Good luck with it, but I think you need to tighten up the concept and make it more ambiguous and suspense driven - meaning: don't make it so obvious that its the 'creator' - it could be elevated and much more interesting with an approach like Shakespeare's Henry V - a leader among the people speaking as a contemporary to gain insight into if they 'love' him or not. Are you going to try and Kickstarter / Crowd Funded campaign or pitch directly to investors?
+messianicrogue Yea cool thanks for the advice! I have a certain investor in mind I am approaching haha. Probably not kickstarter for this one but definitely in the near future when I plant o shoot an actual movie!!!
great concept & definitely an idea to be further explored
Im enjoying watching your short films. I myself want to start filming some this year, thank you for posting these.
That was a good representation man, well done.
Good luck with it, but I think you need to tighten up the concept and make it more ambiguous and suspense driven - meaning: don't make it so obvious that its the 'creator' - it could be elevated and much more interesting with an approach like Shakespeare's Henry V - a leader among the people speaking as a contemporary to gain insight into if they 'love' him or not.
Are you going to try and Kickstarter / Crowd Funded campaign or pitch directly to investors?
+messianicrogue Yea cool thanks for the advice! I have a certain investor in mind I am approaching haha. Probably not kickstarter for this one but definitely in the near future when I plant o shoot an actual movie!!!
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