Train Ride [SFM Creepypasta]

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  • Опубліковано 5 січ 2025

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  • @Ufail98
    @Ufail98 5 років тому +832

    And then the man says...
    "Yo wassup"

    • @YOU_ARE_ILL
      @YOU_ARE_ILL 5 років тому +86

      "Do you have any idea, any idea who I am?"

    • @ItsBonjii
      @ItsBonjii 5 років тому +41

      @@YOU_ARE_ILL Basically....im a rapist nigga

    • @jalmtj
      @jalmtj 5 років тому +5

      DAT BOI are those Latin rhythms? I love Latin rhythms

    • @lemonlimeeyeliner7905
      @lemonlimeeyeliner7905 5 років тому

      Ufail98 that would be so funny!

    • @dingdawng
      @dingdawng 4 роки тому +4

      @@YOU_ARE_ILL *BAWNK*

  • @Xaxp
    @Xaxp 5 років тому +1917

    I can't help but imagine what the actual Soldier from TF2 would do in this situation.
    "What are you staring at, MAGGOT!?" *Market Garden to the face*

  • @thatterrariaguidenpc8054
    @thatterrariaguidenpc8054 2 роки тому +140

    theres something i like how the old man switched from annoyed to genuinely concerned when the protag told him about the "man staring at him"

  • @koolguy5483
    @koolguy5483 3 роки тому +680

    The smoker seems like a genuinely nice dude ngl

    • @MatG7421
      @MatG7421 3 роки тому +38

      He is though.

    • @HolyPopeJulian
      @HolyPopeJulian 2 роки тому +21

      Scout got pink eye lol
      (This was written before i finished the vid)

    • @suspense_comix3237
      @suspense_comix3237 2 роки тому +59

      I like how the smoker didn't put up a fight and instead asked the main character to just ask him nicely next time. He just kept calm.

    • @C.A._Old
      @C.A._Old 2 роки тому +5

      Best Ever

    • @Gaster_Undertale1337
      @Gaster_Undertale1337 Рік тому +8

      That is how heavy is portrayed real life

  • @cadaverous6
    @cadaverous6 4 роки тому +597

    The fact that you made Scout genuinely creepy is a feat I’m impressed by.

    • @C.A._Old
      @C.A._Old 2 роки тому +5

      Best Ever

    • @EpicMusicalSniper
      @EpicMusicalSniper 2 роки тому +8

      If your a sniper he can sometimes be a horror character

    • @yourcordialvermillionchapw2398
      @yourcordialvermillionchapw2398 2 роки тому +3

      @@EpicMusicalSniper
      Far away plus with the right professional precession however, Scout is not very scary.
      Your everyday up close and personally cunning Scout however, IS scary. This Creepypasta is actually pretty lore accurate... Aside you know, STANDING STILL.

    • @ScoutGamingYes
      @ScoutGamingYes Рік тому +4

      I’m not scary, I’m very cool

    • @void6482
      @void6482 Рік тому

      ​@@ScoutGamingYesShut up, pink eye

  • @dogonpc618
    @dogonpc618 5 років тому +1364

    The light went out again...
    And the red eyed man ....
    Was siting on my head !!!!!

  • @RuckusHuckusYT
    @RuckusHuckusYT 5 років тому +153

    And then the red eyed scunt said "whaddya looking at chuckle nuts?" *proceeds to conga away*
    Soldier: [visible confusion] "what"

    • @arcihungbycraneonfire
      @arcihungbycraneonfire 3 роки тому +4

      After the lights went in again, the man would say "WHADDYA LOOKING AT CHUCKLE NUTS?" As he looks at me with an angry expression, he'd leave the seat and conga away to the back seat, i was left with shock and confusion while the man with the cigar coughs and laughs it off. We arrived a few minutes after, i started becoming a ball and then rolled over to my house, i will never forget that experience.

  • @NickolasRAnderson
    @NickolasRAnderson 5 років тому +258

    I sprayed cologne in my eye once and it looked like that

    • @emad9074
      @emad9074 4 роки тому +3

      Same lol

    • @Ricky-hc1qv
      @Ricky-hc1qv 3 роки тому +3

      Ima guess ur the scout asking for a piece of gum

    • @magentapurpleyap5566
      @magentapurpleyap5566 2 роки тому +1

      gotta keep those eyes fresh.

