Nate Speaks: The Aldershadow AU
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- Опубліковано 15 вер 2024
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"All her friends are dead or Sleekwhisker"
- Draikinator 2018
That part made me snigger because it implies Sleek-whisker is some unfortunate happenstance (Which is... you know... True)
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SparrowWing what’s the time stamp for that quote? I don’t remember hearing it
I have 0 things to add here, I just love this quote
6:38
god why isnt this how the books went?? so much better in this au
O meh gawd, Hello, I watch your videos :0
And the au is better than the books :3
Blackie Sootfur
I agree
That’s why we have AU’s. We take our creativity and imagination to see what could have been. We take those opportunities where the Erin’s could have made it, but choose not too. AND HERE WE ARE
Hi
Blackie Sootfur agreed
"all her friends are dead or...sleekwhisker"
lmao
It would be cool if in this AU Dovewing and Aldershadow have like a strong bond with eachother, because they are both from ThunderClan.
TheLegend 27 Tawnypelt too
we got both the moms who shouldnt be moms but are great moms anyways
@@blossomieproductions7222 I feel like you could make a better story out of just the two of them; they could feel as though they don't completely belong.
I just realized that doveing is related to the power of three... 😐😐😐😐
But who cares, ivypool and fernsong are together? So let's say keep that way. 😙😙😙
This is already much better and I’m not even finished the video. Alderheart needs more development, his chapters are practically about breathing.
Pfffft!!
(That wasn't mocking, that was holding back a laugh)
Meme Thot I remember that from the books
*Gray Wing's chapters
I mean I guess he isn't as nervous....
.... that's it...
Chapter 27: huff puff huff huff puff puff huff puff huff puff. Puff puff.
I still would have Needletail die tbh. In a self sacrifice as well. Aldershadow is cornered and cant fight for shit but in comes Needletail and Sparkstar who take on two cats. Sparkstar ends up losing her first life and Needletail dies protecting the leader before she can reawake. I feel like not only does this show that she is now selfless but she also has an appreciation and understanding of clan life. She sees the value of the leaders of clans and the rankings all around. Shes remembered for her courage at the battle by all of the clans. Also, Onestar still kills Darktail because even though it was a shit redemption, i love when parents are the doom to their kits (like how Yellowfang destroyed Brokenstar tWICE JFC) and its a fitting end to the both of them. Onestar is brave for once and Darktail ends like how he killed so many other cats; drowning
NeedleTail becomes immortal in my AU
But needletail do
WHOOO MORE ALDERSHADOW CONTENT!!!
Oh and I am a big fan
Me
Alderheart & ravenpaw having anxiety is a new headcanon for me.
Take a look at those spicy likes
It’s t e c h n I c a l l y already canon..
In this AU since Bramblestar wasn't leader for the time it was warrior naming time ( probably )
We don't have...
Twigbranch....
Aw
I like Twigheart or Twigtail. IT ALREADY IS A STRUGGLE WITH THE PREFIX “TWIG”
Why are these replies better than all of Bramblestar's names combined
what about twigfall or twigflower? maybe twigpool or twigblossom? love the other ones too!
Twigfall
"Even though he was *terrible at everything* "
That describes the relationship between parents and kids.
0h Nutty
Yup .
Alderpaw: WAIT NO TAKE ME
Rowanstar: ok sure
Bramblestar: I don’t see why not
Sparkpaw & Squirrelflight: *Bramblestar that’s your child*
I have a Brokenstar AU in my head where he stuck with Yellowfang and became a Medicine Cat instead. His father isn't happy, but Brokenkit is talented and inherited a watered down version of Yellowfang's gift/curse, only feeling a tingle in the patients affected area. So he also would be invaluable as a medicine cat. Featherkit goes the Warrior's path, but sometimes wishes he was a Med Cat instead. He is resentful of Brokenkit as a result. But he brings helpful herbs if he sees them. This AU is just a bit of random thoughts on what ifs. I haven't even come up with his Med Cat name, since Brokentail is too easy. Brokenpath and Brokenfate get tossed around in my head a lot for it.
mmmaybe brokenwish or wisp or also maybe brokenecho?
