Well really he just wrote enough that the story could be read out loud properly in an hour. You could (depending on your reading level) probably read this in maybe 20 minutes.
"I'll have to cut some of the details due to the time constraints on me this evening." /*LESS THAN TWO MINUTES LATER*/ " *Goes into vividly rich detail, using sophisticated words* "
@@smokyroom5725 ikr? If they were there, weren't they intending to play MTG?? OR. Do people become ugly and disfigured once a game of MGT begins? Meh. It's a really cheesy and lazy metaphor.
Skyler VonDeben I feel like he used those two lines within such a short time span that the first one cannibalized my appreciation for the second line. Still liked the story though!
Seeing as how I've dealt with this, I personally don't find it all that funny Not really offended at all, but... More so, just dark humor I'm not into. *shrugs*
Vincent V Cava is by far one of the best writers overall iv ever heard. His writing is fantastic. And how could it get any better? Having the wonderful MCP narrate one of the stories. Wow. Absolutely wonderful, bravo to both of you.
Well I enjoyed it too. Each to their own. I’ll keep an eye out on your channel for your wonderful stories considering you think this is so bad. I cannot wait. Come on, give us a good one. Something worthy of a feature film.
The true horror is how its so realistic that pretty girls fall for guys like that tbh like idk how well you can trust the narrators description but God his personality sounded obnoxious
pteraptosaurus I gagged about the whole freaking building! Kinda felt bad because I relate to that stuff. Besides my mom, I'm the cleanest person in my house.
Everyone is relating this to The Tell Tale Heart, though this feels alot more like Lovecraft's "The Rats In the Walls." It even took place at Miskatonic, and at a university of all places.
I feel like it's inspired by, if not a tribute to, both. The "I'm not insane, because insane people don't do x" is clearly from The Telltale Heart, but "those bugs, it's their fault! I didn't do it, it's all them" is most definitely from The Rats in the Walls. Obviously, Poe is much more commonly known than Lovecraft, or at the very least, The Telltale Heart is more well known than The Rats in the Walls, so people will usually tend to refer to it first.
"Miskatonic Times", beautiful Lovecraftian nod there :) I really adore so many of V. Cava's stories. I'm always super excited to see new stuff from him. Incredible writing, as always, great story and so much fun to listen to.
@@MsSpidey2 yes but the point being if they really were investigating a murder then seeing the brother of the victim dragging a box big enough to fit his body in out to the supposedly stolen car then that would be a pretty big giveaway
The video on public transport, the guest house would have been checked, where did he dispose of the box? Would have had his dna outside brothers inside, friends would have been questioned mentioned the scream, and that he said he sprained wrists, unless he kept it in mind cameras next day would have shown him using it at some point...after requestioning him in a station when he became suspect prime cops would have read body language and knew. Pressing further his clothing would have been recovered, fibers matched when lake would have been dragged...body recovered. Tires left recent tracks, traffic cams would have been check from the night before report of car, him being too concerned over brother instead of pissed at the fact he took his car. And like about a dozen other things. Yeah perfect crime🤔 He was caught off the start. What they don't have forensic science or detectives where you at. Edit...if he was Donald who did he kill or was he just batsht crazy?
Turns out this isn't my first audiobook. and Both are from Vincen V. Cava Dark Tales: itunes.apple.com/us/audiobook/dark-tales-13-new-authors/id918246197 and Decomposing Head itunes.apple.com/us/audiobook/decomposing-head-frighteningly/id876152758
Conrado C If you want another really good lengthy one, try tunnels. That one always stuck with me, and is one of my all time favorite, next to devil's jaws.
Conrado C No, it's not that one. I remember it being upwards of half an hour long and really really interesting. I can't find it either now, though. Maybe I've got the wrong name. Gotta' go looking for it now. I'll tell you when I come up with it.
