If twee PC-only stories rock your boat, then yeah Saberspank was right. Okay toon, decent animation, nice character design, good backgrounds, technically fine except for a little change in linework half way thru, but otherwise this is middling YT animation dross that might get a lotta views and make some ad revenue. Not every art project has to make bold social commentary or give insights into the human condition, stuff can just be sophomorically humorous light entertainment. Hope the guy and his animation buddies strike YT gold!
@stifledvoice Not all of what you said makes sense, but I can agree with the last part at least. Also, I wouldn't have cared if it were deep or not. If it's a good pilot, all that matters
Missed the premiere, but this turned out really solid! Plenty of moments of well-timed comic business in the animation where I sat up and took note, the scenario and beats themselves had that kind of "goofy bumper cartoon" from a tv era bygone, I am in love with the colour palette, and whatever there are technical clunky seams that do rather call attention to themselves (how could there not be, being many animators' first project), the individual, hand-drawn nature of the character and how they move gave it oodles of character to compensate. And all that's just a bonus to the stated goal of giving these people proper experience in working on cartoons. Great job, F and crew!
Saberspark brought me here and I'm glad about that. This was a really cute short and I love Floccinocci's attachment to that soda. Same goes for the amazing color palette for each environment.
I’d love to see more of these shorts, as they feel like it would fit right at home airing in between shows back in the 2000s. It’s just really charming stuff at the end of the day. Great work John, and make sure you tell your team that their work paid off!
Bro summoned the entire hazbin hotel, helluva boss, skibidi toilet, the amazing digital circus, murder drones, lackadaisy, Monkey Wrench, Mechwest, ENA, Hands Up, Olie And Scoops, Cybercatsu, Destaruna, Battle For Dream Island, Edssworld, ASDFmovie, Sublo And Tangy, Mustard, Homster Runner, Alphabet lore, Cheese Wars, Bugbo, Long Gone Gulch, far fetched, God's School, BigTop Burger, Animator Vs Animation, Gwain Saga, Ongezellig, Ramshackel, dinosuria, sitana, The Legend Of Lucky Pie, CLIFFSIDE, sunset paradise, Charlie The Unicorn, Monster Lab, Madness Combat, Spooky Month, Gildedguy, Lumi And The Great Big Galaxy, hidari, Interstellar Ranger Commans, NOXP, Godspeed, Happy three friends, Skibidi Toilet, Inanimate Insanity, Meta Runner, Your Favorite Martian, Salad Fingers, Fundamental Paper Education, RWBY, Meet Arnold, Animatic Battle, HJFONE, Metal Family, Skibidi Toilet Multiverse, SMG4, Chikin Nuggit, Ported by the Sea, Theodd1sout, Welcome to hell, Jaiden animations, Annoying orange, Don't hug me I am scared, The Mocky's show, C-students, Timber, Jungle jail, Countryballs, Countryhumans, Planet Balls, Solar Balls, Toon turf, UA-cam shorts wars, Cartoon beatbox battles, Garner heart, Lovegirl, Drackudate, The historical and nice object show, The daily object show, Porkshop, Interaction cube، MeatCanyon, Melvin macabrie, Money Toon's, Bang bang, squishy, Resilience, obituary, chubby mermaid, cyanide and happiness, spirit fight, Scatter shit, The dark harvest, Butterlover, A world without..., This is bob, Object madness, Elain, Zoophobia, Holidaze, Gametoons, Max design pro, Nutshell animations, Rico animations, Hullabaloo, Epithat erased, Male_07 series, Bravest Warriors, Bee And PuppyCat, excellent entities, Epic Minequest, Underverse, Excellent Entities, Paper Puppet Take 2, Catching up, Brawl of the objects, Object Terror, The Nightly Manor, Battle For Discord, Champion, Rock And Riot, Grace And Pip, GibThom, Alpha Beta's, Animated Inanimate Battle, Becky Prim, PLAYGROUND, Rabbert, Fandoms with this video 💀
Goodness that's a lot of indie fandoms. I would have also added in LeatherIceCream's "Poor 4/At Least There is Čeda Čedović", "Potter Puppet Pals", "Baman Piderman", TheSwain's "Blockhead" and "The Earth Guy" in there to make this list slightly longer? But that's just me.
