i was gonna be a dick and say “this shit is so ass 🙏” but i realized that wouldn’t actually solve anything so here are some criticisms I have. the characters aren’t fleshed out at all. they’re all just… there. perhaps just give some connection with the demon and the yellow girl? it seems like just three completely forgettable and not at all connected characters beating people up. even then, the violence is… meh. gore is supposed to shock you. the violent scenes just have zero impact, like you’re expecting it all. the voice acting could be refined a lot more, and some of the scenes are just… there. i really wish I could’ve enjoyed this. all in all, this pilot had potential at the beginning, but nothing that happened past the first twelve seconds left me with any thought.
Thank you for actually giving criticism! Way to many people just say “this show sucks” or some shit like that. I’m happy you realized that wasn’t going to fox anything and gave criticism! Keep doing your thing dude
@@foxbox.9277 it can show the plot of the story, but what if this isn’t going to have a full plot? What if it’s episodic in nature? Then there is not bigger plot to do, so the pilot would introduce the characters. Im not really defending this pilot, im not invested in the show really, I was just scrolling through comments while listening.
Out of all the ''serious lore'' indie shows that we've got nowdays, this one really just feels like a breath of fresh air of being nothing but just silly and fun. I hope that's the way the show stays.
Hearing Caine was a fucking jumpscare unlike any other but it seems so fitting that not only does he run an eternal torture-fest digital hellscape, he is also a news reporter for a shithole town.
thats what newgrounds is all about, i swear ive found so many good shows on Newgrounds, in fact, thats actually how i found this pilot, came here to show my support on yt too
yep, this is literally old sr pelo in like 2015-17. also i really love that he uses the word betch because the police always said that in his vids during that time period
Pretty fun trailer! Tho honestly the pacing felt kinda monotone, especially in fights, maybe some more dramatic changes between quick and slow for jokes would work! Either way looks fun :3
yeah. honestly im sure the creator can make something really cool but for having the craziest cast it's not really anything special. there's not really something like a cast of characters or worldbuilding to get invested in and the action is not that good if that's the main selling point
@@DarkKnightWolf True to a degree. But I'd argue madness combat has more going on under the hood. Also it has MUCH older origins (2002) and only gets a mainline canon episode like once every 5 years.
The simple art style combined with all the gore is hilariously amazing. I am intrigued by this. Also the fact that you got Chi-chi, Sr.Pelo, and most of the Digital Circus cast on this is fantastic.
@@Crimion2311 Lizzie is Yanfei in Genshin, Alex is the fanvoice of Spamton from Deltarune, and Micheal is Rocky in Lackadaisy (I don’t think I’ve seen Amanda in anything else) and I’ve known about them in those things before Digital Circus even came out. Digital Circus is just the common denominator
I think that's a joke to something else from NG, not sure but Alien Hominid probably did that when you jumped on the agents' heads and bit the off they could sometimes have a bone stay
This is honestly really good! I love the underlying concept, sense of humor, as well as the art style! My only real complaint would be character depth/consistency, minimal explanation of relations, and pacing. But honestly a lot of the moments in this made me full of chortles.
Regarding your criticism, it is only a pilot. You are left with tons of questions by the end of most pilots. That's kinda the point. I do think a bit more explanation would be nice though, I suppose.
@@johnnydabb2 True, I do agree that some questions should be left by the end of most pilots. But when those questions include "Who are you?" , "Why are you here?" , and "How do you know these people?" I feel as though it suffers.
@@johnnydabb2 True, that doesn’t mean a pilot should come free with no criticism. Its still a good way for a person to take that criticism to heart, which is not wrong.
This could be something interesting but it just feels so unimpactful in every scene. I am not even sure exactly what it is, but it is almost like the mixing is just off for the audio. I don't need the sound effects to be ear piercingly loud by any means, but it almost feels like every action is so done between two pillows. It makes some scenes that could be incredibly fun to watch feel stilted and awkward. 4:20 in particular just felt so... empty. It was both way too quick and way too light which led it to feel awkward. You can make this stellar, obviously. It is INCREDIBLY well drawn but I think the sound mixing needs some time in the oven.
