IELTS Writing Agree Disagree Essay | Complete BAND 9 Answer Step-by Step

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  • @IELTS-with-Juva
    @IELTS-with-Juva  Місяць тому +7

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      @Adittoadi-u5u 25 днів тому

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      @IELTS-with-Juva  24 дні тому

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    @masumrana6469 18 днів тому +2

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  • @fatimamalik2914
    @fatimamalik2914 Місяць тому +5

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Місяць тому

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much for your amazing feedback! You can find a full Band 9 sample answer for a problem-solution essay here: ua-cam.com/video/TpUAgV-dTV4/v-deo.html

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    @mina_missss Місяць тому +5

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  • @fungaidube37
    @fungaidube37 12 днів тому +1

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  12 днів тому

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    @khilolamasadikova5836 Місяць тому +2

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Місяць тому

      Thank you so much for your amazing feedback! I'm so glad you like it 😀.

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    @sudiptonandi8638 28 днів тому +1

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  27 днів тому

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much for your amazing feedback!

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    @KNMNabil Місяць тому +1

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    @naharkhadiza6843 Місяць тому +1

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Місяць тому +1

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  • @HenryObichere-kk9tt
    @HenryObichere-kk9tt 29 днів тому +1

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  29 днів тому

      Congratulations! That's amazing, you can be so proud of yourself. I'm so glad I could help 😀.

  • @madhur2118
    @madhur2118 Місяць тому +1

    Thanks Juva... I think for agree and disagree essay if we can use the counterargument paragraph, it will incrase my band score and also this is necessary

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Місяць тому

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. The instructions ask you whether you agree or disagree and you must give reasons and examples for your opinion. So you have to give two reasons for why you agree or why you disagree. Don't state counterarguments to your view because this is not what the question asks you to do.

  • @saidyaxshiboyev
    @saidyaxshiboyev 19 днів тому +1

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  • @wasimakram11
    @wasimakram11 13 днів тому +1

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  13 днів тому +1

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. I took note of your wish.

    • @wasimakram11
      @wasimakram11 12 днів тому +1

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  12 днів тому

      @@wasimakram11 Okay, this is noted 😃

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      @wasimakram11 12 днів тому

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  • @zoe-v4v1e
    @zoe-v4v1e 11 днів тому +1

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    @lengdagus-medina7583 24 дні тому +1

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    @MehediHasan-z2i9j 25 днів тому +2

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    @najmulislam3427 21 день тому +1

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    @TariqulIslam-qk5el Місяць тому +1

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    @dhurkibaaniaai6761 20 днів тому +1

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    @RamPal-mh1ss 28 днів тому

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  28 днів тому

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much for your amazing feedback!

  • @АсифАсиф-м9т
    @АсифАсиф-м9т 24 дні тому +1

    Very useful information.Pleeeasee, could you give for all Types of writing task 2!!!two-views-opinion, advantages -disadvantages etc Thanks a lot

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  23 дні тому +1

      I'm so glad it's helpful 😀. I took note of your wish.

  • @mariamabkamara2625
    @mariamabkamara2625 14 днів тому +3

    My exam is on 7 Dec 😫 pray for me guys my second time now on it

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  13 днів тому

      I wish you all the best for your IELTS, you can do it! 😃

    • @Rozhbyrozhi
      @Rozhbyrozhi 2 дні тому +1

      how did your test go?

    • @mariamabkamara2625
      @mariamabkamara2625 День тому

      @ Hmm 🌝 I hope I pass it time management is a little

  • @aminullahhamzi507
    @aminullahhamzi507 28 днів тому

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    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  27 днів тому

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much!

  • @AidaAsi
    @AidaAsi Місяць тому

    Great writing practice tes.
    Thank you Juva 😊

  • @akrom5023
    @akrom5023 Місяць тому +1

    Thank you🎉

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    @АглесМасалимова Місяць тому

    Great tips! Thank you so much!

  • @imransarder2558
    @imransarder2558 19 днів тому +1

    Juva, what the personal example give this essay?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  16 днів тому

      I'm not sure what you mean, could you specify please?

    • @imransarder2558
      @imransarder2558 15 днів тому

      What can be given in personal example into eassy? Please check your mail already I have a mail for your help.

  • @Mind--Soul
    @Mind--Soul 28 днів тому

    Hi! just came across your video. It was really insightful. I have a confusion. Should we include a paragraph focusing on opposing view? or it isn't necessary in ielts. Thank You!

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  27 днів тому

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Great question! In an Agree/Disagree essay the question asks you whether you agree or disagree with a statement and to give reasons and examples for your answer. So, you are not asked to write about another view. You have to state your view and give reasons and examples for it. I hope this helps!

  • @Rahim_rahi
    @Rahim_rahi 4 дні тому +1

    Today is my writing test its my 3rd test please pray for me

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  4 дні тому

      I wish you all the best for your IELTS test! 😀

  • @jeonlarisa
    @jeonlarisa 17 днів тому +1

    can i use personal examples?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  16 днів тому

      Sure, you can! The question asks you to give reasons and examples from your personal experience, so you are asked to do this.

