I must point this, that this channel had three distinct types of videos, first: the narrations of stories that didn´t exist with the intention to be narrated, we see some of the more ancient tales and videos in these categories. The second is stories that were made to be narrated, however, those stories usually simply couldn't translate the sentiment the original author intended to its full, it is akin to a direct translation from a language to another. However, here, we have something more, the new type, here, we have both the author and the narrator as one. Vox is at the point that he can write incredible pieces of fiction, but also to translate it as the author intended in its fullest. This is a turning point in terms of quality of narration, this is where I can see Paul making his brightest works and best narrations. The future of this channel is bright, and we are all here to witness this new great era. 🤘
Such an amazingly well constructed message. Thankyou so much brasilius. I know what you mean by the second point but I hope I did your story justice though...
I'm not exaggerating when I say this story was more exciting, grotesque and enjoyable than pretty much any Black Library novel I've ever read. I love these kinds of stories. They truly show that anyone can take a piece of the 40K universe and make it their own, and this story fits perfectly. Very good job.
That means a lot to me Lewis. I'm under no illusion that my writing abilities are better than the official authors but I'm glad my passion for Warhammer and the grim dark shines through. Thankyou again
I genuinely didn't expect any ending other than either him fully falling to chaos or getting caught. I really thought this would end with him ending as the original guy that fell upon his bowie knife in the first episode, for a moment there. This, however, was a much more pleasant ending. Which isn't too realistic, but I'm happy all the same. R.I.P. Solomon. You weren't a real one, but you died a real one.
I am left hollow after this. This trilogy was an absolute treat to listen to. Beautifully written, wonderfully narrated. The emotion you put in this absolutely hit home. Thank you so much for this. Mandatory listening for anyone who wants to write about Slaanesh and the resolver of average people.
His body consumed by fire clutching a murderous demonette wearing the skin of his wife. All in a vain attempt to escape from the guilt of cowardice that consumed him from within. Slaanesh would revel in that oh so delicious irony and the tragedy of it as it devoured his soul. Please write more chaos Vox! You have a talent for it. I’ve enjoyed this one immensely.
You wrapped the trilogy off flawlessly. Part of me hoped Solomon would embrace Chaos and resent his past weakness, but what transpired is more in line with his character.
Solomon truly was the best root farmer the planet had ever seen and in radiant white flames may he rest his old bones in the loving embrace of his wife. Love the story it is definitely one of my new favorite stories
good god-emperor I thought Solomon was going to be fully corrupted by chaos I hope he found peace in death good job vox I hope we see more of your own work.
I'll probably have to listen to this a couple times, to catch every subtle nuance in your masterful storytelling. That's alright: double the pleasure, double the fun.
This whole series is some of the best 40K content I've gotten in a long time. It's beautiful, horrifying, tempting, depressing, exquisite, torment, I feel like I've been taken on a journey of corruption and debauchery with Soloman. You gotta do more Slaanesh stories like this
Nailed it once again Vox. Compelling end to the trilogy & it felt like his fate was truly on a knife edge. The Emperor protects……….via aerial bombing run. Can’t wait until your next project!
Many thanks Anthony! I tried to keep his character as conflicted as possible without straying into cliche territory. Im currently writing my Ork hunter tale which is going well!
I have over 400 black library books ranging from the early 90s onwards... this is absolutely the best I have experienced. Amazing job. Please do more brother
Wow. Absolute magnificent. Solomon's misfortune could have took him anywhere. Brilliant storytelling and writing I could really imagine every part of this vividly.
Amazing story with a fiery end, I love how this is told as if its a horror story. Thats very much what chaos would look like to normal everyday people.
Phenomenal trilogy, I adore Slaanesh but most writers seem afraid to do the faction justice. You did not hold back, and it shines. The S tier production quality makes it 100x better too with the emotive reading, music, and background sounds. So so good. Well done Vox.
This is a triumph, a truly fantastic piece of grimdark that deserves all the praise it gets! Looking forward to your future work, you really have a talent and keep on writing! Champion on the Grimdark, sing on!