    • @randoamerican
      @randoamerican 2 роки тому +1

      I squirted soap into my eye and everybody at school thought i had pinkeye

    • @wiernypancerny3348
      @wiernypancerny3348 2 роки тому +3

      I sprayed cologne in my mouth as a kid. Don't try it, it doesn't taste as good as it smells.

  • @Blockinstaller12
    @Blockinstaller12 5 років тому +841

    These SFM animations really help to visualize the stories. Great work, keep it up.

    • @jasonblundelldobebussing
      @jasonblundelldobebussing 5 років тому +3

      Well, yeah, but actually no

    • @AlinaHollow
      @AlinaHollow 5 років тому +12

      @@jasonblundelldobebussing Haha! You are wrong Jason Blundell

    • @halezom7661
      @halezom7661 5 років тому +11

      @@jasonblundelldobebussing liked for the meme, then disliked for it's misusage.

    • @jasonblundelldobebussing
      @jasonblundelldobebussing 5 років тому +2

      @@halezom7661, true.

    • @neonbatagor777
      @neonbatagor777 4 роки тому

      yeaa i like the way he tell the story. It always freak me out at night LOL

  • @Troglodyte98
    @Troglodyte98 5 років тому +416

    The light went out again...
    And the red eyed man...
    “Yo, you got any gum?”

    • @danielbogdanoski4412
      @danielbogdanoski4412 3 роки тому +14

      TAKE THE GODDAMNED GUM TAKE IT IL BUY YOU A WHOLE BOX JUST LEAVE ME ALONE

    • @xlorrix-6320
      @xlorrix-6320 3 роки тому +21

      The light went out again...
      And the red eyed man... moved even closer because i moved away in the dark but he wasnt looking at me he was looking at my bag...
      i took my phone out and activated the torch light... my torchlight turned off and the trains light too
      when they came back out.... the red eyed man asked
      ...
      YA GOT GAMES ON UR PHONE

    • @therealeikichionizuka
      @therealeikichionizuka 3 роки тому +4

      @@xlorrix-6320 lol I was thinking the exact same thing!

    • @nikkigreer1385
      @nikkigreer1385 3 роки тому +2

      this made me chuckle, king

    • @bugsauce2261
      @bugsauce2261 3 роки тому +3

      "You got games on yo phone?"

  • @boredperson2798
    @boredperson2798 5 років тому +406

    Imagine if Scout just said in the last momment "Wanna drink An energy drink?"

  • @scrittle
    @scrittle 5 років тому +416

    "I nodded at him trying to break the tension"
    Getting tense from a teenager? Getting tense from a guy holding a briefcase?
    Okay then

    • @AggressiveSpaghetti
      @AggressiveSpaghetti 3 роки тому +22

      don't underestimate what some people can do. Even kids can kill

    • @sothisishowusernameswork.2043
      @sothisishowusernameswork.2043 2 роки тому +7

      @@AggressiveSpaghetti yea, yea they can, ever heard of micheal myers?

    • @lills3879
      @lills3879 Рік тому +5

      I'm sorry but if I get onto any public transport system and somebody is looking at me I'm scared.

  • @seizuresalad1558
    @seizuresalad1558 2 роки тому +43

    Love how soldier is used as an everyman by the sfm creepypasta community, while soldier in tf2 canon is an actual hilarious maniac.

    • @themaster011bass2
      @themaster011bass2 Рік тому +4

      It's him before his war days so he was pretty sane.

    • @linkfreeman1998
      @linkfreeman1998 8 місяців тому

      I mean, soldier was meant to be jack of all trades when u start to play the game so...

  • @Michi_Exiled
    @Michi_Exiled 2 роки тому +6

    The lights went out again.
    and the red eyed man...
    *gave me a big smooch on the cheek*

  • @darkdanker2326
    @darkdanker2326 4 роки тому +52

    What can I say, he’s going off the rails on a Crazy Train
    *Immense guitar solo plays*

  • @doublesided183
    @doublesided183 5 років тому +91

    Goddamnit Soldier stop taking drugs?