Lizzie Freeman, Michael Kovach, Amanda Hufford, Alex Rochon, and Sr. Pelo in an indie pilot together was not on my 2024 bingo card. (Fantastic work! :3)
Everyone’s talking abt Michael Kovach but I’d also love to point out that Lizzie (pomni’s VA) voices Penni and her mom, and, like, it’s perfect??? The energy??
@@DanielCanAnimate I knew the voice sounded familiar but for some reason she sounded like she voiced Zooble but to avoid confusion I didn’t put her in but that’s still cool
Here's mine: the art style is nice but the animation can feel static at times, scenes don't flow too well into each other and also (other than the introduction) it's just the main characters killing people, which is pretty lame, i hope that if the creators keep going they actually put some work in the story/character department
I can't believe the team was able to separate Joshua Tomar from his Tomar Emeralds for long enough that his power drained to the point he would exit his sphere of power and provide voice lines to them
I am in love with this artstyle and character design~ Absolutely adore the fact that only like a third of the cops can afford guns so the rest just have to charge in with clubs like medieval goons. Really considerate of them tbh.
This pilot was honestly really fun to watch! Aside from my own few personal issues that I have with it, this is pretty solid for an indie animated pilot. I especially loved the character designs and the art style, and the voice acting, of course, was great! The character personalities are pretty well portrayed too. I can't wait for more of this, and I can't wait to see how this improves and gets better as it goes on!
I think the only problem here is that the characters need a an actual storyline instead of just killing people. Its just kind of lame but not trash, it has a potential.
Considering that this is just a pilot, I’m guessing the storyline will develop if this continues. Or maybe it’ll just be killing people. That’s cool too.
Cakks speaks Me: MICHAEL AGAIN?? Tihi speaks Me: AMANDA???? News guy speaks ALEX?????? * Checks description * Me: LIZZIE???????? Also Tihi doing the Caramelldansen dance at the end was cool
The art style is the only good thing about this short. This is a really meh cartoon. It feels like they made the violent fight scenes first and the plot after. The pacing is extremely fast, the plot is "they go to a store and violence happens seconds later". They don't flesh out the characters, they don't even take a second to explain the orange girl's connection to penny or the demon, she just hangs out with them I guess? This leaves all the characters being one dimensional. There are so many better ways to write evil protagonists rather than the boring way this cartoon does. My next point is kind of a nitpick but this short is like Catching Up where it seems to heavily rely on famous voice actors. Like the cast of Digital Circus and Sr Pelo (him especially). That part where the sr pelo cop screams for half a minute kinda felt like the video is dangling keys in the viewer's face. The scene drags on for too long.
@@crazyjosheee3596Flowey actually has an voice: If we don't count laughs, in genocide route, right before the door in snowdin, flowey will say "Mmh... That's a wonderful idea!"
9:09 Me feeling stupid because I didn’t know that Pomnis va is in this the amount of glitch va’s in this is crazy the ones I recognized was (Pomni,Jax,Ragatha,and Caine).
character design 10/10 animation 8.5/10 humour 6.5/10 (with some standout bangers) character interactions 0/10 no chemistry??? please just stop trying to be relatable
This is so cool! :) perfect example of the golden era of indie animation we’re in. The art style is very smooth and pleasant to look at imo, definitely gonna be studying this artstyle to help me with my own drawing skills
Subscribe for more cartoons like this in the future!
crae i missed you bbg
@@Crae I will support you on patron! Also we want to contact you because we would love to pitch you a demo of a Latin Spanish version of your pilot!
Taba weno el piloto
1:37 GET OUT OF MY HEAD MICHAEL
Yes! We need more pain girl episodes ❤❤❤
5:35 i like how they use the abnormally realistic mouth refrence for when Sr Pelo breaks character! : D
AND HOW HE USED HIS REGULAR VOICE LIKE OMG HES ICONIC (like, Michael Kovach iconic)
My hair 😨..