  • @erfanvid2626
    @erfanvid2626 Місяць тому +1

    100% OUT OF 100% YES

  • @imaduddin9265
    @imaduddin9265 Місяць тому +1

    make videos on every question type of task 2 writing

  • @YuvanPlays
    @YuvanPlays Місяць тому +1

    please upload video for discussion essay as well please

  • @Taposhecooking52
    @Taposhecooking52 28 днів тому

    Thank u❤

  • @sheikhsr1377
    @sheikhsr1377 27 днів тому

    I will see your video ❤

  • @Sameer-i6b
    @Sameer-i6b 6 днів тому +1

    To what extent do you agree or disagree?
    Do you agree or disagree?
    Are these two different types of questions?
    Please answer

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  5 днів тому

      The two questions differ in some respect. If the question asks to what extent you agree or disagree, you need to say how much you agree or disagree.

    • @Sameer-i6b
      @Sameer-i6b 5 днів тому

      ​@@IELTS-with-Juva so in this type can't we fully agree or disagree?

  • @ifedolaJoseph
    @ifedolaJoseph Місяць тому +1

    Yes!!!

  • @ParvejKhan-oy6vy
    @ParvejKhan-oy6vy 29 днів тому

    Please make a play list for IELTS writing...

  • @sandhyagamingff1108
    @sandhyagamingff1108 Місяць тому +1

    Write Opinion eassys in next video.... 🙌🏻

  • @garynilesunson848
    @garynilesunson848 24 дні тому +2

    Thank you very much, my lovely teacher 💕💕💕💕

  • @kathir8624
    @kathir8624 28 днів тому

    Shall we write our own story in writing task 2 in example.
    In this video you are denoting "my sister's son".. like this can we write?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  28 днів тому

      The question asks you to include knowledge or examples from your personal experience, so this is absolutely fine 😀

  • @indirahathurusinghe
    @indirahathurusinghe Місяць тому +1

    Yes

  • @Sameer-i6b
    @Sameer-i6b 5 днів тому +1

    Is it not Better to write 70% agree and 30% disagree because we do not know what will be the examiner view on question
    Like if we write on agreement view but examiner is opposite to it
    Will it affect our band or not?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  2 дні тому

      It doesn't matter what your opinion is. The IELTS examiner is marking your writing, so is interested in your English skills, not your opinion.

  • @elijahobayagweme7213
    @elijahobayagweme7213 Місяць тому

    Please Is personal example allowed in essay writing .

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Місяць тому

      Yes, you can use personal examples in IELTS Writing Task 2.

    • @prem7032
      @prem7032 Місяць тому

      No. It is not allowed. Please don't write any personal examples or statistics in your ielts writing task 2.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Місяць тому

      @@prem7032 The instructions in IELTS Writing Task 2 say "Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. " So it's absolutely fine to use personal examples 😀

  • @ahmety1313
    @ahmety1313 24 дні тому +1

    Could you say what is the score of this essay?

  • @foeysalingkan9396
    @foeysalingkan9396 Місяць тому

    how can i get your template?

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  28 днів тому

      You can find all templates here: juva.podia.com/ielts-materials 😀

  • @emranemon9293
    @emranemon9293 Місяць тому

    You are incredible teacher and deserve more response then current...❤❤❤

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  Місяць тому

      I'm so glad you like it 😀. Thank you so much for your amazing feedback!

  • @AswathyS-b3b
    @AswathyS-b3b 16 днів тому +1

    Next week my exam😢

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  16 днів тому +1

      I wish you all the best for your IELTS, you can do it! 😃

  • @sabazia8316
    @sabazia8316 13 днів тому

    Is AI version?

  • @armanitamber
    @armanitamber 23 дні тому

    you cant carry a telephone ....telephones are landlines. telephones cant be a mobile phones.

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  21 день тому

      Telephone traditionally refers to a landline phone, but you can use "telephone" instead of "mobile phone".

  • @AkashChy-w9g
    @AkashChy-w9g 5 днів тому

    XEY

  • @asmasaduf6257
    @asmasaduf6257 20 днів тому

    Why on earth would someone start of saying 'is hard ' how demotivating that sounds . Bring in some positivity

    • @IELTS-with-Juva
      @IELTS-with-Juva  19 днів тому

      I wanted to point out that IELTS Writing Task 2 is challenging, but if you know what the IELTS examiner is looking for, it's easier to score high. I hope the video was helpful to you! 😀

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    @pawanshine7635 Місяць тому

  • @Muhammadbilal-ve7dm
    @Muhammadbilal-ve7dm 26 днів тому

    Emotional damage😢.

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    @tigerurfi9388 24 дні тому +1

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    @ugwubeatrice9702 Місяць тому

    Yes

  • @healthandwellnessbysanz4624
    @healthandwellnessbysanz4624 12 днів тому +1

    Yes