m just suggesting the initial line doesn’t necessarily have to be the refrain. I’m glad I didn’t try to write my song with the refrain “settle down, settle down, settle down.”

  • @rachmann516
    @rachmann516 3 місяці тому

    That was helpful. Thank you.

  • @correametal
    @correametal 6 місяців тому

    Simply amazing!

  • @MrLuigiFercotti
    @MrLuigiFercotti 6 місяців тому +2

    I’ve heard it said that most all musicians write from a melody or chord progression. Contrary to that idea is the lyricist, who starts with a lyrical idea and forms the song around that. You can do both, but Sting sounds like the latter.

  • @suefauziyah
    @suefauziyah 2 місяці тому

    Really great video. Thank you!!

  • @davidanderson566
    @davidanderson566 6 місяців тому +6

    So, the songwriter doesn't use the process, the process uses the songwriter! We're the "beast"...and have to stay open to all the "hunters" tricks!

    • @larrysulky7614
      @larrysulky7614 6 місяців тому

      That's pretty much been my experience.

  • @TheRtyfghcvb
    @TheRtyfghcvb 5 місяців тому

    This is brilliant!

  • @Cfb160
    @Cfb160 4 дні тому

    He starts with the title!? Holy shit! Brilliant! I never thought of that! 🙄

  • @eh2254
    @eh2254 6 місяців тому

    Great one. Thank you.

  • @zuke55
    @zuke55 5 місяців тому +2

    I agree with all of this, and my process is different every time...sometimes similar but never identical. I sometimes start with a chorus/main line idea (or a main thought or feeling I'm trying to convey) or sometimes from a riff, or progression I build around. But one thing I would add to all of this...and I've heard many famous songwriters talk about this (like Mr Lennon) is the concept of time... (and not like 4/4). I mean, if you have some spark of an idea that gets you writing this great idea you have...you HAVE to do it kind of fast..and try to finish it right then. Otherwise, if you try to pick it up at a later time, you will realize how difficult it is to summon that same "feeling" or idea. And that makes it REALLY hard to finish the song.

  • @CandiceAM
    @CandiceAM 3 місяці тому

    Great video!!

  • @Chilajuana
    @Chilajuana 6 місяців тому

    Awesome insight!!!!

  • @MartianTom
    @MartianTom 5 місяців тому +1

    Very good video, full of useful insight. I was trying for ages to write a novel - had the characters all there, and knew roughly what I wanted to happen. But it wasn't working. And then I put some music on one day, with one of my favourite bands: Eels. I like Mark Everett's songs because he has themes that are very relevant to my own life and view of the world: alienation, being on the 'outside looking in', not conforming, having a bit of an absurdist take on the it all. I like his dark humour, too - something that was in my novel. Songs that resonate particularly are 'Things The Grandchildren Should Know', and 'The Love of The Loveless' - and as soon as I replayed that latter, I knew I had the title for the novel! And since then, I've been working to the idea suggested in that title (and the song itself), and everything has started to come together. Song titles don't just inspire songwriters! Incidentally, I once wrote a prize-winning short story that was inspired by the title of a Florence and the Machine song: 'My Boy Builds Coffins.' The novelist John Irving says he writes each novel by writing the last line first, then working the rest of the book towards it.

  • @PopeOfPopOfficial
    @PopeOfPopOfficial 6 місяців тому

    Good advice, particularly starting with the last line of the verse and working backwards. I usually do that too.

    • @latentsea
      @latentsea 6 місяців тому

      Too that do usually I.

  • @ejRecording
    @ejRecording 5 місяців тому

    Awesome video! the info about stings process confirms my own insights, and the example of still crazy After all these years was perfect!
    I always have loved the beers/years part and you explained it so well.
    this is, to me, all about using one's intuition, logic and sophisticated human angelic intelligence to make form come alive, as it bubbles up from within and without

  • @ajtrue995
    @ajtrue995 5 місяців тому

    Nice one brother. Pat Pattison in his book 'Writing Better Lyrics' calls this refrain line the 'power placement', he also goes into detail with a dissection of the Paul Simon song you used as a ref. I think Dylan and Springsteen do this so well.