M..my hair.. 😰
@@CrocloBootworks
“U --- Y U DO THAT TO MY-
HAHAHAHHAHAHA”
i make waffles- AAAAAAAGGGHHHH
@@strawsoYOU 1928 LOOKING ASS CARTOON
5:29 Sr pelo just has that iconic voice that woud make you immediately recognise him😭
that's what we call a refference
@@kamilhazi6293actually it’s called a cameo
Alright
FRR
OOOOOUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHH
The sr pelo cameo and character breaking made my day
FR
GIVE HIM BACK HIS HAIR!!
subbing cuz Pelo
Sr pelo be doing all the sidequest fr.
Fr fr
I like when pain girl said “it’s pain girl’in time” and pain girl’s all over the place
r/therewasanattempt
@ r/iwanttokillmyself
R/iwannafuckingdie
i like ur pfp
@ ikr. It’s peak
Even in a different person’s series, Sr Pelo can’t escape brutally dying.
Or morphing his head to a giant mouth when he breaks character
Or having the goofiest dying scream ever 💔💔
Or being dishonoured by a corny joke right before his death.
Or somehow resurecting
So how many times has Sr Pelo been in another series?
i love indie animators making their own show, gotta be my favorite gender
You mean “genre,” right?
@@JeffreyThrashno, wrote that right.
@@manuelalbertoromero9528 I suspected as much.
Genre?
@@JeffreyThrash?
0:55 : lizzie freeman
1:38: michael kovach
2:43 : alex rochon
3:18 :amanda hufford
5:30 : Sr pelo
2:29 lizzie freeman (again)
0:09 joshua tomar
Sr pelo
3:17
WHY IS IT ALWAYS MICHAEL!? WWHHYYYYYYY
Basically TADC cast
So basically pomni, jax and caine😭
5:30
I love how Sr Pelo talks like if he’s off-script 💀💀
He always does,in spooky months,money show,ect I wanna see more of him in this show
Kovach being in literally every animated show
When you call him, he'll be there...literally
JAX
For someone who is in a lot of shows he does have lots of free time
“Finally, I can start production of my indie animated series! Now, who wants to voice act-“
Michael Kovach: [linkara running]
@@Northtarctica Kovach is like Thanos completing his infinity Gauntlet
THE CAINE VOICE JUMPSCARE 😭
Edit: Cax sounds like how Flowey would
lmao I read this RIGHT as it started!!
AND THE ZOOBLE ONE
Sr pelo
@@calicowonders8003 Ashley Nichols is the person who voices Zooble. Amanda Hufford, the person who voices Tihi, has nothing to do with Zooble at all.
WHERE
Sr pelo voicing the funniest cop fits him so well,PLS LET HIM VOICE ACT MORE!!!
Sr Pelo is one of my favorite youtuber's! I love him
ME TOO!
YEAHH
YEAAAHHHH!!!!
@@Ermwhat612 YYEEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!
i was gonna be a dick and say “this shit is so ass 🙏” but i realized that wouldn’t actually solve anything so here are some criticisms I have. the characters aren’t fleshed out at all. they’re all just… there. perhaps just give some connection with the demon and the yellow girl? it seems like just three completely forgettable and not at all connected characters beating people up. even then, the violence is… meh. gore is supposed to shock you. the violent scenes just have zero impact, like you’re expecting it all. the voice acting could be refined a lot more, and some of the scenes are just… there. i really wish I could’ve enjoyed this. all in all, this pilot had potential at the beginning, but nothing that happened past the first twelve seconds left me with any thought.
the humor just reminds me of something i'd see on an "incorrect quotes" tumblr account
Thank you for actually giving criticism! Way to many people just say “this show sucks” or some shit like that. I’m happy you realized that wasn’t going to fox anything and gave criticism! Keep doing your thing dude
Michael Kovach is the Chris Pratt of the indie animation universe
In a good way or a bad way?