Brokenpetal?
Dragonemperess Brokenpath is my favorite!
Made a Mapleshade AU 🙃 hope you like
MapleShade and her kits are traveling across the river. Larchkit and Petalkit have already gone in and are swimming to Riverclan. Mapleshade nuzzles Patchkit before he jumps in. MapleShade slowly gets in right behind Patchkit, when she hears a scream from the other side of the river. The voice screamed "Get out!!!" MapleShade turned and saw the massive wave of water coming for her. She shrieked and grabbed a terrified Patchkit, and swam as fast as she could to their side of the river. She just pulled herself up when she felt a massive wave of water crash against her hind legs. She let out a scream of pain, and pulled herself up fully, getting her legs out of the water. She dropped a wailing Patchkit, and fell to the ground in exhaustion. Her eyes suddenly widened as she heard wailing from the other side of the river, and she panickingly pulled herself to look at the other side of the river. There she saw a plump Riverclan apprentice, who she knew as PerchPaw. He was holding Petalkit by her scruff, with a wailing Larchkit at his side. He dropped Petalkit, and she ran to Larchkit. “Why were you crossing the river with kits?” PerchPaw called over the river, as the water died down.
I’m lazy and can’t right the whole thing, but PerchPaw takes Mapleshade and her kits to the barn, and she lives happily with her kits, eventually dying, but goes to Starclan!
Can I steal this idea for a story? Plssss?
rainyrosie 23 yep can you just credit me? :3 for like inspiration or anything idk
Milky Arts sure!!
Liz I LUV IT 😍😍😍.
Just in case can you talk about how hollyleaf became hollystar in warrior AU
This is a little something I'd like to add to this:During the journey to rescue Skyclan Alderheart and Sparkpelt ask Sandstorm about their parents.One of the stories Sandstorm tells them is that Tigerstar wanted Brambleclaw and Tawneypelt to join Shadowclan when they were kits but Thundrclan refused and kept the safe(this is in the first arc).Then when Sparkpelt revolts against Bramblestar she would say something like "Didn't Thundrclan fight for you and your sister when you needed it" and this is when Bramblestar starts to realise what he did was wrong but first refuses to admit it but while he and Rowanstar were in Riverclan what Sparkpelt said stays in his head.
"all her friends are dead...or sleekwhisker"
savage
*I N H A L E S*
Do you smell that? It's the scent of an AU that gives life.
nEeDlEtAiL lIvEs
nEeDlEtAiL lIvEs
nEeDlEtAiL lIvEs
thIS IS BEST AU
Ivypool AU:
Ivypaw still becomes a dark forest apprentice, but this time, she agrees with attacking the clans
She becomes a df warrior, and fights besides Hawkfrost, and kills her own sister, Dovewing. The dark forest ultimately wins, with Firestar and Brambleclaw dead. Tigerstar becomes the leader of all the clans, and Breezepelt and Ivypool become mates. There is a rebellion with the survivors, including Littlecloud, Dustpelt, Squirrelflight, Sandstorm, and Crowfeather, Rowanclaw, Mistyfoot, and Tawnypelt. Sandstorm and Dustpelt die in the rebellion, but peace returns to the forest as the Dark forest is destroyed, and some df survivors escape. Ivypool is exiled by her parents, Whitwing and Birchfall, and Squirrelflight is now Squirrelstar. Also, Breezepelt is exiled with her, but they kill each other in an argument.
They have one kit, Dark, who died, and was the cause of the argument.
This is way better than the actual books WTF?!?!
Quiet Rage I really like your What Warriors Taught Us video!
I really want to see more of Squirrelflight's pov in this. When I saw your pmv I imagined since Bramble wasn't there for his kits, then Squirrelflight would be super close. So when bramble trades his son, Squirrel loses her crap and after that point they just argue until Bramble was banished.
Or something like that idk lol
Yasss Needletail lives.... yaaaAAASSSSSSS, Aldershadow is livin a life he actually wants, and there's no Bramblestar gets the boot... And then comes back. I LOVEE ITTTT EEEEE!!!!!!