  • @thelightswitchflickers3161
    @thelightswitchflickers3161 6 місяців тому +1

    I've always wrote music first then lyrics but I am a Sting fan 💚

  • @jimmyowenmusic
    @jimmyowenmusic 6 місяців тому +2

    Great lesson! In Places We Won't Walk by Bruno Major has that beautiful last line chorus idea
    Sunlight dances off the leaves
    Birds of red color the trees
    Flowers filled with buzzin' bees
    In places we won't walk
    Neon lights shine bold and bright
    Buildings grow to dizzy heights
    People come alive at night
    In places we won't walk
    Children cry and laugh and play
    Slowly hair will turn to gray
    We will smile to end each day
    In places we won't walk
    Family look on in awe
    Petals decorate the floor
    Waves gently stroke the shore
    In places we won't walk
    Children cry and laugh and play
    Slowly hair will turn to gray
    We will smile to end each day
    In places we won't walk

  • @Steedonline
    @Steedonline 6 місяців тому

    I didn't know that about Sting, very interesting... funny enough, I tend to have the same process for writing my songs! And me without knowing it ! 😂 thanks for the great video 👐

  • @michael1
    @michael1 6 місяців тому +2

    I work backwards too. I imagine the crowd cheering at the end of the song and then think "Hmm...what chords and melody would generate that level of applause?"

    • @latentsea
      @latentsea 6 місяців тому

      I put drum charts upside down then go full Tommy Lee on them.

    • @fgoindarkg
      @fgoindarkg 5 місяців тому +1

      I prefer to start with the royalty cheques. I write my name on the back and then it's tea time.

  • @TheGreatConstantini
    @TheGreatConstantini 5 місяців тому +1

    Reading all the comments here is as interesting as the video itself. I like hearing how folks create. I know for myself, just attacking music in some form as often as possible, everyday in a perfect world, has never directly resulted in a great song for me , yet it can help me get bits and pieces. The good songs, the ones I love, always come to me at inconvenient times like in the shower or driving at midnight. And at the time I usually don’t know what they are actually about. I just write the words down and record the Melody’s as best as possible. Often the next day I will realize the meaning and wrk from there

  • @ephraimlessell
    @ephraimlessell 14 днів тому

    Sting wrote the guitar part. Certainly some credit goes to whoever applied a whopping amount of "Chorus' (an electronic effects that generates notes at constant intervals above the input note, allowing the user to blend the "new" notes with the original to whatever degree she or he wants. The chorus effect is featured on lots of Police recordings. It's almost a "signature". However, the effect is used much less on the group's last two albums)

  • @schoontube
    @schoontube 2 місяці тому

    Thanks!

  • @fabianwolf6849
    @fabianwolf6849 Місяць тому

    Wow... I just understood why the best songs I've written so far are in their ranks: I've written some lines and then some more and then realized what I wrote first works better as the end and vice versa. Didn't expect I did something very common there... 😮

  • @1mann1chor
    @1mann1chor 5 місяців тому

    Great video, very inspiring, thank You! I see an interesting relation to theatrical improvisation. I play a comedic musical act where this is what I do: The audience will give me three words and a music style, out of which I make a song, on the spot. Most of the time, that magic you talk about will happen. I cannot always tell where my ideas come from, but aiming for these three given words will logically lead me to the events in which I can use them. From my personal experience, I like the ‘linear’ way of writing, too: Start from a first line and just see where it will lead me. But of course, if we try to create definite, completed songs, your advice will help! It’s always good to push creativity by looking at things from different perspectives and changing angles.

  • @justmeandrichard7318
    @justmeandrichard7318 6 місяців тому +1

    Fantastic he was in Newcastle last week and Dave Stewart was in Sunderland local lads

    • @thewomble1509
      @thewomble1509 6 місяців тому

      Did he put on his "Geordie" accent?

  • @stephenowen5229
    @stephenowen5229 6 місяців тому +3

    If you want to marvel at how Sting write Every Breath You Take, then listen to Leo Sayer's song More Than I Can Say.

    • @jonhoward3532
      @jonhoward3532 6 місяців тому

      or Paul Simon’s, Slip Slidin‘ Away.