I feel like I need to say something after listening to all 3 acts - but I'm only left speechless. There are very few stories which make you feel such a wave of distinct emotions. I personally wish it had a happy ending for the two, but that is expecting too much in this grim dark universe...
I don't know why I was expecting a happy ending in the grimdark universe. Thank you for the wild ride. You definitely need your own audiobook series or something.
This went from crossed, to enemy at the Gates back to crossed again and ending in an absolute tear-jerker that could honestly have made an absolute kino pulp comic page.
This whole trilogy is a masterpiece, and this last entry shocked and moved me at the same time. Thanks for the emotions I was able to feel through your stupendous storytelling.
I have listened to this 2-3 times now. Still can't figure out if Solomon managed to redeem himself or not. I like to think he's with the Emperor. Great story and reading as usual!!
Yo Vox, you are the first writer in almost 20 years of my passion for Warhammer who i feel REALLY captured the scariness of Slanesh!! Not just the body horror but what She Who Thirsts does to your mind/soul as well. Masterfully done!!!!❤❤❤
You sir, are an inspiration. Both in voxing and writing. Took me a while to get to this series because it was a trilogy, but im currently kicking myself for not listening to it earlier.
You are too kind Kirk. I'm so glad you enjoyed my writing. This was a passion project for me and to receive comments like these is more special than you know 🤘
Can’t stop listening to this series. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve listened to this 3 part epic and just surrounded myself with the depth of the writing and narration.
I genuinely had no idea what I was getting Into with this video. I don't read Comments I did read the description and saw the No Hope Warning ...... Wow. My God. Like this is better than any book I've ever read in my 29 years of existence
This... is absolute.... gold. no. diamond material. I legit thought this came out of the black library itself. but when i read the description i was beyond shocked. I need to hear more of this!!!
The ending brought me to tears. It's remarkable how quickly disregard the descriptions of the horrible nature of chaos in the rulebooks and the codexes and yet this story brought it to life. Brb, I'm throwing my Word Bearers in the bin.
that'll be me, my friend :) I narrate all of the stories on here. This is also my writing as well so I take this comment as the biggest compliment. Thankyou so much!
I was so sure you can't make the ending good after all of this, but boy was I mistaken. A stellar example of melding of voiceacting and writing, works for 40k fans, works for someone that has never heard about the world. Truly a great piece of work, that was absolutely an awesome experience!
I've been listening to this story over and over. I only hope to be half as good a narrator as you, I picture a guy with a flashlight under his face telling this story to scared campers. The camping zone is haunted and full of horrible creatures but even them stay silent and listen to the horrible adventure of Solomon
Second time listening, I think solomon redeemed himself when the music hits as solomon removes his armour was intense it was badass he was a coward but the emphasis is on the was the man truly redeemed himself when he took charge of his life one final time ,I think it was badass solomon will be redeemed in the God emperors eyes from coward wretch to a man his journey was awesome to see I have respect for solomon
Vox is my main source of 40k stories, because the stories he tells are consistently amazing, both in literary contruction and in the performance. your delivery of this three-part series made me fall in love with Soloman and his journey. A well-deserved applause, friend. Well done :)
That's great to read! Good to know I can be your avenue into the universe. The tales on my channel are typically a little darker in tone to some of the official lore and stories of Warhammer but I hope you enjoy them nonetheless!
@@AVoxintheVoid Honestly I've always struggled with sitting down and immersing in a story because of outside and inside factors, you have managed to hook me on something I know nothing about intrigued on what tale might await next. The quality is such a high standard I was truly dumbfounded finding out that you had wrote this! Awesome work and very happy to have come across this.
This is probably my favorite short story out of the unknown amount of 40k and Fantasy books I've read. It's one of those where you wish it was longer, but also it doesn't need to be. I do hope you do another like this. Chaos is fascinating when done right. I'm glad it didn't turn into just another "accidental hero saves the day to atone for his shame" or whatever. This was so much more realistic in a sense. Love it. Thank you
Now I want to see how you'd write a story based on Tzeench or Nurgle, Khorne would be self-explanatory but I bet you'd still make the imagery and writing like that of an epic.