Vincent V Cava has a huge amount of talent. He's legitimately hilarious with this and the devil Creepypasta. This guy has as much talent of writing as you do of reading and making everything seem phenomenal :)
Vincent V. Cava never fails to immerse me in his stories. I love the humor he puts in his stories... manages to make them both scary and a little humorous :) hands down my favorite writer.
Interesting story; a nice cocktail of horrifying, pitiable, and funny. I especially enjoyed listening to it in the wee hours of the morning, unable to sleep due to my cold. Favourite line? "And the bedroom...oh gawd his bedroom!" the way he says 'god' cracked me up for some reason. ^_^
Man, I love to listen to creepypastas/tales/stories as I play souls game, your voice is with me as I play dark souls 3 now, and i just felt that i needed to tell you that you are one of the best narrator of this kind of stories on youtube, i listen to many youtubers but i love all the emotion you put. Thanks for all the narration and keep up the good work :)
As much as I like it, it's not creepy. It's the generic, "Main Protagonist goes crazy due to self-loathing and hatred for others." The only thing I did feel for was when he asked out the girl, that made me sad.
***** so...psycho person with split personality has a weird run in with bugs and he thinks that he kills his brother, who is actually him, and then he kills himself after lighting the apartment on fire....huh. definitely not your average pasta.
I'm guessing that he had multiple personality disorder and he was living the life of both himself and his brother through only one body. So no, he didn't actually kill anyone, he's just crazy.
Landfish100 He might well have killed *someone*. Maybe a bum. Maybe the raving bum at the bus stop was more than *just* a hallucination. So much fun to speculate.
Maybe elizabeth is a dirty girl. Ya know, kinky. Sexual active. Into that guy 4 real. He never actually said anything that made him seem like an actual man whore.
Vincent v cava continues to amaze me with genius plot and a very unique and elegant writing style. Alsp accompanied with mrcreepypasta's experienced and talented voice acting. 10/10
Wow, this was amazing! Such a well written story and perfect reading. Probably the most Poesque thing I've ever encountered that wasn't actually written by Poe, and I loved the Lovecraftian reference :D All thumbs up!
That story was both long and eerie. It was like one part "The Tell Tale Heart", one part "Tales from the Crypt", and one part "Creepshow". Very well read.
This story was so well written, that I didn't really give a damn it was an hour and ten minutes long. It was so good x And that ending, I wasn't expecting! I recommend everyone to keep listening till the end x
Is it weird that I felt slightly sick after listening to the description of Donald and his apartment, but at the same time, I found it hilarious to listen to the different metaphors he used to describe things?
I enjoyed this one. Makes me think of a modern day Poe, how the fear is not generated by some malicious entity but rather from man's own descent into madness.
Scary? I almost couldnt get through the vivid description of the nastiness of the brother and his apartment!!! THAT was the scariest, most disgusting part and I almost gagged upon hearing it!
Mr. Cava, once more you demonstrate your astounding talent for coming up with some of the most compelling pastas as well as some of the most amusing similes I have ever had the good fortune of hearing. Fusing horror and humor perfectly. You sir are a true artist.
Excellent story as usual by Vincent Cava. Your narration really bring it to life. I love the bit about Miskatonic at the end. H.P. Lovecraft would be proud.
That was awesome. The entire time I thought I knew how this story would end, but the twist at the end did surprise me. Great narration and great story!
This guys writing is so unique compared to most other pasta writers. Personally not my cup of tea. I respect it and hes a brilliant writer but, I've always been a fan of more borrasca style writing. Or rather writing where its centered around a group
+Nikolaus Stevens I know right? What makes more sense, killing your kin, or fucking leaving the damn place? At least have a talk with him first and let him know if he doesnt change his nasty ways you're literally going to kill him. A warning you know?
A brilliant story and an absolutely amazing narration! Your voice added so much to this and brought so much life to this story. Which was already good btw
!["Neptune's Fancy" by Vincent V Cava [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/Lu7FHLOh0Ig/mqdefault.jpg)
"I'm afraid I must write quickly", writes for over an hour.
So true.
EXACTLY
-It's so accurate, it hurts-
Well really he just wrote enough that the story could be read out loud properly in an hour.
