I really admire how you create the mood and tension for the fanfiction, and the characters' thoughts, feelings were so real. The story is heart touching. It's romantic. You chose the perfect backgrounds, and the story has a very beautiful message about LGBT, yet you used your vast knowledge of psychological issues, particularly the Yeonjun needs to commit suicide thing. You use exact, correct grammar and words, and amazing comparison, metaphors,... You must have dedication and devotion into it. But I think it'd be more perfect if you pay a little more attention to the small details, because small details could sum up the story. At 4:22, the character Soobin's grandma said, " You didn't have to cry, you didn't do anything wring at all." There's a tiny, minor mistake, is because you say " something wring '' instead of "anything wrong". Maybe it's because you're too busy. Don't worry, everyone makes mistakes. But overall, your story is inspiring.
This was beautiful but I would have preferred if yeonjun died call me cruel but if he died I think the story would have more meaning like sometimes u can't turn back time I am sorry I am really not trying to be offensive I really liked it but this is just my personal opinion 😊😊
Unniee>< I was waiting for this ...ahh I can't read it now 🥺 I will read it tomorrow but I know it's good ik ... I don't need to read for commenting because ik it's usually cool as other FFS or maybe more cool than my expectations...hehe~>
I'm gonna make that FF on wattpad! My id is @binnie_yumyum, imma give you shout out there too. I'm already working on that and thnx for waiting! Ily! 🥺💖
I CRIED AFTER READING THIS FF ITS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL AND SAD STORY THANK YOU AUTHOR NIM😭😭❤️❤️
Omg I was literally crying , that was soo good 😍😍
I really think your that your fanfiction is great, Purple Star. You created the mood for the story, and it's truly a literary piece.
I just want too say...
I cried so hard but this was a great video
I really admire how you create the mood and tension for the fanfiction, and the characters' thoughts, feelings were so real. The story is heart touching. It's romantic. You chose the perfect backgrounds, and the story has a very beautiful message about LGBT, yet you used your vast knowledge of psychological issues, particularly the Yeonjun needs to commit suicide thing. You use exact, correct grammar and words, and amazing comparison, metaphors,... You must have dedication and devotion into it. But I think it'd be more perfect if you pay a little more attention to the small details, because small details could sum up the story. At 4:22, the character Soobin's grandma said, " You didn't have to cry, you didn't do anything wring at all." There's a tiny, minor mistake, is because you say " something wring '' instead of "anything wrong". Maybe it's because you're too busy. Don't worry, everyone makes mistakes. But overall, your story is inspiring.
Thnx a lot for this feed. Trust me, it really helped. Thank you for your support, I will take care of my mistakes next time!
wow i could never be like u writing a long ass essay 😭😭👏👏
DAMN IT... SIS YOU ARE SO TALENTED.. This story make Me believe in love.
But i'm wonder what happen to soobin step family
Noooooo TF it was so emotional I almost cried 3 times😖😫😫
This was beautiful but I would have preferred if yeonjun died call me cruel but if he died I think the story would have more meaning like sometimes u can't turn back time I am sorry I am really not trying to be offensive I really liked it but this is just my personal opinion 😊😊
Thanks for the feedback! So sweet of you hehe
@@PurpleStar-Nabin no problem 🥰🥰🥰
@@PurpleStar-Nabinsister it is so emotional the last scene of yeonjun trying to suicide, i just cry out loud
Yeah even i agree... But Soobs did love him too... So i guess it would be more hard for soob
Unniee>< I was waiting for this ...ahh I can't read it now 🥺 I will read it tomorrow but I know it's good ik ... I don't need to read for commenting because ik it's usually cool as other FFS or maybe more cool than my expectations...hehe~>
This is the first time ever where I cried reading a ff🥺
i.cried.my.ass.off.thank.you.very.much
I almost cried- my gosh
Happy pride month
I cried after reading this ff 😭❤️
I loved it its so good
Mam big fan
My heart is aching idk why?!$¥€#%^
You are so amazing
Can you plz do yeonbin oneshot more plz.... 🥺🥺🥺🥺
Sure!
@@PurpleStar-Nabin yayyyyy tqqqq 🤗🤗🤗🤗
Hi unnie can you upload taegyu FF on UA-cam plz becuz i don't have wattpad
Happy diwali unnie 😊💕💞😘
okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk sooooooooooooo finalllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing
After years this bitch finally decided to post!
Just kidding baby! It was awesome! And don't stress yourself! I love you bae❤️❣️
AW THANKYOU! LYT!!
Wow
Unnie when'Ghosting'ep 13
Coming up, I'm in crisis- ( ꈨຶ ˙̫̮ ꈨຶ )
@@PurpleStar-Nabin ok unnie
Can you make Taegyu ff (taehyun and beomgyu) plz make bottom taehyun and top beomgyu 😊
Omg okay sure!
Can I have shout out in taegyu ff 😊
When Will you post the next ep of ghosting?
Soon hehe, I'm editing it ~
@@PurpleStar-Nabin ok thanks, btw where are you from ?
@@jasonvelgado1606 India >
@@PurpleStar-NabinMe to
Hi unnie when u r going to make taegyu FF 😔
I'm gonna make that FF on wattpad! My id is @binnie_yumyum, imma give you shout out there too. I'm already working on that and thnx for waiting! Ily! 🥺💖
@@PurpleStar-Nabin thx 💗
Did they end up together at the end?(hehe sorry to ask you this dumb question btw i love it can u make many yeonbin oneshots or ffs💜🥰)
Sure! And of course they end up together again lol-
@@PurpleStar-Nabin thank you😊
Unnie where is taegyu ff I am waiting 😣😣😣😣
I'm really sorry, you'll have to wait a bit T_T
Di you have watt acc?
Nope :)
@@PurpleStar-Nabin ok