A nice story, I would've preferred a bit more details on how the people became the same as monsters they hunted. It could also benefit from more clear time scale.
It's not too bad for a story written by AI. That being said, there were too many sections repeated, not to mention glaring gaps in the story that made absolutely no sense. There were also parts of the story that began but were completely abandoned or just plain forgotten. This story had a good premise but would have benefited from an actual writer or writers reading and contributing to the story
The story has potential but needs refinement. It tends to wander and becomes confusing at times. It seemed as though Earth and Humanity was holding its own and then everything flip flopped and Earth was destroyed and things were total shit. Maybe I dozed off and missed something??? I don't know.
Go out in your yard and cover a ball with water, spin the ball really really fast...tell me what happens to all of the water...not some of the water,, all of the water...physics.........
you do know that you'd need to spin it exactly 1 cycle in 24 hours to simulate earth, right? disclaimer: you might be mocking the flatties, can't discern wether you're mocking them or are with them
Holy hell the amount of reused phrases in this story is just the beginning.
A nice story, I would've preferred a bit more details on how the people became the same as monsters they hunted. It could also benefit from more clear time scale.
Very good story. Battles will turn on you in a heartbeat.
It's not too bad for a story written by AI. That being said, there were too many sections repeated, not to mention glaring gaps in the story that made absolutely no sense. There were also parts of the story that began but were completely abandoned or just plain forgotten. This story had a good premise but would have benefited from an actual writer or writers reading and contributing to the story
Wasn't AI. Read the description
Love the story. I listened every chance I get.
Excellent work! Thank you.
cool story
The story has potential but needs refinement. It tends to wander and becomes confusing at times. It seemed as though Earth and Humanity was holding its own and then everything flip flopped and Earth was destroyed and things were total shit. Maybe I dozed off and missed something??? I don't know.
Story WAS excellent
I liked the story, would enjoy it more it the characters had more details
Good story
WOW ! !
56:40
I didn't know there were shadows in space !
I liked the story a lots , thanks
Good story.
Good story❤
Q: so what happened to all of the anti ship missiles that were to be fired as soon as the alien fleet appeared (circa 1:20)?
❤ make this a movie😊
Damn Trill. Think they're so cool just because they have symbionts
i love the story
I like the story
Why every story starts in the middle of it? I always wonder how it starts and ends after the middle of the story ends?
I'd blame chatgpt but it's only producing what someone prompted it to.
@@sleepingstate1978 I'm just saying it would be a better story. I like the stories just too short lol.
I enjoyed this story,
This story jumps around too much. Nigh impossible to follow.
😅if it weren't for the firmament or dome, our atmosphere would float off into space.......
i like this story
I liked this story
Can't even spell in the pages displayed with the SAME image. Can't you even spell check the CC option?
Go out in your yard and cover a ball with water, spin the ball really really fast...tell me what happens to all of the water...not some of the water,, all of the water...physics.........
you do know that you'd need to spin it exactly 1 cycle in 24 hours to simulate earth, right?
disclaimer: you might be mocking the flatties, can't discern wether you're mocking them or are with them
some star trek names
Tesla said there's no such thing as gravity or electrons........electromagnetism.........
Please stop using AI to write stories. Things sure are looking grim and satisfactory.
I liked the story, but so many mispronounced words was distracting.
Admittedly, it might have just been someone who couldn't spell that sent the script to the reader.
The firmament, first book of genesis, holy Bible...God spent all day Tuesday it.....
Wtf is a parsec???! 🇺🇸🇺🇸🇺🇸🇺🇸🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Is a unit of length used to measure, like kilometers, light years, etc.
I like the story
I enjoyed this story,
I like the story