I would say... Bravo!!!!!!! One of the most exhilarating stories I have ever heard.. so short yet so defined.. so graphic and grotesque yet so darkly beautiful and haunting.. the way the story caresses the fall of a simple man and the loss and guilt he has as he looks for some form of redemption that can not be had... yet in the end he takes what he will as solace and claims that as his own... he reclaims what he feels is his former life and happiness and embraces it and endures it in the flames... a man's last wish come true in his own mind and way as he dies.
Super rainy windy dark drive into work was made almost terrifying by this. Wonderfully unsettling. You did an amazing job at portraying followers of Slaneesh as so truly debauched.
10/10 had me hooked and guessing till the end. Very fitting redemptive ending. Bittersweet one might say. Brought a sad smile to my face. Outstanding storytelling 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
It has been almost 5 years since a 40k story made me tear up. This one did. The combination of the writing and the narration... Incredible. I am truly grateful for the feelings your work evoked in me. Thank you!
Wow, I take this as a huge compliment as this is one of the stories on the channel I both wrote and narrated. I'm extremely honoured to have had this effect. Thankyou my friend
@@AVoxintheVoid Super glad I get to experience your work! As long as it brings you fulfilment, keep up the incredible work. You're an amazing writer and masterful narrator.
I've said it before on one of your other videos, but it's true. You deserve so much more than 12k subscribers. Content of this quality is worth at least an extra two zeros on that number.
@@AVoxintheVoid I liked it a lot. Gutsy to write about the sexual aspect of slaanesh. Everyone knows that it's there, but few writers have the balls to actually put it in a story.
I do like how this is actually a pretty realistic story. There are plenty of stories of people during WW2 (soldiers and civilians) being forced to work with a hostile invading army just to survive. This often meant that these people had to participate in some pretty horrible acts. Of course, none of them engaged in demonic rituals, but there were plenty of people who, say, participated in Nazi atrocities because they thought it was the only way to survive.
What an awesome finale to an awesome trilogy .... The scene with Solomons battlecry´after surviving the siege was is metal as fuck. It was obvious to me that he was eating human meat, I mean, we are talking about Chaos here. I was sure Solomon would fall to Chaos completely in the end, but you closed off the trilogy with an awesome twist! This may be your best work so far! If this is your first completely self-written story and it is already this good, I am really looking forward to what the future brings for this channel!
Man i can't stop thinking of the Cenobites from Hellraiser. They'd fit right in with Slaanesh and it's daemons. Truly awesome job writing this. Can't get enough of this story.
Started with Act I & was caught off guard by how properly dark & graphic it was (again just a hint of what you would experience watching followers of Slaanesh). A well done series!
Your Imperial Guard videos are like a gateway drug. I'm listening to a Cadian's survivor's guilt, and before I know it, I'm three videos deep into a documentary about Slaaneshi war crimes. 10/10 would almost resist again
After the 8th listen to this production i must say that it is the best thing i have had the privilege to enjoy. Unbelievably good writing and top tier performance. You best work. Period.
OKAY, the ending absolutely wrecked me. I never felt this emotion with any 40k stories ever. Sure sadness, but never this wrecked. Whoever said romance is dead in 40k has never heard the ending of this absolute masterpiece. Well done, very well done.
Thankyou so much. This series was written by myself so tried to add in a glimmer of 'romance' and loyalty where I could...I know it's few and far between!
@@AVoxintheVoid Immaculate writing. It did not feel forced in there, it just fits exactly how it should be, and it's so beautifully placed. Hope to see more of these, as I can't get enough! 😅
That's the end to this story but I'm about 3/4 the way through writing my Ork hunter tale. I don't have a patreon at the mo but I do have a "buy me a coffee" and PayPal details in my logo at the top of the channel in the cover art. Many thanks!
This is a surreal, Horrific, journey through hell and one of the most intense chaos god stories I've ever read. It's like a really, really, really bad DMT trip. I just can't stop imagining some of the stuff you said in these and it makes me sick, intrigued, and wanna hold onto my humanity all in one.
