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My suggestion is to keep it simple and focus on the most relevant idea to your statement. Before you start writing, ask yourself if you can describe the idea in one paragraph. If not, it might be too complex, so consider finding something easier to describe. Remember, it's a skill that improves with practice. The more you engage in this process, the better you'll become at it. Try practicing a lot, and once you feel comfortable, challenge yourself under time pressure to enhance your speed.
Hello, i notice that the topic question stated comparison between young adults and older adults. It seems like you’ve only covered up the parts of the young adults(the disadvantages and advantages) neglecting the older adults. Will this actually effect our points for task achievement? Or am i wrong?
The question is whether this situation (having more young people than older people) has more advantages or disadvantages. So, if you mention both aspects (advantages/disadvantages) of this situation, you will have covered the main points that will increase your TA score. Actually, I did not understand your question, ‘’neglecting the older adults.’’ Could you clarify, please?
@@Roddd2333 I see. I did this because of the focus of the question, which highlights this specific situation (having more young people). But I get your point. This depends on which side you take (more advantages or more disadvantages). In my essay, I took the first side and supported that, so whatever I wrote should support my decision. But if you decide that the disadvantages are more, you can mention the points you mentioned.
I know it is difficult to come up with suitable ideas on the test day 😅, but reading extensively will make it easier. Reading improves general knowledge and idea generation, which helps candidates a lot in IELTS speaking and writing.
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Thank you for this video, I used it to analyze my essay and it serve as a tutor for me
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I find it really difficult to develope my ideas. I have a lot of idea but I cannot describe them.
My suggestion is to keep it simple and focus on the most relevant idea to your statement. Before you start writing, ask yourself if you can describe the idea in one paragraph. If not, it might be too complex, so consider finding something easier to describe.
Remember, it's a skill that improves with practice. The more you engage in this process, the better you'll become at it. Try practicing a lot, and once you feel comfortable, challenge yourself under time pressure to enhance your speed.
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Hello, i notice that the topic question stated comparison between young adults and older adults. It seems like you’ve only covered up the parts of the young adults(the disadvantages and advantages) neglecting the older adults. Will this actually effect our points for task achievement? Or am i wrong?
The question is whether this situation (having more young people than older people) has more advantages or disadvantages. So, if you mention both aspects (advantages/disadvantages) of this situation, you will have covered the main points that will increase your TA score. Actually, I did not understand your question, ‘’neglecting the older adults.’’ Could you clarify, please?
@@ieltstimeZ i mean that you didnt covered the part of older adults. The passage only cover up in terms of young adults
@@Roddd2333 I see. I did this because of the focus of the question, which highlights this specific situation (having more young people). But I get your point. This depends on which side you take (more advantages or more disadvantages). In my essay, I took the first side and supported that, so whatever I wrote should support my decision. But if you decide that the disadvantages are more, you can mention the points you mentioned.
How do you come up with all these ideas for the essay? 😅
I know it is difficult to come up with suitable ideas on the test day 😅, but reading extensively will make it easier. Reading improves general knowledge and idea generation, which helps candidates a lot in IELTS speaking and writing.
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