Some scenes dragged on for a little while, but is it awful? I don't think so, you put a lot of time and I appreciate it. It was a pretty brilliant retake and you executed it the best you could dude. Definitely a 9/10 for me that's for sure, I'm wondering if this is what "coming full circle" feels like lol.
Pros: LOTS OF EFFORT ORIGINAL CONTENT Build up to story Use of dialogue Unique drawings Late 2000's Internet Vibes Cons: Some scenes drag on a little too long Jumpscares are a little bit loud Art style doesn't work well Rank: Amazing
Alright, so... Pros: I love the immersion and story building this gives, making it seem like instead of stuff happenig randomly, it's a butterfly effect that spirals everything down to the ground. The atmosphere and late 2000s vibe is amazing. The way the video is edited is perfect. Ruby's speech at the end is much better than the original, telling the viewer that it isn't their fault rather than mercilessly threatening them. Cons: While I do enjoy the attempt at a different artstyle compared to the original show, it just... does not sit very well. Maybe it's just a me thing, but I'm not a huge fan of it. (Seriously, my first reaction to it was that they looked like freaking Roblox characters.) Some of the scenes drag on a bit longer than they should, which take away some of the impact of the scenes. I'm not saying they should take like, say, five seconds, but maybe try to slim them down a bit so the story doesn't feel too dragged on. The audio gets a little too loud sometimes, even in the jumpscare parts.
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam Of course! This is still a great remake/take on the creepypasta, and while I do admit my criticism was quite harsh, I'd rather not discourage you from doing what you love (because then again, I know I wouldn't do much better than this), because then again, there is worse out there, and yours is amazing nonetheless.
11:39 I Managed To Hear What Ruby (Voiced By You) Said: "Max,Stop Whining (Or Crying,But I Think It's Whining) and Get Back To Bed." I Managed To Hear The Second One Very Carefully when she Heads Into His Bedroom. She Said: "Max...Stop Joking Around...Get Into Bed." BTW,I Like How You Gave Ruby a Blue Nighttie. I Would Suggest Add Some Stars around Her Nighttie Next Time. That's all.
Some parts drag out for a bit too long, the art style kinda takes away from what it can actually be and on top of that some of the sounds were a bit too loud and need some tweaking, other than that, it's a very good video
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam You're welcome, you did well, but make sure to not take these criticisms to heart, use it to better yourself and improve, you can only get better and go up from here
what i hear in the do you see me part theres 4 sounds or 5 first one may be a instrument of the intro or the flash game background music and theres a sound of max saying find me! and 2 distorted sounds and ruby saying where did max go?
Some scenes dragged on for a little while, but is it awful? I don't think so, you put a lot of time and I appreciate it. It was a pretty brilliant retake and you executed it the best you could dude. Definitely a 9/10 for me that's for sure, I'm wondering if this is what "coming full circle" feels like lol.
Thank you it's very much appreciated
You guys should make a collab someday
@@sultansynthalt maybe
You got a good rating by THE yumi!!!!!
Pros:
LOTS OF EFFORT
ORIGINAL CONTENT
Build up to story
Use of dialogue
Unique drawings
Late 2000's Internet Vibes
Cons:
Some scenes drag on a little too long
Jumpscares are a little bit loud
Art style doesn't work well
Rank: Amazing
HE COOKED, WE FEASTING GOOD TONIGHT!!!!!!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥❗️❗️❗️🗣🗣🔥🔥🔥
Def gonna do l an analysis comment on this later
6:38 (pure silence) W O R M C A K E
Pros:
-accurate to the original story
-no reused stuff
-NEW and original content
-the VHS at start
Cons:
-subtitles at start
Rank:Amazing
What about the drawings?
whats wrong with the subtitles is it because they have humor like "checc out thiz Maxruby epizode i found!!11!!11!!"
VibingLeaf would be proud if this masterpiece is inspired by him.
although the video did not exceed my expectations, yes it is a good one and it only shows that you are doing very well in the editing👍
Thank you
17:00 "A grief so deep the tongue must wag in vain, the language of our sense and memory lacks the vocabulary of such pain."
Dante's Inferno
thats strong words
@@HolyAphid mm
This was good. My only problem is that I couldn't hear anything the dad or Ruby said. I think the audio should be clearer.
It's a shame we have to leave for that vacation... We'll let Ruby in charge. She's a responsible sister she'll take care of Max.
Alright, so...
Pros:
I love the immersion and story building this gives, making it seem like instead of stuff happenig randomly, it's a butterfly effect that spirals everything down to the ground.
The atmosphere and late 2000s vibe is amazing. The way the video is edited is perfect.