    • @Anmatgreen
      @Anmatgreen 5 років тому +4

      The fact that in Eltorro64Rus' video it was Soldier who asked for a Box of Cox, this is fucking hilarious

    • @ZalmanFarisiUNAS
      @ZalmanFarisiUNAS 5 років тому +3

      @@Anmatgreen FEGELEIN WAINKSTAIN

  • @Sesujoestar
    @Sesujoestar 5 років тому +181

    I really love how you animate these horror stories using SFM and with tf2 models as well. Love your work!

  • @borediideath6526
    @borediideath6526 3 роки тому +71

    This would make a great campfire story. The ones where you build up tension and jumps are them at the end.

    • @ttpbroadcastingcompany.4460
      @ttpbroadcastingcompany.4460 3 роки тому +1

      Nah, since this story was lame. It builds up all of that tension and then NOTHING happens.

    • @GygX
      @GygX Рік тому +1

      If this was posted to the trollpasta wiki, it would be listed as "well, that was anticlimactic."

  • @captaindemobeard9560
    @captaindemobeard9560 5 років тому +26

    Either a hallucination, or a creature that has the ability to only appear to it's victims.

    • @CCaster2000
      @CCaster2000 2 роки тому +7

      Maybe the red eye thing is a curse? "Scout" was a previous victim and now "Soldier" will take his place and have a red eye himself until he finds a new victim who sees him.

    • @captaindemobeard9560
      @captaindemobeard9560 2 роки тому +3

      @@CCaster2000 Interestin' idea matey. I like it. Could make a good horror saga o' stories.

  • @ultimadragonlord6764
    @ultimadragonlord6764 5 років тому +214

    “Hopefully it will be worth the wait”
    It was

  • @glitteringpeachy
    @glitteringpeachy Рік тому +4

    I know this is a bit old but I genuinely love the shot at the very beginning where Scout looks up and you can just see the red eye under the darkness of his hood. Really sets the kinda 'mysterious' feeling to come later in the animation.

  • @daillysmidgeoftrolling6485
    @daillysmidgeoftrolling6485 2 роки тому +3

    The light went out, and i heard the red eyed man say...
    I have come to inform you of your cars extended warenty

  • @facelessrabbit6361
    @facelessrabbit6361 2 роки тому +6

    I knew it wasnt real when the smoker didnt notice scout moving

  • @starlight846
    @starlight846 Рік тому +3

    Just imagine being so tired, and seeing a figment of your imagination staring at you in the middle of the night…when it’s only you in the room

  • @Coldaardvark2
    @Coldaardvark2 5 років тому +30

    Dude hell yeah, I lost your channel a while ago. Glad I found you again, AND with new content! Super happy! Thank you so much for making these!

  • @CrashAttak5
    @CrashAttak5 5 років тому +130

    Hey man can I just say that, I love your creepypastas
    Keep up the amazing work!! ♥

  • @cerc1316
    @cerc1316 5 років тому +73

    What did we learn from this ? NEVER EVER GO AT NIGHT WITH THE TRAIN IF THERE IS A WEIRD PERSON

    • @tacticstonk4740
      @tacticstonk4740 5 років тому +1

      We have a red eyes master here

    • @michaelv7519
      @michaelv7519 5 років тому +5

      U should never go to the subway at night to begin with

    • @becauseyoureblack
      @becauseyoureblack 4 роки тому +1

      We dont give a shit!!!

    • @timecoldslow2950
      @timecoldslow2950 3 роки тому +1

      but it wasn't a weird person it was like a ghost since the guy smoking couldn't see him

  • @greythepercyrepaint7888
    @greythepercyrepaint7888 2 роки тому +1

    3:18 the 3rd grader next to me about to ask "you got any games on your phone?"

