Damn! I'm sorry but I like a well-made animation. In my opinion, the best effect is reflection in the eyes. You can see the reflection of the road in Fluttershy's eyes and the reflection of the sun in Twi's eyes. It's just great. In other animations, I've seen standard (stuck to the eyes) reflections. Not very satisfying. The lighting itself attracts attention, which I see well in 0.51 second. Twi slowly emerges from the shade of the tree. Sweet. ;) Lipsync? Just ... ... ... Wonderful! :') Music well chosen in the mood of ponies. I'd like this Electro moments. Regards. VT. PS :. I'm sorry that I am what I am. I like to describe what I see in the smallest detail. ^^
Woah this is really nice! For your first attempt at Lip-sync this is amazing! So many people who use smf don't usually get the lip-sync right, they'll make the mouth stretch too much or not enough and you did it wonderfully! I loved the effects here to, the golden lights, the shadows, the hair blowing, it all looked really nice! The song had a very mellow theme to it which i think you represent greatly, and this video is super relaxing. There's never a moment where i think something looks off, and besides a few repetitive camera angles, your animations are already proving to be very promising! I'll definitely stay around for whatever you put out next! ^^
Haha thanks, I still have a lot to work on with my animations, yeah Especially the camera angles; I just have a tough time thinking of creative ways to go about doing things, so most of my videos are rather repetitive. Definitely something I need to work on.
Ivory - If you don’t already do it, writing scripts before you do the animation can help you portray how you want the story to go before you do the animation. Adding more dynamic scenes and dramatic events can also help improve your talent and get you used to dynamic scenes.
Yeah, I don't do any of that I've tried doing storyboards, but I'm so bad at coming up with stories, every "scene" is still just the same thing, haha. I assume I'll get used to it at some point, but until then I'll probably just stick to animating to some song I like
That or life moves fast compared to their pasts that their singing about. Millions of ideas and possibilities. Different story's Everytime I watch it 🤗😊😮
This Video is so awesome Your hard work is awsome Please make more from this Videos Sorry my English is not so good I come From Germany Sorry But I love MLP I love this Song Thank you :) Have a nice day Good Luck in the Future. :) :) :)
Ivory I kinda have a wild imagination, I saw it as, their trapped in time, like everything around them is either to slow or fast, that kind of thing. And I'm gonna go find the song and like it so I can listen to it, tho I kinda already do that with this animation 🤗
I like this song because it is the bomb and everyone likes it and they are a fan of my little pony my favorite one is twilight sparkle and rainbow dash
I don't mean to be rude, Ivory, but, to be very detailed, I saw glitches on their hairs in 0:34, 0:48, a pretty small one in 2:31 and a very visible ones in 2:43 and 4:05, and on Fluttershy's front hooves over that fence. Regardless of all these problems, it's a very beautiful animation, so keep doing better one after another, and I will follow your channel as well.
Yeah, I'm fully aware of those issues; I just can never figure out how to properly animate hair. It's honestly embarrassing, lol As for the fence: in-engine, it's slightly transparent, and it's hard to tell where the model actually collides with it, so I kinda just left it where it was and hoped for the best. It's much more apparent after it's rendered. I appreciate the feedback!
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My Little Ivory - Animation is Magic
I love this song and these are my two favorite ponies
Very impressive.
Awesome work on the lipsync. The physics with the hair were a great touch as well.
Thank you, I appreciate it!
Amazing use of shadow and light well done
so beautiful🥰
Wow very nice mate! Big fan of the long exposure style shot with the cars at the start and the lipsync is lookin nice. Keep it up!
Thank you, that really means a lot!
No prob man, good luck on ya next project!
Underrated cinematography. Should have more views
Very very well done, melodic, peaceful, smooth, it's awesome
Thank you!
Damn!
I'm sorry but I like a well-made animation.
In my opinion, the best effect is reflection in the eyes. You can see the reflection of the road in Fluttershy's eyes and the reflection of the sun in Twi's eyes. It's just great. In other animations, I've seen standard (stuck to the eyes) reflections. Not very satisfying.
The lighting itself attracts attention, which I see well in 0.51 second. Twi slowly emerges from the shade of the tree. Sweet. ;)
Lipsync? Just ... ... ... Wonderful! :')
Music well chosen in the mood of ponies. I'd like this Electro moments.
Regards.
VT.
PS :.
I'm sorry that I am what I am. I like to describe what I see in the smallest detail. ^^
No need to apologize!