You could (depending on your reading level) probably read this in maybe 20 minutes.
Mathew Rainville You must be fun at parties
"I'll have to cut some of the details due to the time constraints on me this evening."
/*LESS THAN TWO MINUTES LATER*/
" *Goes into vividly rich detail, using sophisticated words* "
The curse of the perfectionist.
@@ardatalessa162Me. Except I have like 20 unfinished short stories and books.
he disappeared into the water, like atractive people at a magic the gathering tournament. XD im crying.
Vincent v cava's analogies are fucking hilarious
So insulting! I'm going to give him a terrible Yelp review!
He is such a good writer. Now I'm embarrassed to play magic though lol
The analogies are good, but they feel a bit out of place within such a story generally. Bit forced.
Doesnt work as an analogy. Attractive people disappear from magic the gathering events?
@@smokyroom5725 ikr? If they were there, weren't they intending to play MTG??
OR.
Do people become ugly and disfigured once a game of MGT begins?
Meh. It's a really cheesy and lazy metaphor.
"It sliced through my brother's wrists faster than an emo kid looking for attention"
THAT IS MY NEW FAVORITE QUOTE FROM ANY CREEPYPASTA EVER
So many good qoutes in this one, 'ey?
Magma9567
like "he dropped like the number of attractive people at a Magic the Gathering Tournament"
Skyler VonDeben Precisely
Skyler VonDeben I feel like he used those two lines within such a short time span that the first one cannibalized my appreciation for the second line.
Still liked the story though!
Seeing as how I've dealt with this, I personally don't find it all that funny Not really offended at all, but... More so, just dark humor I'm not into.
*shrugs*
Vincent V Cava is by far one of the best writers overall iv ever heard. His writing is fantastic. And how could it get any better? Having the wonderful MCP narrate one of the stories. Wow. Absolutely wonderful, bravo to both of you.
What?? This writing is trash tier. Obviously no thought went into it, it reeks of first draft. Good reading though.
Well I enjoyed it too. Each to their own. I’ll keep an eye out on your channel for your wonderful stories considering you think this is so bad. I cannot wait. Come on, give us a good one. Something worthy of a feature film.
It’s well read definitely but it’s a take on telltale heart and not a great one
The true horror was when the Jock guy actually said "Lol"
The true horror is how its so realistic that pretty girls fall for guys like that tbh like idk how well you can trust the narrators description but God his personality sounded obnoxious
he’s a tooL but u guys know that he’s the best character in the story. he’s hiLarious 🤣 onLy fictionaL frat tooLs are ever that cooL
"As far as I was concerned, my brother was barely alive before I strangled!"
These are the words of a true psychopath.
it’s hiLarious
What is it with Vincent Cava and the Carl's Jr bacon cheeseburger? xD He should get paid for how often he writes them into his stories.
Bc he’s a fatty irl
Western bacon chee.
The man likes a good burger
"The heart is beneath the floorboards!"
thevideogameempire omg yes
“The box, you opened it. We came.”
Why are you ripping of Edger Allen Poe with this comment
@@meganstorr2620 have you heard of a quote, Virginia 12 year old?
I find it odd that the family can afford a summer house, but can't afford to rent out two apartments for their two sons.
+supleted if you made it to the end, you'll know why they didn't rent two apartment for their "sons"
+Cjay Cruz I still don't get that part. I know his brother wasn't real but were the bugs real?
Wot, I didn't even realize
i think the little black bugs were his depression
cute profile pic 😘 Gabe is fucking adorable
I legitimately gagged at the description of the brother's room. Although, it was made up by the hilarious comparisons
pteraptosaurus Yeah, I think I started gagging around the toilet and bathroom description. Ugh so gross. xD
pteraptosaurus I gagged about the whole freaking building! Kinda felt bad because I relate to that stuff. Besides my mom, I'm the cleanest person in my house.
The piss cups are what really got me. Gross.
