i wrote a cyberpunk retelling of THIS classic novel 🪐 introducing Local Heavens // writing vlog

Поділитися
Вставка
  • Опубліковано 21 лис 2024

КОМЕНТАРІ • 49

  • @KrisMF
    @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +7

    ✨ Thanks to Milanote for sponsoring this video !! Sign up for free and start your next creative project: milanote.com/krismf

  • @laurenct
    @laurenct 9 місяців тому +35

    “nick does his thing where he’s like doing his whole nick thing” 😭 i love that,,,been following your local heavens vlogs for the past year and cannot express how much i CRAVE this omg. screaming!! i feel your stress about going on sub, wishing you good vibes and a short wait 🫶🏻 i hope we can read Nick’s story one dayy !! ✨

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +3

      tysm!!!! 💛

  • @TheHoneyPott
    @TheHoneyPott 9 місяців тому +28

    THE GREAT GASTBY X CYBERPUNK??? I love both?!? I don't know how I didn't connect the dots, you were literally re-reading The Great Gatsby and Fitzgerald's work in past vlogs 😭
    Rooting for your submission journey!! I anticipate the day I can place Local Heavens next to the original on my bookshelf 😄 In the meantime, this has made me want to go re-read The Great Gatsby LOL
    omg the cat is so cute

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +6

      ahhh thank u so much !!! 😭💛

  • @rachelwritesbooks
    @rachelwritesbooks 9 місяців тому +11

    Nick always being the problem is soo 😭😭 I still love you bby!! Besides Nick (& how ecstatic I am that this epic premise has now been revealed), I wanted to say I’m SOOO proud of you! It’s crazy that we’ve been interacting on the internet for yearsss & now you’re going on sub! I know it’s a really scary time, and I’m not sure if it’s helpful at all, but hearing you speak so openly has helped me a lot with my own anxiety & fears when it comes to publishing. It’s so hard to see ourselves when there’s so much fear, but from an outside perspective watching this video, I’d say the editors receiving this manuscript are so lucky! You’ve inspired me so much to face a lot of the publishing things that have been scaring me-so thank you! 💖 Sending sm love to you (& to one of my fave narrators of all time who absolutely is gonna capture the heart of the right imprint!).

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +2

      RACHELLLLL. NUMBER ONE NICK STAN 😭💛 !! thank you for loving him even in his roughest version AHHHH. you were one of the first ppl who made me realize he deserved to feel & speak more… i felt so encouraged to rewrite him after your edit letter! if and when we ever get him out into the world, readers will have you to thank for like, the 50% increase in nick and gatsby scenes LOL. THANK YOU FOR ALL THE SUPPORT, it means so much 🥺💛💛💛

    • @rachelwritesbooks
      @rachelwritesbooks 9 місяців тому +2

      @@KrisMF omggg 🥹🥹 I loved him sm in the draft I read I can’t imagine him being EVEN BETTER??? I will faint lol & I cannot wait to see where this takes you, so proud man!!! 💖

  • @malikamaybe
    @malikamaybe 9 місяців тому +7

    Oooh, The Great Gatsby! I never would have guessed and it's so neat to know more about this lovely project. Your agent is so passionate about your work (I'm glad she liked your next idea! And lol I would have had the same reaction to a phone call). Sending you all the well wishes in the world for submissions!

  • @AdamFishkin
    @AdamFishkin 9 місяців тому +4

    Coming back to a project and writing it in a way you couldn't write it before is weirdly more satisfying. You don't want it to become a habit, of course .... but it's a special type of payoff.
    10:00 That is the most adorable fluffball.

  • @kelleyiswriting
    @kelleyiswriting 9 місяців тому +13

    After watching this whole video.. omg

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +1

      HAHAHA it was so weird filming and editing this vlog... i was also kinda shaking lol. thanks for being there since DAY ONE KELLEY ILYYY !!

  • @Anth.3
    @Anth.3 9 місяців тому +2

    Everything I'm learning about this book makes me so excited to see it in stores one day and get to know your characters 🥂

  • @ceclar_b012
    @ceclar_b012 9 місяців тому +7

    Haha I’m happy to have guessed right! I am curious-should we expect a whole new plotline with LH or a strict retelling of Gatsby?
    Infinitely ready for the future Local Heavens content. Very hopeful for your submission process!

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +2

      you did !! and you were the first person to ever guess !!! i think everyone has a different idea of what a "strict" or faithful retelling is so i'm not sure. but it's a cyberpunk book at the end of the day, so there's definitely new plotlines and significant deviations from the original. it's also like over double the length of gatsby lmao... thank you for the support!

  • @moving2saturn
    @moving2saturn 9 місяців тому +5

    i swear to God it's like Christmas- so many of my fav writers posting videos 😭🫶🏼 I'm so excited for you, congratulations!!

  • @angelyntor2273
    @angelyntor2273 9 місяців тому +1

    I’ve come across your previous vlogs about this project before and I’m so happy I have because I’m so excited 🥹

  • @ScarletFlower_
    @ScarletFlower_ 9 місяців тому +1

    Bless you for that Milanote recommendation, I am obsessed 😭

  • @notesbysaraawynn
    @notesbysaraawynn 9 місяців тому +1

    you're such an inspiration!!! 😍😍😍 and I can't wait to read your book!

  • @rachehester
    @rachehester 9 місяців тому +1

    idk if anyone has said this but ur laugh indeed gave away that ur a filo AND ILY !!!! 😭excited for ur journey and i hope to read local heavens someday!! much love from the philippines!!