Low key trying to finesse all ur au’s into one cannon
A: at 6:37 it said "all her friends are dead or Sleekwhisker" that just cracked me up so much and
B: Darktail's Nightmare should DEFINITELY be a super edition
And C: does Rowanclaw /Star meet up with Darktail (wait in this AU did he die because I've already forgotten) and/or Darktail's followers?
Plus, Darktail is an AMAZING villan
Huh, that's a cool idea!
The picture of squirrel fight I used it for a project without knowing who you were
-What would change if this was alongside-
-your Hollystar au?-
I feel like Hollystar wouldn't want Alderpaw to go, but Brambleclaw agrees and she has to go with it. This would lead to a lot of arguing because Hollystar thinks that trading Alderpaw was morally wrong, and Hollystar might've just exiled him. Other than that, things would pretty much be the same in my opinion.
The Aldershadow Au- You mean Nate being Alderheart’s character arc?
I lie,how you added a desperate relationship or bad relationship in that ends with friendship. Like, we all need more of these.
"Tigerheartstar" nice haha
Um here’s an idea what if
When Hollyleaf got trapped under ground woth Fallenleaves
That instead of him giving up his life energy or How ever he revives her
After Fallen leafs Tells how he ended up how he wants to turn back time to fix his mistake
That’s hollyleaf can see Leafpool...Sqirrilflight....how they only wanted to protect them that if they could they would turn back time to fix this whole mess
She realizes after the talk with fallen leaves maybe a few moons or whatever that she her self did not want to turn back time....she was supposed to be dead be in starclan that was her destiny but maybe she could help someone else Make it so that they can start over
She believes after what she has done to Her clan, Her Friends, Her parents....Her brothers
She dosent deserve a Second chance But fallen Leaves dose
So she gives up her life energy to make him alive as she finally goes to starclan as she was destined too
And I guess fallen leaves takes Hollyleafs place But in the battle agoast Star clan and the Dark forest
Fallen leaves is trying to protect Ivypool but he too like her is about to be killed only for Holly leafs spirit to appear and Protect them but as she disappears she tells fallenleaves that yes she will be gone But someday they will meet again to somthing like that and that he should keep going cause his destiny was not to Forever dissapear in a Cave no his destiny is to continue walking forward to see what the future holds
...
Maybe
A good FallenLeaves Au or not your choice really
XD then windclan and riverclan are just like "the frig is going on rn like no srsly"
Nate, you litterlally come up with the best AUs ;w;
Can u share ur Hollyleaf AU?! It's so cool just from seeing the pmv ^^
I love this, but please, I beg of you, SLEEP.
When I'm DEAD
@@Draikinator no NOW MAN
Nettletail and aldershadow would have some pretty baby's
I love the idea that ivypool becomes Deputy of thunder clan, I think she deserves being leader one day
I love your 'You Were Loved' PMV. Its just great!!
2:14 *Squirrelflight's motherly instincts activate*
I love your aus and they have inspired me to create my very own au! I can’t help but thank you for sharing your ideas with the world.
First time I've heard of this AU and it sounds amazing!! I love anything that fleshes out Alderheart more as a character! Thank you for this vid 💕
As far as I’m concerned this is what happened in the books
will we ever hear about the "heavy heights" snowkit au ? that looked really interesting :0
Better than cannon you are such a good writer
This is a great AU .. like one of the best I've heard xD
*YES I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS*
Would you talk about the idea that Redtail and Whitestorm killed Thistleclaw? i think its really cool!
also I think Thisleclaw WAS a good cat but was driven by Snowfurs death, fell in love with Spottedleaf, and then was killed and went to the Dark Forest for Pedophilia
man I wish the books went like this. I never though BLUNDERclan should have three med cats, I mean they already have cats who know how to do the duties as well like briarlight, cinderheart, and brightheart
All hail Draikinator! The new Erin Hunter!
( Dont hate people )
I love the au like I love this UA-camr 💕
I love these videos, please do more. the pmv's are sometimes hard to understand for me so I got excited when I seen this
Why isn't this how it actually went? And why haven't you been hired to write for the Erin's yet? This not only makes so much more sense than what happens in cannon but it also has much greater life lessons than the cannon story.