@@plushmonster1318 I actually skipped it forward through it after the first 10 seconds or so of the bathroom description!
@@trmx4 surely the others in your household aren't that bad?
Coincidentally I played this entire CP via blue tooth headphones while cleaning my entire house.. Lol
"it sliced through my brothers wrists fater than an emo kid looking for attention"
what an amazing line
XDDDDDDD -Kathleen
Everyone is relating this to The Tell Tale Heart, though this feels alot more like Lovecraft's "The Rats In the Walls."
It even took place at Miskatonic, and at a university of all places.
Kyle Dayton lesser known, as Telltale Heart was assigned in English during high school/Middle school for (I’m assuming) some if not most people.
I feel like it's inspired by, if not a tribute to, both. The "I'm not insane, because insane people don't do x" is clearly from The Telltale Heart, but "those bugs, it's their fault! I didn't do it, it's all them" is most definitely from The Rats in the Walls. Obviously, Poe is much more commonly known than Lovecraft, or at the very least, The Telltale Heart is more well known than The Rats in the Walls, so people will usually tend to refer to it first.
I'll have to check it out. Sounds really good.
So much details. I like it. I can imagine the rage the main character was feeling
Ok the feels is real ........ so much feels, so hard to cope .....
the main character even said he wouldnt have much time for detail xD
"Miskatonic Times", beautiful Lovecraftian nod there :) I really adore so many of V. Cava's stories. I'm always super excited to see new stuff from him. Incredible writing, as always, great story and so much fun to listen to.
his constant assessment that he is not insane reminds me of the tell tale heart heart
Supernatural aside, that was one damn well thought-out murder. Only thing that would have ruined it would be campus CCTV.
He dragged him out in a box remember? Well actually he just dragged a random box. Cause he was his brother.
And the CCTV at the fast food place where he dropped the car..I had thought of that too
@@MsSpidey2 yes but the point being if they really were investigating a murder then seeing the brother of the victim dragging a box big enough to fit his body in out to the supposedly stolen car then that would be a pretty big giveaway
@@PrimateProductions but he was his brother. He had no brother he was donald.
The video on public transport, the guest house would have been checked, where did he dispose of the box? Would have had his dna outside brothers inside, friends would have been questioned mentioned the scream, and that he said he sprained wrists, unless he kept it in mind cameras next day would have shown him using it at some point...after requestioning him in a station when he became suspect prime cops would have read body language and knew. Pressing further his clothing would have been recovered, fibers matched when lake would have been dragged...body recovered. Tires left recent tracks, traffic cams would have been check from the night before report of car, him being too concerned over brother instead of pissed at the fact he took his car. And like about a dozen other things. Yeah perfect crime🤔 He was caught off the start. What they don't have forensic science or detectives where you at. Edit...if he was Donald who did he kill or was he just batsht crazy?
Turns out this isn't my first audiobook. and Both are from Vincen V. Cava
Dark Tales:
itunes.apple.com/us/audiobook/dark-tales-13-new-authors/id918246197
and Decomposing Head
itunes.apple.com/us/audiobook/decomposing-head-frighteningly/id876152758
I usually don't like the long readings, but this story had from the begining to the end. Really good. Congratulations.
You should do more of these. I really enjoyed this one
Conrado C If you want another really good lengthy one, try tunnels. That one always stuck with me, and is one of my all time favorite, next to devil's jaws.
Do you mean The Tunnels Ritual? It's the only one i know with that name.
The Devil's Jaws is one of my favorites too.
Conrado C No, it's not that one. I remember it being upwards of half an hour long and really really interesting. I can't find it either now, though. Maybe I've got the wrong name. Gotta' go looking for it now. I'll tell you when I come up with it.
Holy shit. Vincent is fuckin' money. Everything he does is absolutely golden. I'll be puzzling over what happened for the next few days.
it was already really good, but the ending makes it absolutely stellar. vincent vena cava at it again!
agreed
canned-fruits agreed! I like his “Patio Door” story too
Vincent V Cava has a huge amount of talent. He's legitimately hilarious with this and the devil Creepypasta. This guy has as much talent of writing as you do of reading and making everything seem phenomenal :)
His writing style is amazing. Its dark and deep yet also funny at the same time.