I must point this, that this channel had three distinct types of videos, first: the narrations of stories that didn´t exist with the intention to be narrated, we see some of the more ancient tales and videos in these categories.
The second is stories that were made to be narrated, however, those stories usually simply couldn't translate the sentiment the original author intended to its full, it is akin to a direct translation from a language to another.
However, here, we have something more, the new type, here, we have both the author and the narrator as one.
Vox is at the point that he can write incredible pieces of fiction, but also to translate it as the author intended in its fullest.
This is a turning point in terms of quality of narration, this is where I can see Paul making his brightest works and best narrations.
The future of this channel is bright, and we are all here to witness this new great era.
🤘
Such an amazingly well constructed message. Thankyou so much brasilius. I know what you mean by the second point but I hope I did your story justice though...
@@AVoxintheVoid worry not my friend, your narration honored that story
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I'm not exaggerating when I say this story was more exciting, grotesque and enjoyable than pretty much any Black Library novel I've ever read. I love these kinds of stories. They truly show that anyone can take a piece of the 40K universe and make it their own, and this story fits perfectly. Very good job.
That means a lot to me Lewis. I'm under no illusion that my writing abilities are better than the official authors but I'm glad my passion for Warhammer and the grim dark shines through. Thankyou again
I second that, his Chaos is more Chaos the the official version, as the official version is very much Saturday morning cartoon bad guy stuff.
This comment makes me a happy man! 🤘
Wholeheartedly agree!
@@lay-hannowway8943 true.
I genuinely didn't expect any ending other than either him fully falling to chaos or getting caught.
I really thought this would end with him ending as the original guy that fell upon his bowie knife in the first episode, for a moment there.
This, however, was a much more pleasant ending. Which isn't too realistic, but I'm happy all the same.
R.I.P. Solomon. You weren't a real one, but you died a real one.
I am left hollow after this. This trilogy was an absolute treat to listen to. Beautifully written, wonderfully narrated. The emotion you put in this absolutely hit home. Thank you so much for this. Mandatory listening for anyone who wants to write about Slaanesh and the resolver of average people.
Do you know what will fill that hollow feeling, now that this glory has faded?
*More.* You must have *more.*
His body consumed by fire clutching a murderous demonette wearing the skin of his wife. All in a vain attempt to escape from the guilt of cowardice that consumed him from within. Slaanesh would revel in that oh so delicious irony and the tragedy of it as it devoured his soul.
Please write more chaos Vox! You have a talent for it. I’ve enjoyed this one immensely.
He did kill a demon though by keeping it trapped in her body, his soul maybe did go to the emperor
A lot lighter ending than I expected, but still I do not feel cheated. Amazing work!
Thankyou boss! I was in two minds about how I should do the ending. I think this is a happy medium!
Napalm death is one of the cozier ends in 40k.
@Adolf Hitler yeah this is one of my stories I wrote. Thankyou my friend. Got another slannesh story coming soon from my fevered mind...
You wrapped the trilogy off flawlessly. Part of me hoped Solomon would embrace Chaos and resent his past weakness, but what transpired is more in line with his character.
Thanks Mando! This makes me a happy chap to know a character I have written can resonate with my audience. Thanks boss 🤘
@@AVoxintheVoid Solomon was who many of us today would never admit to being, but truly are.
Slaanesh would be proud.
@@Lemmeshowyousummin Well, good thing we don't live in a universe where space demons spew radioactive evil out of their asses.
Solomon truly was the best root farmer the planet had ever seen and in radiant white flames may he rest his old bones in the loving embrace of his wife. Love the story it is definitely one of my new favorite stories
That means the world my friend
@@AVoxintheVoid you're not wrong.
This is the Romeo and Juliet versiom from 41 millenium... And it is still better love story then twilight :D great work!
good god-emperor I thought Solomon was going to be fully corrupted by chaos I hope he found peace in death good job vox I hope we see more of your own work.
From the embrace of chaos to absolution. Truly truly amazing and dark, I just keep repeating myself how damn good this was.