  • @oh515
    @oh515 6 місяців тому +1

    WOW! Interesting. Because often, when the lyrics doesn’t come in a flow, I do it a kind of that way too. But not as structured as this. I write tons of lines around the refrain or title, and puzzle them together, where I prioritise the last and first line. The first line is a trigger, and in the last line I aim to mirror the trigger and resolve the verse towards the chorus. The lines in the middle are amplifiers and connectors. In the end I pick the best verses.

    • @felixmarques
      @felixmarques 5 місяців тому +2

      If you work like that, how do you make sure you end up with verses that work for (what I understand are the very distinct functions of) first and second verse? I write in a very structured way, like an essay-which points do I want to make, and what is the clearest order in which to introduce them?

    • @oh515
      @oh515 5 місяців тому

      @@felixmarques
      Even when I write many lines (far more than necessary) I need to do some changes, and often make a whole new line or two to make it fit. I do even use unused lines from “other songs.” The once I never used. So yes, the process is far more complex than what I first described. And I even switch the first and second vers sometimes.

  • @georgecrothers5618
    @georgecrothers5618 6 місяців тому

    REALLY interesting !

  • @secretchefcollective444
    @secretchefcollective444 5 місяців тому

    I don't much like Sting's music but I've not problem hailing him as a brilliant songwriter - the song itself is a masterpiece and the Machinehead cover gives me chills every time.

  • @Zarglos
    @Zarglos 5 місяців тому

    I have written a song in reverse once. Someone commented on a Facebook post mentioning chasing happy clouds. So I wrote a song titled Happy Clouds . I wrote the chorus first then the verses and the bridge last.

  • @bobwerber2984
    @bobwerber2984 6 місяців тому

    that was very interesting/thanks

  • @mattj376
    @mattj376 6 місяців тому

    Also making the slogan of the song it's title makes it easier for people to remember it and find it on streaming etc

  • @SmileyMikey
    @SmileyMikey 5 місяців тому

    Great video lesson! Thank you! "Every Breath You Take" doesn't follow the AABA structure with the title as refrain. Nevertheless, this video is instructive.

  • @RinPlayz-ch6cz
    @RinPlayz-ch6cz 5 місяців тому

    Recently, I've been having trouble writing lyrics for a song cover. The main problem I've been having is since this song actually has several online covers with better lyrics than what I can currently put out, it left me unable to think of original lines as the better lines would just be stuck inside my head. I would really appreciate a few tips on how to write lyrics for song covers because sure the lines can be different but I need to have the right amount of syllables and deliver the same message as the original.

  • @yuryskakun7788
    @yuryskakun7788 6 місяців тому

    Great channel. Do you provide private tutoring?

  • @writereducator
    @writereducator 5 місяців тому

    I'll give this a try. I have the music and a melody for a song already, but no idea whatsoever for the lyrics. All I know about the sound is that it is an anthem or vow of some kind.

  • @nikosantikythera2422
    @nikosantikythera2422 6 місяців тому +7

    I love writing songs in the form of "geopolitical commentaries." 😆 But, seriously, the more one is aware of what is going on in the broader world (or think I know), the more difficult it is (at least for me) not to lapse into broader concepts, as opposed to the small but telling interactions between everyday people, or lovers, or enemies, for example. 😂 Balance between the two?

    • @latentsea
      @latentsea 6 місяців тому

      Two, the between balance.

    • @felixmarques
      @felixmarques 5 місяців тому +1

      Small moments make powerful metaphors for large, abstract events. I think we need, more than ever, to write good political songs.

    • @nikosantikythera2422
      @nikosantikythera2422 3 місяці тому

      @@felixmarques True!

  • @CaptainVelveeta
    @CaptainVelveeta 5 місяців тому

    By far, one of the best lyricists in the business. If you want a great example listen to "Dead Man's Rope" or "Book Of My Life"

  • @russlgtr
    @russlgtr 6 місяців тому

    Simple twist of fate also good example

  • @tonysienzant6717
    @tonysienzant6717 5 місяців тому

    Instead of using "song forms" one can use poetic forms. Dylan used the 14 line sonnet form for his song "Tangled Up In Blue" (which makes sense because in the song he speaks of "an Italian poet from the 13th century").