Christopher Duncan Defiantly. This guy has a gift for this sort of thing. :)
"abriviated version" *1 hour and 18 minutes long*
Ikr -Kathleen
Abbreviated you mean?
@@PrimateProductions yes I was slow 5 years ago
I love how detailed he gets describing every aspect of his brother's room in the "abbreviated version."
A one-hour long pasta? Ah, I'll listen to this tomorrow. I love you MCP, but I gotta sleep.
It's really good
SLEEP? Whats sleep?
They sell it at flea markets.
Sleep is for the weak.
NUMB Dvineyards It's when you get in the bed; lock your door; lay down; get in your pants; have it under the covers; and pump away.
Vincent V. Cava never fails to immerse me in his stories. I love the humor he puts in his stories... manages to make them both scary and a little humorous :) hands down my favorite writer.
Interesting story; a nice cocktail of horrifying, pitiable, and funny. I especially enjoyed listening to it in the wee hours of the morning, unable to sleep due to my cold.
Favourite line? "And the bedroom...oh gawd his bedroom!" the way he says 'god' cracked me up for some reason. ^_^
Man, I love to listen to creepypastas/tales/stories as I play souls game, your voice is with me as I play dark souls 3 now, and i just felt that i needed to tell you that you are one of the best narrator of this kind of stories on youtube, i listen to many youtubers but i love all the emotion you put.
Thanks for all the narration and keep up the good work :)
The way everything is explained in the end fucked my mind up... Nice read, MCP.
+Agent Krypton Its by Vincent Vena Cava. He's always amazing.
As much as I like it, it's not creepy. It's the generic, "Main Protagonist goes crazy due to self-loathing and hatred for others." The only thing I did feel for was when he asked out the girl, that made me sad.
Edward James Kenway someone didn't stay to the end
Hehe... Edward James Kidnay...
***** I did, he killed himself, and there was some metaphorical thing that he was a clean freak with false dreams.
Close but no cigar my friend. That's not what happened.
*****
so...psycho person with split personality has a weird run in with bugs and he thinks that he kills his brother, who is actually him, and then he kills himself after lighting the apartment on fire....huh. definitely not your average pasta.
1:17:10
Their only son?
Does that mean he never killed anyone because he didn't actually have a brother?
I'm confused. Help?
I'm guessing that he had multiple personality disorder and he was living the life of both himself and his brother through only one body. So no, he didn't actually kill anyone, he's just crazy.
Landfish100 He might well have killed *someone*. Maybe a bum. Maybe the raving bum at the bus stop was more than *just* a hallucination. So much fun to speculate.
Landfish100
So...whose body did he dispose of?
Did he have a roommate that he never acknowledged the existence of, but was just there?
Dawn Wayfinder Maybe. I always just thought there was no body and he was just being crazy, but i guess its possible that he killed someone else
Adrian Adams I don't think he killed anyone. I think he was just craaaazy
Vincent's stories are always the best.
Agreed
This reminds me of the Tell Tale Heart, only with different motives.
Best creepypasta narrator narrating the best creepypasta writer. Vincent v cava has written some of the best things I ever heard
"meeting that wussy..." OH DEAR
justapup456 Sounds like a plan :3
Let me tell you my horror story:
Eating while listening to this creepypasta
"Captain Fingerbang."
Meeting that wussy
"There's only one way I'll truly ever be happy" Move out!
"I had to get rid of Donald." Oh my fucking Jesus Christ, No!
1) The narrator sounds like my dad when he complains about mess
2) Never say "love tissues" again
I got legit mad and wanted to fight Chuck the moment he starting talking that Shit about Elizabeth. 8/10
Geez.. maybe you need a real GF
@@PrimateProductions bruh you are dumb you are really really dumb
Maybe elizabeth is a dirty girl. Ya know, kinky. Sexual active. Into that guy 4 real. He never actually said anything that made him seem like an actual man whore.