I'll probably have to listen to this a couple times, to catch every subtle nuance in your masterful storytelling. That's alright: double the pleasure, double the fun.
You're too kind sir.
Also very slaanesh.
SLAANESH CULTIST! SOMEONE CALL THE GREY KNIGHTS! lol
What an epic 3 play arc! This should be a movie. The trash in movie theaters and tv pales to the work of art I just witnessed. Kudos.
This whole series is some of the best 40K content I've gotten in a long time. It's beautiful, horrifying, tempting, depressing, exquisite, torment, I feel like I've been taken on a journey of corruption and debauchery with Soloman. You gotta do more Slaanesh stories like this
Nailed it once again Vox. Compelling end to the trilogy & it felt like his fate was truly on a knife edge. The Emperor protects……….via aerial bombing run.
Can’t wait until your next project!
Many thanks Anthony! I tried to keep his character as conflicted as possible without straying into cliche territory. Im currently writing my Ork hunter tale which is going well!
I have over 400 black library books ranging from the early 90s onwards... this is absolutely the best I have experienced. Amazing job. Please do more brother
Wow. Absolute magnificent. Solomon's misfortune could have took him anywhere. Brilliant storytelling and writing I could really imagine every part of this vividly.
That's really given me a boost Fred! I'm glad you enjoyed my writing/narration
Amazing story with a fiery end, I love how this is told as if its a horror story. Thats very much what chaos would look like to normal everyday people.
Phenomenal trilogy, I adore Slaanesh but most writers seem afraid to do the faction justice. You did not hold back, and it shines. The S tier production quality makes it 100x better too with the emotive reading, music, and background sounds. So so good. Well done Vox.
Well that brings a whole new edge to the term "tragic love story"
Better VO then the official narrators in most cases.
Too kind Matt 🤘
This trilogy is absolutely fantastic!!!
Vox imo produces the best wh40k lore stories on yt,this Channel is definitely next-level !!
I'm so glad you have been here to support my work nix! 🤘
Oh my God I can't wait thank you Vox you are the best this is such a good story I wish you would make it into a full book
This is the final part my friend. Hope you enjoy it!
@@AVoxintheVoid nooooooooo is so good
This is a triumph, a truly fantastic piece of grimdark that deserves all the praise it gets! Looking forward to your future work, you really have a talent and keep on writing! Champion on the Grimdark, sing on!
If that's one thing I want to be known as, that is it! I will sing the songs of the grim dark until the day I die!
Solomons character arc is amazing.
Glad you enjoyed it Austin. I really enjoyed his journey and I'm glad it translates 🤘
I feel like I need to say something after listening to all 3 acts - but I'm only left speechless. There are very few stories which make you feel such a wave of distinct emotions.
I personally wish it had a happy ending for the two, but that is expecting too much in this grim dark universe...
Thankyou so much, this being my writing it's always great to hear that people enjoyed the story!
@@AVoxintheVoid Your stories are always a joy to listen to
(/^-^)/ be careful GW doesn't get jealous! ;D
JUST finished 1 and 2 today. High key ready to indulge in more heresy 🙌🏻 thank you!
My twisted pleasure! I sincerely hope you enjoy this final part Julian!
I don't know why I was expecting a happy ending in the grimdark universe. Thank you for the wild ride. You definitely need your own audiobook series or something.
your voice acting is really something, made this grim dark world become alive before my inner eye
Truly horrific stuff of nightmares in the grim dark. Powerful narration.
I personally wrote this tale..glad you enjoyed my fevered mind!
This went from crossed, to enemy at the Gates back to crossed again and ending in an absolute tear-jerker that could honestly have made an absolute kino pulp comic page.
This whole trilogy is a masterpiece, and this last entry shocked and moved me at the same time. Thanks for the emotions I was able to feel through your stupendous storytelling.
I have listened to this 2-3 times now. Still can't figure out if Solomon managed to redeem himself or not. I like to think he's with the Emperor. Great story and reading as usual!!
Yo Vox, you are the first writer in almost 20 years of my passion for Warhammer who i feel REALLY captured the scariness of Slanesh!! Not just the body horror but what She Who Thirsts does to your mind/soul as well. Masterfully done!!!!❤❤❤
Holy shit! This was a wild ride! Thank you so much for this beautiful work.