@@CappyzEditA way
@@manuelalbertoromero9528Not really answering but I’m calling it a good way
Yes. I liked him as Mario.
Yes
so we basically got a cartoon show with TADC voice cast, Jax is now Cax, and murder. dope, im down for it.
wouldn't be a new animated series without kovach
I immediately knew it was sr pelo by his hair, and after I heard his voice it just made my guess right.
+sr pelo
like murder drones and TADC mixed together
Cakks*
‘You are such a Pain, Girl.’ absolute cinema
And then she pained all over them
credits start rolling
honestly as much as i adore the animation, this feels a little devoid of life. like an empty story just for gore and showing off popular voice acting
It’s a pilot. They can’t make a full story in a pilot.
@ I mean, helluva boss, hasbin hotel, amazing digital circus, murder drones, lackadaisy, cliffside, all have ton of personality, that’s a poor reason
@plabcentral630 lmao yes they can
@@plabcentral630 look the reply above the one above me. Also isn’t the point of the pilot is to show a base for the story and format for the show?
@@foxbox.9277 it can show the plot of the story, but what if this isn’t going to have a full plot? What if it’s episodic in nature? Then there is not bigger plot to do, so the pilot would introduce the characters. Im not really defending this pilot, im not invested in the show really, I was just scrolling through comments while listening.
5:45 that’s… that’s gore of my comfort character…
XDDD
yeah..
five freddy nights
Yeah
holy smokes real freddy
Five freddys at night
Forgil flibnouht!?!??!??
No way
Out of all the ''serious lore'' indie shows that we've got nowdays, this one really just feels like a breath of fresh air of being nothing but just silly and fun. I hope that's the way the show stays.
i hope this doesn't age well
@@lovesunnyskieswhy?
A silly show where vizziepop or glitch is not involved
Great
Even tough it has some names associated with them such as michael kovach
its based on newgrounds games/animations for example alien hominid
@@ssg-eggunnerwait whats wrong with glitch???
5:55 I like the idea that pelo is immortal in this universe just because he’s pelo.
Hearing Caine was a fucking jumpscare unlike any other but it seems so fitting that not only does he run an eternal torture-fest digital hellscape, he is also a news reporter for a shithole town.
LOL IKR
LITTERALLY, like it is so in-character of him to do that. 😭
LMAOO
am i the only one who only hears caine and the other guy as the spamton alex used to do
@@PLAGUEONLYRICSno
Lizzie, Michael, Alex and Pelo?! Now I'm hooked to this!
Love the animation and it's GOATED cast!
And TOMARRRR
and Chi-Chi for the theme song
and AMANDA :D
@@CrazyCrafter223 and honesty that’s it
Everything else isn’t very good in my opinion
i'm lost, wh- ohhhhh, Pomni
This is the era of the indie animation uprising and I’m here for it!
Me too
thats what newgrounds is all about, i swear ive found so many good shows on Newgrounds, in fact, thats actually how i found this pilot, came here to show my support on yt too
By this point everyone Is releasing their own pilot
Joshua Tomar being in this video automatically makes this a hood classic
Joshua Tomar killed my entire family in 1982
@@Nona_1989 WAIT HE KILLED UR FAMILY?!?!? HE IS A SERIAL KILLER CONFIRMED THEN
@@laurieannriley6282 Tomar tied me to a chair and made me watch him cannibalize my entire family and girlfriend in 1993
It feels good to hear Sr. Pelo makes those noises again. Its been so long...
5:43
yep, this is literally old sr pelo in like 2015-17. also i really love that he uses the word betch because the police always said that in his vids during that time period
ÆEEEEWWÆĒH
MAN BEHIND THE SLAUGHTE3 REFERENCE??
@@Fugedtit say that again?