@@robertcampbell3019 powell?? Lol
The description of Donald makes me think of that guy who did the bath salts in sausage party.
"Let me start by saying that I'm not insane"
Yup, he's insane.
" I laugh at it manically like a super villain... High on shrooms."
Best line.
they wanted a longer creepypasta reading, so mr.creepypasta read his heart out to everyone that day...
VVC either writes masterpieces or stories that make my eyes roll faster than a neutron star...
Neutron stars roll?
Omg you did THE BEST EVER performing this!!! Absolutely genius. I haven't, and probably never will, hear any narration as great as this!!!
I can't help but laugh at the fact that he got cold clocked by bugs. That they panicked so hard and just punched him in the back of the head.
Vincent v cava continues to amaze me with genius plot and a very unique and elegant writing style. Alsp accompanied with mrcreepypasta's experienced and talented voice acting. 10/10
I NEEDED A LONG ONE !! THANKS MCP !
That's what she said
Ha lol
CapatianCupcakes I dont know why...but the cheesy joke had me .XD
Oh man thought I had the ending there but got me at the end. Hats off to another thrill brought on by this Mr. Creepy Pasta and Vincent V. Cava.
Wow, this was amazing! Such a well written story and perfect reading. Probably the most Poesque thing I've ever encountered that wasn't actually written by Poe, and I loved the Lovecraftian reference :D All thumbs up!
That story was both long and eerie. It was like one part "The Tell Tale Heart", one part "Tales from the Crypt", and one part "Creepshow". Very well read.
This story was so well written, that I didn't really give a damn it was an hour and ten minutes long. It was so good x And that ending, I wasn't expecting! I recommend everyone to keep listening till the end x
I love how he’s talking about how he’s not crazy but then strangled his brother took out his teeth and so on
Your voice and Vincent's writing go so well together. Great job! A round of applause to both of you for your work.
OMG that was bloody brilliant.........best narration I've heard from you so far MCP. You actually sounded insane........awesome!
This story is soooooo well narrated and written! And It is also relatable to the reader! Well, at least to me!
Shino need to get his shit under control >.>
Dana Scroggins Oh Naruto, good times.
This is a cool version of Edgar Allen Poe's "A Telltale Heart"
But "A Telltale Heart" IS cool :D
***** I know, I said this thing was cool. Not that the other one wasn't.
Pete Detrick yeah I noticed that as well. I noticed that the guilt he was feeling was similar to the protagonist in "A Telltale Heart"
Best story by far from Vincent I LOVE it!! Finished it through and I don't regret it!
Is it weird that I felt slightly sick after listening to the description of Donald and his apartment, but at the same time, I found it hilarious to listen to the different metaphors he used to describe things?
Vincent is very good at insulting people
I enjoyed this one. Makes me think of a modern day Poe, how the fear is not generated by some malicious entity but rather from man's own descent into madness.
It's a shame this doesn't have more views. This is the best story on your channel. Keep up the good narrations!
Me listening to this 9yrs later relaxing its like a new tell tale heart
Wait a minute…. He was an only child? Those last lines from the news paper really give it a twist!!!!
The apartment description makes me feel better about the state of my apartment that I share with people like this.
Scary? I almost couldnt get through the vivid description of the nastiness of the brother and his apartment!!! THAT was the scariest, most disgusting part and I almost gagged upon hearing it!
Honestly, I had to go to return to the video three times just to get through it. That was the most disturbing thing I have ever heard.
You guys should hear the creepypasta called Meek.
meek the fut fuck....
Man, Vincent is an amazing writer. His stories are some of your best videos. And all the similes and hyperboles he uses are just golden.
Vincent V is always my favorite. Holy shit, he's so good.
God I love V.Cava's work and you do such a fantastic job bring it to life. This was a fantastic listen and had me on edge the whole time.
