Alien Princess Was Abandoned, Until The Human Student Saved Her | HFY Sci‐Fi Story

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This story has NO CONTINUITY AT ALL. It jumps around & doesn’t allow the listener to follow the characters, story plot, and any semblance of dialogue. 1) They are on rooftop, but get attacked in apartment? 2) After attack then they are leading the resistance? 3) Attack on throne room, but its stated Liara attacks the bad guy while Hiroshi is fighting others, but they both attack bad guy? 4) Hiroshi goes back home & then he’s back in the thick of fighting??? Good story plot, but work on the flow of story & continuity.