Me at the beginning of the video: huh this looks interesting
2 minutes later:ohmygodohmygod *sobs loudly*
Hey draik remember Me? I'm the one who asked to write about this AU. Well quick question, for when Bramblestar is kicked out, it is most likely that I will make Twigpaw follow him, in secret of course, and maybe Violetpaw follow Rowanstar, when he gets exiled. You said it would be at the same time, so I feel like they would meet up, watch, than talk about all the drama in their clans. Than go back, probably causing a tiny bit of suspicion.
Could you link it?
You mean the story? I have yet to publish it! I am still working on it!
I kind of want to write it too maybe I could work with you
@@catfoy8888 I dont know you, and I have never seen any of your writing work, I'm sorry but I wont work with you until I atleast know how well you write.
That's a really cool idea! That could really help tie the two of them back into the narrative
You upload a video the moment Saturday starts
These kids at my school keep chanting 'All my friends are dead' from some strange book and I now have something new to add. 'All my friends are dead. Sleekwhisker. She killed half of them. All my friends are dead.'
I want more info on Hollystar!!!
The voice of you at the begging... So slow, smooth and steady. It caught me off guard.
*Notification pops up*
Me: Nice! new Draikinator Vid!
*Goes to video, clicks play*
Me: What's the Au talk gonna be about?
Draik: "Hello friends and Frenimes-" *Pauses*
Me: Wh... WHOOOOOOAAH!
Oh my lord I really want to put together a map or something for the rest of the au that wasn't touched upon in the "you were loved" pmv, though I'd have to do it after Christmas bc of a ton of projects I have to finish. Anyone have any song suggestions?
What about "There's Nothing Left to say now" by Imagine Dragons?
AAaaa I was so confused about this AU and this is grEAT-
I LOVE IT BUT I REALLLY LOVE ALDERSHADOW/HEART X NEEDLETAILLLL
God why did i get literal chills when drakinator said: "bam cats burst from the trees!"
Yay. This is really good
I love this au! It fits so well into the storyline and it makes, honestly, more sense then the canon.
And while I'm here, since none of my friends like warriors I'm shouting to nobody about my own Mapleshade AU!!
I love Mapelshade, and I love Crookedstar, they both are amazing characters but I feel like their relationship could have been more developed. I mean, just saying, Crookedkit is a kit who lost his mother and Mapleshade is a mother who lost her kits. I love the idea of her bonding with Crookedkit in her plot to destroy him and her accidentally becoming a kind of intense mother figure to him, because after all he's kind of just a angry little kitten with a tounge that sticks out, which is pretty cute. So anyway she falls in love with him and starts feeling a little guilty about her actions in life. (Not killing Appledusk, he was the worst and he deserved it.) She no longer wants to train him to kill, but her actions she can't take back, and in an attempt to save him from the other cats in the Dark Forest, she attacks him and fights with him until he's scared off and she hopes he won't trust any cats like her again. In doing this, she proves that she is a fundamentally good cat like she used to be, while still a little angry and a badass. She becomes a Starclan cat and gets to see her kits again. Crookedstar doesn't lose his whole family anymore and when he goes to recive his nine lives he eventually earns, Mapleshade is there. She apologizes for everything, and a now old and wiser Crookedstar forgives her. They all live happily ever after and Crookedstar gets to have the mother he always wanted.
I wish the books was like this.
And o want to hear about all you're aus. They great! And I could listen too them all day!
Okay I like the story but I don’t think Bramblestar is a bad father as a medicine cat you are constantly working while as a warrior you have more time on you paws. Bramblestar is a leader so he is constantly being pulled away from whatever he is doing. I don’t think he favors Sparkpelt and when a character is a bad mother or father in the books the kits are almost always mad or sad at them while Alderheart and Sparkpelt think he is a great father. And he might just connect more to Sparkpelt then to Alderheart like how hawking is with violetshine and twigbranch
I would love to see a evil medicine cat AU! I'm making one right now, but dang. Nate, your amazing at making these. I would legit pay you if I wasnt so poor xD
I wish this was how the book had actually turned out!! And also am I the only one that loves that Ivypool becomes deputy? I love her character and I really feel like the recent books have failed to do her justice (which isn't surprising) so to see this AU put her in a spot that is very fitting, it just makes me so happy!! Plus I love how it all falls together so freaking Well! Aaaaaah
Nate you make the Best aus I swear. Also love love love these talk videos. Absolutely love to see more of your aus as well!
