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  • Опубліковано 21 лис 2024

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  • @ElicBehexan
    @ElicBehexan Рік тому +16

    I actually popped in about 35 minutes in. I left because I wanted to hear the entire story. I really like listening to your stories because I can craft while listening. Now I am going to see if any of my other subscriptions have posted anything before tracking down another of your wonderful stories. Oh, and what I really enjoy about your stories is the over all lack of bloodshed...

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +8

      Thanks, Leah. Not averse to bloodshed but only in service of the story. Doing other stuff while listening is totally revolutionary. I "read' five books while roofing last summer. Unfortunately, audiobooks didn't do much to help the knees afterward 😅

  • @karlgru3n654
    @karlgru3n654 11 місяців тому +1

    I nominate Carol Dreeson for Sainthood.
    i am continually amazed at your skill in breathing life into your people.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому +1

      Space saints 🤔 There's a thought to explore perhaps...

  • @athenacsi
    @athenacsi Рік тому +3

    I'm so addicted to your stories and narration! Great, great work!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, Athena! Happy to hear it! I'm totally addicted to writing them 😃So glad to have you along!

  • @klifforsburg2799
    @klifforsburg2799 Рік тому +10

    Usually I try and leave at least a one word comment because I know it helps your channel keep putting out the work it will pay off seen many channels grow huge that started just like this one

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +3

      I appreciate it, Klif! Thanks for commenting and listening!

    • @robertwesterfield3454
      @robertwesterfield3454 Рік тому +2

      I think the algorithm actually like three or more words

  • @lukejavor4739
    @lukejavor4739 Рік тому +3

    Heard about Athos in some of the other stories- love the world building!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Thanks, Luke! Athos is in a lot of the stories now--a major player in that corner of the galaxy.

  • @johnheimiller8473
    @johnheimiller8473 Рік тому +8

    Interesting idea. Sci Fi used to explore class issues.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Thanks, John. I can think of a few good examples, but they tend to be outliers. SF can surely explore all the deepest ideas, though!

    • @dennisfarris4729
      @dennisfarris4729 10 місяців тому

      As comedians are our philosophers Sci-fi is our dream time.

  • @kevindean6600
    @kevindean6600 Рік тому +1

    The myriad approaches and subjects with wich you build your universe ,so to speak, enrich the whole. Its as if each is a patch on a quilt and i cant wait to see that quilt take shape.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Thanks, Ty! That's a nice metaphor for it. I have been thinking of it as an impressionist painting with each story being a dot or stroke that you can't place until you pull back. When I started, these dots didn't make much sense, but they're actually forming something larger now.

  • @scottthomas6202
    @scottthomas6202 Рік тому +1

    There's the technical side of a project...and the people side... interesting tale..

  • @scottthomas6202
    @scottthomas6202 Рік тому +6

    Excellent tale...

  • @YeshuaIsTheTruth
    @YeshuaIsTheTruth Рік тому +4

    Your stories are intriguing. I appreciate the classic feel and lack of sex.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +3

      Thanks, RoboMint. I definitely like a classic story feel when I'm reading, so if I can make that happen writing for somebody, that's good news!

  • @pakde8002
    @pakde8002 Місяць тому +1

    The problem would be easily solved by paying the people who suppliy the raw materials a decent wage. Not everyone wants the rich life with prestige but a good life without stress 15:58

  • @VickiNikolaidis
    @VickiNikolaidis Рік тому +3

    ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ another 5 stars! Luv it!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Glad to hear it. Thanks, Vicki!

    • @VickiNikolaidis
      @VickiNikolaidis Рік тому

      @@RoweLit I am listening to many of your stories but don't often have a chance to comment until later. I really enjoy the stories and your narration. 🙋👍 Keep writing. 🎉

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      @@VickiNikolaidis Thanks, Vicki! Will do!

  • @escapefelicity2913
    @escapefelicity2913 Рік тому +7

    great story

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Thanks, Felicity!

  • @Slombass
    @Slombass Рік тому +2

    This was great! Definitely going to read more :)

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Glad you liked it, tomass! Thanks and welcome 😃

  • @MARKSTRINGFELLOW1
    @MARKSTRINGFELLOW1 11 місяців тому

    Thank you for all these great stories

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому

      Cheers, Mark! So glad you're enjoying 😃🙏

  • @MartinGugino
    @MartinGugino Рік тому

    I tried to post a quote from this on TwitterX,
    (Credit given) but I had to go back 3 or4 times to get the sentence just as you wrote it. So much more impact!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, Martin! Much appreciated. FYI, the text for all the weeklies is always available through the Substack links in the story's description. Provided I got it right 😃 you can just copy paste.

  • @CondredgeDole
    @CondredgeDole Рік тому +1

    Great story!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, Condredge! Glad you enjoyed.

