as the first person to comment all praise the halifax, now for context why i was born and raised in halifax nova scotia and it just tickled my fancy to see hometown's name in this story. through i now live in toronto i'll always be haligonian for life.
Ya ok. Gotta like how the story back peddles so many times. Like when will kills the general and they all escape in the ship then all of a sudden raven is fighting the general and will is fighting his brother. After the fight is over they escape in the ship again. This is just one example. Poor writing as well as very predictable, practically a copy & paste of stories other channels have already presented
as the first person to comment all praise the halifax, now for context why i was born and raised in halifax nova scotia and it just tickled my fancy to see hometown's name in this story. through i now live in toronto i'll always be haligonian for life.
A quick ending that could have been several chapters but overall a great stroy for sure as it is. ! Loved it, 88
What does 88 signify??
I liked this story
Never heard of any creature with both exoskeleton and bones.
These stories keep having horrible continuity of the story line.
Ya ok. Gotta like how the story back peddles so many times. Like when will kills the general and they all escape in the ship then all of a sudden raven is fighting the general and will is fighting his brother. After the fight is over they escape in the ship again. This is just one example. Poor writing as well as very predictable, practically a copy & paste of stories other channels have already presented
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