I'm going to make a character whose story is similar to Aldershadow's (maybe a name and pelt similar too)
I wish Tawnypelt became a permanent leader. She deserves it more than anyone
-Forces this entire video into the books so our favorite munckins can live-
The way you described Darktail’s leadership almost made me chuckle. XD
“Fascism.”
I’ve never heard of this Au.
So I just learned there are AU’s outside of the Undertale community..... and I’m really happy about that!
"All of her friends are dead. Or Sleekwhisker..." XD
Sparkstar aaannnnd temporary Tawnystar! This is great
Also how are you so good at writing this kinda stuff??? It’s amazing! I’m working on my own warriors story and I yearn to have your skills. I can make somewhat likeable characters and that’s it
I imagine after hearing this that alder and needle are incredibly close after this sort of having a sibling bond being very playful and teasing of one another and just being happy friendly cats.
This is such an interesting AU, I love watching your NateSpeaks videos, they are so cool to listen to ^^
Add on to au with another au, hollystar au. Instead of dying by hawkfrost hollyleaf survives and manages to raise an apprentice fully, during squirrelflights depression and hanging around nursery, bramblestar decides to make hollyleaf deputy due to squirrelflight abandoning her duties and out of three, he feels closest to her due to the fact they had to kill cats. But as alderkit became a paw and his training progressed, bramblestar becomes more and more frustrated with his sons failures and more aggressive and tries to hide his son away in the medicine den. Hollyleaf starts to question her leader, even more so after alderpaw comes back with the two kits and bramblestar basically doesn’t care about them. When alderpaw goes to trade himself away, hollyleaf rejects both of shadowclan taking the kit or the apprentice but is silenced by bramblestar saying leaders word is law. This starts off hollyleaf becoming angry and when sparkpelt gives the idea of rebellion. Hollyleaf is all for it, following her heart on whats right. When it leads up to the battle hollyleaf compares bramblestar to his father saying he has become what he wanted to avoid, only caring about strong useful cats. Upon hearing it, bramblestar is shocked and realizes she right, and tries to get sympthany. Hollyleaf then tells him to get out of the territory he’s been exiled for now.
The clan rejoices but as hollyleafs first action as leader is to save alderpaw she makes squirrelflight her deputy. Even if against her own memories of betrayal for she believes squirrelflight has suffered enough. Unlike most leaders hollyleaf jumps into the battle against darktail unafraid to die even if she hasnt had the ceremony yet. Because familiar words whisper in her ear. He doesnt believe in starclan, he only has one life. Though onestar steps in taking responsibility and dying. Hollyleaf offers aldershadow a place in thunderclan if he should ever want to return, as a medicine cat or a warrior. Not something hes forced to be. Hollyleaf heads to the moonpool after to receive her nine lives, her first by firestar, smiling fondly and he says sometimes rules must be broken to protect the clans. The warrior code isn’t always right and is more of a guide, with this life, use it to follow your heart to protect your clan.
Brambleclaw does return later, with his tail between his legs. Hollystar lets him return but tells him she only let him back for the sake of her deputy (squirrelflight) and she’ll be keeping on eye on him. Meaning he’s not in hollystars good eyes anymore. Feeling more ashamed at the kits he raised, he had chased away his whole family from him. He tends to keep his head low and do a lot of chores other warriors hate, punishing himself for letting this happen.
I want the snowkit au! :0 I thought that one was intresting, and I want to know more. Also, it reminded me Mistlekit existed so thats cool.
