A Part Of Me Stayed Behind
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- Опубліковано 28 вер 2024
- DISCLAIMER: This video is made for a GENERAL AUDIENCE; this means that anyone of ANY AGE can enjoy this video.
Out of development hell and into your sub-box, here's my take on A Part Of Me Stayed Behind by Richard Jordan, aka Skarloey123.
As mentioned above, this project was stuck in development hell for a while until recently, when I finally finished this up ready in time for the spooky season.
Once again, a big shout-out to RailMaster63 for providing the narration in this video; he once again did a bang-up job!
Anyhow, enough talk; enjoy the spookiness of one of Richard Jordan's most interestingly bone-chilling tales!
Forgot to add a link at the end for my Patreon: www.patreon.com/thebogieboy
Every little bit helps to go towards model commissions and other cool stuff for future projects!
I love how in the flashback Thomas's whistle had the same sound from TATMRR. I personally think it suits him well.
0:00 0:06 0:22 1:36 2:52 5:51
NGL, the beginning bit did make me jump. This story reminds me of Captain Scarlet. Mainly the bit of Thomas and Gordon having new bodies after the crash. Sort of like how the mysterons would 'recreate an exact likeness of an object or person'.
Captain scarlet? 0:59
Glad to see a fellow Gerry Anderson fan! - Sid
This must be how Henry got his rebuild at crew, they simply moved his face to a Black 5 locomotive body.
I love how the pilot models were called prototypes, that kinda made me laugh ngl
I feel like this story really let you showcase your filmmaking talents at their best! It’s so refreshing to see something take a departure from the standard Thomas storytelling format.
Holy Crap… that was……… one of the best adaptations of this creepy story. Well done my friend.
Okay, normally I like the creepy and spooky fan-made Thomas episodes. But this? This is terrifying even for me! 😬
It ain't just terrifying for you. This story is ABSOLUTELY terrifying.
i am unphased
The worst part of it reminds me of the fate of the real life counterpart.
An engine in the UK fell into mine, a similar way to Thomas only the mine was much deeper to the point of the engine was unrecoverable, and the only way to fix the section of the track was to cover it up. Leaving that engine, trapped under all that soil.
I dislike typical Thomas horror stories. They often rely too much on shock value or feel tonally dissonant from the show proper. But this?
This is genuinely haunting. It took the mystery surrounding the pilot’s models and used that as a springboard for a story that allows for a more realistic telling of “Down the Mine” to happen. It also touches on the engines’ faces being removable in a way that’s not gross, so that’s a plus.
Excellent story and phenomenal adaptation.
Do you know any other fan written Thomas horror stories you like besides this one?
Even though I've seen the story before, I somehow still managed to get chills from this. I'm impressed by how you managed to make the sight of Thomas and Gordon in the pit look genuinely unsettling even with the limitations of Trainz. Great job!
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Holy shit that was fucking amazing. I've always liked the concept of intertwining Thomas and Gordon's pilot models into the lore of Thomas, and you managed to recreate that original story perfectly. The horror aspect of this video was also really effective. I was actually getting nervous at certain scenes. You nailed this man, bravo!
It’s stories like this that keep me invested in the fandom. This is probably one of the best Thomas horror stories I have seen thus far. Bravo!
I like the clever use of the pilot models.this story is great and chilling!
I’ve seen other adaptations, but this one, by far, is truly the best one I’ve ever seen!
Impressive work thebogieboy! You've made use of the 1983 pilot and turned it into a spooky story worthy of all the spine chills! I love it!
I truly hope that Gordon and Thomas can move on from this experience.
Also, I'm wondering where you get all your sweet music scores from? Do you have any sources I could listen to? Your soundtracks are a banger!
Somehow your videos get more and more closer to being in a movie theater. Love the fact you used World of goo music at the mine scene. The pilot models being the prototypes is a really great in-joke too.
this was very. very. good! Best one out there!
3:45 Thomas meant business at this scene 💀
This is techically a reference of the pilot and the real life event inspiring the story
What event?