  • @Denilson.Carreiro
    @Denilson.Carreiro 5 місяців тому

    Sting is a songwriter genius!

  • @Andrew-cu9lf
    @Andrew-cu9lf 6 місяців тому +1

    Hey Benny, FYI - the Udemy link doesn't seem to be working. The patreon and sodadjerker links work though.

    • @htws
      @htws  6 місяців тому

      Thanks for letting me know Andrew... Put a new link there that should be working. cheers

  • @wayne00k
    @wayne00k 6 місяців тому

    One thing that makes Sting's top-down method so effective is that Sting has read a full library - he's immensely well read and extremely knowledgeable of classic literature from Ishtar to Hemingway... all expertly capturing or illustrating the timelessness of the human experience.
    So hey - you kids stay in school and do your homework and one day you might write like Sting
    :)

    • @MrLuigiFercotti
      @MrLuigiFercotti 6 місяців тому

      He’s highly intelligent and literate, so no surprise he’s oriented that way.

  • @KevinKoontz
    @KevinKoontz 5 місяців тому

    Stay intuitive and gather methods for your toolbox.

  • @adamhowardschneider357
    @adamhowardschneider357 4 місяці тому

    in Nashville, if you don't start with the title, someone might consider that "backwards"!

  • @kuleebaba9014
    @kuleebaba9014 5 місяців тому

    I recently read that a Rock icon said that the Beatles' "I saw her standing there" is the greatest song lyric ever written. I guess the the guy never heard the Police's "Every little thing she does is magic."

  • @subs4794
    @subs4794 6 місяців тому

    02:10 He looks like Dr. Smith from Lost In Space.

  • @TenFalconsMusic
    @TenFalconsMusic 5 місяців тому

    I'm definitely no fan of Sting (as a person) but his proficiency at song writing is legendary.

    • @alukuhito
      @alukuhito 4 місяці тому

      Really? What about Burt Bacharach?

  • @dommccaffry3802
    @dommccaffry3802 6 місяців тому +1

    My pheasant has diarrhoea. That's the title i came up with this morning. Im working backwards now.

  • @KellieSuePeters
    @KellieSuePeters 5 місяців тому

    If I sat in my driveway too long, my neighbors would come talk to me, I’d definitely lose my motivation to go. 😂

  • @martinheath5947
    @martinheath5947 6 місяців тому

    Gordon Sumner is a very smart guy

  • @Pulse2AM
    @Pulse2AM 6 місяців тому

    When I try to do the same thing I did for a song I really liked it never works.

  • @spacecruiser101
    @spacecruiser101 6 місяців тому

    Sting was caught going through Neil Finns guitar case to find Neils lyric notebook. He was stealing.

  • @tjw52x
    @tjw52x 6 місяців тому +1

    Shame this video is not about songwriting, but lyric writing. Probably the main reason for Sting's success at songwriting is his melodies & those I feel are the most fascinating & important aspects of his songs.

  • @jamesward4191
    @jamesward4191 5 місяців тому

    Feeeyoouldzz ov goooould!😂😂😂

  • @DanFlashes99
    @DanFlashes99 4 місяці тому +1

    What's fascinating, "Message In A Bottle" was written in a very literal way... it doesn't sound like Sting was trying to inject subtext or anything, it was ltierally about the experience of being on a desert island. But AFTER THE FACT, to the listener, it becomes metaphorical and subtextual. Maybe that's the lesson, don't try too hard to be deep or profound, let the listeners do that work for you

  • @ToadstoolShadow
    @ToadstoolShadow 5 місяців тому

    Tom Petty often had fabulous first lines to his songs.

  • @TruthSurge
    @TruthSurge 6 місяців тому

    9:40 "there is no repeatable method" I guess he forgot what he said at 6:20.

    • @FenlonAcoustic
      @FenlonAcoustic 6 місяців тому

      Well, at 6:20 he's talking about the most common form of structure for modern songs. He's not necessarily talking about the process, or method, got how to arrive at a finished song of that particular form. But give him a break, he's a musician, not a logician.