Thankyou for listening my friend! It was a ride writing it aswell. I think it's most definitely given me the bug!
You sir, are an inspiration. Both in voxing and writing. Took me a while to get to this series because it was a trilogy, but im currently kicking myself for not listening to it earlier.
You are too kind Kirk. I'm so glad you enjoyed my writing. This was a passion project for me and to receive comments like these is more special than you know 🤘
Can’t stop listening to this series. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve listened to this 3 part epic and just surrounded myself with the depth of the writing and narration.
My god, this series has been incredible. Personal favorite so far.
I truly am humbled by this as it was my first written tale for the channel ☺️
This is the side of chaos we've been needing. Holy smokes this is an excellent story and fantastic narration!!!
Top to bottom brilliance this has been vox. What a talent you gave for writing. Honestly mate your fantastic at this. Thank you so much for your work.
Thanks Kenny! I'm glad that you have enjoyed my little tale. I've definitely got the bug now!
Your stories are amazing, combing vivid, grotesque, and moving writing with the audio to make Slaanesh red in the face. please never stop!
I genuinely had no idea what I was getting Into with this video. I don't read Comments I did read the description and saw the No Hope Warning ......
Wow. My God. Like this is better than any book I've ever read in my 29 years of existence
This is one of the most amazing comments I have received. Truly humbled
This... is absolute.... gold. no. diamond material. I legit thought this came out of the black library itself. but when i read the description i was beyond shocked. I need to hear more of this!!!
The ending brought me to tears. It's remarkable how quickly disregard the descriptions of the horrible nature of chaos in the rulebooks and the codexes and yet this story brought it to life. Brb, I'm throwing my Word Bearers in the bin.
I'm glad I could bring some grim dark joy to your life!
Damn dude that was some heavy reading. It both turned my stomach and made my heart ache. The dude who reads this has such a great story telling voice.
that'll be me, my friend :) I narrate all of the stories on here. This is also my writing as well so I take this comment as the biggest compliment. Thankyou so much!
@@AVoxintheVoid It got me so in the mood for a good story that I'm listening to the tale of Gav & Bob again. Bob liked peeling potatoes.
I was so sure you can't make the ending good after all of this, but boy was I mistaken. A stellar example of melding of voiceacting and writing, works for 40k fans, works for someone that has never heard about the world. Truly a great piece of work, that was absolutely an awesome experience!
I've been listening to this story over and over. I only hope to be half as good a narrator as you, I picture a guy with a flashlight under his face telling this story to scared campers. The camping zone is haunted and full of horrible creatures but even them stay silent and listen to the horrible adventure of Solomon
Second time listening, I think solomon redeemed himself when the music hits as solomon removes his armour was intense it was badass he was a coward but the emphasis is on the was the man truly redeemed himself when he took charge of his life one final time ,I think it was badass solomon will be redeemed in the God emperors eyes from coward wretch to a man his journey was awesome to see I have respect for solomon
Vox is my main source of 40k stories, because the stories he tells are consistently amazing, both in literary contruction and in the performance. your delivery of this three-part series made me fall in love with Soloman and his journey. A well-deserved applause, friend. Well done :)
Never played or watched anything 40k, you have me binge watching these.
That's great to read! Good to know I can be your avenue into the universe. The tales on my channel are typically a little darker in tone to some of the official lore and stories of Warhammer but I hope you enjoy them nonetheless!
@@AVoxintheVoid Honestly I've always struggled with sitting down and immersing in a story because of outside and inside factors, you have managed to hook me on something I know nothing about intrigued on what tale might await next. The quality is such a high standard I was truly dumbfounded finding out that you had wrote this! Awesome work and very happy to have come across this.
As I just got off work, here is the best way to break in my weekend! Can’t wait for another incredible story!
This is probably my favorite short story out of the unknown amount of 40k and Fantasy books I've read.
It's one of those where you wish it was longer, but also it doesn't need to be.
