IELTS essay check - 6.0

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  • Опубліковано 5 лис 2024

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  • @SahalinShuvo
    @SahalinShuvo 13 годин тому

  • @AnasKhan-ud4ol
    @AnasKhan-ud4ol 4 дні тому

    In the last paragraph the subject was “senior managers’ role”, which is signular and thus encompasses is the right grammartical use. To illustrate it further, “role” is the focused subject rather than “senior managers”.
    I would love to hear back and correct myself, if required.

    • @ExpertExaminerIELTS
      @ExpertExaminerIELTS  4 дні тому

      Oh, you're absolutely right! I was inattentive there.
      There's still a small problem with 'senior managers' role', though. It just sounds odd to use the plural of MANAGERS' and then the singular ROLE.
      I'd like to reword it to something like, 'The role of a senior manager encompasses...'

    • @AnasKhan-ud4ol
      @AnasKhan-ud4ol 4 дні тому

      @@ExpertExaminerIELTS Yes, rephrasing it certainly makes sense.

  • @briandeleon8654
    @briandeleon8654 4 дні тому +1

    What is the function of despite here?
    It started the paragraph... despite the -- (are they implying they are burdened by their expertise?)
    Or are we trying to say, that in spite of having an already exhausting role, they still have to do more?

  • @MdHiramon-v1z
    @MdHiramon-v1z 5 днів тому

    Hi❤

  • @MdHiramon-v1z
    @MdHiramon-v1z 5 днів тому

    How can I contact you??