@@frederickfazbearing-hv9vz gangnam style
I love the low effort yet fluid style, and then how the style and everything else randomly happens or changes sometimes lol
It’s not low effort
@@FlaggyAf good point, should have said simple or something
yess
The four horsemen of indie animation:
Lizzie Freeman, Amanda Hufford, Michael Kovach, and Alex Rochon
DO NOT FORGET JOSHUA TOMAR
@@Nona_1989who dat (serious)
@@kachosuffer7he’s the guy that bought out a small family owned business and charged the owner 10x the amount or he would close it down.
@@Nona_1989He's not in a lot of Indie animation.
and sr pelo sniffs crayons in the corner
Pretty fun trailer!
Tho honestly the pacing felt kinda monotone, especially in fights, maybe some more dramatic changes between quick and slow for jokes would work!
Either way looks fun :3
it kinda seems like the comments are only mentioning the voice actors and not the actual video itself unless they're criticizing it
Ye
i agree, the characters are annoying
Because that exactly what it is
yeah. honestly im sure the creator can make something really cool but for having the craziest cast it's not really anything special. there's not really something like a cast of characters or worldbuilding to get invested in and the action is not that good if that's the main selling point
@@JaxxMCC just a lot of things don’t make sense and the action was underwhelming
A wise commenter once said:
There's been so many pilots, UA-cam is starting to look like an airport
HELP ME OMFG
....COMPARE THIS TO CARTOON NETWORK,THO
....YUP,COMPETITION FROM DIRECTLY YT IS KILLING THEM......HEHE...
AINT NO WAY IT DOES LOOK LIKE AN AIRPORT 😭🙏
5:36 Sr Pelo breaking character was killing me 😂😂😂
He's so me 😭
bro, that like is his character😭
LOL
I KNEW IT!! I KNOW THAT VOICE FROM ANYWHERE…
It's so frickin recognizable. le tengo cariño 😂😂
I mean it's alright, it's just senseless violence, no real motivation, reminds me the old cartoons with no real sense of direction
I love the animation and style, but I think the concept needs something more then just the characters killing people to carry an entire show
Exacly
I was hoping to see someone else mention this and not just people freaking out about VAs.
Madness combat did that and they’re doing pretty fine, but you got a point
@@DarkKnightWolf True to a degree. But I'd argue madness combat has more going on under the hood. Also it has MUCH older origins (2002) and only gets a mainline canon episode like once every 5 years.
agreed
5:40 IS THAT SR. PELO??
Such a unique yet simple pilot! I love it! (I’m working on a pilot myself! Such a great inspiration)
Is that CONZYWONZYY FROM PROJECT MDR!!!
“Penni Painkiller” might easily be the greatest protagonist known to man
The simple art style combined with all the gore is hilariously amazing.
I am intrigued by this. Also the fact that you got Chi-chi, Sr.Pelo, and most of the Digital Circus cast on this is fantastic.
Is that really how people recognize them now? Almost if not all of the cast have been in other shows. Grow up kid
@@Crimion2311 Lizzie is Yanfei in Genshin, Alex is the fanvoice of Spamton from Deltarune, and Micheal is Rocky in Lackadaisy (I don’t think I’ve seen Amanda in anything else) and I’ve known about them in those things before Digital Circus even came out. Digital Circus is just the common denominator
@@Lady_ETHNE I found a bottle of lighter fluid on the sidewalk
pedoshow
@@Crimion2311 oh damn, how much fluid left?
5:29 HOLY CRAP ITS SR PELO
2:43 bro thats Caine-
We got Caine in Pain Girl before GTA6🔥🔥🔥🔥
Pomni and Jax are also here
Where?
@@TheRealPalmKnee where
Caine... Like Caine West?
I leave my mark here to show off that I was here since the beginning of this great series.
leaving my mark here too
markiplier: you Left your what
YEAAAHHH
Me too
In a year this comment will become *LEGENDARY!*
Or stolen by a bot that gets even more likes…
In the history of forever, there has been made at least 50 000 000 animations. This is certainly one of them
5:23 I love how this Implies that the cops don’t have brains and just a bone in their heads
I think that's a joke to something else from NG, not sure but Alien Hominid probably did that when you jumped on the agents' heads and bit the off they could sometimes have a bone stay
Only Pelo has a brain
So they’re brainless boneheads?