A little over half done... why did he not simply bust him for his pot? Itd be enough to get him kicked out of school and jailed for a bit at least
He already had been, so he probably would have gone for even longer. But that's not as fun as killing him, is it?
You didn't listen to the whole thing, did you?
=.= I did. Ik now, read the damn post before typing
Maybe he lives in a place where weed smoking is legal?
+Mr. Wen \m/ Colorado?
love his style of writing and your narrating just made it so much better! uvu
This is literally the longest creepypasta I've ever heard
Try reading Happy Appy
OnesionRa Seems about right.
On a hill is the longest I've seen, 2 hours. It's a great pasta though, the writer really immerses you in the setting.
PLOT TWIST its actually a BOOK!!!
Creepsmcpasta has a 2 hour i watched :D Seriously the scariest shit though.....
I love love love Vincent V. Cava's metaphors and similes! His stories are so descriptive and genuinely scary!
"How do you get shit on the seat??"
very fucking carefully apparently
Mr. Cava, once more you demonstrate your astounding talent for coming up with some of the most compelling pastas as well as some of the most amusing similes I have ever had the good fortune of hearing. Fusing horror and humor perfectly. You sir are a true artist.
Actually this is a book not a pasta :/
"Her garden of eden" wow, that phrase should've been followed with a fedora tip.
Excellent story as usual by Vincent Cava. Your narration really bring it to life. I love the bit about Miskatonic at the end. H.P. Lovecraft would be proud.
"I blinked thrice"
also i love these long ones thank you
That was awesome. The entire time I thought I knew how this story would end, but the twist at the end did surprise me. Great narration and great story!
This guys writing is so unique compared to most other pasta writers. Personally not my cup of tea. I respect it and hes a brilliant writer but, I've always been a fan of more borrasca style writing. Or rather writing where its centered around a group
I came to see how many people would comment saying: SMOKE WEED ERRYDAY! Surprisingly, I didn't see anyone.
I definitely get a "The Tell Tale Heart" vibe from this story.
Just Edgar Allen Poe in general
I still come back to listen to this one
one minute into this and he says he has to be quick about his confession.
Bruh..
this thing is an hour and twenty minutes!
In great detail at that
wonderful
watched the whole thing
Bravo, VVC. I did not see that twist coming, although all throughout, it had a distinct "Tell-Tale Heart" feel to it.
Also cheers to MCP.
The "I am Tyler Durden" moment was da real
wow, that was fantastic, what a twist ending, and so creepy. well done Vincent!
"worse complexion than the Toxic Avenger..." .....I loled.
I normally don't like to listen to creepypasta narrations longer than 15 minutes but when I saw that this was by Vincent V. Cava, instant click!
I love this guy, Humor and horror.
i found this story when i was about 9 headed to the capital of my state to go to the hospital im now 16 still listening to this to fall asleep
....why not move out?
that's what I was thinking XD
the bugs just fallow him( like the old man)
+kenman 914 as in, the old hobo
Fucking Stalker Hobo!!!
+Nikolaus Stevens I know right? What makes more sense, killing your kin, or fucking leaving the damn place? At least have a talk with him first and let him know if he doesnt change his nasty ways you're literally going to kill him. A warning you know?
I thought the title was "little black pugs" for a moment.
Like Cujo with an army of small, squished-face dogs.
Soooo...did he even kill anyone before the fire?
Probably not. He probably had a split personality and hallucinated himself killing his "brother."
Firestar1992 then what about the bugs bites?
Firestar1992 then what about the bugs bites?
The bugs were real.
Maybe the bug bites were hallucinogenic? That would be interesting.
A brilliant story and an absolutely amazing narration! Your voice added so much to this and brought so much life to this story. Which was already good btw
*Burning up the bugs fills you with DETERMINATION
haha I got the reference! 😄
UNDERTAIL! -Kathleen
+My Chemical Otaku You know that Undertail is the porn tag, right?
Haha nice reference
This is one the best stories I've heard on your channel for awhile.