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому

      no one has ever told me that before ahaha thank you !! 😭💛

  • @alesswonderland
    @alesswonderland 9 місяців тому

    I remember your video talking about the original Gatsby writing. So when I saw your newsletter, it made so much sense to me. I was like duh! And then the romance being the way it is when you describe it, makes so much more sense knowing the romance options in Gatsby.
    I hope Local Heavens gets picked up because I love a Gatsby twist and it sounds like a lot of fun.

  • @LindsayPuckett
    @LindsayPuckett 9 місяців тому +1

    I’m…SO excited for the future of this project! congrats, kris! ❤🎉

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому

      Thank you lindsay!!! 😭💛💛

  • @bauble.basics
    @bauble.basics 9 місяців тому +1

    Good luck!!! I feel like you planted the seed that it was a Gatsby retelling when you revealed where you got the title from haha. So excited for you.

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому

      yeah !! i was surprised no one asked me sooner lol!

  • @tegslather
    @tegslather 9 місяців тому +1

    I've only recently stumbled on your chanel but I have already binged all of your writing volgs about this particular work (I think) and I can truly say I cannot wait to one day get a copy of Local Heavens! Your passion and excitement (as well as very real anxiety) about your work only shows how much you love the story, the world and the characters. One day when (not and if, when) its shared with the masses so many more people will have the opportunity to love your work the way you do.
    I can't imagine the stress with agents and submission and it sounds like such a chaotic time, but I hope you take time for yourself during such a big anxious time and focusing on the positives of both this project and all your future ones! Looking forward to seeing future posts, especially one day when you're sharing the official publishing date for Local Heavens 💖

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +1

      thank you!! 🥺💛

  • @PsychOnlineAldrian
    @PsychOnlineAldrian 9 місяців тому

    Fingers crossed! 🎉🎉

  • @kelleyiswriting
    @kelleyiswriting 9 місяців тому

    WE. ARE. NOT. READY!!!!!!!!!

  • @ruthmorgan2098
    @ruthmorgan2098 9 місяців тому

    Read your substack blog and was so so so excited!!! Wishing you the best of luck because I need this book❤❤❤

  • @courtneycooperwrites
    @courtneycooperwrites 9 місяців тому

    this is the first video I've seen of yours and omg! I'm so excited for you and Local Heavens sounds like an incredible piece! I'm so excited to follow along for more 🥰

  • @atlantistalamantes9262
    @atlantistalamantes9262 9 місяців тому

    ooh this is amazing im so excited

  • @nightswim96
    @nightswim96 9 місяців тому

    Congrats! 🎉🎉🎉

  • @kayri687
    @kayri687 9 місяців тому

    im so excited for this video and so happy for you and so excited to read this book!

  • @JSandwich13
    @JSandwich13 Місяць тому

    Look, I've never read The Great Gastby (i know, i really should, but my tbr is a mile long,) but i like Cyberpunk, so im in. I read a short story of yours after a video of yours was on my fyp, and i thought your writing was brilliant.

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  Місяць тому +1

      wow thank you so much! will have some news about this book soon :) I appreciate the support!

  • @everythingexploration707
    @everythingexploration707 9 місяців тому

    FINALLY! LET'S GO!!!

  • @itsapapap
    @itsapapap 9 місяців тому

    Gideon is an incredible book and I hope you enjoy it!

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому

      i can’t wait to read it!

  • @mhjmakes3631
    @mhjmakes3631 9 місяців тому

    Premise reveal. Let's go!!! (Also, huge congrats.)
    It's such an interesting idea. At first I was like "Huh, very curious.🤔" Then I was like "Actually, this makes so much sense. Like, the story would be perfect for this type of setting." I was already so excited for the idea, and now I'm even more eager to read it when it comes out.
    Now, the real question is, do I have a mini-prerelease party for myself in which I read through the original and watch the movie(s) in preparation? And the answer is definitely yes.

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +1

      ahaha omg 😭 !! i love inspiring ppl to read or reread the original LOL

  • @celineleee
    @celineleee 9 місяців тому

    SO EXCITING!!!!! ❣️

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +1

      언니~!!!

  • @ByJasmineDayton
    @ByJasmineDayton 9 місяців тому

    I have missed seeing retellings of classics with their own twist! I feel like they haven't been done as often but they always work so well. Excited to see the differences between your creative spin vs finding parallels with the great Gatsby which is such a classic! Are you going to keep in some of the symbolism in there are well or are you going to adjust some things? Mainly referencing the green light which tbh no matter how much people explain it to me I don't get it 😬

    • @KrisMF
      @KrisMF  9 місяців тому +1

      all the symbolism of the original is reimagined for a sci-fi setting :) !!

  • @TheCosmicInitiative
    @TheCosmicInitiative 6 місяців тому

    I might be biased but i dont understand how this book could NOT be accepted on sub. I just am waiting for the video directing me to the pre-order link with the cover reveals and everything. I just feel like this book is going to be amazing. Question (although I dont feel like it applies); will you self-publish this book. I want to read it and support it no matter what.

  • @whitneykou
    @whitneykou 9 місяців тому

    🥳🥳🥳🥳

  • @nicokai6876
    @nicokai6876 9 місяців тому

    I was like "Nick Gatsby?? wasn't it something else..." I thought his name was Great Gatsby. I- oops.