I do hope you do another like this. Chaos is fascinating when done right. I'm glad it didn't turn into just another "accidental hero saves the day to atone for his shame" or whatever.
This was so much more realistic in a sense. Love it. Thank you
What a fantastic series of stories, brilliant narration and cracking imagery. Brilliant work 👏
Not gonna lie was hoping he'd fall to slaanesh. Still great ending man good work.
Listened to the trilogy today, actually a surprisingly poetic ending to the final episode considering how it began. Kudos, brother!
Slaneesh stories ate the best and we need more of them.
That battle sequence almost made me want to join chaos guard
What a hell of a fucking ride.....what a fucking trilogy. Gives new meaning to that "I'd stop the world and melt with you" song
Bubba I have no doubt about you getting that 20k + subs by the end of the year. Damn fine work man.
I'm not holding my breath, this UA-cam game is a funny ol' beast. But I truly appreciate the words of encouragement and support. Keeps me going sir!
Truly you are blessed by the Prince of Pleasure for this series was utter perfection.
Thankyou mason! I have another slaanesh story coming soon to the channel that I personally wrote myself. I hope you enjoy it too!
Just watched all three and as a chaos entusiast truly great storytelling Praise the dark Gods. PRAISE a Vox in the Void
Now I want to see how you'd write a story based on Tzeench or Nurgle, Khorne would be self-explanatory but I bet you'd still make the imagery and writing like that of an epic.
Yeah I might do Nurgle next...that would be fun!
I'd just like 64 more books with Slaanesh. So they can catch up in stories about it.
I would say... Bravo!!!!!!! One of the most exhilarating stories I have ever heard.. so short yet so defined.. so graphic and grotesque yet so darkly beautiful and haunting.. the way the story caresses the fall of a simple man and the loss and guilt he has as he looks for some form of redemption that can not be had... yet in the end he takes what he will as solace and claims that as his own... he reclaims what he feels is his former life and happiness and embraces it and endures it in the flames... a man's last wish come true in his own mind and way as he dies.
Super rainy windy dark drive into work was made almost terrifying by this. Wonderfully unsettling. You did an amazing job at portraying followers of Slaneesh as so truly debauched.
This felt like the perfect mixture of exciting and Grimdark. So much emotion.
10/10 had me hooked and guessing till the end. Very fitting redemptive ending. Bittersweet one might say. Brought a sad smile to my face. Outstanding storytelling 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
That's an amazing response to read. Thankyou so much hunter for listening and for your words of support
It has been almost 5 years since a 40k story made me tear up. This one did. The combination of the writing and the narration... Incredible. I am truly grateful for the feelings your work evoked in me. Thank you!
Wow, I take this as a huge compliment as this is one of the stories on the channel I both wrote and narrated. I'm extremely honoured to have had this effect. Thankyou my friend
@@AVoxintheVoid Super glad I get to experience your work! As long as it brings you fulfilment, keep up the incredible work. You're an amazing writer and masterful narrator.
I've said it before on one of your other videos, but it's true. You deserve so much more than 12k subscribers. Content of this quality is worth at least an extra two zeros on that number.
That means a lot to me David! I'm happy for the 12k of amazing supporters like yourself!
The ENDING WAS CRAZY 🗣️ omg can we get a fallen angels narration please 🙏🏽
So I just finished this series and it was incredible. Gave me chills and everything
What a perfect thing to see on my day off.
I look forward to hearing what you think of it!
@@AVoxintheVoid I liked it a lot. Gutsy to write about the sexual aspect of slaanesh. Everyone knows that it's there, but few writers have the balls to actually put it in a story.
I do like how this is actually a pretty realistic story. There are plenty of stories of people during WW2 (soldiers and civilians) being forced to work with a hostile invading army just to survive. This often meant that these people had to participate in some pretty horrible acts. Of course, none of them engaged in demonic rituals, but there were plenty of people who, say, participated in Nazi atrocities because they thought it was the only way to survive.