    • @TruthSurge
      @TruthSurge 6 місяців тому +1

      @@FenlonAcoustic No, it doesn't matter what you call him, he contradicted himself. He clearly stated that he works backwards from the title EVERY SONG. Well, that's a repeatable method. You can't say "I write songs this way" then later say "there's no repeatable method for writing songs" I understand that he feels like every song is a mystery and puzzle to be figured out but he admitted to SOME kind of method and so you need to get your brain straight and if there are repeatable methods, then you can't say "there is no repeatable method". Songwriting IS a craft and as such, it can be taught and learned and repeatable. Whether people like them is another matter.

  • @billybobboy012
    @billybobboy012 4 місяці тому

    'the more I learn; the less I know':)

  • @ColtraneTaylor
    @ColtraneTaylor 5 місяців тому

    If only Sting had retained his song writing magic after 1996 or so.

  • @randybackgammon890
    @randybackgammon890 5 місяців тому

    I don't know about 'no good having a great first line' What about 'Have you seen your mother baby standing in the shadow'...That's about the only hook in the song.I'm sure there's many others....But hey what do I know✌️

  • @brownin329
    @brownin329 6 місяців тому

    I have tried that on my own without knowing anything about how Sting writes and it has never worked for me. I let the song tell me what the title is.

  • @ephraimlessell
    @ephraimlessell 5 місяців тому +22

    Hmmm. I've been a songwriter for 46 years. My songs have been published and sold around the world, and two of my songs are part of America's Smithsonian Institutes Collection. I'm not sure that I agree with anything you said. First, nearly any explanation anyone gives you for anything they do is not necessarly true. Our fantastically complex brain run countless processes concurrently when doing things far more simple than composing. If the lyric writing strategy works for anyone, great, use it. But in my estimation, writing the music of a song is a much harder thing to do and it is the music that people generally are most moved by. Sting's Message in a Bottle is a great example. In my opinion, the lyric is mediocre and I'd bet a lot that the song was a big hit in lots of countries where most people don't speak English. Why would that be? Well, you could point to Sting's bass line which is rhythmically fairly simple with a note progression of C#, A, B, F" (up in next octave). It's perfect. A more complex line would just take away. But, while perfectly matched to the song, that bass line didn't shoot the song up the charts. What did? That's easy: The singing and the guitar part. The guitar part is catchy as hell, and whether most listeners remember it or could identify the notes is irrelevant. Like Sting's singing on this and many other songs, that and this guitar, according to me, are about 80% of the song. ps I love Stewart Copeland's playing on this and many other Police songs, but I doubt that the drums have much to do with made so many Police songs find homes in our heads pps I think that Copeland's drumming may well have been part of what made Roxanne unique and very catchy

    • @wwjjss33
      @wwjjss33 3 місяці тому +4

      Do you have any content (video/blog/podcast/book) that articulates your songwriting process? I’m always looking to learn from experienced writers 👍

    • @conorm8
      @conorm8 2 місяці тому +1

      You should make a UA-cam channel

    • @worshipliveministries
      @worshipliveministries 2 місяці тому

      Great take and insight.

    • @nineteenfortyeight6762
      @nineteenfortyeight6762 Місяць тому +1

      The guitar part might be what made it a hit, but the song was what it was before Andy showed up.

    • @leif1075
      @leif1075 Місяць тому

      WHERE cam you share LINKS of your SMITHSONIAN SONGS PLEASE. I don't see content on your channel that supports this. Can you please share Mr. LESELL?

  • @ARrocks12
    @ARrocks12 6 місяців тому +1

    Like already posted here: this video is not about songwriting, but lyric writing. English speaking guys often think that the lyrics are important for success. I don't think so. In 50/60/70 only few spoke english and could understand the lyrics of pop songs if it's not their mother language. But songs from Elvis, the Beatles, Stones, Queen, The Police, Pink Floyd and so on were huge hits WORLDWIDE. So it's about the melody, the sound, the voice and not about the songs. Guess how many people loved Zappa's Bobby Brown...and had no clue what he was singing about. And if they understood the lyrics.... ;-) :-)

    • @VigilanteWilliamson
      @VigilanteWilliamson 5 місяців тому

      As an english speaking guy i agree 100%. Melody is way more important.