This reminds me of a lot of those talkless cartoon TV shows like _Oddbods,_ _Oscar's Oasis_ or _Oggy and the Cockroaches._ Even Floccinocci battered the poor monster over stealing his drink off-screen is very on-point with the slapstick humor.
it's pretty charming it gives me vibes of those 2000s-2010s animated shorts they'd air during breaks of the cartoon channels I used to watch, man i miss those days
Came here from saberspark, this was so cute!! Been missing this 90s level zaniness in animation. Love the character designs too, i can already picture the marketable plushies XD keen to see more!!
This was a fun and cute little adventure, and I commend the whole team for being able to bring this together. My best wishes to everyone involved going forward; I hope this project gets the attention it deserves. Great work, everyone! :3
I love this! Music’s very Banjo-Kazooie like. Plus the main duo’s dynamic is very similar to both Rayman and Globox and ToeJam and Earl. Great work all around.
It reminds me of a loop. The way they just walk to different places all the time, then they always have to find X and then some entity drinks all of the pink monster's drink and then the pink monster gets his drink back.
Classic, Mate XD I kept thinking, that's not a paper straw, you lucky bastard XD I'm glad Saberspark posted your link too. Great work and good luck for the future, Mate
Note to all animators and cartoon makers. If a cartoon pilot's ever rejected by any major studio... make the cartoon(s) soley for UA-cam. Or any personal site.
So, I'm gonna assume Flocci's name comes from one of my favorite obscure words, "floccinoccinihilipilification", "a tendency to judge things as useless or worthless". Kind of amazed autocorrect didn't burst into flames when I typed that. Anyway I have nothing to add, just wanted to rep obscure and preposterous vocab fans over here. Loved the cartoon!
I finally watched this short Overall, i gotta say, its pretty enjoyable I like how the climax where flocinocci got angry becaue the pirhana knocked down flocinocci's soda If this does beocme a series, i'm hoping to see more character dynamics But so far its good
Thank you, Saberspark, for enlightening me about a pilot that's worthy of Random Cartoons
If twee PC-only stories rock your boat, then yeah Saberspank was right. Okay toon, decent animation, nice character design, good backgrounds, technically fine except for a little change in linework half way thru, but otherwise this is middling YT animation dross that might get a lotta views and make some ad revenue. Not every art project has to make bold social commentary or give insights into the human condition, stuff can just be sophomorically humorous light entertainment. Hope the guy and his animation buddies strike YT gold!
@stifledvoice Not all of what you said makes sense, but I can agree with the last part at least. Also, I wouldn't have cared if it were deep or not. If it's a good pilot, all that matters
Also here cause of saber spark recommendation!
ITS OUUUUUT
Congrats to everyone on the team, this is such a proud moment.
Congratulations to the entire team, thank you all for your excellent work.😍
@@NS-uq2bv how very kind! Thank you!
Moral here: never take Flocci's drink from him.
Great cartoon short John! Hope to see more!
Missed the premiere, but this turned out really solid! Plenty of moments of well-timed comic business in the animation where I sat up and took note, the scenario and beats themselves had that kind of "goofy bumper cartoon" from a tv era bygone, I am in love with the colour palette, and whatever there are technical clunky seams that do rather call attention to themselves (how could there not be, being many animators' first project), the individual, hand-drawn nature of the character and how they move gave it oodles of character to compensate.
And all that's just a bonus to the stated goal of giving these people proper experience in working on cartoons. Great job, F and crew!
This is epic! Reminds me of the old Oscar cartoons I used to watch.
I relate to green guy on a deep level (soda addict)
Me too
Man, I absolutely hate soda. What do you guys like about it?? I don't get it! (no offence xd)
@@daxterthefox I actually don’t like it either 🤣
It's sweet and the aspartame won't make me fat
I’m thirsty
This turned out so great, everyone did such an amazing job!!!