  • @oogabooga658
    @oogabooga658 5 років тому +40

    What if Soldier got rage and Punch Scout
    *-MAGGOT-*

    • @starlight846
      @starlight846 3 роки тому +1

      He’d probably be on the floor with no one under him because of the lack of sleep. He’s imagining it, but his brain tells him that this shit’s real

  • @vanndymaywho1910
    @vanndymaywho1910 5 років тому +15

    Amazing, I’m not ever going to this out of my mind.

  • @Freef_01
    @Freef_01 5 років тому +33

    "I#MA tAx PaYing grownUP ADult"
    HAHAHA GOT ME

  • @richhhhhz4449
    @richhhhhz4449 5 років тому +13

    YES FINNALY THANK YOU FOR CREEPYPASTA :D

  • @Lehinsky_27
    @Lehinsky_27 5 років тому +11

    I'm happy, new creepypasta genre is developing!

  • @LostGeburah
    @LostGeburah 4 роки тому +5

    "you! you can see me?! finally someone to talk to! no longer alone in this deathless lifeless existence!"

  • @horrormatrix9080
    @horrormatrix9080 11 місяців тому +2

    The light when out again…..
    And then the red eyed man said……
    Yo do you got any games in your phone?

  • @megustaelmate5499
    @megustaelmate5499 3 роки тому +3

    SCP-173: Hey men, working late?
    Scout: Yeah

  • @enderknight1442
    @enderknight1442 8 місяців тому +1

    The fact that whoever wrote this is still alive to tell the story raises some questions on what the red-eyed man did or what happened next.

  • @ArchangelExile
    @ArchangelExile Рік тому +1

    Then when the lights turned back on, the red-eyed guy was inside of him. Take that however you please.

  • @elenabucur58
    @elenabucur58 2 роки тому +1

    as soon as the old man spoke after soldier yelled, i instantly thought "oh hecks naw he aint real"

  • @glockroach8482
    @glockroach8482 5 років тому +2

    Omg I love your work I can never wait for your next video x3

  • @CA11M3J0sch
    @CA11M3J0sch 5 років тому +10

    Clearly the dude was an enemy stand, that's why the old man couldn't see him.
    What other explanation could there be?

    • @vreikezen8268
      @vreikezen8268 3 роки тому +4

      That would mean soldier is a stand user tho

    • @maniacgreen8609
      @maniacgreen8609 2 роки тому

      @@vreikezen8268 it's kinda like wonder of u

  • @dorteto2115
    @dorteto2115 3 роки тому +2

    The smoker got me the idea for my heavy set

  • @Ginfeldi
    @Ginfeldi 3 роки тому +2

    the hooded man has his sneak maxed out but the narrator had his perception maxed

  • @gameknight9956
    @gameknight9956 5 років тому

    These creepypasta sfm’s are AWSOME

  • @vadimblyat5436
    @vadimblyat5436 5 років тому +1

    Man this is great!! 1000 times better than a normal stock image

  • @isaiahneo2735
    @isaiahneo2735 3 роки тому +7

    Soldier: WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING AT MAGGOT?!?!?!
    Scout: ………
    Soldier: DON’T GIVE ME THAT LOOK!!!!!!
    Scout: ………
    Soldier: *Grabs Suitcase And Takes Out Shotgun And Points It At Scout’s Face*
    Scout: *Moves Back* WOAH!!!!! WOAH!!!!!! WOAH!!!!! WOAH!!!!! CHILL MAN!!!!! CHILL!!!!!
    Soldier: THAT’S WHAT I THOUGHT!!!!!!

  • @secseed2525
    @secseed2525 4 роки тому

    I love creepy pasta jr. narrations

  • @vulturonix7460
    @vulturonix7460 5 років тому +1

    Oh my! What a great way to start the weekend!

  • @retep_9865
    @retep_9865 5 років тому

    This is sooo suspenseful I love this one so much

  • @Guymanjack
    @Guymanjack 4 місяці тому +1

    4:02 I'm traumatized

  • @cptray-steam
    @cptray-steam 4 роки тому +1

    Really good animation.

  • @gabssss1
    @gabssss1 5 років тому

    This is really cool bud, nice work!!