  • @mrmattyd
    @mrmattyd 6 місяців тому

    I'm not sure song structure is particularly advantageous, particularly these days where standing out from the crowd is becoming near impossible.

  • @williamshaneblyth
    @williamshaneblyth 6 місяців тому

    The human brain always works back from the vision . It's how it's wired

  • @mavrosyvannah
    @mavrosyvannah 5 місяців тому +1

    Sitting in my car
    Sitting in the drive waaay
    Sitting here too long
    Think ill go back in way
    ill send an sos from my phone
    Ill send an sos from my phone
    Ill send an sos from my phone

  • @felixmarques
    @felixmarques 5 місяців тому

    While I understand what he was saying about using song form, I disagree that you're supposed to use ABABCB form. I think every song you write, if you have a topic, an idea or story, it will have its own inherent structure. Much the way that an essay needs to be shaped in the accurate shape of your idea (a paragraph for every argument, inductive or deductive order, maybe headings for sections, asides, etc.), a song forced to fit the verse/chorus/bridge form might not work as well as it would in strophic form, or 32-bar AABA form, or rondó (ABACADA…) form, or through-composed (ABCD…), etc. Figure out the best order for what you want to say. Do you have an idea that deserves being repeated, or should you refuse to have a chorus at all, and focus on making the verses and main riff catchy? And so on.

  • @nikosantikythera2422
    @nikosantikythera2422 6 місяців тому +1

    As writers, I recommend that we never own a television. Seriously. Any drama or comedy we would like to escape into is available on UA-cam in any case.

  • @jasoncabral8732
    @jasoncabral8732 6 місяців тому +1

    What's a refrain?

  • @MikaelLewisify
    @MikaelLewisify 6 місяців тому

    He’s not regarded as…he just is

  • @anthonyclegg1511
    @anthonyclegg1511 5 місяців тому

    Has he done anything in the last 30 years.?.

  • @jazztitch8286
    @jazztitch8286 5 місяців тому

    Interesting, but musically useless - no discussion of the novel harmonic and rhythmic structures of the Police (how much did they co-compose in studio?), or why Sting's work after that was relatively conventional. This is a discussion of some sort of poetry, not of songwriting.

  • @WonsPhreely
    @WonsPhreely 5 місяців тому

    That’s all fine, but so many other great songwriters don’t like this method. Paul McCartney for example wants to come into songwriting with zero idea, and zero intellectual methodologies. He wants to let the music just tell him what the song is about, and enjoy the discovery from his subconscious or the universal river of song. I’m with Paul on this one.

  • @babyirene3188
    @babyirene3188 4 місяці тому

    Sting has written a lot a lot of piffle in 45 years.
    .)
    And he ignored a lot of basic songwriting rules writing that piffle.

  • @rexchiquine6049
    @rexchiquine6049 5 місяців тому +1

    He claims to have a degree in reverse psychology,,,but he could never,,, BACK IT UP,,,

  • @colindayo
    @colindayo 6 місяців тому

    Oh! That’s cheating! I wish you hadn’t told me.😊

  • @jimmyolsenschannel6263
    @jimmyolsenschannel6263 6 місяців тому +1

    "Message in a Bottle". Really?
    Great guitar riff (thanks, Andy), but a bit repetitive perhaps (48 times?)
    The lyrics so banal (and repetetive) it's an insult to the intelligence of anyone over the age of five.
    Pseudo Jamacan accent somewhat toe curling?
    (I'll get me coat)

  • @cf5914
    @cf5914 6 місяців тому

    Freemasons are tutored in song writing and then given a platform to push their beliefs...

  • @Jazzmaster58
    @Jazzmaster58 6 місяців тому +1

    I'm sorry but this sounds more like a publicity marketing master class, which is not far from the truth cause in those days as today the success of any music endeavor depends more on the promotion than on the quality of the compositions. Sting was just lucky enough to meet the right people at the right time.

  • @lebe220
    @lebe220 5 місяців тому

    "The Russians love their children too" -Would he write that song today? I suppose not, because he doesn´t have the heart and guts of Eric Clapton, Roger Waters and Van Morrison.
    I suppose he even recommended Covid vaccination.

  • @vitaminfian
    @vitaminfian 5 місяців тому

    Songwriting is pure torture