This looks amazing! Thank you to the amazing crew! You guys rule!!
My boi!
I love this. The characters are cute, The story goes smoothly, and the music is on point. Thank you for this masterpiece.
I’m glad this was randomly recommended to me, rare youtube algorithm W
@@Pokeben42 I friggin’ LOVE hearing that! Stick around! Great things are coming!
I came here after watching this on Newgrounds.
Saberspark brought me here and I'm glad about that. This was a really cute short and I love Floccinocci's attachment to that soda. Same goes for the amazing color palette for each environment.
@@brianlevine871 Thank you!
I’d love to see more of these shorts, as they feel like it would fit right at home airing in between shows back in the 2000s. It’s just really charming stuff at the end of the day. Great work John, and make sure you tell your team that their work paid off!
@@ethanahern Thanks so much! I’ll pass the message along!
This was such a fun pilot Floccinocci and Tip are a good duo can't wait to see more of them.
Bravo 👏👏👏 love the fun, dynamic action and vibrant environments
Hello dear sir, I have come from Saberspark the Furry. But yeah, this is sick keep it up 🔥
Woah, this is so incredible !
Bro summoned the entire hazbin hotel, helluva boss, skibidi toilet, the amazing digital circus, murder drones, lackadaisy, Monkey Wrench, Mechwest, ENA, Hands Up, Olie And Scoops, Cybercatsu, Destaruna, Battle For Dream Island, Edssworld, ASDFmovie, Sublo And Tangy, Mustard, Homster Runner, Alphabet lore, Cheese Wars, Bugbo, Long Gone Gulch, far fetched, God's School, BigTop Burger, Animator Vs Animation, Gwain Saga, Ongezellig, Ramshackel, dinosuria, sitana, The Legend Of Lucky Pie, CLIFFSIDE, sunset paradise, Charlie The Unicorn, Monster Lab, Madness Combat, Spooky Month, Gildedguy, Lumi And The Great Big Galaxy, hidari, Interstellar Ranger Commans, NOXP, Godspeed, Happy three friends, Skibidi Toilet, Inanimate Insanity, Meta Runner, Your Favorite Martian, Salad Fingers, Fundamental Paper Education, RWBY, Meet Arnold, Animatic Battle, HJFONE, Metal Family, Skibidi Toilet Multiverse, SMG4, Chikin Nuggit, Ported by the Sea, Theodd1sout, Welcome to hell, Jaiden animations, Annoying orange, Don't hug me I am scared, The Mocky's show, C-students, Timber, Jungle jail, Countryballs, Countryhumans, Planet Balls, Solar Balls, Toon turf, UA-cam shorts wars, Cartoon beatbox battles, Garner heart, Lovegirl, Drackudate, The historical and nice object show, The daily object show, Porkshop, Interaction cube، MeatCanyon, Melvin macabrie, Money Toon's, Bang bang, squishy, Resilience, obituary, chubby mermaid, cyanide and happiness, spirit fight, Scatter shit, The dark harvest, Butterlover, A world without..., This is bob, Object madness, Elain, Zoophobia, Holidaze, Gametoons, Max design pro, Nutshell animations, Rico animations, Hullabaloo, Epithat erased, Male_07 series, Bravest Warriors, Bee And PuppyCat, excellent entities, Epic Minequest, Underverse, Excellent Entities, Paper Puppet Take 2, Catching up, Brawl of the objects, Object Terror, The Nightly Manor, Battle For Discord, Champion, Rock And Riot, Grace And Pip, GibThom, Alpha Beta's, Animated Inanimate Battle, Becky Prim, PLAYGROUND, Rabbert, Fandoms with this video 💀
Wheres homestar runner lol
Where's OFF
🎶We didn't start the fire 🎶
Goodness that's a lot of indie fandoms. I would have also added in LeatherIceCream's "Poor 4/At Least There is Čeda Čedović", "Potter Puppet Pals", "Baman Piderman", TheSwain's "Blockhead" and "The Earth Guy" in there to make this list slightly longer? But that's just me.