  • @shelleymcrae514
    @shelleymcrae514 5 років тому +14

    *sees he’s teleported* yeah nope! *hits with breethcase*

    • @CoolioOJulio
      @CoolioOJulio 5 років тому +2

      B R E E T H C A S E

    • @chronos8436
      @chronos8436 4 роки тому +2

      B R E E T H C A S E

    • @greytilldeath
      @greytilldeath 4 роки тому +1

      B R E E T H C A S E

    • @shelleymcrae514
      @shelleymcrae514 4 роки тому

      Well this just got weird did I accidentally start a a cult or something

    • @greytilldeath
      @greytilldeath 4 роки тому

      @@shelleymcrae514 *begins chanting* BREETHCASE BREETHCASE BREETHCASE BREETHCASE BREETHCASE

  • @chrisfritch9740
    @chrisfritch9740 5 років тому

    Please keep making these they're great

  • @catyoga3691
    @catyoga3691 5 років тому +2

    Make more sfm creepypasta please this is your first video I watched and I love it

  • @suscrewmate9615
    @suscrewmate9615 4 роки тому +6

    3:16: Soldiers face tho-

  • @nikcastle6943
    @nikcastle6943 5 років тому

    I wish Creapypastajr was here to see your work man.

  • @mrdollyman5675
    @mrdollyman5675 3 роки тому

    I love that the soldier is the main character

  • @jayrg4
    @jayrg4 5 років тому +1

    Amazing as always!! I love your videos, scary, great animations, good voiceovers, and I always await your uploads!! I usually have to rewatch and watch other animators because i know how difficult it is to animate. Its okay though, spooky spooky videos as always!!👍👍

  • @darkreddemondill8369
    @darkreddemondill8369 5 років тому +1

    This is freaking awesome

  • @guyontheinternet3232
    @guyontheinternet3232 5 років тому

    Help me I can’t stop watching these songs creepypastas

  • @Rendemnis
    @Rendemnis 5 років тому +5

    i was expecting scout to say BONK and hitting soldier with a bat xD

  • @sherriff_colt4223
    @sherriff_colt4223 5 років тому +22

    I really wanna know what happened next!

    • @The_Dragon_of_Dojima_
      @The_Dragon_of_Dojima_ 4 роки тому +9

      Let me help you with that "The lights went on and he was gone"

    • @AverageUsernames
      @AverageUsernames 4 роки тому +6

      "The lights went on and it was a sick prank."

    • @lmn_godie2598
      @lmn_godie2598 3 роки тому

      the lights went out and 7 minutes in heaven

    • @trafficcones7804
      @trafficcones7804 2 роки тому

      by the looks of it , the main character is ok, if he had died , he wouldnt be writing this story

  • @kingjb554
    @kingjb554 2 роки тому

    3:14 that face alleviated all fear from me

  • @jockeyfield1954
    @jockeyfield1954 5 років тому +2

    the smoker looks like a younger, beefier version of Bill

  • @Kal-l-of-OneShot
    @Kal-l-of-OneShot 2 роки тому

    This is the power of his stand

  • @alialatrach9788
    @alialatrach9788 5 років тому

    That was really good. I liked how he was telling the story. At least i can make sure he' alive 👌👌

  • @Gaston4760
    @Gaston4760 4 роки тому +1

    searched in vain for new tf2 short films but found your stories and the difference menem you and or the others who tell horror stories you use tf2 characters.
    that beautiful. keep it up

  • @Skit3453
    @Skit3453 5 років тому

    I love watching these

  • @Hollarite
    @Hollarite Місяць тому

    Dude, this is like a prankster making a ruckus in public

  • @Barbarian1244
    @Barbarian1244 8 місяців тому

    I'm surprised in the end he didn't put the Hunter's scream from L4D

  • @sneakymcgee1224
    @sneakymcgee1224 5 років тому

    My guy you need to make more of these things

  • @RichterBelmont2235
    @RichterBelmont2235 3 роки тому +1

    In Asia they says the dead wants the living to acknowledge their existence. So if you see them, pretend you don't, lest you attracts their attention...