  • @KeithCarmichaelInFL
    @KeithCarmichaelInFL Рік тому

    So confused about why they don’t want to have anyone find Sol? Great story!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      We'll get there 😃 Thanks, Keith!

  • @dtl2081
    @dtl2081 6 місяців тому

    Again excellent

  • @carloverda7304
    @carloverda7304 7 місяців тому

    This story theme has treiggered a memory of an episode from Battlle Star galactic about a ship in the fleat rebelling because the parents wanted more for their children than just replacing them in the same job. I'll have to go an hunt it down or I'll not have any piece! :)

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  7 місяців тому

      You got me going, Carl! Huge BSG fan, and I knew what you were talking about but it took a minute to find it: www.imdb.com/title/tt0947106 Big episode for the Chief!

  • @justinrahn4720
    @justinrahn4720 4 місяці тому

    Do science, listen to Rowe, sip coffee 🥂 nice work

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  4 місяці тому

      Thanks, Justin! Somebody's got to learn how to build those rings 😃

  • @rbarghouti
    @rbarghouti Рік тому

    Fantastic!

  • @susanc4622
    @susanc4622 10 місяців тому

    A well thought out story.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  10 місяців тому

      Cheers, Susan! 🙏😃

  • @robertwesterfield3454
    @robertwesterfield3454 Рік тому

    Very cool work.

  • @kjharky
    @kjharky Рік тому

    Great story ❤ thank you

  • @GoddessStone
    @GoddessStone Рік тому

    Thank you

  • @martynsoogen7464
    @martynsoogen7464 Рік тому

    love the voice

  • @barrydysert2974
    @barrydysert2974 7 місяців тому

    Wonderful 😊 🙏💜⚡

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  7 місяців тому +1

      Thanks, Barry!

  • @JaydogPDX69
    @JaydogPDX69 Рік тому

    Redbye? Next!

  • @donmac7780
    @donmac7780 Рік тому

    And so were laid the foundations of the West Battery War.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Cheers, Donmac! I feel like your comment deserves some dramatic music 😃

  • @SCFPV
    @SCFPV Рік тому

    This story kinda gives The Expanse vibes. Earth and claiming dominance over Martians and Belters, and treating Belters like peasants.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Cheers, SCF. I wasn't specifically thinking about Expanse, but I really love that vibe you refer to. The Earth pieces of that story were my favorite.

  • @bobkoroua
    @bobkoroua 11 місяців тому

    12:00
    Dude ( dudette ? either way I think I'm in love , ignore that impropriety I'm day drinking again) this is wonderful and insightful.
    You are a very deep thinker.
    PS I would sign up and die happy bringing these rings to life.
    I hope we get up the well and nix Fermi.
    Edit .
    I read this again back to back.
    This is literature.
    Any chance you will run for office?
    You have to give me a heads up so I can seek citizenship and vote for you.
    P.E Rowe for world president!
    What the heck?
    I just read another comment, you are a roofer?
    🤯

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому +1

      Cheers, Bob! Glad you appreciated this. If you'd like another perspective on the ring, today's Misfits episode takes place on Athos! Lightning Round: No never run for office, because I'd be a bad world president 😂 and no I am not a roofer, but I did reshingle my house two summers ago now. Much respect for anyone who does it on the regular.

  • @Sa-hq2nr
    @Sa-hq2nr Рік тому

    Good content

  • @markjames-k7w
    @markjames-k7w 6 місяців тому

    5:01 Mark CEN CA crying time I feel or maybe not can't remember this one is so don't know if i will cry 😂 NOPE didn't cry but it was a eyeopener 😮

  • @JasonBrown-zp8tx
    @JasonBrown-zp8tx 8 місяців тому

    what an interesting story...
    it could be a coming of age story,
    or a colonial history lesson, with a few tweaks.
    I guess everybody won. that's pretty rare.
    and even the antagonist's motives were well explained and clearly not intentionally evil
    it did make me sad though. Maybe because there wasn't a winner and looser?
    for whatever reason that seems necessary in most stories
    Anyway, I really liked it. It was an interesting path to victory. When facing a larger power; confront it directly while politely moving around and escaping its orbit

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  8 місяців тому

      Thanks, Jason. Glad you enjoyed it 😃

  • @AaaAaa-i4v7v
    @AaaAaa-i4v7v Рік тому

    ❤❤❤

  • @perrydickerson9055
    @perrydickerson9055 7 місяців тому

    I must say that I have binge watched and hugely enjoyed all of P. E. Rowe I could find. This story which seemed to be about labor relations and social contracts in the far future left me feeling flat. On the best of days the most people can hope for from leadership is enlightened self interest and I have seen management over promise, I have never seen management let the workers move into the house when the work was done. I like adventure and a well told story, this one as all the rest was well told I just found the subject mater not believable or workable and preachy.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  7 місяців тому +1