@@Unmomerodelmemexd next to sublo and tangy mustard
Nelson Muntz: "I can think of at least two things wrong with that title."
🤣
love the sound design and the visuals, superb!
@@cassiefureby3680 thank you!
I'm so proud of the production team with how this came out! A great pleasure to voice as Tip for this, High-Fives all around!
I really enjoyed it, especially the music. Everyone involved should be really proud of what they've accomplished!
This reminds me of a lot of those talkless cartoon TV shows like _Oddbods,_ _Oscar's Oasis_ or _Oggy and the Cockroaches._
Even Floccinocci battered the poor monster over stealing his drink off-screen is very on-point with the slapstick humor.
Amazing! It reminds me of Timon and Pumbaa mixed with classic Looney Tunes! Great job guys!!
it's pretty charming
it gives me vibes of those 2000s-2010s animated shorts they'd air during breaks of the cartoon channels I used to watch, man i miss those days
After all this time. It just brings a tear to my eyes.
Super cute!
This was pretty good. I can already tell there's passion and a huge amount of effort put into this❤❤
Super cute! Been eagerly awaiting the premiere for this. Tell the team I said, "Congrats" for all of their hard work and making this a reality!
Loving the backgrounds and designs of the characters here.
That was cute, great job!
This is super fun. Big W for the entire Fountain's Pen crew!
Came here from saberspark, this was so cute!! Been missing this 90s level zaniness in animation. Love the character designs too, i can already picture the marketable plushies XD keen to see more!!
Thanks so much!
The intor reminds me of Wonder over Yonder, really good!
Since you worked at Nickelodeon, this could've been great for a variety show like Ka-Blam!
Ugh, my 90's kid nostalgia is hitting me now 😂
This was charming to see, thanks to Saberspark for leading me here
@@AbdulLegendary he’s a gem
This was a fun and cute little adventure, and I commend the whole team for being able to bring this together. My best wishes to everyone involved going forward; I hope this project gets the attention it deserves. Great work, everyone! :3
@@OlyChickenGuy Most kind - thank you!
This is incredible! It’s so wacky and hilarious and it feels alive! Well done to everyone involved, I’m looking forward to the next episodes!
This would probably aired on some network in the 2000s
Great work :3
Wonderful work! Kudos to everyone!!!
So happy to finally see the pilot!! Fantastic work!!
I love this! Music’s very Banjo-Kazooie like.
Plus the main duo’s dynamic is very similar to both Rayman and Globox and ToeJam and Earl.
Great work all around.
@@jorgerosado2087 Thank you!
Those colors are perfect.
Came here from vivziepop's retweet!!❤
Same
Same
Sameee!!!
Lol here from Saberspark
@@sıö-h5i Any friend of hers is a friend of mine - welcome!
I love it but also what in the adorable Happy Tree Friends 😂
What are you talking about?
Here from Saberspark community post. Very cute short, loved the opening!
Congratulations on everyone involved!
It reminds me of a loop. The way they just walk to different places all the time, then they always have to find X and then some entity drinks all of the pink monster's drink and then the pink monster gets his drink back.
The characters are really cute. And the animation is very smooth.
I came here because of Saberspark and I'm glad I did! I love this 😍 So well animated and cute and funny 🎉
@@UnusualPete Thank you!
blue boy gives off Zim vibes
Such fantastic work. Everyone involved should be proud!
Love the animation and concept I hope we bring us new episodes
This is sick
Yes!! So glad to finally be able to see it! It came out amazing! 💚💜 Hoping to see more of this!!
This show would be good in the short media format
Man i can't wait to see more of your works Sir, cool work here.
it's so epic seeing this finished
YES!!!!
This looks so beautiful! I love the character designs and other stuff like the animation and character design. Very nice to see on here my friend.