What an awesome finale to an awesome trilogy .... The scene with Solomons battlecry´after surviving the siege was is metal as fuck. It was obvious to me that he was eating human meat, I mean, we are talking about Chaos here. I was sure Solomon would fall to Chaos completely in the end, but you closed off the trilogy with an awesome twist!
This may be your best work so far!
If this is your first completely self-written story and it is already this good, I am really looking forward to what the future brings for this channel!
Man i can't stop thinking of the Cenobites from Hellraiser. They'd fit right in with Slaanesh and it's daemons.
Truly awesome job writing this. Can't get enough of this story.
The music complements the story perfectly, I'm transported to the front line alongside Soloman wiping chunks of gore from the eye slits of his mask
Many thanks Joey!
Lovley piece of work this. From ACT 1 through to ACT 3. Some great writing and narration.
Wow that was amazing. Easily top three all time 40k short stories.
I've listened to this in one breath ! That's a masterpiece of work.
That's some serious lung power! 😜 Thankyou for listening!
Holy shit bro, YOU wrote this? It’s incredible. So visceral and and enthralling.
Yeah man, this was my baby 🙂 glad you enjoyed it!
The series was riveting but leaves the reader demanding more. More!
I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale brother!
Started with Act I & was caught off guard by how properly dark & graphic it was (again just a hint of what you would experience watching followers of Slaanesh). A well done series!
Wonderful, absolutely amazing horror, hope, and sadness. It is perfectly done
Starting this rn ,this was truly a horror masterpiece
Your Imperial Guard videos are like a gateway drug. I'm listening to a Cadian's survivor's guilt, and before I know it, I'm three videos deep into a documentary about Slaaneshi war crimes. 10/10 would almost resist again
This was good. Love it when Chaos worshippers meet their demise.
The devolution of Solomon into a monster of slaanesh is extremely interesting
And here. We. Go.
Hope you like it Greg!!
@@AVoxintheVoid holysh*****. Bravo my man! This was exquisite!
@@KillTeamHungary thankyou boss man! Glad you approved 🤘🤘
So many emotions flowing into and away. Beautifully written and magnificently narrated.
Thankyou my friend. This was the first tale I wrote personally for the channel so it means a lot
After the 8th listen to this production i must say that it is the best thing i have had the privilege to enjoy. Unbelievably good writing and top tier performance. You best work. Period.
Awesome story fantastic narration wish there was more
Many thanks! I absolutely loved writing this story. I'm sure there will be more like this in the near future
Actually superb. A very compelling and engrossing listen. Well done!
This is amazing . Well written and well narrated. 👏
Thankyou ol' one eye! Glad you enjoyed it sir
OKAY, the ending absolutely wrecked me. I never felt this emotion with any 40k stories ever. Sure sadness, but never this wrecked. Whoever said romance is dead in 40k has never heard the ending of this absolute masterpiece. Well done, very well done.
Thankyou so much. This series was written by myself so tried to add in a glimmer of 'romance' and loyalty where I could...I know it's few and far between!
@@AVoxintheVoid Immaculate writing. It did not feel forced in there, it just fits exactly how it should be, and it's so beautifully placed. Hope to see more of these, as I can't get enough! 😅
There couldn’t have been a more perfect ending to this series.
Many thanks Josh. It was hard to think of a suitable ending to this story and glad it came across well!
Again, another fantastic piece of work. You are truly a top-tier story teller. I hope we get more. Also where is your Patreon?
That's the end to this story but I'm about 3/4 the way through writing my Ork hunter tale. I don't have a patreon at the mo but I do have a "buy me a coffee" and PayPal details in my logo at the top of the channel in the cover art. Many thanks!
Awesome story about corruption and insane terror again, thanks!
My pleasure Attila. Was a fun ride
Amazing. Thank you for the hard work
And thankyou for the support brother
This is a surreal, Horrific, journey through hell and one of the most intense chaos god stories I've ever read. It's like a really, really, really bad DMT trip. I just can't stop imagining some of the stuff you said in these and it makes me sick, intrigued, and wanna hold onto my humanity all in one.
This mini story was so good can't wait for the next one
you really knocked it out of the park mate, bloody good job!
Many thanks Johnny!! 🤘