      Thanks for the feedback, Perry. Glad you're enjoying most of my stories 😃🙏

  • @QbicLT
    @QbicLT Рік тому

    Comment is least I can do :) thank You

  • @MrIzzyDizzy
    @MrIzzyDizzy Рік тому +1

    Great story it triggers Biden's crushing of the railroad workers for me. I wish workers were as united in reality.. Though it wouldn't change the underlying dictatorial structure of our economic system, it might ameliorate some of the social inequities. Yet workers fighting back still does not address all the resource waste of private ownership. Such as the current need to have about 6 times the number of cars unused (wasted) even during peak hours. While leaving many people no access to cars at all. Cars should be shared like (non toll) roads (access abundance) and crappy cars shouldn't be built at all ( intrinsic obsolescence of capitalism ( lack of durability) and even more suboptimal products for "poor" people) Cars use and quality are just a couple examples of thousands of efficiencies most people are blind to. Not mentioning the many harmful effects of their pollution . . .. but I digress . I need to write papers along those lines myself someday if i can .
    It is a very important subject worker status. , your story is analogous to the ability to "go west" for the American working class . A great threat against owners for a couple centuries ( although often requiring war with the native populations).
    I do admire the number and depth of ideas you cover , although not really considering all factors , you make some very important points. bravo.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Thanks, MrIizzy. It's only been about 60 stories or so. I'm sure I'll hit all those other factors eventually 🤣 Seriously, though, it really is amazing how the different topics force me to consider angles and problems I wouldn't have come up with sitting around trying to think of something to write about.

    • @MrIzzyDizzy
      @MrIzzyDizzy Рік тому

      @@RoweLit i like the variety, and the thoughtfulness . . You are really well rounded. You do good fight scenes, horror, comedy, dramas, and then incorporate thought provoking ideas in many stories too. You deserve far more recognition. I hope and think you will get it too. Maybe a little more passion in the romances - for the ladies!
      also your world building and character development is great. Especially in such short stories you have a knack for bringing exotic places into focus very quickly. and seamlessly.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      @@MrIzzyDizzy Thanks, MrIzzy. For the ladies, yes 😃 Funny you should call that out, as if on cue...

    • @MrIzzyDizzy
      @MrIzzyDizzy Рік тому

      @@RoweLit how so? is this weeks story gonna be steamy?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      @@MrIzzyDizzy 🤔😃

  • @rezzer7918
    @rezzer7918 10 місяців тому

    😱

  • @unom8
    @unom8 Рік тому

    Nice, anarcho-syndicalism?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      Help! Help! I'm being repressed 🤣
      Couldn't resist, Joachim!

    • @unom8
      @unom8 Рік тому

      @@RoweLit Be quiet! Hahaha

  • @escapefelicity2913
    @escapefelicity2913 Рік тому +2

    12:01 shouldn't that be moralE problems?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Ya got me. The copyeditor is in Trouble 🙃 It was a long night. Better word there would have been "ethical," but morale would work too.

  • @butterybiscuit346
    @butterybiscuit346 Рік тому +2

    What the heck my comment got deleted!!!! I can't even read your response darnit!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Bizarre. No Johnny Dangerously references allowed!!! My response was pretty much 5 stars for just casually dropping 'bastages" in a comment.

    • @butterybiscuit346
      @butterybiscuit346 Рік тому +1

      @@RoweLit Oh now i'm going to have to bring all my Icehole friends in on this one! Apparently the algorith doesn't like the way i talk about it. Shucks McGee!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      @@butterybiscuit346 I forgot about the fargin iceholes! 😂🤣😂🤣

    • @butterybiscuit346
      @butterybiscuit346 Рік тому

      @@RoweLit This Icehole has come up with an idea. Hear me out here buddy.
      there is a group of space faring clans. They are happy to trade with any colony or other traders. They are nomads in space. Sometimes they find derelict ships, sometimes they find survivors. They adopt the survivors into their clans. (pulling a bit on heinlin for the finnish space clans here but more native american lean) the story should be the inner conflict of of a new "convert/adoption" when the person is learning the secrets of the clan. The information the clan holds could be used to gain infinite gain in the world of dirt-worlders. but it would also cause the total collapse of all civilization. What do you do with the information that could end all civilization? Does humanity deserve to survive?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому

      @@butterybiscuit346 Sounds vast, complex, and interesting. My reaction is that it would more naturally fit into the scope of a novel than a story.

  • @RogerLewis-ey2tt
    @RogerLewis-ey2tt Рік тому

    It's a shame capitalism doesn't really work like this

  • @jamesmorris4056
    @jamesmorris4056 Рік тому +2

    Nope! You are not good at this...😮

  • @Duffsmom68
    @Duffsmom68 Рік тому

    Good

  • @JenDy-f7l
    @JenDy-f7l 4 місяці тому

    ❤❤❤

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  4 місяці тому

      🙏🙏🙏