I really do appreciate the kind words
@@IvorySFM ^^
Brohoof /)
I like the work u put in. Especially the cars, and city lights. Your work effort is is right on the spot.
I stumbled upon this a long time ago and only just now found it again. So glad I did.
Glad to hear you liked it!
You did so well with the animation and the music, it made feel so good. 10/10😄
I loved it.
Wow, great animation. I'm definitely gonna keep an eye on you. Subbed
I like it very much to
Woah this is really nice! For your first attempt at Lip-sync this is amazing! So many people who use smf don't usually get the lip-sync right, they'll make the mouth stretch too much or not enough and you did it wonderfully! I loved the effects here to, the golden lights, the shadows, the hair blowing, it all looked really nice! The song had a very mellow theme to it which i think you represent greatly, and this video is super relaxing. There's never a moment where i think something looks off, and besides a few repetitive camera angles, your animations are already proving to be very promising! I'll definitely stay around for whatever you put out next! ^^
Haha thanks, I still have a lot to work on with my animations, yeah
Especially the camera angles; I just have a tough time thinking of creative ways to go about doing things, so most of my videos are rather repetitive. Definitely something I need to work on.
Ivory -
If you don’t already do it, writing scripts before you do the animation can help you portray how you want the story to go before you do the animation. Adding more dynamic scenes and dramatic events can also help improve your talent and get you used to dynamic scenes.
Yeah, I don't do any of that
I've tried doing storyboards, but I'm so bad at coming up with stories, every "scene" is still just the same thing, haha. I assume I'll get used to it at some point, but until then I'll probably just stick to animating to some song I like
This is so beautiful! 😍
You made a good work on this animation! you must be proud! , plz keep doing this amazing stuff , I appreciat every single sec in it! :'D
Thank you!
And I'm not planning on stopping anytime soon, so you don't need to worry, haha
you are very welcome , and can't wait to see more of your work! :')
@@IvorySFM every time I see flutters her hair always goes through her wings and inside her body??? I know it's sfm but.
Great SFM animation!
Only one word... WOW :o
Nice, I can dig it.
That or life moves fast compared to their pasts that their singing about. Millions of ideas and possibilities. Different story's Everytime I watch it 🤗😊😮
Deserve more views.
Amazing!
Wahou you rock on SFM 👍😎👊
I love it
Great job
Glad to hear!
This Video is so awesome
Your hard work is awsome
Please make more from this Videos
Sorry my English is not so good
I come From Germany
Sorry
But
I love MLP
I love this Song
Thank you :)
Have a nice day
Good Luck in the Future.
:) :) :)
Thank you, I really appreciate it
I read too much into this cuz I came up with a whole story, but it's amazing. What song is this
Haha, what did you come up with as the story?
And the song is linked in the description, it's really a great song!
Ivory I kinda have a wild imagination, I saw it as, their trapped in time, like everything around them is either to slow or fast, that kind of thing. And I'm gonna go find the song and like it so I can listen to it, tho I kinda already do that with this animation 🤗
Oh and I didnt mean to put ivory before that, idk my phone is weird lol
Wow that's cool and i have that song. 😀
Шикарно, нет слов!!! очень даже прекрасно, уважение и подписка с колокольчиком!
Nice
This is amazing!!
Thanks!
Anyone expected the Beatles?
Превосходно! Кстати, а кто там в конце по мостику пробежал?
Wow,👏👏👏
nice
wiht ennery grus some ponny
I like this song because it is the bomb and everyone likes it and they are a fan of my little pony my favorite one is twilight sparkle and rainbow dash
I don't mean to be rude, Ivory, but, to be very detailed, I saw glitches on their hairs in 0:34, 0:48, a pretty small one in 2:31 and a very visible ones in 2:43 and 4:05, and on Fluttershy's front hooves over that fence.
Regardless of all these problems, it's a very beautiful animation, so keep doing better one after another, and I will follow your channel as well.
Yeah, I'm fully aware of those issues; I just can never figure out how to properly animate hair. It's honestly embarrassing, lol
As for the fence: in-engine, it's slightly transparent, and it's hard to tell where the model actually collides with it, so I kinda just left it where it was and hoped for the best. It's much more apparent after it's rendered.
I appreciate the feedback!
@@IvorySFM Yeah, I know how embarrassing it is, sometimes we all makes mistakes, and that's what makes us human.
How did you make the day to night transitions on the map?
Just lowering the map lighting and moving lights around
I sip it
I ship it
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