  • @Matt-md5yt
    @Matt-md5yt 5 років тому

    Glad you are doing well. Great video

  • @ddblock46
    @ddblock46 2 роки тому

    he comes closer... and closer... and closer.... then he says,
    "I've been trying to reach you about your cars extended warranty"

  • @fortress2270
    @fortress2270 5 років тому +10

    Legit thought it won’t scare me because of the TF2 characters it the moment that scene where scout’s close face was shown, that shit creeped me. Nice story and animation bro

  • @samgoesham4287
    @samgoesham4287 4 роки тому

    this gives me more anxiety not because of the spoopy spook, but the old guy thinking i've gone crazy

  • @davidapplegate3744
    @davidapplegate3744 5 років тому +1

    I get pressure migraines...it makes my right eye go blood red, always the right eye too.

  • @emirtahasararslan7535
    @emirtahasararslan7535 4 роки тому

    im subbing to all of you guys cause you make good animations

  • @capitalliz7635
    @capitalliz7635 3 роки тому

    The light went out again...
    And the red-eyed man...
    "You got any games on your phone?"

  • @UltraCenterHQ
    @UltraCenterHQ Рік тому

    3:46 That line gave me the chills

  • @taranhartle9074
    @taranhartle9074 4 роки тому

    The light went on again... And the red-eyed man... Hugged me!

  • @chr0min0id
    @chr0min0id 4 роки тому +2

    I didn’t know scout was a drug addict ghost who could teleport

  • @mantisynth2186
    @mantisynth2186 3 роки тому +1

    and here we see a red soldier trying to defend the intel. unfortunately for him, he ran into a blue heavy and a spy, who was disguised as a red scout.

  • @gabrielherman3004
    @gabrielherman3004 5 років тому +3

    3:46 where did we go so wrong?

  • @SurfinBird.
    @SurfinBird. 5 років тому +2

    He’s escaping with the suit case get him boys

  • @thomas_c0nn0r26
    @thomas_c0nn0r26 5 років тому +2

    0:55: sitting across the smoker
    *had flashbacks of left 4 dead*

  • @diontaedaughtry974
    @diontaedaughtry974 4 роки тому

    Great animation, good job 👍👍

  • @lgdub6060
    @lgdub6060 3 роки тому +3

    Theory: He is an entity from the hotel’s abandoned door and somehow escaped to finish the job.

    • @lordlammi1562
      @lordlammi1562 3 роки тому +2

      What's this in reference to?

    • @lgdub6060
      @lgdub6060 3 роки тому +2

      @@lordlammi1562 White with Red.

    • @lordlammi1562
      @lordlammi1562 3 роки тому +2

      @@lgdub6060 ooooohhhh, yeah that was one of the first two creepypastas I ever heard, the other one was when the people moved to the new house and couldn't turn on lights, but played a game where they ran to the corners.

  • @zikadraws79
    @zikadraws79 Місяць тому

    To be honest, if it wasn't for the "invisible except for you" part, I'd assume the guy was just on influence, or maybe disabled in some way. Yes, even as he was moving closer to me. I'm not surviving either lol 😂

  • @Iciclefairy
    @Iciclefairy 3 роки тому

    He just wanted to know if you had eye drops for his bad case of pink eye.

  • @RyujinRoninReach
    @RyujinRoninReach 5 років тому +1

    I missed these

  • @C.A._Old
    @C.A._Old Рік тому

    That Scout was amazing ever... Mostly Red Eye.

  • @thedrunksteve14
    @thedrunksteve14 3 роки тому

    the light went out again...
    And the red eyed man...
    "you gut games on yo phone?"

  • @davidstigaard6105
    @davidstigaard6105 5 років тому

    I love this, make more!.

  • @ShonaS
    @ShonaS 2 роки тому +1

    guys like if you got bewildered by this

  • @mikestion4629
    @mikestion4629 4 роки тому +1

    Damn you, cliffhangers!

  • @karontheone1067
    @karontheone1067 4 роки тому +1

    Bro scout is just spy checking

  • @raketti7631
    @raketti7631 4 роки тому +2

    I will never look at scouts the same way... 2:51

  • @soul9299
    @soul9299 4 роки тому +2

    DO NOT LOOK AT ME, I DID NOT ASK YOU A QUESTION.