Now this is quality the details with the editing and the music and the narration is nothing more to say than just perfect
What a chilling adaptation! Spectacular work
An amazing adaptation. Truly brilliant.
A Part of Me Stayed Behind! A Blast from the Past! Written By Richard Jordon!
I love people using old Thomas props as inspiration for spooky stories!
What if it was the same situation with Henry? It would be like his face was moved to his new shape while his old one rots away on the side of the line at the site of the kipper crash.
I might be the only one, but I keep hearing the Half Engine's screams in the nighttime ambiance. Could be wrong but it just sounds like her at points.
Imagine if this was the final episode of thomas and friends after Thomas and the royal engine..........
Welp, i will never look at Thomas and friends the same way i did. This also explains Henry
that was amazing.
probably one you're best "horror" types of videos I seen yet!
I love how this story relates to the pilot episode of TTTe
This has to be one of the best adaptation.
This man’s work is under rated
3:49
people should make Trainz Thomas "bloopers" compilations with crashes on set.
Thomas falls in the hole
this is one of the best i've seen, you know how to put on a good scare
Well, that was freaky as shiz! But Damm was it so cool and surreal. Keep it up man, this was awesome!
1:51 new model thomas and gordon face
I normally don’t care for these kinds of videos…spooky sure but not this dark…however there was something about your adaptation that is different from other versions and I kind of like it this time
This is devastating that Thomas and Gordon find they old bodies is in that mine
5:55 just gonna say this. If they were to finish and complete the pilot model of Thomas, then perhaps they could've made him look exactly how he was drawn by both Reginald Payne and with some C.Reginald Dalby in there too.
Spooky, but amazing. Loved it
But the start got me 😭
A brilliant adaptation
Good
Hopefully, they can come back and be the second number one and number four someday on the railway
WOW! That was Pretty Magnificent!
If this was possible scrapping wouldn't be an issue since they could just put an old engine's face on a new engine body.
I'm not easily impressed...AND YET!
Your video
*whips out like button*
Had impressed me
I love the quality of it
WELL DONE!
Didnt anyone see the pilot modles on post?
Good luck trying to sleep tonight you two
HOLD ON, if he was from crewe, did they do the same thing happen to Henry? I think that's what they were trying to imply
So is it a creppy pasta or not stee a good au none the less
are you going to make the untold story of Timothy as a Halloween special
What did sir Topham Hatt mean by “we had a major scandal because of our lack of judgment”?
Damn this is pretty good
This was good very good
im glad it's not real Gordon did pull thomas
Pilot Thomas&Pilot gordan
epic
Gosh...
Rip
Wait that doesn’t make sense, why didn’t they get rid of the old models instead of leaving them in a ditch
MYSAERY by Tines Sensahthe had a baby
PATR
Am I the only one that thinks this one is a little on the creepy side or is it just me
that’s the point of the video, it’s meant to be an eerie encounter between the finalized versions of thomas and gordon seeing their pilot models
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I can never find that pilot Gordon model anywhere.
I only used TSI's S1 Thomas and Gordon as the dead prototypes.
"YoU hElP mE aNd I hElP yOu... :)"
Why do I see that right now but more funnier tho. 🤣
Also, I knew a meme from Spiderman across the multiuniverse.
this is the reason why thomas doesn’t look like a e2
Those are the models from the pilot
Jesus Christ. That was a really terrifying adaption. I have ever seen. keep it up.
This is the BEST Adaption of this story, this was definitely worth the wait! Great job dude!
I like how the flashback scenes use the Johnny Morris narration.
Do you think this will ever be canon. I might as well write up a creepypasta when I get the time.
not sure if it is them or not but i love the touch of the half engine's screaming indicating their presence even after their initial appearance
I think you’re on the wrong video mate. But i do agree with you but the screaming isn’t exactly screaming. It’s actually A fox call.
Welp you officially made this adaptation of this "what if" story more creepy with the usage of the static sounds and effects and the music used on Sir Topham's explanation here.
I'm officially terrified of this.
But this is still a great adaptation here. Well done.