"Rowanstar is still a salty brat"
-Draikinator, 2018
Wonder how the skyclan situation would play out during this whole thing
Also I do think that alderheart and needletail accidentally do have kits and only tigerheartstar and dovewing know because well, they'd be the only cats who would understand about warrior code breaking kits
Also I think that twigbranch would still do the same thing she did, go to thunderclan the skyclan and steals finleap and go back to thunderclan and I do like the name "Twigbranch" because that symbolizes her, at first being a small weak kit, a "twig" if you will, but then she grew into a proud strong warrior, just as bramblestar says, just a "twig" grows into a "branch"
I got an AU! It's an alternate universe of Mapleshade's Vengeance and I call it Petalrose's Prophecy. I'll read the story.
Storyline:After a brutal battle against Sunningrocks,Ravenwing reports a message that Starclan sent him to his leader,Oakstar. They told him that a she cat with petal shaped spots was fighting a tom. though it was blurry,he knew that a cat in Oakstar's kin would save Thunderclan from the darkened evil. Meanwhile,TC's deputy,Beetail tells Birchface's mate,Mapleshade to go on a dawn patrol led by his sister named Frecklewish. She declines this saying that she's expecting Birchface's kits. After hearing the news,Frecklewish helps Mapleshade to raise the kits sense she told Beetail that she would be raising them alone. After her kitting,Mapleshade names three of them Larchkit,Patchkit and Petalkit. Oakstar was proud that one of his kits was a she kit. Frecklewish along with Doefeather heads to Riverclan to talk to the power hungry Appledusk. Telling him that Mapleshade was saddened and angry that he killed Birchface and his apprentice Flowerpaw,and that once the kits get older,they'll get their revenge. 6 moons past and Petalpaw along with her siblings Larchpaw and Patchpaw get a tour around Thunderclan and their history with Sunningrocks. They also go to the Gathering for the first time. During her apprentice days,Petalpaw had a childhood crush on Beetail. And when she heard that Appledusk betrayed Riverclan and killed Beetail,she was distraught. But hope was restored when her mentor Doefeather was appointed deputy by her grandfather Oakstar. After the loss of Frecklewish,she lashed at Appledusk,who was responsible for luring her to Snakerocks. She along with her brothers,they defeated Appledusk and grieved at the death Oakstar. She was given her warrior name Petalrose for her bravery. With her brothers also becoming warriors (Which by the way their warrior names are Patchfur and Larchclaw).
I know that it's a bit strange but I thought that it would be a good AU :)
Quickest explaination: it's chaos
Thunder clan-kicks out bramble or I mean awful Star,and spark star is the new leader.
Shadow clan- puddle shine can be a warrior, alder shadow is alder paws name, needle tail lives, sleek whisker and darktail are banished etc
River clan- welcomes in bramble or awful Claw and Rowan star, then get attacked
Windclan- Nothing.
BUT WERE THEY ON A CLIFF???
(Jk bruh you can put as many kitties as you want on a cliff♡♡)
"Howe-However..."
*Hm*
Why is this so much better than the books tbh
This is such a cool concept!
This is the kind of unique flare the books desperately need. Such a well thought out AU!
God I love this AU so much, I wish I knew more about WC so I could write this AU for you v.v
I love this au this needs to happen
It’s crazy that 79 people loved this so much they stayed up to watch it super late. In their sleepy state they accidentally hit the dislike button. Oops
I absolutely love this idea! My favourite part isn't even Aldershadow, but Sparkpelt's coup of ThunderClan and Bramblestar's actual growth and development! Needletail lives! Sparkstar! I love it!!
That was confusing.. But I really liked it, at first I thought that was what happened in the books and then im like, "My gosh I really need to read that new series, (Cause I don't have it yet) and then I realized it was an AU
You should totally do a break down of your SnowKit Au. I love SnowKit Aus lol. I think he gets such a raw deal in the books
I agree so much that Ivypool needs to be deputy. I want Squirrelstar with Ivypool as deputy. It would be perfect
Doesn't Hollyleaf become Hollystar and makes Ivypool her deputy or is it a different AU?
Oh my gosh, this is SO GOOD!!! Smeone please make Bramblestar&Aldershadow pmv with "Little lion Man" song😍
Think of how good the books would have been if Drakinator wrote the books