Thats right... our soldiers are super model warrior maidens descended from Aphrodite herself. More importantly though, the blood of Ares himself runs in their veins and they will $!#@ing BURY you. Not complaining but this constant AI image of the ridiculously gorgeous human girl in scifi armor is hilarious.
While I do love the “humans come to the rescue” themed stories.. Just as an inside joke, some alien bastard named Ralph, some slightly absurd human name would be a blast..😂 🤭👍
Zorgan, Zoran,Zonian / Zargon, Zaren, Zarthon? The author is confused with the species and characters? This story should have started with the second half repeat. I wanted to like the story, too much confusion with the name(s) of the whatever species and leadership. Weapons description was also varied and confused. Try again, try proofreading next time.
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Seahawks were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, and on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps she ran out of time, it would be a filling in, as there was no end to this story .
Very amateur writing, nothing wrong with that, however, if you go power fantasy, stick to it. Coming in as overwhelming force, kicking butt and taking names only to be on the defensive for no reason, as nothing has changed, makes no sense at all. The human ship was carving a bloody swath through the enemies' lines, making killshots on the second to third volley and suddenly they are threatened by the papertigers they were shredding second ago?
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Cx were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, end on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps you ran out of time, it would be a fitting end to this story .
Good story so good i subscribed
I liked this story. Nice to see we don't have to go all the way to humans making peace with the whole galaxy and being the overlords in a HFY.
Good story need another one
I enjoyed the story! A lot more than a like…. New Sub
Thats right... our soldiers are super model warrior maidens descended from Aphrodite herself. More importantly though, the blood of Ares himself runs in their veins and they will $!#@ing BURY you.
Not complaining but this constant AI image of the ridiculously gorgeous human girl in scifi armor is hilarious.
This was a good story, i liked it.
I like the story 
Seemed short but good
I liked the story* Great Naration
Good story.
While I do love the “humans come to the rescue” themed stories..
Just as an inside joke, some alien bastard named Ralph, some slightly absurd human name would be a blast..😂 🤭👍
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Whoa whoa whoa, Why is the story repeating but slightly different? Yall run out of story?
Zorgan, Zoran,Zonian / Zargon, Zaren, Zarthon? The author is confused with the species and characters? This story should have started with the second half repeat. I wanted to like the story, too much confusion with the name(s) of the whatever species and leadership. Weapons description was also varied and confused. Try again, try proofreading next time.
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Seahawks were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, and on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps she ran out of time, it would be a filling in, as there was no end to this story .
Very amateur writing, nothing wrong with that, however, if you go power fantasy, stick to it. Coming in as overwhelming force, kicking butt and taking names only to be on the defensive for no reason, as nothing has changed, makes no sense at all. The human ship was carving a bloody swath through the enemies' lines, making killshots on the second to third volley and suddenly they are threatened by the papertigers they were shredding second ago?
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Cx were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, end on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps you ran out of time, it would be a fitting end to this story .