This is quite a nice story, well done with it. I might have a look at some more of your stuff; I only found the channel by happy accident of the UA-cam algorithm. The whole being-split-from-another-self premise reminds me of an anime series/game I play called Kantai Collection, where WWII ships are reborn specifically to fight unnatural, powerful seaborne enemies- not too different from the Thomas genre in that historical machines are being given human personalities, feelings and develop their own identities. Although there are others like Kancolle in the shipgirl genre (e.g. Arpeggio of Blue Steel and Azur Lane), what makes it especially similar to your story is how in Kancolle (specifically to the movie) it is revealed that the Abyssal enemies are just like the fleet-girls, except that they were formed by the anger and regret of being sunk. Sunk Abyssals can return as fleet-girls and vice versa, some fleet-girls can remember being Abyssals, and others experience partial amnesia. The climax goes further, where the destroyer Fubuki has to face her Abyssal counterpart (resentful of being left behind) at the very place the real-world Fubuki sank in 1942: Ironbottom Sound in the South Pacific. Picking up the historical references is really interesting- it's hardly surprising I've met others on the internet interested in Thomas, railway history, model railways, scale modelling, military history and shipgirl animes- all in varied combinations.
Wow, it felt a little like a horror story, but interesting callback to the pilot version of "Down the Mine", with the original models of Thomas and Gordon literally down the mine. ...Prototypes, I should say.
This is amazing I love the direction especially so much!
0:26 GEEZ! Every time, I get frightened by Gordon’s eyes squeezed shut appearance when it’s sudden. Idk why, but I keep having flashbacks of “A Better View For Gordon” at the part where little me thought he was going to spill out of the tv, but now I know a screen is there to protect me.
bravo! that was a great story I loved the reveal at the end!
" tragically someone was hurt," said the narrator
Very good work!😄👍
This could be true bc the smokebox doors can come off/open.
As in the RWS, Henry’s SBD was opened.
meaning the faces
are the doors..
This could actually explain the events of the flying kipper if you take the guy from crew into consideration
I finished watching your A little confidence Trainz story on your channel and I must say, it certainly rubbed me the wrong way of how you portrayed BoCo. BoCo is THE last engine that would be rude to Derek about breaking down all the time due to his class suffering the exact same to even worse problems. Out of all engines, he would have just as much if not more sympathy and compassion than Edward when it comes to trying to relate to and help out Derek. You however, framed BoCo in a very pretentious and impatient light resulting in him greatly acting out of character. James would have been a much better fit for that role in my opinion given that he’s mixed traffic, often gets annoyed with Bill and Ben, has a relative prejudice against diesels, and is rather self important to say the least.
Honestly, I hope you take this feedback to heart and show that within your future videos.
I feel this story is a weird enigma that I can't seem to understand what makes sense about Thomas and Gordon dying from that lead mine only for them to come back to life to see their dead corpses. I am like... what?... I just can't seem to help be thought in questions over this story as to how it makes sense.
What sir topham hat did was an equivalent of Necromancy..but.. god..
What is that
I like that little intro change as it's tie to the pilot
That was fantastic not gonna lie that was a dark moment when Thomas and Gordon saw there old body’s on the mine I’m quite surprised no one took them out of the pit and so they decided to put a new body on those two engines
a question but please answer.
What is the name of the sound effect when Thomas starts to shake in fear when he sees his true shape in the mine?
Funny to see my old pilot Gordon model being put to good use still lol. Fun stuff, keep up the good work!
You made that Gordon model?
I can't never seem to find one anywhere... :(
Amazing!
OMG interesting story is everyone the show ptops and they dont know that!
I see you unmeshed the faces of the pilot thomas and gordon after the accident
Can you please tell me what is this song 5:16
Lindal Railway Incident Be Like: 0:22
Outstanding Performance 😃👍
I love that this video is 21:9 aspect ratio it feels like more cinematic
This is best adaptation of this story I have seen so far
Epic?! Based??!!!
Very eerie adaptation!
6:04 made my blood go cold