Great little short
Came here from Saberspark
Let’s goooo, great job everyone 👏👏👏👏
Classic, Mate XD I kept thinking, that's not a paper straw, you lucky bastard XD I'm glad Saberspark posted your link too. Great work and good luck for the future, Mate
@@goaway2803 Thanks so much… very kind 😊
This was so cute! I miss this kind of animation!
@@afsmeg Well miss it no more! It’s back! Thank you for watching! There’s much more to come!
This turned out so amazing! I did rough animation here! 💜 1:33
you did a brilliant job!
Your contribution is appreciated, and thanks for letting us know! :3
Came here from SaberSpark. Wow. This is really good. I can’t wait to see more of what you’ll do. Keep it up
@@yinyangyt8749 Thank you! Done and done!
It reminds me of those old school cartoonnetwork shows (cow and chicken, ren and stimpy, courage, etc)
@@Skeleton-From-Your-Closet Those were my peers.
Ren and Stimpy is a Nickelodeon series.
Love it. Reminds me of Foamy the squirrel.
@@ilikemusic5440 I love Foamy!!!
Cartoony, funny, silly, and very nice! Kongrats to the krew!!!
@@joselourenco5542 Thanks 😉
Cute stuff!
omg hi dtoons
Love the sound design!
love it. this is amazing F you and the team did an amazing job
This is so cute! Great job, guys!
SO good! It's so smooth, awesome work!
Hahaha! This legitimately made me laugh! Thank you so much for making this and I hope you make more in the future!
@@Winnyao What a delightful compliment - I’ll pass this on to the team! Thank you!
This was such a fun project to work on!!! Thanks to everyone on the crew, you're the best!!
Why does it gave me a familiar vibe of some sort?
And why do I like it?
@@AleJ293 Does the “why” matter? 😜
Quite cute and man i will never forget 2D animation!!
The animation is really good
Note to all animators and cartoon makers. If a cartoon pilot's ever rejected by any major studio... make the cartoon(s) soley for UA-cam. Or any personal site.
Congratulations to everyone at Fountain's Pen!! This was adorable
Excellent Work here Mr Fountain.
This is so cute! :D
Saberspark sent me, and I'm glad he did!
@@23Merk23 happy to have you!
Modern day animation studios are limiting potential, I absolutely loved this cartoon so much dude.
@@TheSUPERWIND2023 What an amazing compliment… thank you. We’re just getting started!
Now that was a fun little cartoon. The world needs more of this
They are so cute I love them
I LOVE THE STYLE!!! And the character design? PEAK!!
This is awesome! NEED MORE!!!!
What imaginitive characters. :)
This so well done
@@bluboyd3637 Thanks so much!
So, I'm gonna assume Flocci's name comes from one of my favorite obscure words, "floccinoccinihilipilification", "a tendency to judge things as useless or worthless".
Kind of amazed autocorrect didn't burst into flames when I typed that.
Anyway I have nothing to add, just wanted to rep obscure and preposterous vocab fans over here. Loved the cartoon!
You are 100% correct!
HERE WE GO!!!
Glad to see veteran cartoonists are still finding work after all these years. Well done!
@@FaustoFelix-on8fo lol… not really “work”… no one’s making any money.
More of a passion project to help young animators gain experience.
@@fountainspencartoons Oh I see. I stand corrected.
Regardless, hope things turn out well for everyone involved
@@FaustoFelix-on8fo thank you for your kind sentiments 😊
Oh man I love this. The animation, the pacing, the character designs, everything. Well done, Mr. Fountain
@@darkerXTV I just lit the fuse - my team made the ‘splosion 🤩
@@fountainspencartoons y'all did a really nice work there, well done for you and your team :D
Congrats on your first episode! 🎉
I love them both so much already
this looks awesome!! 💛🎀
@@mikimuffins Thank you!
I finally watched this short
Overall, i gotta say, its pretty enjoyable
I like how the climax where flocinocci got angry becaue the pirhana knocked down flocinocci's soda
If this does beocme a series, i'm hoping to see more character dynamics
But so far its good