thanks for the feedback. I'll make sure to do this for the next one, though it is quite difficult as I mostly talk to my friends while playing. Would you prefer in-game commentary or like narratative commentating?
Good first video. I have watched the first couple minutes and here is some basic feedback: * In my opinion you can skip the coming up thing, but i guess that its a personal preferance! * You really should talk in the video. It makes it much more watchable. * After you build your base you go from bow to crossbow and meds to smg, how? say it or show the process. It would make it much easier to understand the story. * Try to find some better fitting music and make the gameplay and music sync up. You should also turn the music down a notch.
Thank you for the feedback. I'll make sure to change all of these for the next video. I do agree that the intro was unnecessary, and that will be changed. I also do have a question if you would prefer in-game commentary or narratative commentating, or perhaps a mix? Makes it easier for me to understand what exactly you're looking for. I'll make sure to add more moment of where we go from crossbow to smg for example, though in this video is was mostly my teammate that did most of the heavy lifting in the beginning, while I either got killed after killing someone else, or just generally low contribution in the fights that led up to smgs. but i do get your point for sure. I just didn't want the video to be boring. I'll also do what you said about the music. What kind of music do you think would work better in this case then? I've gotten most my music from youtube looking for songs similar to the ones Willjum uses, but not quite a copy. I'll try to look for better music in the meantime, and once again, thanks for the feedback.
I'd recommend you add commentary, apart from that, nice video, new sub!
I agree, very nice video!! Very solid.
thanks for the feedback. I'll make sure to do this for the next one, though it is quite difficult as I mostly talk to my friends while playing. Would you prefer in-game commentary or like narratative commentating?
@@timo_fps both proba would be nice
@@whataboutdis. alright, I'll keep that in mind.
nice bro
thank you :)
Good first video.
I have watched the first couple minutes and here is some basic feedback:
* In my opinion you can skip the coming up thing, but i guess that its a personal preferance!
* You really should talk in the video. It makes it much more watchable.
* After you build your base you go from bow to crossbow and meds to smg, how? say it or show the process. It would make it much easier to understand the story.
* Try to find some better fitting music and make the gameplay and music sync up. You should also turn the music down a notch.
Thank you for the feedback. I'll make sure to change all of these for the next video. I do agree that the intro was unnecessary, and that will be changed. I also do have a question if you would prefer in-game commentary or narratative commentating, or perhaps a mix? Makes it easier for me to understand what exactly you're looking for. I'll make sure to add more moment of where we go from crossbow to smg for example, though in this video is was mostly my teammate that did most of the heavy lifting in the beginning, while I either got killed after killing someone else, or just generally low contribution in the fights that led up to smgs. but i do get your point for sure. I just didn't want the video to be boring. I'll also do what you said about the music. What kind of music do you think would work better in this case then? I've gotten most my music from youtube looking for songs similar to the ones Willjum uses, but not quite a copy. I'll try to look for better music in the meantime, and once again, thanks for the feedback.
@@timo_fps A good mix of in-game and narratative > in-game > narratative.
if you cant do in-game just do narratative
@@awpfade got it. thanks for the feedback