Sounds "sus", if you know what i mean.👀
@@vcdgamerwait, you’re onto something
This is honestly really good! I love the underlying concept, sense of humor, as well as the art style!
My only real complaint would be character depth/consistency, minimal explanation of relations, and pacing.
But honestly a lot of the moments in this made me full of chortles.
LITERALLY COULDN'T HAVE SAID IT BETTER
Regarding your criticism, it is only a pilot.
You are left with tons of questions by the end of most pilots. That's kinda the point.
I do think a bit more explanation would be nice though, I suppose.
@@johnnydabb2
True, I do agree that some questions should be left by the end of most pilots.
But when those questions include "Who are you?" , "Why are you here?" , and "How do you know these people?"
I feel as though it suffers.
@@johnnydabb2 True, that doesn’t mean a pilot should come free with no criticism. Its still a good way for a person to take that criticism to heart, which is not wrong.
@@medecko4394 I agree. And I still agree with the criticism. I was just offering a counterpoint
8:03 im more suprised by the fact that they killed so many cops, all with different kind of guns, but got taken down by fucking taser
I mean either the gun guys died before they got to shoot or the ones that did had terrible aim
The tazer dude probably got the drop on them.
This could be something interesting but it just feels so unimpactful in every scene. I am not even sure exactly what it is, but it is almost like the mixing is just off for the audio. I don't need the sound effects to be ear piercingly loud by any means, but it almost feels like every action is so done between two pillows. It makes some scenes that could be incredibly fun to watch feel stilted and awkward. 4:20 in particular just felt so... empty. It was both way too quick and way too light which led it to feel awkward.
You can make this stellar, obviously. It is INCREDIBLY well drawn but I think the sound mixing needs some time in the oven.
Lizzie Freeman, Michael Kovach, Amanda Hufford, Alex Rochon, and Sr. Pelo in an indie pilot together was not on my 2024 bingo card.
(Fantastic work! :3)
You forgot Tomar.
😂 LOL
Got all but 1 in Digital Circus! 😂
pedoshow
6:16 LeTs UsE tHe PoWeR oF FrIeNdShIp
ngl i was waiting for this lol
Let's use the power of unaliving
5:53 Best joke yet
Fr ✨
Well bro called it a bad joke, so yeah, you might hate him/her
Omg holy shit the clean art style + simple yet beautiful animation?? YOU’RE LITERALLY MAKING WHAT I’M DREAMING OF MAKING WHATT-
Everyone’s talking abt Michael Kovach but I’d also love to point out that Lizzie (pomni’s VA) voices Penni and her mom, and, like, it’s perfect??? The energy??
And Amanda Hufford who voices Ragatha, is also in this as she’s voicing Tihi
8:43 when you're forced to pick youtube commentary channels to watch
Crae as Ice Cream Guy.
Crae as Police#1.
Crae as Burglar.
Crae as Cafeteria Kitchen Prisoner.
The range on this guy! 🤣
no comments is insane
I love the animation style, script could use some help but i am very curious about this series. Keep it up!!
Cop scene was funny af tho
Man, I love how there’s some familiar faces from TADC in the voice acting credits. Lizzie, Michael, and Alex? That’s actually really cool!
from the TADC to sr pelo to newgrounds to the king where’s my crown that’s my bling
@@dillmen101 i think im sad now
Yes the voice actors of the popular show TADC have other shows that they do….. what a big surprise
Why did you forget Amanda Hufford(She voices the Raggedy Ann doll)
@@DanielCanAnimate I knew the voice sounded familiar but for some reason she sounded like she voiced Zooble but to avoid confusion I didn’t put her in but that’s still cool
the new Binding of Isaac DLC looks crazy
what
Love that game
real
𝖳𝖻𝗈𝗂 𝗆𝖾𝗇𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇 😍😍
on second thought, yeah this really is a crazy dlc
9:00 she said it!! She said the [title]
“You are such a pain, girl”
“Say that again…”
You are such a [title]
Why does this remind me of Spamton lol
“She said the [[Hyperlink Blocked]]”
@@ThisRandomGuy1 [hyperlink blocked]
[little sponge]
This show is the definition of cute gore
7:41 Peter Griffin? 😭
XDD
The way Sr Pell and Michael Kovach were in this made me go insane . (THATS A GOOD THING !)
