When he said Sarah, I thought,oh no,but Thompson, that's a change, SciFi writer's, hopefully getting the hint about same old same old name usage Good story though
Thats right... our soldiers are super model warrior maidens descended from Aphrodite herself. More importantly though, the blood of Ares himself runs in their veins and they will $!#@ing BURY you. Not complaining but this constant AI image of the ridiculously gorgeous human girl in scifi armor is hilarious.
Not complaining but this constant AI image of the ridiculously gorgeous human girl in scifi armor is...... ...Amazing. AI can't read English but knows a hot chick when it draws one.
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Seahawks were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, and on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps she ran out of time, it would be a filling in, as there was no end to this story .
While I do love the “humans come to the rescue” themed stories.. Just as an inside joke, some alien bastard named Ralph, some slightly absurd human name would be a blast..😂 🤭👍
Zorgan, Zoran,Zonian / Zargon, Zaren, Zarthon? The author is confused with the species and characters? This story should have started with the second half repeat. I wanted to like the story, too much confusion with the name(s) of the whatever species and leadership. Weapons description was also varied and confused. Try again, try proofreading next time.
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Cx were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, end on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps you ran out of time, it would be a fitting end to this story .
While later claiming That the opponent ship dwarfs the defiant. When writers say stupid crap like that it just goes to show you that it's either been written by AI Which isn't advanced enough to tell a Which isn't advanced enough to tell a decent story Or the writers just lazy and doesn't double check and add it is own story. It's a decent story story except for that I'm sure he was just trying to create drama some sort but You just can't make those kind of conflicting statements
Liked the story, left a few threads dangling but otherwise pretty good.
When he said Sarah, I thought,oh no,but Thompson, that's a change, SciFi writer's, hopefully getting the hint about same old same old name usage
Good story though
Good story need another one
Thats right... our soldiers are super model warrior maidens descended from Aphrodite herself. More importantly though, the blood of Ares himself runs in their veins and they will $!#@ing BURY you.
Not complaining but this constant AI image of the ridiculously gorgeous human girl in scifi armor is hilarious.
Not complaining but this constant AI image of the ridiculously gorgeous human girl in scifi armor is......
...Amazing. AI can't read English but knows a hot chick when it draws one.
I’ve enjoyed the story
I like this story!!!!
Why??? Because it finally has a man as a hero!!!! We need more men in the hero role!!!!!
I liked this story. Nice to see we don't have to go all the way to humans making peace with the whole galaxy and being the overlords in a HFY.
Good story so good i subscribed
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Seahawks were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, and on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps she ran out of time, it would be a filling in, as there was no end to this story .
I enjoyed the story! A lot more than a like…. New Sub
Nice change up. Short and sweet.
😮 1 or 2 hits! 💥 💥 💥
this story was sool cool thank you
While I do love the “humans come to the rescue” themed stories..
Just as an inside joke, some alien bastard named Ralph, some slightly absurd human name would be a blast..😂 🤭👍
They do that sometimes. Kinda gotta ponder the names a bit, you'll see. Is one of the things I like about these Sci Fi ditties.
Good story
Good story.
10/10
This was a good story, i liked it.
Zorgan, Zoran,Zonian / Zargon, Zaren, Zarthon? The author is confused with the species and characters? This story should have started with the second half repeat. I wanted to like the story, too much confusion with the name(s) of the whatever species and leadership. Weapons description was also varied and confused. Try again, try proofreading next time.
Whoa whoa whoa, Why is the story repeating but slightly different? Yall run out of story?
Seemed short but good
I like the story 
I liked the story* Great Naration
Why do you duplicate the introduction ? I’d rather have more story. No one needs to hear it twice.
More more more
WTF is with the restarts?? Ridiculious...
You ended it too quickly. What happened to the Victor’s that the humans and the Cx were able to enjoy. What about an ending that didn’t just leave death and destruction but hope and optimism to the planet that was being attacked yet being rescued by the humans. I really think you need to quit leaving us just hanging as defeat is achieved. Most of your stories, end on hope. Where was the hope between the humans and the CX? Perhaps you ran out of time, it would be a fitting end to this story .
While later claiming That the opponent ship dwarfs the defiant. When writers say stupid crap like that it just goes to show you that it's either been written by AI Which isn't advanced enough to tell a Which isn't advanced enough to tell a decent story Or the writers just lazy and doesn't double check and add it is own story. It's a decent story story except for that I'm sure he was just trying to create drama some sort but You just can't make those kind of conflicting statements
Keep track of your own statements please. The defiant can't be the largest ship on the battlefield by far
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Great story