Ruby's speech at the end is much better than the original, telling the viewer that it isn't their fault rather than mercilessly threatening them.
Cons:
While I do enjoy the attempt at a different artstyle compared to the original show, it just... does not sit very well. Maybe it's just a me thing, but I'm not a huge fan of it. (Seriously, my first reaction to it was that they looked like freaking Roblox characters.)
Some of the scenes drag on a bit longer than they should, which take away some of the impact of the scenes. I'm not saying they should take like, say, five seconds, but maybe try to slim them down a bit so the story doesn't feel too dragged on.
The audio gets a little too loud sometimes, even in the jumpscare parts.
Thank you for being honest
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam Of course! This is still a great remake/take on the creepypasta, and while I do admit my criticism was quite harsh, I'd rather not discourage you from doing what you love (because then again, I know I wouldn't do much better than this), because then again, there is worse out there, and yours is amazing nonetheless.
the roblox part is so real
Woah. This is AMAZING
Honestly its a good retake, you did wonderful
Thank you!
11:39 I Managed To Hear What Ruby (Voiced By You) Said: "Max,Stop Whining (Or Crying,But I Think It's Whining) and Get Back To Bed."
I Managed To Hear The Second One Very Carefully when she Heads Into His Bedroom. She Said: "Max...Stop Joking Around...Get Into Bed."
BTW,I Like How You Gave Ruby a Blue Nighttie. I Would Suggest Add Some Stars around Her Nighttie Next Time. That's all.
I will ask Vibingleaf to make Max and Ruby 0004
9:05 seems like this is like a retake.
Yes
That part where the audio comes in that just goes "where did max go?" Is creepy and also some insane forshadowing
True
0:52 This is what UA-cam vids used to look back in the 2000s.
I didn't grow up with those videos lol
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam Then how did you made it?
@@trollgeyesgachano1773 Research and notes of how others do it
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam Okay thanks
Not bad! Could use a bit of a rework with the long scenes, they feel kinda like filler
I have ADHD so i tried to make tension so that explains why it was so unbelievably long lol. Also thanks for the support!
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam for someone who has ADHD, you did a very good job. W remake
That intro tho 💀
I watched Max and Ruby when I was a toddler
Anyone do the PigPigGamer Rank? I'd give it the best, Pros and Cons? Go ahead,
15:00 the plot of city entity my analog horror
6:50 full line? Can't understand it
2:17 YES I SEE YOU 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱!!!!!
nooo! mark died :(
The longest one of them all, and probably the best
Thanks
this is actually a pretty good retake, the only thing that needs work is the art but still...
good job on this retake buddy :3
Thanks
i used to be scared of the original omg
Some parts drag out for a bit too long, the art style kinda takes away from what it can actually be and on top of that some of the sounds were a bit too loud and need some tweaking, other than that, it's a very good video
Thank you
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam You're welcome, you did well, but make sure to not take these criticisms to heart, use it to better yourself and improve, you can only get better and go up from here
@@Ragnarok30SP ok
@@Ragnarok30SP also i did almost all of this on a Samsung Galaxy
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam neat
pls do a sonic.exe re take
Maybe if i want to
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam ok
this was so sad that i started to jelq out of anger
WHAT?!?!?! 😭😭😭😭💀💀
Ok I heard the parents talked in more sentences and I hear ruby talking to max about the dirt pancake
Worth the wait! Just started watching and I can already tell this is going to be good!
Thank you
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam no problem :)
15:08
some scenes drag out a bit, but otherwise it's real good
4:54 why is ruby strechy?
Because mandela Catalouge made things that are stretchy scary
what i hear in the do you see me part
theres 4 sounds or 5
first one may be a instrument of the intro or the flash game background music
and theres a sound of max saying find me!
and 2 distorted sounds
and ruby saying where did max go?
It's the flash game sounds only
6:51 what did he say?
It's a shame we have to leave for that vacation... We'll let Ruby in charge. She's a responsible sister she'll take care of Max.
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam I see.
@mrblueymackeinziedingdongAUTTP68 it’s likely the Mom because it never happened to the Dad
Mom died in the crash as well
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam I’m guessing she choked on glass as it managed to get down her throat
The dad definitely went thru the windshield
Nice bro
👍🏻
about to rate this five stars
0:50 What's this song?
Go look at the description and copyright liscenses lol
@@DiamondWorldUA-cam What's the song's name?
Holy Ghost Edit i think
This is so epic worth the wait1!!1!1
Thank you
yikes
What
it was scary?!@@DiamondWorldUA-cam
i luv it@@DiamondWorldUA-cam
Oh i thought It was a internet drama kind of yikes sorry
thx...