Everyone did amazing on this!! Thank you for having me onboard for the Theme song! :D
Your next challenge is to try and find a comment that actually talks about the show and not just the VA's
Here's mine: the art style is nice but the animation can feel static at times, scenes don't flow too well into each other and also (other than the introduction) it's just the main characters killing people, which is pretty lame, i hope that if the creators keep going they actually put some work in the story/character department
I LOVE this! It's giving me Powerpuff Girls vibes! Fantastic job!
Seeing Pomni, Ragatha, and Jax as two wildcards and a demon was not something on my 2024 bingo card..
Nah, that last part is kind of suspected. Not the first time.
She kinda sounds more like Zooble. Does the VA voice both of them in TADC?
For real, I got so surprised when I saw the credits and their names! But I should’ve known since their vocal ranges are insane 😭
Also Caine as the news reporter
And Caine
6:41 im Dead
Dude, this is so random, and Newgrounds
same
man, I’m dead 💀
Man I’m dead-
HELP MEEEE
5:28 love how they just included the voice actor laughing their ass off like it was intentional
2:42 IS THAT THE GUY FROM DIGITAL CIRCUS???
Yes he was
YEEEEPPPP
The guy from fortnite*
@@Cole_Is_A_Mole shut up! No one cares
It is, his name is Alex rochon
I WANT THE WHOLE SERIES COMPLETED
This really feels like an 2012 animation and i really love it! Can't wait to see where this series goes.
OH.. let’s start.. Michael Kovach, Lizzie Freeman, Alex Rochon, Amanda Hufford AND Sr Pelo🤯🤯 SOOO legendary
7:29 really giving-
"you were invisible!"
"cool!"
"i DoNt FeEl So GoOd- WoOoOoOoOAHhHhHhHhHhHhHOoOoO-"
Edit: or the sans thing-
Gasterblaster?? 😭
@Kawf._.is-trash maybe
I can't believe the team was able to separate Joshua Tomar from his Tomar Emeralds for long enough that his power drained to the point he would exit his sphere of power and provide voice lines to them
lol that’s nice and funny animation.
Good job 👍
SPIDY MAN
Didnt expect to see u here
Edgy middleschoolers are gonna love this one
5:29 SENHOR PENDEROS
¡¡MI AMIGO MEXICANO!!
I am in love with this artstyle and character design~
Absolutely adore the fact that only like a third of the cops can afford guns so the rest just have to charge in with clubs like medieval goons. Really considerate of them tbh.
lmao
2:44 caine’s voice
5:31 sr pelo voice
0:07 Joshua Tomar's voice.
@@kassfoss3210 I don’t know that channel
@orderofthetemplecollegeotx5791 He tends to voice a lot of Newgrounds animations and is one of the members of Oneyplays.
@@kassfoss3210 I never knew that
it took me a hot minute for me to realize that this is NOT a video game trailer or something.
This pilot episode definitely grabbed my attention! This is well made! Great job!
This pilot was honestly really fun to watch! Aside from my own few personal issues that I have with it, this is pretty solid for an indie animated pilot. I especially loved the character designs and the art style, and the voice acting, of course, was great! The character personalities are pretty well portrayed too. I can't wait for more of this, and I can't wait to see how this improves and gets better as it goes on!
I think the only problem here is that the characters need a an actual storyline instead of just killing people. Its just kind of lame but not trash, it has a potential.
Considering that this is just a pilot, I’m guessing the storyline will develop if this continues. Or maybe it’ll just be killing people. That’s cool too.
WAS NOT EXPECTING TO SEE PELO IS THIS
I’m glad he’s here tho
Violence is the plot
I noticed this too, the lack of story is very unsatisfying.
exactly
Let me guess, the years they will be in prison is the same amount of time it will take to animate episode 2?
😂
3:00 "Nothing bad ever happens!" *Comically gets blown to bits*
5:24 SR PELO?
This is really good, I love the sr pelo cameo too
Same
Where will this series even go story wise when this pilot gets off the ground
Cakks speaks
Me: MICHAEL AGAIN??
Tihi speaks
Me: AMANDA????
News guy speaks
ALEX??????
* Checks description *
Me: LIZZIE????????
Also Tihi doing the Caramelldansen dance at the end was cool
*Sees* 7:38
PETER GRIFFIN!?!?
caine became a news anchor digital circus didn't pay him enough
He gets paid? 0_0
2:51 Is That Caine's Voice Actor Alex?
Yeppp
Yes
THATS WHAT I SAID TOO
I HAD THE EXACT SAME THOUGHT LMAO
Spamtong
The art style is the only good thing about this short. This is a really meh cartoon.
It feels like they made the violent fight scenes first and the plot after. The pacing is extremely fast, the plot is "they go to a store and violence happens seconds later". They don't flesh out the characters, they don't even take a second to explain the orange girl's connection to penny or the demon, she just hangs out with them I guess? This leaves all the characters being one dimensional. There are so many better ways to write evil protagonists rather than the boring way this cartoon does.
My next point is kind of a nitpick but this short is like Catching Up where it seems to heavily rely on famous voice actors. Like the cast of Digital Circus and Sr Pelo (him especially). That part where the sr pelo cop screams for half a minute kinda felt like the video is dangling keys in the viewer's face. The scene drags on for too long.
Valid point
@@Haikalwoi Thanks.
8:25 that sounds like Flowey the Flower
Ikrrrr
Flowey literally doesn’t have a voice
He does
@@crazyjosheee3596Flowey actually has an voice: If we don't count laughs, in genocide route, right before the door in snowdin, flowey will say "Mmh... That's a wonderful idea!"
@@ElectryBoy123UA-camOfficial That's ronald mc donalds sound but they just put a voice effect on it.
1:38 Oh my god it’s Michael again. He always me to every indie animation I go to!! I don’t even hate them. It’s just…. Stop following me!
*HE’S EVERYWHERE-*
I guess he just self-proclaimed as the "indie animation guy"
Bro of course Micheal is in this😛
2:51 Alex rochon
Lizzie also is here and Amanda too (like wtf I thought this was the VA of Zooble voicing the older sister, not Ragatha's one!)
9:09 Me feeling stupid because I didn’t know that Pomnis va is in this the amount of glitch va’s in this is crazy the ones I recognized was (Pomni,Jax,Ragatha,and Caine).
character design 10/10
animation 8.5/10
humour 6.5/10 (with some standout bangers)
character interactions 0/10 no chemistry??? please just stop trying to be relatable
3:00 CAN'T STOP THE A-TRAIN BABY!!
HERE COMES THE A-TRAIN 🚂🚂🚂🚂🚂
I like trains
@@Bubbletwip15aut NOOOOOOO
Dude sounded like Caine though, but yeah, the train murdered him 💀
It is Caine. @@BlackJaguar0w0
5:59 sir Pedro!!!
Are those lightning bloods?
This is so cool! :) perfect example of the golden era of indie animation we’re in. The art style is very smooth and pleasant to look at imo, definitely gonna be studying this artstyle to help me with my own drawing skills
Not bad. Interesting changes in animation style in the middle there!
this gives off old cartoon network power puff girls vibes mixed with panty and stocking with garterbelt
7:03 amogus
an among us joke in the gigantic october 2024 😭🙏🙏
Every animation I watch, I hear Sr Pelo. There is no escaping this madman
Or Michael Kovach
I wonder how he paid him to be here.